2024版高考英语一轮总复习写作专题专题10旅游观光教师用书新人教版
展开专题10 旅游观光
Ⅰ．应用文写作
给报刊投稿
(2021·天津卷3月)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
1．该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
2．该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
3．你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：1．词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in the southwestern part of China．It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhai Valley and Dujiangyan Irrigation System．
Jiuzhai Valley National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province．①What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colourful lakes．②What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas and golden monkeys．There are also many species of rare plants protected there．Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation System．It dates from over 2，000 years ago．③However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today．
Sichuan is a wonderful place．I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhai Valley as well as the construction of Dujiangyan Irrigation System．
1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be located in, world-famous, places of interest, a nature reserve, impressive, multi-level waterfalls, have a chance to do sth．, rare animals, scenic spot, date from, play an important part in, be amazed by 等。
2．句式美：①句What is the most impressive是What引导的主语从句。
②句walking in the nature reserve是动词-ing形式短语作状语，to see rare animals是不定式作后置定语。
③句中的However表示转折关系。此外，文中多处巧妙运用适当的衔接词语，比如What's more表示递进关系；such as, like表示列举等。
假定你是李华。上周你校组织了嘉兴南湖一日游学活动。请你给校报英文版投稿，介绍该活动。内容包括：
1．活动时间、参加人员；
2．游学活动安排(坐游船、参观纪念馆等)；
3．活动反响。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：Memorial Hall纪念馆
【参考范文】
Last week, our school organised a one-day study tour in Nanhu, Jiaxing．All the teachers and students of our school took part in the activity．On Wednesday, we gathered at the school gate at 7 o'clock in the morning, and then went there by bus．
In order to review the history of the founding of the Party and appreciate the spirit of the Red Boat, we took a cruise ship and visited the Memorial Hall．We listened carefully to the teacher's explanation of the history of the Party Building．
One hundred years ago, the older generation made continuous efforts to revitalise China, which made us very moved．We will work harder for the happiness of mankind in the future．
Ⅱ．读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood．It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful．One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells us a lot about her．[悬念1]
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way．As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said goodbye to all of our friends．Who knew if we'd ever see them again! Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off．We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveller's checks Mum had forgotten．[悬念2]
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mum was driving while Dad slept．“You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I will stand outside the door and play lookout while you go．” I had terrible pictures in my mind．“Honey, where are the kids？”“What？！ Oh, I thought they were being awfully quiet．” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren't about to take any chances．
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy (空房间)．After driving in vain for some time, Mum suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and asked if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous．[悬念3] To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea．Mum never could understand our objections (反对)．If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mum would have been delighted．She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is．We finally found a vacancy in the next town．
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnew (崭新) tentwebroughtwithus．
Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofsightsalongtheway．
一、理清文章大意
关键：Who: the author's family
Where: on the journey
When: when the author was eleven
What: They drove to Colorado and North Dakota．
How: The author experienced many strange and interesting things．
大意：本文叙述了作者的母亲很健忘，一家四口自驾旅游去祖父母和外祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了很多有趣的事情。
二、挖掘文中悬念点
悬念1思考：为什么作者说他们的家庭旅游是奇怪的？
悬念2思考：为什么作者说他们勇敢地开车离开？
悬念3思考：作者和大卫为什么紧张？
三、分析段落开头语
段首句1思考：
①他们带帐篷了吗？
②妈妈是健忘的，途中会不会有什么麻烦？
③假如爸爸不在场，孩子们会怎样？
段首句2思考：
①他们带的帐篷会发挥作用吗？
②野营时，妈妈会怎么做？
③作者对这次旅行的感悟是什么？
通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：
Paragraph 1：没有忘记带帐篷→妈妈健忘把爸爸丢了→妈妈决定路边露营等他→孩子们害怕→母爱
