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这是一份高考英语三轮冲刺查补易混易错点13 应用文写作之申请信、咨询信、求助信 （含解析），共39页。
查补易混易错点12 应用文写作之申请信、咨询信、求助信
体裁
命题形式
写作主题
2022
新高考
I卷
应用文
邀请信
写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
II卷
应用文
邀请信
写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
全国卷
乙卷
说明文
投稿
利用填表调查结果给报社投稿
甲卷
应用文
投稿
以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿
2021
新高考
I卷
应用文
投稿
校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福
II卷
应用文
投稿
校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福
全国卷
乙卷
应用文
发言稿
以“be smart online learners”为主题写一篇发言稿参赛
甲卷
应用文
征求建议
征求外国朋友建议，哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
2020
全国卷
I卷
应用文
投稿
写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛
II卷
应用文
日记
写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动
III卷
应用文
求助信
给外教写一封信，请帮忙指导
【申请信】
首段：自我介绍，说明申请内容
1. I learned from your website/the evening paper that your company wanted to hire.... you are in need
of.... 我从网站/晚报上得知贵公司想招聘……/你们需要……
2. I recommend myself as a qualified candidate for........ 我推荐自己作为……的合格人选。
3. I read the announcement of....... that you have posted and I am very interested in it.
看了你发布的公告，我对它很感兴趣。
主体部分：陈述本人优势和特长
性格优势
1. As an outgoing，warm and friendly person，I can get along well with......
我性格开朗，热情友好，可以与…相处得很好。
2. I'm easy-going and good-natured，which makes it easy for me to fit in with others.
我随和且脾气好，很容易与他人合得来。
经验特长
1. I have a good knowledge of English so I can communicate with native speakers in English freely.
我精通英语，因此我可以用英语同以英语为母语的人自由交流。
2. My previous. .......experience will qualify me for the position.
我以往的……经验将使我能够胜任这个职位。
3. I always take an active part in......... So experienced am I that I am sure to give..a better experience
of........ 我总是积极参加……。我经验丰富，一定会给……带来更好的……体验。
尾段：表达感谢，期盼回复
1. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration/account.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
2. Should you treat my application favorably，I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
如果您看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供我的最佳服务。
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua，a Chinese student who is studying in London.Knowing that a Chinese painting
exhibition will be held at the local gallery next month and you are in need of some volunteers，I am
writing to apply for the position.
To begin with，I have such a good command of English that I can communicate with visitors without difficulty.What's more，as a Chinese painting lover I know a lot about this art form.If accepted，I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors，which can help them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request.
Yours，
Li Hua
【咨询信】
首段：自我介绍并表明写信目的
1、I'm......., a Chinese student planning to/interested in....... I am writing to ask for information about........
我是……，一个计划…/对……感兴趣的中国学生。我写信来咨询关于……的信息。
2、 I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding.......
我写信是想知道您是否能给我提供有关……的信息。
3、 I'm writing to enquire some detailed/further information about.........
我写信想询问一些有关……的详细/进一步的信息。
主体部分：说明咨询事由
1. First,I wonder if........Another point I'm not certain about is..........
首先，我想知道是否……。我不确定的另外一点是……
2. Moreover,I'd like to........In addition,as you know,.........,so..........is also a matter I m concerned about.
此外，我想……。另外，正如你所知，……，因此，……也是我关心的问题。
3. If there is anything else that needs special attention,please inform me at your convenience.
如果有其他需要特别注意的事，请在您方便的时候告诉我。
尾段：期盼回复并表示感谢
1. I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽早回复，我会很感激。
2. Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention/early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
谢谢您的好意，我将非常感激您对这封信的及时关注/早日回复。
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm a student from China.I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the English course of your school.
To begin with,could you be so kind as to tell me when the course will start and how many periods there are per week? Moreover,what about the class size? Additionally,I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course.Last but not least,I wonder if there would be any host families or dormitories.
Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【求助信】
首段：开门见山表明求助意图
1. Hearing you have much experience in...，I am writing to ask you for help./some advice.
听说您在……方面很有经验，我写信向您求助/征求建议。
2. I have some difficulty in...，which bothers me a lot，so I have no choice but to turn to you.
我在……方面有一些困难，这让我很困扰，所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
3. Faced with/Facing so many difficulties，I am anxious to ask you for help.
面对如此多的难题，我非常想向您求助。
主体部分：说明求助事由
1. I am encountering three problems which bother me a lot.To begin with，... What's worse，... What
troubles me most is.… All of these upset me because.… 我遇到了三个很困扰我的问题。首先，……。更糟糕的是，……。最让我苦恼的是…。所有这些都让我很不高兴，因为……
2. I really have no idea/wonder how to deal with the problems.
我真不知道/想知道如何解决这些问题。
尾段：期盼回复并表示感谢
1. I will be grateful if you can spare time to give me a hand/do me a favor.
如果您能抽出时间帮我，我将很感激。
2. I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful / practical tips/ suggestions.
如果您能非常友好地给我提供一些有用的/实用的建议，我将不胜感激。
3. Thanks for considering my request. I'm looking forward to your reply.
多谢考虑我的请求。我期待您的答复。
【满分范文】
Dear Mike，
I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing in the hope that you can give me some advice on my
English study.
