专题04 读后续写速成：“万能公式”造句法

这是一份专题04 读后续写速成：“万能公式”造句法，共11页。

目录
TOC \ "1-1" \h \u \l "_Tc18326" Part1 万能句型详解 PAGEREF _Tc18326 1
\l "_Tc24981" 1、 如何编“时间” PAGEREF _Tc24981 2
\l "_Tc439" 2、 如何编“地点” PAGEREF _Tc439 3
\l "_Tc16225" 3、 如何编“过渡词” PAGEREF _Tc16225 4
\l "_Tc13022" 4、 如何编“with +工具” PAGEREF _Tc13022 4
\l "_Tc32490" 5、 如何编“情绪和心理” PAGEREF _Tc32490 5
\l "_Tc25456" Part 2 万能公式变通思维 PAGEREF _Tc25456 6
\l "_Tc26441" 一、状语的位置可以变化: PAGEREF _Tc26441 6
\l "_Tc25899" 二、状语的数量可以加减: PAGEREF _Tc25899 6
\l "_Tc13871" Part 3 时间状语的积累素材 PAGEREF _Tc13871 7
“万能公式”
时间/地点/过渡，sb，with sth in ne's hand，ding sth2，did sth1, ding sth3, feeling（lking) ….
某某时间（地点），某个人，手里拿这个啥，做着第一件事儿的同时，做了第二件事，同时还做着第三件事，感觉如何如何，（或看上去如何..）
Part1 万能句型详解
【举例】Of curse, Arthur, still running n the Park Avenue, with the suitcase in his hand, refused t stp, trying his best t lk fr a taxi.
当然，亚瑟还在公园大道上奔跑，手里拿着手提箱，拒绝停下来，尽力找出租车。
下面我们我们准备好一个简单句，然后参考这个总句型，手把手教大家造成长难句。
简单句：
He saved the little girl. 他救了那个小女孩。
如何编“时间”
如何编出高质量的“动词”：
一、根据生活常识想象：这个动词之前或之后，会做啥动作比较合理。
二、看文章的划线词，找灵感：名词和动词（名词也可以提示动词，比如water对应的动词可以是drink，lk fr等）。
找到动词后，如何处理：
一、（最简单方式）直接变成when/after时间状语从句。
二、（升级转化）变成“伴随状语”
三、（升级转化）变成and并列句。
**状语从句如何变成并列句和伴随状语，请看语法部分：“状语从句的瘦身”
【举例】
参考答案：
After he ran int the rm, he saved the little girl.
Running int the rm, he saved the little girl.
He ,running int the rm, saved the little girl.
He saved little the girl, running ut f the rm.（如果写在后面，动作需要重新造，表示结果，如sending her t hspital）
如何编“地点”
如何“编”出地点：
①方法一：参考文中给出的关键词（浙江卷，就直接参考划线词）
②方法二：自己根据句意自己编
【为什么地点可以参考划线词：划线词的秘密】
划线词绝大部分是名词，而动词很少甚至没有。
原因：动词推动故事情节发展。动词如果是划线词就会限制考生的想象力，这与读后续写的初衷是违背的。
【参考公式】 时间/地点/过渡，sb，with sth in ne's hand，ding sth2，did sth1, ding sth3, feeling（lking) ….
【参考答案】
In the villa（别墅），he saved the little girl.
如何编“过渡词”
过渡SHOOT：Suddenly/ Hpefully/ Obviusly/ Of curse/T ne's surprise，
操作步骤：
如果短时间内自己有更适合的过渡词，且保证能写对的情况下，就用自己的。
如果没有思路，就在这五个里面挑选。
【参考公式】 时间/地点/过渡，sb，with sth in ne's hand，ding sth2，did sth1, ding sth3, feeling（lking) ….
【参考答案】
T ur surprise, he saved the little girl.
如何编“with +工具”
万能公式内容解密④with+道具
四种选择：
with sth. in ne's hand
with sth. n ne's head
with a smile n his/her face
with the help f sb.
【例句】她站在那里，脸上带着微笑。
She std there, with a smile n her face
【参考公式】 时间/地点/过渡，sb，with sth in ne's hand，ding sth2，did sth1, ding sth3, feeling（lking) ….
【参考答案】
He， with the help f a firefighter， saved the little girl.
