通用版2021高考英语二轮复习短文改错冲关狂练专题07含解析

短文改错题组精炼七

题组精炼一

I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have

a different theme and an unique style.

I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to① opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it ②required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an③ ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe ④   have a special theme such as⑤ like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy⑥ yourselves in the historical environment⑦ what is created for them. If I succeed in⑧ manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different⑨ city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and⑩ an unique style.

①【答案】opens改为open

【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：现在我的梦想是开一家咖啡馆。不定式符号后用动词原形，故改成open。

②【答案】required改为requires

【解析】考查时态。此处强调的是一个客观事实，故用一般现在时态。

③【答案】ordinarily改为ordinary

【解析】考查形容词。句中cafe是名词，需要用形容词来修饰。

④【答案】加to

【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：我想要我的咖啡馆有一个特殊的主题，例如“唐朝”。want sb./sth.to do sth.想要某人或某物做某事。

⑤【答案】去掉like

【解析】考查固定短语。such as例如。

⑥【答案】yourselves改为themselves

【解析】考查反身代词。此处指代的是customers,故用themselves。

⑦【答案】what改为that或which

【解析】考查定语从句。先行词是environment,将先行词代入从句中，作主语，指物，故用that或which。

⑧【答案】manage改为managing

【解析】考查非谓语动词。介词in后面应该用动名词形式，故改成managing。

⑨【答案】city改为cities

【解析】考查名词复数。city为可数名词，many后应该用名词复数形式。

⑩【答案】an改为a

【解析】考查冠词。unique以辅音音素开头，故用a。

题组精炼二

During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.

During my last winter holiday, I went  ① countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I ②find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and③ another animals. Last winter when I went④ here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of⑤ chicken. They also had a small pond⑥ which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by⑦ sell the fish. I felt⑧ happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return⑨ for every two years, ⑩but he agreed.

①【答案】加the

【解析】考查定冠词。和爸爸去看望乡下的爷爷奶奶，“乡村”常用the countryside。

②【答案】find改为found

【解析】考查动词时态。根据第一句话的时间状语During my last winter holiday可知，第二句的谓语动词应该用一般过去时。原文中的find与时间状语不符。

③【答案】another改为other

【解析】考查限定词。句中animals是复数形式，所以修饰该名词的限定词应该用other(其他的）,因为other后接名词复数。而原文中的another(又一；另一）后接名词单数。

④【答案】here改为there

【解析】考查副词。上文已经点明去乡下爷爷奶奶家，所以去年冬天（la winter),作者应该是又去“那里（there)”了，而非原文中的“这里(here)"。

⑤【答案】chicken改为chickens

【解析】因为该词前有dozens of(几打；几十个）来修饰，因此该词要用名词的复数形式chickens。chicken作不可数名词时，意为“鸡肉”；作可数名词时，为“小鸡”。原文中把该词当成不可数名词用，与前面的dozens of(几打；几十个）矛盾。

⑥【答案】加in或which改为where

【解析】考查定语从句关系词。先行词为a small pond(一个小池塘）,代入定语从句后可知关系词作地点状语，所以应该用关系副词where;关副词可以相当于“介词+which”，所以根据定语从句的意思“他们在小池塘里养鱼”可知，在which前加in,构成in which(=where)引导的定语从句。而原句中的which是关系代词，可在定语从句中作主语、表语或宾语。

⑦【答案】sell改为selling

【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：我爷爷说去年夏天通过卖鱼挣了很多根据句意可知，此处应该用by+ doing sth.来表示一种方式，而原文忽略了介词by的存在。

⑧【答案】happily改为happy

【解析】考查形容词。该词前的felt用作系动词时，后面要用形容词作表语，因此需要把副词 happily 改为形容词 happy。原文忽略了形容词和副词的区别，没有注意到feel作为系动词的用法。

⑨【答案】去掉for

【解析】考查固定短语。every two years本身是固定短语，不用加介词。

⑩【答案】but改为and

【解析】考查连词。根据句意可知，作者计划每两年回乡下一次，“并且”父亲同意了，应该是顺承而不是转折关系，原词混淆了上下句的逻辑关系。

题组精炼三

It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity ; others were nervous and anxious . I had done myself homework , but I was shy . I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks , and mistake as well . " Immediate , I raised my hand .