Our new writing task called "extended writing"requires us to write a reasonable ending to a story.
Obviously，this is a very open task with multiple possibilities.While I enjoy the creativity this task
requires，I find it challenging to identify the plot and give my version of the possible ending.I also have
trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am really delighted to learn that ______(职位) is required, and I feel this ______(职位或机会) is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that ______(优势一) . Furthermore, ______(优势二) . Finally, there is no problem with ______(优势三) .
I do hope my ______(资质或能力) will win me a favorable consideration from your side. Should you need any details related to my application, feel free to contact me at______(联系方式).
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍). I am writing to inquire about ______(要询问的内容).
The following is my confusion. First of all, I’m tempted to know ______. Secondly, when will ______ ? Thirdly, is ______?(要咨询的问题罗列)
I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via ______ (表达感谢).
Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困难). For one thing, ______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
1．（2019·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。
【详情解析】
1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
2．（2010·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：
● 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）
●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）
●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two._______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详情解析】
本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）等
【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： As far as I am concerned据我所知，be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， That’s why I apply for the position.这句话用了表语从句， My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。
3．（安徽省部分学校2022-2023学年高三下学期3月月考英语试题）假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请，内容包括。
1.表明意图；
2.自身优势；
3.表达期望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:专栏column
Dear Sir or Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English. Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. More importantly, I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
寻找：look for→search for
职位：position→post
此外：besides→in addition
有关的：relevant→related
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English.
拓展句：I think I’m qualified for it because I have a good command of English, especially written English.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
4．（天津市南开中学2022-2023学年高三下学期第四次月考英语试题）假设你是晨光中学学生李津。目前在伦敦做交换生，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展，请你写一封信申请做志愿者。内容包括：
(1)写信目的；
(2)个人优势；
(3)能做的事情。
注意：
（1）词数不少于 100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China currently studying in London. I am more than delighted to hear that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in the local gallery and volunteers are needed, I am writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First and foremost, I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings, so not only can I explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings, but also tell the stories behind them. In addition, I have a good command of English, which makes me have no difficulty communicating with others. Last but not least, I am so enthusiastic and responsible that I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，申请当当地美术馆要举办的中国画展的志愿者。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
职位：position→post
首先：first and foremost→first of all
把……考虑进去：take...into consideration→take...into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China currently studying in London.
拓展句：I am Li Jin, who is an exchange student from China currently studying in London.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In addition, I have a good command of English, which makes me have no difficulty communicating with others. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, I am so enthusiastic and responsible that I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer. (运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句和that引导的同位语从句)
5．（2023省四川省南充市高三下学期高考适应性考试英语试题）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，清明节将至，他发来邮件询问有关清明节的信息，请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.节日的时间；
2.节日的活动；
3.节日的意义。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：清明节the Tomb-Sweeping Day
Dear John,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear John,
I’m glad to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. Here I feel rather delighted to introduce the Tomb-Sweeping Day to you.
China’s traditional Tomb-Sweeping Day dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April 5 in the solar calendar, with a history of more than 2, 500 years. The festival was created to honor the dead. Traditionally, people will bring food and drinks to the cemetery to worship their ancestors. Meanwhile, it is also a chance for the family members to reunite and to remember.
In my opinion, as a traditional Chinese festival, the Tomb-Sweeping Day keeps us reminded of our lost families and cherishing the living ones. By celebrating it, we follow the trace of the forefathers and move on with their memories.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写封电子邮件，介绍清明节的相关情况。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
同时：meanwhile→in the meantime
有益的：chance→opportunity
追溯到：date back to→trace back to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, as a traditional Chinese festival, the Tomb-Sweeping Day keeps us reminded of our lost families and cherishing the living ones.
拓展句：In my opinion, the Tomb-Sweeping Day, which is a traditional Chinese festival, keeps us reminded of our lost families and cherishing the living ones.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m glad to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] China’s traditional Tomb-Sweeping Day dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April 5 in the solar calendar, with a history of more than 2, 500 years. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6． （2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，
内容包括:
1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详情解析】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
7．（2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是高一学生李华。请你给你的美国网友Tony写一封e-mail，把你的暑假安排告诉他，并询问他的暑假安排。内容包括：
1. 完成作业，适量阅读；
2. 走亲访友；
3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。
注意：1. 词数80左右；信的开头已经写好。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
How is everything with you recently?_________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Tony,
How are things with you lately? I am glad to tell you the plan for my summer holiday, which is approaching. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well. I will also spend some time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community. Please send me an e-mail, sharing your plan for the summer vacation. OK?
