【同步讲义】人教版英语九年级全一册-Unit 7 课时4 Writing 讲义

Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes

知识点01  思路点拨

本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家庭的各种规章制度进行了论述。在本单元话题作文的命题过程中，命题人通常会让你就学校或家庭的某些规章制度谈一谈自己的看法。写作时多用第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时，表达观点时要有理有据，不能偏激。

“三步法”写谈论规则、闸述观点类的作文。

1．确定主题：引出要谈论的话题；

2．谈论规则：具体哪方面的规则；

3．阐述观点：赞成或者不赞成。

体裁：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文

时态：一般现在时

人称：以第一人称为主

知识点02  必背单词组和句型

谈论规则、阐述观点类作文常用句型：

1.Are you allowed to make your own decisions at home？你可以在家里做自己的决定吗

2. Teenagers often think they should be allowed to practice their hobbies as much as they want.青少年常常认为应该允许他们尽可能多地练习自己的爱好。

3. I think I should be allowed to decide for my- self.　我认为应该允许我自己做决定。

4. He needs to spend more time on his homework because it is difficult to become a professional sports star. 他需要花更多的时间做作业，因为要成为职业体育明星很难。

5. I think I should be allowed to make this choice myself.我认为应该允许我自己做出这个选择。

6. Only then will I have a chance to achieve my dream.只有这样，我才有机会实现我的梦想。

7. No matter how many difficulties we have, I be- lieve all problems can be solved in the end.无论我们有多少困难，我相信所有问题最终都能解决。

8. Mobile phones should be kept off during the meeting会议期间应关闭手机

9. Teenagers under eighteen must not be allowed to smoke or drink.18岁以下的青少年不得吸烟或饮酒。

10. Many parents think going to school must be put first,so teenagers should not be encouraged to work part-time.There are many rules at my home/in our school.许多家长认为上学必须放在第一位，因此不应鼓励青少年从事兼职工作。我家/我们学校有许多规定。

11. We are not allowed to do ...我们不允许做…

12.. We must/have to...我们必须…

13.Whoever breaks the rules will be punished.任何违反规则的人都将受到惩罚。

14. Everyone must follow the rules.每个人都必须遵守规则。

15.I agree/disagree ... because ...我同意/不同意…因为…

16.I think teenagers should be allowed to …我认为应该允许青少年…

知识点03  提纲

知识点04  范文

Tuesday, May 25th

One of the rules in my family is that I’m not allowed to have a mobile phone. My parents think that using it will get in the way of my study, but I don’t agree with them.  

First, the mobile phone provides me with an easy and fast way of communication. If I have a mobile phone, I can make a call when in an emergency. Second, the mobile phone can help me study. Now there are lots of educational apps on it that I can use. Third, I can use the mobile phone to listen to music, play games or watch movies. It’s not good to spend all the time studying. I need to relax sometimes. For these reasons, I think I should be allowed to have a mobile phone. My parents can make rules about using it, for example, when and how long I can use it. I can do even better in my study if I’m allowed to have a mobile phone. I hope my parents will understand me.

5月25日，星期二

我家的一条规定是不准我有手机。我父母认为使用它会妨碍我的学习，但我不同意他们的看法

首先，手机为我提供了一种简单快捷的沟通方式。如果我有手机，我可以在紧急情况下打电话。第二，手机可以帮助我学习。现在有很多我可以使用的教育应用程序。第三，我可以用手机听音乐、玩游戏或看电影。把所有的时间都花在学习上是不好的。我有时需要放松。基于这些原因，我认为应该允许我拥有一部手机。我的父母可以制定关于使用它的规则，例如，我可以使用它的时间和时间。如果允许我有一部手机，我可以在学习上做得更好。我希望我的父母能理解我。

必背单词组和句型

开头句：

There are many rules in …

中间句：

In my family, I need to …

Besides, … should …

Also, it’s necessary to …

… not be allowed to …

… must be … every day.

I have to …

What’s more …

结尾句：

Only … are we …

In order to …, I should …

经典名句：

Each coins has two sides. 凡事皆有两面性。

A nation has its rule and a family also has one.国有国法，家有家规。

题组A  基础过关练

假如你是郑敏，请你根据下面的表格内容，给你的新西兰笔友Kate写一封不少于80词的电子邮件，把你新学校的各种规章制度告诉她，并简要谈谈你对校规的看法。

要求：

1．语言通顺，行文流畅；

2．必须包含表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；

3．不少于80词。

【答案】Dear Kate，

There are lots of different rules in my new school.We have to do morning exercises together every day.We have to wear school uniforms.We are not allowed to go out at night because it is dangerous.Running and jumping in the hallways aren't allowed，either.There are some other rules in my school.For example，we aren't allowed to wear long hair at school.And it isn't allowed to smoke at school.