It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just① begin. Everyone was silent, ②wait to see who would be called upon to read his③ and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager④    take part in the class activity ; others were nervous and anxious . I had done⑤myself homework , but I was shy . I was afraid⑥ that to speak in front of a ⑦larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that⑧ include learning from textbooks , and⑨ mistake as well . " ⑩Immediate , I raised my hand .

①【答案】begin改为begun

【解析】考查动词的时态。此处为过去完成时，过去完成时的结构为“had+过去分词”，而begin的过去分词为begun。

②【答案】wait改为waiting

【解析】考查非谓语动词。本句主干为Everyone was silent,主系表结构完整，所以此处的wait应用非谓语动词形式。everyone与wait之间为逻辑上的主动关系，因此用现在分词waiting作伴随状语。

③【答案】and 改为or

【解析】考查连词。根据句意可知应该是读他“或”她的段落。前后之间是选择关系，原文中的and没有选择意义。

④【答案】加to

【解析】考查动词不定式。be eager to do sth.渴望做某事。

⑤【答案】myself改为my/ the

【解析】考查代词或冠词。do one's homework为固定短语，意为“做作业”，homework前应该加形容词性物主代词，原文中的myself是反身代词。do the homework也可表示“做作业”。

⑥【答案】去掉that

【解析】考查固定结构。be afraid to do sth.意为“不敢做某事”，that是多余的。

⑦【答案】larger改为large

【解析】考查形容词原级。原句中并没有比较的含义，所以应该把比较级larger改为原级large,构成a large group of people“一大群人”。

⑧【答案】include改为includes

【解析】考查时态和主谓一致。此处讲的是客观事实，应用一般现在时。主语that指代前面的动名词learning是单数概念，因此谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式。

⑨【答案】mistake改为mistakes

【解析】考查名词单复数。此处表示“学习包括从教科书中学习，也包括从错误中学习”。根据句意可知，“错误”应该不止一个，所以要用该词的复数形式。mistake是可数名词。

⑩【答案】Immediate改为Immediately

【解析】考查副词。此处应该用副词作状语，来修饰后面的“I raised my hand"

题组精炼四

In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car , I thought I had learned the instructor's orders ,so once I started the car , my mind goes blank . I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word," Speed up ! " " Slow down ! " " Turning left ! " I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

In the summer holiday following my ①eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard  ②    first day was. Before getting into the car , I thought I had learned the instructor's orders ,③ so once I started the car , my mind④ goes blank . I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the⑤ word," Speed up ! " " Slow down ! " " ⑥Turning left ! " I was so ⑦much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes ⑧late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a⑨ suddenly stop just in the middle⑩ on the road.

①【答案】eighteen改为eighteenth

【解析】考查数词。此处表示“我的第18个生日”，故用序数词。

②【答案】加the/  my

【解析】考查冠词或者代词。序数词前应该用定冠词the;本句中也可用形容词性物主代词，表示“我（学开车）的第一天”。

③【答案】so 改为but/ yet

【解析】考查连词。上车之前，我认为自己已经了解了教练的指示，但是车一发动起来，我的头脑就一片空白了。根据语境可知前后内容之间为转折关系而非因果关系，故改为表示转折关系的并列连词but或者yet。

④【答案】goes改为went

【解析】考查时态。根据上下文可知，作者是在回忆过去的事情，故用一般过去时。

⑤【答案】word改为words

【解析】考查名词复数。由“Speed up!”“Slow down!”可知此处用复数形式。

⑥【答案】Turning改为Turn

【解析】考查祈使句。此处表示教练发出的命令，应用祈使句，故改为动词原形。

⑦【答案】 去掉much

【解析】考查固定用法。此处为so...that...结构，为固定用法。so在句中修饰形容词nervous, much多余，故删除。

⑧【答案】late改为later

【解析】考查副词。此处意为“几分钟之后”，later符合语境。

⑨【答案】suddenly改为sudden

【解析】考查形容词。此处修饰名词stop,故用形容词。

⑩【答案】on改为of

【解析】考查介词。in the middle of...意为“在……中间”。