Looking forward to it!
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【语篇解读】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。
【详情解析】
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：分总
要求：
1. 完成作业，适量阅读；
2. 走亲访友；
3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth./ tell sb. sth./ spend time in doing sth./ take part in/ intend to do sth./ send sth. to sb./ look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. How is everything going recently?
2. I am glad to tell you the plan for the approaching summer holiday.
3. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well.
4. I will also spend some time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far.
5. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community.
6. What about your plan for the summer holiday?
7. Looking forward to it!
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I have got to finish all the homework assigned by my teachers and do some reading as well.我必须完成老师布置的所有家庭作业，并且读一些书。句中使用了过去分词短语作后置定语。
[高分句型2]
Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community, which are of great benefit.句中which引导非线性定语从句，和be of + n. 表事物特征。
8．（重庆市巴蜀中学2022-2023学年高三下学期3月月考英语试题）假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 求助内容；
3. 希望回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
How is it going? _________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jack,
How is it going? I want you to know I’m graduating very soon, and that I’m planning a trip after Gaokao. I’d like to hear your opinions on two critical matters.
First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. However, I hear travel cost in Sanya has skyrocketed, and I don’t have a big budget. Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it. I believe you feel so too and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
意见：opinion→recommendation
然而：however→nevertheless
此外：besides→what's more
各种各样的：all sorts of→varieties of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
拓展句:Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features,where I can enjoy all sorts of delicacies!
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句，so连接并列句）
【高分句型2】A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
9．（2023届河南省郑州市外国语学校高三下学期4月份月考英语试题）假如你是李华，你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极(Tai Chi)，他写信向你求助，请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1.介绍学太极好处；2.负责联系学习地点和老师。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Forbes,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Forbes,
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives. Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封回信，告知Forbes学太极相关的情况。
【详情解析】
第一步：
审题: 回信 告知Frobes学太极相关的情况
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示愿意帮助Forbes，第二部分说明学太极的好处和负责联系学习地点和老师，第三部分期望Forbes的到来。
要点：
1. 表示愿意帮助Forbes
2．学太极的好处：是一种有效的健身运动、动作优雅、让人放松
联系学习地点和老师：会介绍最好的太极学校和老师
3．期待Forbes的到来
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）
show great preference for；be willing to；give sb. a hand；an ancient martial art；be widely acknowledged；be famous for provides；mental relaxation；physical fitness ；essential； instructor；recommend；trainer；introduce… to；invite
第三步：连词成句
(1) You show great preference for Tai Chi.
(2) I can give you a hand gladly.
(3) Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
(7 ) I recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you.
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用not only… but also 连接下面的两个句子
(3)Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
→ Tai Chi is not only is an ancient martial art but also has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
用形容词短语作状语连接下面两个句子
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
→Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
用定语从句连接下面的两个句子
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
→(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次 ，增加文章的可读性。
10．（江苏省南通市2022-2023学年高三上学期12月月考英语试题）假如你是李华, 一名高三学生。英语作文读后续写这一项让你备受困扰。你计划向南京师范大学张教授(此领域的专家)写一封求助信。希望他帮你在情节构思、语言组织和表达等方面给予指导。内容包括:
1. 介绍困扰;
2. 希望得到帮助。
注意:
1. 词数80左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Professor Zhang,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Professor Zhang,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student. Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing. Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.
I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. First of all, I have difficulty in designing plots. In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.
Facing the problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生写一封求助信，向南京师范大学张教授求助如何写读后续写。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
寻求：seek→look for
首先：first of all→to start with
困难：difficulty→trouble
另外：in addition→furthermore
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Facing the problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
拓展句：When I face the problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11．（四川省绵阳市盐亭中学2022-2023学年高三上学期11月月考英语试题）假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1. 作业多，没有时间运动。
2. 压力大，难以入睡。
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student.______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?
Looking forward to your early reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信，就高考紧张复习过程中遇到的一些问题向他求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
忙碌的：busy→occupied
专心于：concentrate on→ focus on
此外：Moreover→What’s more
解决：solve→deal with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
拓展句：Because I am faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.（运用了so…that…句型）
【高分句型2】What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.（运用了what引导主语从句和that引导表语从句）
12．（河南省洛阳市2022-2023学年高三上学期9月联考英语试题）假定你是李华，你和父母将于本周末外出游玩，但是你的宠物狗无人照看。请你给你的朋友Jack写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1. 表明意图；
2. 具体请求；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jack,
I have a favor to ask of you. My parents and I are going to take a vacation this weekend. However, I have to leave my pet dog behind. Therefore, I’m wondering if you could look after him for two days.
