高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文

开放性作文

1．上周日，你校组织学生到西山远足。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，介绍这次活动。内容包括：  

1. 时间和地点； 2. 远足过程；3. 你的感悟。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hiking to Xishan

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2．你校英文报正在进行题为A Meaningful Volunteering Experience的征文，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 时间和地点；

2. 活动内容；

3. 你的感受。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Meaningful Volunteering Experience

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3．上周，你校组织了一次主题为“Be Proud of China”的英语演讲比赛，请你为你校英文报刊写一篇报道。内容包括：

1.演讲主题；

2.比赛过程；

3.比赛反响。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．你校英文报刊正在开展“我的成长故事”为主题的征文活动。请你结合自己的经历，写一篇短文投稿，讲述你成长过程中克服困难或者挫折的一次经历，并表达你的感悟。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；

2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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5．你校英文报正在举办主题为“The importance of goals”的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1.目标的重要性；

2.呼吁同学们树立目标。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

The importance of goals

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6．21世纪英语报拟举行“奥运冠军永不言弃的精神给我的启迪”主题英文征文活动，请据此投稿，内容包括：

1.奥运冠军给我的启迪，如：他们全力以赴，追求卓越，永不言弃；

2.我今后的计划或梦想；

3.如何实现自己的计划或梦想。

注意：

1.词数应为80左右；

2.可以当增加细节，使行文连贯。

The Enlightenment from Olympic Champions

As we all know, Chinese athletes got remarkable achievements in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics.

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7．假设你是李华，作为一名高三学生你将去参加一次主题为“Learn to Relax Before An Examination”的英文演讲，请你根据以下要点写一份英文演讲稿。内容包括：

1.考前焦虑的坏处；

2.给考生们提出合理的建议。

提示：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

词数：不少于100词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。

Learn to Relax Before An Examination

Nowadays.as Senior Three students, we have to face many examinations.

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8．假设你是李华。在外教Michael的口语课上，你需要做一个简短的英文阅读分享，介绍一本你喜欢的人传记(biography)或自传(autobiography)。内容包括：

1. 书目名称;

2. 分享理由。

注意：1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出。

Good morning, my dear fellow classmates!

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That’s all! Thank you for your listening.

9．假设你是李华，某国际学校学生会主席。下周二校会你校将举办英语演讲比赛，主题为“践行低碳生活，从我做起”。请你写一篇英文演讲稿。内容包括：

1. 你对低碳生活的理解；2. 具体做法；3. 发出倡议。

注意：词数80左右。

参考词汇：emission 排放；carbon dioxide 二氧化碳；低碳生活 a low-carbon lifestyle

Hello, everyone! I am Lihua.

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That’s all. Thank you!

10．你校英文报正在征集以Person of the Year为题的征文，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括：

1.你心中的“年度人物”；

2.选择该人物的原因；

3.你得到的启发。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Person of the Year

In my heart, “Person of the Year” should be someone

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1．In order to get students closer to nature, our school organized us to hike to Xishan Hill last Friday.

We gathered at the school gate at eight o’clock in the morning, and then we headed to Xishan. Along the way, we appreciated the beauty of spring and sang happily. Varieties of flowers were blooming and nature seemed to come alive again. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made us comfortable and relaxed.

The activity was highly spoken of and turned out to be a great success. Not only does it broaden our horizons but it also relieves our academic burden, which is helpful for us to be more concentrated in our study.

【导语】这是一篇报道。要求考生对上周日你校组织学生到西山远足的情况写一篇英文报道，介绍这次活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

清爽的：fresh→ refreshing

漂亮的：beautiful → magnificent

放松的：relaxed→ free and easy

有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：We appreciated the beauty of spring and sang happily.

拓展句：Appreciating the beauty of spring, we sang happily.

【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to get students closer to nature, our school organized us to hike to Xishan Hill last Friday.（目的状语）

【高分句型2】Not only does it broaden our horizons but it also relieves our academic burden（Not only…but also倒装结构）

2．                                                                                A Meaningful Volunteering Experience

Last Saturday morning, I, together with my classmates, worked as volunteers in our community centre.

We helped to hand out food and medicine donated by a local company to the elderly living in our community. We also delivered the food and medicine to the homes of those who had difficulty walking or moving. Tired as I was after hours of hard work, I felt very delighted.