These rules are strict.But I think they are helpful and necessary.

【分析】这篇写作需要完成一份电子邮件，首先需要注意的就是格式问题，需要注意信件的正确书写方式，保证各环节的完整。这篇写作是需要向新西兰笔友Kate介绍学校的各种规章制度，具体的制度内容已经给出了三条，需要注意准确地对着三条校规进行表达，同时也要注意题目要求要简单谈谈对校规的看法，也就是说不仅需要对校规进行正确的转述，还要能够提出自己的观点看法。这里就需要注意本文的写作难点就在于如何让行文更有逻辑，说理更充分，语言更加连贯，顺利完成写作要求的任务。

【详解】首先使用there be句型来概括介绍学校是有许多校规的。介绍到各个具体的规定的时候使用的相关短语也比较准确，例如do morning exercises做早操，wear school uniforms穿校服，go out at night在夜晚外出，wear long hair留长发，smoke at school在学校吸烟。句型方面也有变化，例如用到了We have to…我们不得不…，We are not allowed to我们不被允许去…，…aren't allowed…是不被允许的，it isn't allowed to…做…是不被允许的等句型，增加了文章句式的丰富程度，总体来说文章写作形式较为丰富，用词造句较为准确，完成了题目要求的写作任务。

 俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准玩电脑游戏等。请你结合你家的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My family rules”为题，写一篇短文。

提示：1. 家里有哪些家规； 2. 对家规的感受； 3. 对父母的建议。

要求：词数100左右。

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【答案】例文

My family rules

My parents are very strict with me，and they have made some basic rules that I must obey. Firstly，I must get home and finish my homework on time after school. Secondly，I cannot play computer games，even in my free time. Thirdly，I have to do some chores，such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom. If I break one of them，I will be punished. But thanks to these rules，I can live a healthy and regular life.

I think the second rule is unfair to me. I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while. It will make me relaxed.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，请你结合你家的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My family rules”为题，写一篇短文。提示：1. 家里有哪些家规； 2. 对家规的感受； 3. 对父母的建议。要求：词数100左右。第二段叙述“守株待兔”这一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并结尾。

2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First, Secondly, Thirdly）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。

3.高分亮点：

短语：are very strict with；after school；play computer games；such as；make me relaxed。

句型： 定语从句they have made some basic rules that I must obey.条件状语从句If I break one of them，I will be punished.宾语从句I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while.

【点睛】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First, Secondly, Thirdly）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。   （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

题组B  能力提升练

Loving English杂志社计划进行一些针对中学生对在家生活看法的调查。假如你叫林森，请你就邮件中所提出的问题，给该杂志社的编辑回一封电子邮件，发表自己的意见，并说明喜欢或者不喜欢的理由。

要求：1.回答邮件中提出的所有问题，并表达你的看法。

2.词数90左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Editor，There are many rules in my family，some good and some bad.

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Yours

Lin Sen

【答案】例文

Dear Editor，

There are many rules in my family，some good and some bad. My parents are very strict with me. For example，I have to get up at six every morning and I have to be in bed by ten. It's hard for me but I think it's necessary. Thanks to these rules，I am always in good health. Also，I can't play computer games before I finish my homework. I think this is the best rule, because I can play computer games for a while after all, and it always leads me to do my homework first.

But I can't go out on the night of weekdays, and on weekends, I have to go home before seven. I think that is unfair! Students should be allowed to have their own spare time with friends. We can study together and exercise together. This is the worst rule I have ever met!

Yours,

Lin Sen

【详解】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，要求学生以林森的身份给杂志社回一封邮件。邮件内容要包括描述自己家的家规、你是如何看待它们的、其中最好和最差的家规分别是什么、你喜不喜欢这些家规并给出理由。

例文点评：例文用第一人称展开介绍，时态采用一般现在时为主。文章详细列举了一些家规以及“我”对它们的看法，特别点明了我认为最好的和最差的家规是什么，并给出了原因。文章内容符合材料要求，语言很有条理，文章层次分明。

高分亮点：

短语：be strict with；thanks to；for a while；after all。

句型：before引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；省略关系代词的定语从句。

作文

要点如下：

(1)假如你是李明十五岁， 你喜欢周末和朋友们一起做作业，一起闲逛和一起玩游戏。

(2)你的父母担心你的学习。他们认为青少年不应当被允许一起做作业，你们在一起会交谈代替做作业。青少年也不应当花许多时间在游戏上，游戏会妨碍你的学习。

(3)但你不同意这些观点。 同学们一起学习可以相互帮助。 玩游戏可以使你感到放松，这对学习有好处。你和同学们相处融洽，这使你很开心。

(4)你认为你应当被允许对一些事做出决定。例如，你应该被允许选择自己的朋友，你应当被允许听摇滚乐......请用第一人称写作文，内容可适当发挥。

I’m Li Ming. I am 15 years old now. I like _________________________________________