It doesn’t take much to care for him for he is healthy and lovely. For his three meals every day, you just need to feed him with the dog food I have prepared. In the afternoon, he wants to be taken out for a walk for about one hour. For the rest of time, he enjoys staying at home quietly.
If you are willing to take care of him, please reply me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求考生写一封求助信，请求Jack在自己与父母周末外出游玩时，帮忙照顾宠物狗。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累：
可爱的：lovely→cute
照顾：care for→look after/take care of
喜欢：enjoy→like/be fond of
乐意的：be willing→would like to
2.句式拓展：
同义句
原句：If you are willing to take care of him, please reply me soon.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you are willing to take care of him and could reply me soon.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]For his three meals every day, you just need to feed him with the dog food I have prepared.（运用了定语从句）
[高分句型2]Therefore, I’m wondering if you could look after him for two days.（运用了if引导宾语从句）
13．（湖北省东风高中、天门中学、仙桃中学2022-2023学年高三12月联考英语试题）假定你是李华，就读于一所国际学校。现阶段对个人未来发展产生了困惑，希望得到学校职业规划办公室（Career Planning Office）的Mr. Smith的帮助。请按下列要求写一封求助信：
1.本人简介；
2.对未来职业的畅想；
3.现阶段的困惑。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Class 1 Senior 3. Struggling with choosing a suitable major for the future, I am writing for your guidance and assistance.
Adoring my English teacher, I made up my mind to be a teacher like her. However, I find it difficult to figure out which subject to learn in the university and where I can get the introductions of the subjects.
Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice. Thank you in advance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校职业规划办公室的Mr. Smith写一封信，介绍自己现阶段对个人未来发展的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
帮助：assistance→help
崇拜：adore→idolize
下定决心做某事：make up one’s mind to do sth.→be determined to do sth.
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice.
拓展句：Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice, which is very important to me.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Struggling with choosing a suitable major for the future, I am writing for your guidance and assistance.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】However, I find it difficult to figure out which subject to learn in the university and where I can get the introductions of the subjects.（运用了which引导的宾语从句和where引导的宾语从句作figure out的宾语）
14．（2023届河北省石家庄市高中毕业年级教学质量检测英语试题）假定你是李华，4月18日是国际古迹遗址日（World Heritage Day），你的外国笔友William发来邮件询问你校的活动计划。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear William,
Greetings from China! I hope this email finds you well. With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged some activities.
First, in order to build up the cultural confidence of our students and raise the awareness of cultural heritage protection, our school will play a documentary named The Forbidden City 100, which is about valuable treasures and stories behind them. Then, after watching, we’ll make a poster in a group and we’re likely to win a prize for it.
I’m sure it’ll be a great experience.
How about you? Anything exciting? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，4月18日是国际古迹遗址日（World Heritage Day），你的外国笔友William发来邮件询问你校的活动计划。请给他回一封邮件。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
临近：approach→be around the corner
名为：name→call
提高：raise→promote
建立：build up→establish
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged some activities.
拓展句：As the World Heritage Day approaches on April 18, our school has arranged some activities.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged some activities. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] First, in order to build up the cultural confidence of our students and raise the awareness of cultural heritage protection, our school will play a documentary named The Forbidden City 100, which is about valuable treasures and stories behind them. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
15．（2023届辽宁省抚顺市普通高中高三第一次模拟考试英语试题）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你上次信中提到的“绿色校园，我们在行动”为主题的植树活动，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.介绍植树活动；
3.活动意义。
要求：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
In reply to your asking about the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”, I am writing to share some relevant details with you.
Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students’ Union organized the activity, which took place last Saturday afternoon. Approximately 200 students actively participated in it, some digging, some planting and others watering. Five hundred trees were planted in our school as scheduled.
Exhausted as we were, we were delighted. Not only did the activity offer an opportunity to promote our awareness of labor and cooperation, but it enabled us to build a green school together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封回信，表告诉他关于“绿色校园，我们在行动”为主题的植树活动的情况。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
大约：approximately→about
参加：participate in→take part in
机会：opportunity→chance
提高：promote→raise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In reply to your asking about the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”, I am writing to share some relevant details with you.