Paragraph 2：露营→母爱的力量→见到了爸爸→作者的感悟
Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnew(崭新) tentwebroughtwithus．We were happy to see it all still packed, and hoped it would be packed forever．However, things came to its turning point．Mum lost Dad in the gas station when we were sleeping．What's more, as the dark approached, we met the same trouble again．Fearful as Mum was, she decided to camp near the road waiting for Dad．The wind blew wildly like a monster．Tears took control of us．Mum embraced us tightly singing a soft song, which really relaxed us．We didn't meet Dad in the last few days, but we felt comfortable staying with Mum．
Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofsightsalongtheway．The tent became a close friend then．Every time we camped, Mum would read a book or sing a soft song．The warmth of her arms never faded away in my memory．Though she was forgetful, laughter accompanied us along the way．We finally met poor Dad in our destination．This trip made me realise that love may have many ways, but it can always warm people in the dark．
1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。
①forever暗示作者不喜欢露营。
②the same表明途中爸爸走散了，他们不得不黑夜路边露营。
③blew wildly like a monster烘托了让作者害怕的自然环境。
④poor一词照应Mum lost Dad，在孩子的眼里，妈妈因为健忘把爸爸弄丢了，爸爸好可怜。
2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。
①still, things come to its turning point, approach, take control of, embrace, fade away, accompany等堪称经典。
②Fearful as Mum was是as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构。
③which really relaxed us为which引导的非限制性定语从句。
④staying with Mum为动词-ing形式作状语。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A boulder (巨石), as big as a house．That's how the guidebook described Giant Rock．Dad said it arrived here millions of years ago．I was finally going to see it, in snowshoes, with my two older cousins, my dad, and my uncle Don．I'd been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow．
At the parking area, after putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map．Due to the geographical location, electrical devices are inaccessible here．The map is our only guide．“We start here，” Dad said．“On the red trail (小路)．Then we turn left onto the purple road．That's where Giant Rock is．”“Remember to stick together and don't wander off, guys，” Uncle Don said．
The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall．It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers．At the top of the hill, we turned onto the purple trail．We settled into a pattern, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back，crunching (嘎吱嘎吱地行进) through the snow．I saw lots of animal tracks — mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints．As the trail wound down, my cousin Andrew said what I'd been thinking：“Will we ever reach Giant Rock？” My cousin Aiden smiled and turned to me, “Luke, do you think your dad invented this idea just to get us away from the TV for a while？” I laughed．“You never know．”
Finally, we climbed a hill and saw the massive boulder sitting alone in the forest．It really is as big as a house! My cousins and I high-fived each other and jogged until we stood at the base, breathless．Standing in the boulder's broad shadow, I noticed the sun had sunk lower．
“Let's head back，” Dad said after a few minutes．“There will be several crossroads on the way back．Guys, keep up with the team．” Soon we were crunch-crunch-crunching our way home．I was a little behind the group when we approached a crossroads．And I noticed a set of animal tracks I didn't recognise, so I followed them for a closer look．
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
IlookedupwhenIsuddenlyrealisedhowquietithadgotten．
Asgoingworriedly, Iheardvoices, someonecallingfaraway．
【参考范文】
IlookedupwhenIsuddenlyrealisedhowquietithadgotten．“Where is everyone？” I shouted．Nothing．“They couldn't have gone far．I'll catch up if I hurry，” I comforted myself．After a short walk, I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go straight, but both trails had red markers．I turned to the left which looked familiar．Unfortunately, it got quieter and quieter．Soon it might be too dark to tell what colour the markers were．What if I couldn't find my way back?
Asgoingworriedly, Iheardvoices, someonecallingfaraway．Following the voices, I noticed the stone wall, the trail running alongside it．It must be the right way back! I rushed downhill with big steps．Then, I saw the parking area, and my family! I shouted as I ran towards them．“Luke? Are you OK？” The voice of Dad was urgent．I'd only been lost for minutes, but it seemed like forever．Now all I wanted was a bear hug from Dad and to make tracks for home．