5、如何编“情绪和心理”
首先要准备好情绪和心理的单词：
正能量的情绪，如：
thrilled（兴奋的excited） ,
verjyed (欣喜若狂的，快乐的：jyful）
amazed（惊讶的）
delighted（高兴的）
satisfied （满足的）
负能量的情绪，如:
sacred（害怕的）
wrried（担心的）
ashamed（羞愧的）
nevus （紧张的）
【参考答案】
He saved the little girl，feeling nervus.
Part 2万能公式变通思维
一、状语的位置可以变化:
只要是状语，在三个位置上，都符合语法要求。如：
① With a suitcase in my hand, I entered the rm.
② I, with a suitcase in my hand, entered the rm.
③ I entered the rm with a suitcase in my hand.
二、状语的数量可以加减:
万能公式提供了最完整的状语的形式，具体写作时不可能做到这么完整，也没有必要。
选取状语
状语数量可增减，位置可变化
（选择2-3句，放在前中后的位置上）
T ur surprise, he ,with the help f a firefighter,saved the little girl,feeling nervus.
Running int the rm, he saved the little girl,feeling nervus.
In the villa, he,with the help f a firefighter,saved the little girl, running ut f the rm.
状语材料：
①when he ran int the rm
②running int the rm
③in the villa
④t ur surprise
⑤with the help f a firefighter
⑥feeing nevus
Part 3 时间状语的积累素材
1. ..., (and) then... 然后;接着(一系列的动作),作副词，不作连词
We tk a bus t the city center then caught a train t Lndn.
We tk a bus t the city center and then caught a train t Lndn.
He drank a glass f whisky, then anther and then anther.
We lived in France and then Italy befre cming back t England.
2. after that,... 然后; 此后
After that, they began t discuss the meeting t be held in the evening.
His father had died ten years earlier and after that his mther had remarried.
Several mnths after that, we signed a cntract.
We lst tuch after that.
3. shrtly (afterwards)，不久, lng after(...), after(...),... (...)过后不久。
afterwards 不久之后(某个事件或已提及的时间); 美语用afterward；前可加sn或shrtly,意义相同。
段时间+ after，afterwards或later 用于表示一段时间的短语之后,表示多少时间以后; 表示多少时间以前可用段时间+befre；表示...之前不久用shrtly befre...；
Shrtly after, she called me.
I tk this picture nt lng after sunrise.
Shrtly afterwards, plice arrested fur suspects
Sn afterwards he and his girlfriend brke up.
James was taken t hspital but died sn afterwards.
Shrtly afterwards he was seen in a bar in twn.
Sn afterwards he separated frm his wife.
She wrte abut it six years afterwards.
Ten minutes later he left the huse.
Hurs later we reached the utskirts f New Yrk.
The accident happened shrtly befre midday
4. befre lng,...不久
Befre lng Harry came running behind us.
Befre lng, he gt the news f his father's death.
The wrk will be finished befre lng.
5. later n 以后; 后来
Later n I learned hw t read music.
I may have t ask fr yur advice later n.
A little later, the lights went ut.
6. at that time(那时)=at that mment, 在那一刻
At that mment, he heard Gill's key turning in the lck f the dr.
He shwed up at that mment.
At that mment my heart was full f jy and thankfulness.
7. in a flash 立刻、转瞬之间
The answer had cme t him in a flash.
Several years passed in a flash.
8. in a while(minute)=sn 过一会，过不久=in n time(马上)
I thught yesterday that he wuld be here in n time.
One f the bys upset the il-lamp and in a minute the whle rm was in a blaze.
9. early in the mrning 一大早
Early in the mrning, hikers pack everything that they will need fr the day's hike
She was als warned it was unsafe t run early in the mrning in the neighburhd.
They have t get up early in the mrning.
10. in the late afternn 傍晚
The students came back t schl in the late afternn.
The fighting began in the late afternn and cntinued all night.
11. the next/fllwing mrning,第二天早上
The next mrning I telephned him and gave him his ntice.
After breakfast the next mrning they sat arund fr an hur discussing plitical affairs.
12. early the next mrning，第二天一早
I gt up early the next mrning t jg
He set ut fr Lndn early the next mrning.
We decided t make a bicycle trip, s we started early the next mrning.
13. at last, in the end,finally,eventually,...语义上是可指经过很长时间的周折,等待,耽搁"终于","最后"。
Eventually the baby stpped crying and we managed t get sme sleep.
In the end, I decided that the best thing t d was t ask Billy fr help.
The plane eventually arrived at 6:30--ver three hurs late.
At last the rain stpped and the players came back n the field.
It seems mre and mre likely that the human race will eventually destry itself.