拓展句：Since you asked about the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”, I am writing to share some relevant details with you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students’ Union organized the activity, which took place last Saturday afternoon.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Exhausted as we were, we were delighted.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装）
查补易混易错点12 应用文写作之申请信、咨询信、求助信
体裁
命题形式
写作主题
2022
新高考
I卷
应用文
邀请信
写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
II卷
应用文
邀请信
写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
全国卷
乙卷
说明文
投稿
利用填表调查结果给报社投稿
甲卷
应用文
投稿
以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿
2021
新高考
I卷
应用文
投稿
校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福
II卷
应用文
投稿
校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福
全国卷
乙卷
应用文
发言稿
以“be smart online learners”为主题写一篇发言稿参赛
甲卷
应用文
征求建议
征求外国朋友建议，哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
2020
全国卷
I卷
应用文
投稿
写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛
II卷
应用文
日记
写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动
III卷
应用文
求助信
给外教写一封信，请帮忙指导
【申请信】
首段：自我介绍，说明申请内容
1. I learned from your website/the evening paper that your company wanted to hire.... you are in need
of.... 我从网站/晚报上得知贵公司想招聘……/你们需要……
2. I recommend myself as a qualified candidate for........ 我推荐自己作为……的合格人选。
3. I read the announcement of....... that you have posted and I am very interested in it.
看了你发布的公告，我对它很感兴趣。
主体部分：陈述本人优势和特长
性格优势
1. As an outgoing，warm and friendly person，I can get along well with......
我性格开朗，热情友好，可以与…相处得很好。
2. I'm easy-going and good-natured，which makes it easy for me to fit in with others.
我随和且脾气好，很容易与他人合得来。
经验特长
1. I have a good knowledge of English so I can communicate with native speakers in English freely.
我精通英语，因此我可以用英语同以英语为母语的人自由交流。
2. My previous. .......experience will qualify me for the position.
我以往的……经验将使我能够胜任这个职位。
3. I always take an active part in......... So experienced am I that I am sure to give..a better experience
of........ 我总是积极参加……。我经验丰富，一定会给……带来更好的……体验。
尾段：表达感谢，期盼回复
1. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration/account.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。
2. Should you treat my application favorably，I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
如果您看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供我的最佳服务。
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua，a Chinese student who is studying in London.Knowing that a Chinese painting
exhibition will be held at the local gallery next month and you are in need of some volunteers，I am
writing to apply for the position.
To begin with，I have such a good command of English that I can communicate with visitors without difficulty.What's more，as a Chinese painting lover I know a lot about this art form.If accepted，I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors，which can help them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request.
Yours，
Li Hua
【咨询信】
首段：自我介绍并表明写信目的
1、I'm......., a Chinese student planning to/interested in....... I am writing to ask for information about........
我是……，一个计划…/对……感兴趣的中国学生。我写信来咨询关于……的信息。
2、 I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding.......
我写信是想知道您是否能给我提供有关……的信息。
3、 I'm writing to enquire some detailed/further information about.........
我写信想询问一些有关……的详细/进一步的信息。
主体部分：说明咨询事由
1. First,I wonder if........Another point I'm not certain about is..........
首先，我想知道是否……。我不确定的另外一点是……
2. Moreover,I'd like to........In addition,as you know,.........,so..........is also a matter I m concerned about.
此外，我想……。另外，正如你所知，……，因此，……也是我关心的问题。
3. If there is anything else that needs special attention,please inform me at your convenience.
如果有其他需要特别注意的事，请在您方便的时候告诉我。
尾段：期盼回复并表示感谢
1. I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽早回复，我会很感激。
2. Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention/early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
谢谢您的好意，我将非常感激您对这封信的及时关注/早日回复。
【满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm a student from China.I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the English course of your school.
To begin with,could you be so kind as to tell me when the course will start and how many periods there are per week? Moreover,what about the class size? Additionally,I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course.Last but not least,I wonder if there would be any host families or dormitories.
Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【求助信】
首段：开门见山表明求助意图
1. Hearing you have much experience in...，I am writing to ask you for help./some advice.
听说您在……方面很有经验，我写信向您求助/征求建议。
2. I have some difficulty in...，which bothers me a lot，so I have no choice but to turn to you.
我在……方面有一些困难，这让我很困扰，所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
3. Faced with/Facing so many difficulties，I am anxious to ask you for help.
面对如此多的难题，我非常想向您求助。
主体部分：说明求助事由
1. I am encountering three problems which bother me a lot.To begin with，... What's worse，... What
troubles me most is.… All of these upset me because.… 我遇到了三个很困扰我的问题。首先，……。更糟糕的是，……。最让我苦恼的是…。所有这些都让我很不高兴，因为……
2. I really have no idea/wonder how to deal with the problems.
我真不知道/想知道如何解决这些问题。
尾段：期盼回复并表示感谢
1. I will be grateful if you can spare time to give me a hand/do me a favor.
如果您能抽出时间帮我，我将很感激。
2. I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful / practical tips/ suggestions.
如果您能非常友好地给我提供一些有用的/实用的建议，我将不胜感激。
3. Thanks for considering my request. I'm looking forward to your reply.
多谢考虑我的请求。我期待您的答复。
【满分范文】
Dear Mike，
I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing in the hope that you can give me some advice on my
English study.