【答案】I’m Li Ming. I am 15 years old now. I like doing homework with my friends on weekends. Besides, I like going around and playing computer games with them. My parents are worried about my study. They think teenagers shouldn’t be allowed to do homework together because we may talk about other things with each other instead of doing homework. Teenagers shouldn’ spend too much time on games because games get in the way of study. However, I don’t agree with them. We can help each other when learning together. Playing games can make me feel relaxed, which is good for our study. I can get on well with my classmates and I feel happy. I think I should be allowed to make decisions on my own. For example, I should be allowed to choose my friends. I should be allowed to listen to rock music.

【详解】这篇作文要点明确，首先是介绍一下自己在周末的活动，包括一起做作业、一起玩游戏、一起闲逛等，然后表达父母对此的态度，陈述父母不同意的原因，最后表达自己的观点，对于父母看法不同意的理由，自己想要父母做出的改变等。人称是以第一人称为主，事态基本上是一般现在时，需要注意部分短语的表达即可，写作难度不大，在最后部分需要写到“被允许…”，要注意正确使用被动语态。用到的短语表达有：on weekends 在周末，playing computer games 玩电脑游戏，are worried about my study 担心我的学习，instead of 而不是，spend too much time on games 花费太多的时间在游戏上，get in the way of study 妨碍学习，agree with 同意，get on well with 和…相处得好，make decisions on my own 自己做决定，listen to rock music. 听摇滚乐。总体来说写作的时候要注意正确运用语态，行文流畅，完成了要求的写作任务。

题组C  培优拔尖练

目前, 随着人们生活水平的提高, 越来越多的家庭有了汽车。于是很多中学生想开车, 尽管法律、父母不允许, 可他们依然我行我素, 以“Why are middle school students not allowed to drive alone?”为题, 谈谈你的观点。80词左右。

内容包括：

1. 喜欢开车的理由：(1)很酷(2)炫耀(3)出游方便

2. 不能开车的理由：(1)太危险(2)不能更好地控制自己(3)没有驾照

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【答案】Now more and more families have cars. Should middle school students   be allowed to drive？Some students think they should be allowed to drive. First①，they think it's very cool to② drive a car. Second③，they want to show off. Third④，they think it's convenient to⑤ drive when they go sightseeing or visit friends.

But I don't think middle school students should be allowed to⑥drive. First，it's very dangerous to do that. Second，middle school students are too young to control⑦ themselves. Third，they don't have a driver's license.

So，that's why middle school students aren't allowed to drive alone.

【详解】这是一篇话题作文，谈论的话题为“为什么中学生不能独自驾车”。文章主要可分为两个部分：①中学生喜欢开车的理由；②认为中学生不能开车的理由。不要遗漏提示的要点，可适当添加。时态选用一般现在时态。本文运用了“三步法”写谈论规则、阐述观点类作文。第一段前两句确定主题、谈论规则，其余部分阐述观点。添彩点：一是用first, second, third的运用，使得短文层次清楚，次序井然；二是本文使用的语言非常流畅，像：it's very cool/convenient to…，…should be allowed to…，middle school students are too young to control …等等。

 （2017·山东烟台·中考真题）当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子们来说，学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息,以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求:

1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；

2.题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇:1.make decisions　2.depend on　3.look after　4.on the one hand...on the other hand...Learn to Be IndependentNowadays, many children are treated as“little emperors”at home.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

Learn to Be Independent

Nowadays, many children are treated as“little emperors”at home. Parents show so much love for their children that when they face problems, they don't know what to do. So it's important for children to learn to be independent. In my opinion, parents should believe their children and never do everything for them. It's necessary to give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.

As for children, they shouldn't depend on their parents too much. On the one hand, they should learn to do chores. It helps to develop their independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. On the other hand, they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solve them.

In a word, the earlier children learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.

【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。主要以“Learn to Be Independent为主题展开描写。本文要写的内容题目表格有提示。写作时要运用正确的英语把想要表达内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导：文章主要用一般将来时，人称主要用第三人称展开详细阐述。文章可分三段描写。第一段提出观点并给出家长的建议；第二段从孩子角度出发给出对应的建议；第三段总结孩子学会独立是有好处的。写作时注意文章描写要具体，思路要清晰，语言表达要准确，意思要通俗易懂。