Our new writing task called "extended writing"requires us to write a reasonable ending to a story.
Obviously，this is a very open task with multiple possibilities.While I enjoy the creativity this task
requires，I find it challenging to identify the plot and give my version of the possible ending.I also have
trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am really delighted to learn that ______(职位) is required, and I feel this ______(职位或机会) is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that ______(优势一) . Furthermore, ______(优势二) . Finally, there is no problem with ______(优势三) .
I do hope my ______(资质或能力) will win me a favorable consideration from your side. Should you need any details related to my application, feel free to contact me at______(联系方式).
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍). I am writing to inquire about ______(要询问的内容).
The following is my confusion. First of all, I’m tempted to know ______. Secondly, when will ______ ? Thirdly, is ______?(要咨询的问题罗列)
I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via ______ (表达感谢).
Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困难). For one thing, ______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
1．（2019·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。
【详情解析】
1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
2．（2010·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：
● 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）
●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）
●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two._______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详情解析】
本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）等
【点睛】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： As far as I am concerned据我所知，be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， That’s why I apply for the position.这句话用了表语从句， My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。
3．（安徽省部分学校2022-2023学年高三下学期3月月考英语试题）假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请，内容包括。
1.表明意图；
2.自身优势；
3.表达期望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:专栏column
Dear Sir or Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English. Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. More importantly, I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
寻找：look for→search for
职位：position→post
此外：besides→in addition
有关的：relevant→related
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English.
拓展句：I think I’m qualified for it because I have a good command of English, especially written English.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
4．（天津市南开中学2022-2023学年高三下学期第四次月考英语试题）假设你是晨光中学学生李津。目前在伦敦做交换生，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展，请你写一封信申请做志愿者。内容包括：
(1)写信目的；
(2)个人优势；
(3)能做的事情。
注意：
（1）词数不少于 100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China currently studying in London. I am more than delighted to hear that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in the local gallery and volunteers are needed, I am writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First and foremost, I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings, so not only can I explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings, but also tell the stories behind them. In addition, I have a good command of English, which makes me have no difficulty communicating with others. Last but not least, I am so enthusiastic and responsible that I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，申请当当地美术馆要举办的中国画展的志愿者。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy
职位：position→post
首先：first and foremost→first of all
把……考虑进去：take...into consideration→take...into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China currently studying in London.
拓展句：I am Li Jin, who is an exchange student from China currently studying in London.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In addition, I have a good command of English, which makes me have no difficulty communicating with others. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, I am so enthusiastic and responsible that I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer. (运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句和that引导的同位语从句)
5．（2023省四川省南充市高三下学期高考适应性考试英语试题）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，清明节将至，他发来邮件询问有关清明节的信息，请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.节日的时间；
2.节日的活动；
3.节日的意义。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：清明节the Tomb-Sweeping Day
Dear John,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear John,
I’m glad to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. Here I feel rather delighted to introduce the Tomb-Sweeping Day to you.
China’s traditional Tomb-Sweeping Day dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April 5 in the solar calendar, with a history of more than 2, 500 years. The festival was created to honor the dead. Traditionally, people will bring food and drinks to the cemetery to worship their ancestors. Meanwhile, it is also a chance for the family members to reunite and to remember.
In my opinion, as a traditional Chinese festival, the Tomb-Sweeping Day keeps us reminded of our lost families and cherishing the living ones. By celebrating it, we follow the trace of the forefathers and move on with their memories.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写封电子邮件，介绍清明节的相关情况。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
同时：meanwhile→in the meantime
有益的：chance→opportunity
追溯到：date back to→trace back to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, as a traditional Chinese festival, the Tomb-Sweeping Day keeps us reminded of our lost families and cherishing the living ones.
拓展句：In my opinion, the Tomb-Sweeping Day, which is a traditional Chinese festival, keeps us reminded of our lost families and cherishing the living ones.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m glad to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] China’s traditional Tomb-Sweeping Day dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April 5 in the solar calendar, with a history of more than 2, 500 years. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6． （2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，
内容包括:
1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详情解析】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
7．（2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是高一学生李华。请你给你的美国网友Tony写一封e-mail，把你的暑假安排告诉他，并询问他的暑假安排。内容包括：
1. 完成作业，适量阅读；
2. 走亲访友；
3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。
注意：1. 词数80左右；信的开头已经写好。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
How is everything with you recently?_________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Tony,
How are things with you lately? I am glad to tell you the plan for my summer holiday, which is approaching. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well. I will also spend some time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community. Please send me an e-mail, sharing your plan for the summer vacation. OK?
Looking forward to it!
Yours sincerely,
Lihua
【语篇解读】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。
【详情解析】
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：分总
要求：
1. 完成作业，适量阅读；
2. 走亲访友；
3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth./ tell sb. sth./ spend time in doing sth./ take part in/ intend to do sth./ send sth. to sb./ look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. How is everything going recently?
2. I am glad to tell you the plan for the approaching summer holiday.
3. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well.
4. I will also spend some time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far.
5. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community.
6. What about your plan for the summer holiday?
7. Looking forward to it!
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I have got to finish all the homework assigned by my teachers and do some reading as well.我必须完成老师布置的所有家庭作业，并且读一些书。句中使用了过去分词短语作后置定语。
[高分句型2]
Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community, which are of great benefit.句中which引导非线性定语从句，和be of + n. 表事物特征。
8．（重庆市巴蜀中学2022-2023学年高三下学期3月月考英语试题）假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 求助内容；
3. 希望回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
How is it going? _________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jack,
How is it going? I want you to know I’m graduating very soon, and that I’m planning a trip after Gaokao. I’d like to hear your opinions on two critical matters.
First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. However, I hear travel cost in Sanya has skyrocketed, and I don’t have a big budget. Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it. I believe you feel so too and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，正在规划自己的高中毕业旅行。请你写一封邮件，向英国好友Jack求助，希望他能帮你解答目前遇到的困惑。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
意见：opinion→recommendation
然而：however→nevertheless
此外：besides→what's more
各种各样的：all sorts of→varieties of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features. My mouth is already watering at the thought of all sorts of delicacies!
拓展句:Besides, I’d like you to recommend affordable restaurants with local features,where I can enjoy all sorts of delicacies!
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, I’m still wandering between my travel destinations, which are Thailand and Sanya haven’t been abroad before so I have concerns like safety, accommodations and travel. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句，so连接并列句）
【高分句型2】A thousand miles begins with the first step, as Laozi put it.（as引导非限制性定语从句）
9．（2023届河南省郑州市外国语学校高三下学期4月份月考英语试题）假如你是李华，你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极(Tai Chi)，他写信向你求助，请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：1.介绍学太极好处；2.负责联系学习地点和老师。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Forbes,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Forbes,
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon. I’ m quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly.
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives. Concerning your learning location and instructor, I’m so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you, for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country. As a result, you can rely on me.
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封回信，告知Forbes学太极相关的情况。
【详情解析】
第一步：
审题: 回信 告知Frobes学太极相关的情况
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示愿意帮助Forbes，第二部分说明学太极的好处和负责联系学习地点和老师，第三部分期望Forbes的到来。
要点：
1. 表示愿意帮助Forbes
2．学太极的好处：是一种有效的健身运动、动作优雅、让人放松
联系学习地点和老师：会介绍最好的太极学校和老师
3．期待Forbes的到来
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）
show great preference for；be willing to；give sb. a hand；an ancient martial art；be widely acknowledged；be famous for provides；mental relaxation；physical fitness ；essential； instructor；recommend；trainer；introduce… to；invite
第三步：连词成句
(1) You show great preference for Tai Chi.
(2) I can give you a hand gladly.
(3) Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
(7 ) I recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you.
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用not only… but also 连接下面的两个句子
(3)Tai Chi is an ancient martial art.
(4) Tai Chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
→ Tai Chi is not only is an ancient martial art but also has been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise.
用形容词短语作状语连接下面两个句子
(5) Tai Chi is famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements.
(6) Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
→Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness .
用定语从句连接下面的两个句子
(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi .
(9) My uncle is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
→(8) My uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次 ，增加文章的可读性。
10．（江苏省南通市2022-2023学年高三上学期12月月考英语试题）假如你是李华, 一名高三学生。英语作文读后续写这一项让你备受困扰。你计划向南京师范大学张教授(此领域的专家)写一封求助信。希望他帮你在情节构思、语言组织和表达等方面给予指导。内容包括:
1. 介绍困扰;
2. 希望得到帮助。
注意:
1. 词数80左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Professor Zhang,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Professor Zhang,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student. Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing. Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.
I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. First of all, I have difficulty in designing plots. In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.
Facing the problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生写一封求助信，向南京师范大学张教授求助如何写读后续写。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
寻求：seek→look for
首先：first of all→to start with
困难：difficulty→trouble
另外：in addition→furthermore
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Facing the problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
拓展句：When I face the problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11．（四川省绵阳市盐亭中学2022-2023学年高三上学期11月月考英语试题）假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1. 作业多，没有时间运动。
2. 压力大，难以入睡。
3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student.______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?
Looking forward to your early reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信，就高考紧张复习过程中遇到的一些问题向他求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
忙碌的：busy→occupied
专心于：concentrate on→ focus on
此外：Moreover→What’s more
解决：solve→deal with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
拓展句：Because I am faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.（运用了so…that…句型）
【高分句型2】What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.（运用了what引导主语从句和that引导表语从句）
12．（河南省洛阳市2022-2023学年高三上学期9月联考英语试题）假定你是李华，你和父母将于本周末外出游玩，但是你的宠物狗无人照看。请你给你的朋友Jack写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1. 表明意图；
2. 具体请求；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jack,
I have a favor to ask of you. My parents and I are going to take a vacation this weekend. However, I have to leave my pet dog behind. Therefore, I’m wondering if you could look after him for two days.
It doesn’t take much to care for him for he is healthy and lovely. For his three meals every day, you just need to feed him with the dog food I have prepared. In the afternoon, he wants to be taken out for a walk for about one hour. For the rest of time, he enjoys staying at home quietly.
If you are willing to take care of him, please reply me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求考生写一封求助信，请求Jack在自己与父母周末外出游玩时，帮忙照顾宠物狗。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累：
可爱的：lovely→cute
照顾：care for→look after/take care of
喜欢：enjoy→like/be fond of
乐意的：be willing→would like to
2.句式拓展：
同义句
原句：If you are willing to take care of him, please reply me soon.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you are willing to take care of him and could reply me soon.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]For his three meals every day, you just need to feed him with the dog food I have prepared.（运用了定语从句）
[高分句型2]Therefore, I’m wondering if you could look after him for two days.（运用了if引导宾语从句）
13．（湖北省东风高中、天门中学、仙桃中学2022-2023学年高三12月联考英语试题）假定你是李华，就读于一所国际学校。现阶段对个人未来发展产生了困惑，希望得到学校职业规划办公室（Career Planning Office）的Mr. Smith的帮助。请按下列要求写一封求助信：
1.本人简介；
2.对未来职业的畅想；
3.现阶段的困惑。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Class 1 Senior 3. Struggling with choosing a suitable major for the future, I am writing for your guidance and assistance.
Adoring my English teacher, I made up my mind to be a teacher like her. However, I find it difficult to figure out which subject to learn in the university and where I can get the introductions of the subjects.
Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice. Thank you in advance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校职业规划办公室的Mr. Smith写一封信，介绍自己现阶段对个人未来发展的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
帮助：assistance→help
崇拜：adore→idolize
下定决心做某事：make up one’s mind to do sth.→be determined to do sth.
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice.
拓展句：Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice, which is very important to me.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Struggling with choosing a suitable major for the future, I am writing for your guidance and assistance.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】However, I find it difficult to figure out which subject to learn in the university and where I can get the introductions of the subjects.（运用了which引导的宾语从句和where引导的宾语从句作figure out的宾语）
14．（2023届河北省石家庄市高中毕业年级教学质量检测英语试题）假定你是李华，4月18日是国际古迹遗址日（World Heritage Day），你的外国笔友William发来邮件询问你校的活动计划。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear William,
Greetings from China! I hope this email finds you well. With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged some activities.
First, in order to build up the cultural confidence of our students and raise the awareness of cultural heritage protection, our school will play a documentary named The Forbidden City 100, which is about valuable treasures and stories behind them. Then, after watching, we’ll make a poster in a group and we’re likely to win a prize for it.
I’m sure it’ll be a great experience.
How about you? Anything exciting? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，4月18日是国际古迹遗址日（World Heritage Day），你的外国笔友William发来邮件询问你校的活动计划。请给他回一封邮件。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
临近：approach→be around the corner
名为：name→call
提高：raise→promote
建立：build up→establish
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged some activities.
拓展句：As the World Heritage Day approaches on April 18, our school has arranged some activities.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged some activities. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] First, in order to build up the cultural confidence of our students and raise the awareness of cultural heritage protection, our school will play a documentary named The Forbidden City 100, which is about valuable treasures and stories behind them. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
15．（2023届辽宁省抚顺市普通高中高三第一次模拟考试英语试题）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你上次信中提到的“绿色校园，我们在行动”为主题的植树活动，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.介绍植树活动；
3.活动意义。
要求：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
In reply to your asking about the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”, I am writing to share some relevant details with you.
Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students’ Union organized the activity, which took place last Saturday afternoon. Approximately 200 students actively participated in it, some digging, some planting and others watering. Five hundred trees were planted in our school as scheduled.
Exhausted as we were, we were delighted. Not only did the activity offer an opportunity to promote our awareness of labor and cooperation, but it enabled us to build a green school together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封回信，表告诉他关于“绿色校园，我们在行动”为主题的植树活动的情况。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
大约：approximately→about
参加：participate in→take part in
机会：opportunity→chance
提高：promote→raise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In reply to your asking about the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”, I am writing to share some relevant details with you.
拓展句：Since you asked about the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”, I am writing to share some relevant details with you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students’ Union organized the activity, which took place last Saturday afternoon.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Exhausted as we were, we were delighted.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装）
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