This meaningful volunteering experience was not only a relay of love, but also a good chance for my own personal improvement.

【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写一篇题为A Meaningful Volunteering Experience的征文。

【详解】1.词汇积累

分发：hand out→distribute

捐赠：donate→give away

困难：difficulty→trouble

劳累的：tired→weary

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：We helped to hand out food and medicine donated by a local company to the elderly living in our community.

拓展句：We helped to hand out food and medicine that had been donated by a local company to the elderly living in our community.

【点睛】【高分句型1】We also delivered the food and medicine to the homes of those who had difficulty walking or moving.（由who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Tired as I was after hours of hard work, I felt very delighted.（由as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构）

3．Our school organized a speech contest whose theme was “Be Proud of China” in a school lecture hall last Wednesday.

Competitors from each class shared their stories about our country, describing what China has achieved in the latest centuries. In the speeches, they also expressed their determination to study hard and make contributions to making our country stronger and more beautiful. With tears in our eyes, we felt inspired throughout the whole contest.

The contest brought out our great feelings for China and we all agreed it was our responsibility to support the development of our country.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校组织了一次主题为“Be Proud of China”的英语演讲比赛，为你校英文报刊写一篇报道。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express → voice

受鼓舞的：inspired → motivated

比赛：contest → competition

支持：support → back up

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：The contest brought out our great feelings for China and we all agreed it was our responsibility to support the development of our country.

拓展句：The contest brought out our great feelings for China so that we all agreed it was our responsibility to support the development of our country.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Competitors from each class shared their stories about our country, describing what China has achieved in the latest centuries. (运用现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Our school organized a speech contest whose theme was be proud of China in a school lecture hall last Wednesday. (运用了关系代词whose引导的限制性定语从句)

4．                                                My Story of Courage and Determination

I will never forget the first time when I learned how to ride a bike.

At the beginning, with Dad holding the back of the bike, I rode happily and safely. After some time, Dad told me to ride independently. Though scared, I gave it a try. It was not easy. After several attempts, I finally rode the bike steadily. At that moment, I felt like I was flying.

Whenever I meet with difficulties, this experience inspires me to be brave and determined.

【导语】本文是开放作文。你校英文报刊正在开展“我的成长故事”为主题的征文活动。请你结合自己的经历，写一篇短文投稿，讲述你成长过程中克服困难或者挫折的一次经历，并表达你的感悟。

【详解】1.词汇积累

起初：At the beginning→To begin with

害怕的：scared→frightened

无论何时：Whenever→No matter when

鼓励：inspire→encourage

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：After several attempts, I finally rode the bike steadily.

拓展句：After I attempted several times, I finally rode the bike steadily.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I will never forget the first time when I learned how to ride a bike. (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Though scared, I gave it a try. (运用了though引导的让步状语从句的省略)

5．参考范文：

The importance of goals

As a saying goes, “Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.” Obviously, goals play an essential role in our life.

In the first place, goals guide us towards where we want to head, providing a way to our successful journey. In addition, people who are aware of their goals tend to stay motivated and inspired when faced with adversity. Last but not least, we are becoming physically and spiritually fulfilled when focusing on our goals.

Hence, if you still don’t have a goal, set an appropriate one and try to accomplish it.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生讲述目标的重要性并呼吁同学们树立目标。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

在……方面起极其重要的作用：play an essential role in→play a vital part in

指引：guide→direct

意识到：be aware of→be conscious of/realize

集中注意力于：focus on→concentrate on

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：In the first place, goals guide us towards where we want to head, providing a way to our successful journey.

拓展句：First of all, goals directs us towards the destination which we want to head for, providing a way to our successful journey.

【点睛】【高分句型1】In addition, people who are aware of their goals tend to stay motivated and inspired when faced with adversity.(使用了who引导定语从句和when引导时间状语从句，且状语从句中使用了省略结构)

【高分句型2】Hence, if you still don’t have a goal, set an appropriate one and try to accomplish it.(使用了if引导条件状语从句和祈使句)

6．The Enlightenment from Olympic Champions

As we all know, Chinese athletes got remarkable achievements in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics.

What impresses me most is that Olympics champions dedicate all their efforts and never give up. Such spirit of commitment is a source of my enlightenment. Looking ahead, I have a dream of becoming an enterprise manager to lead a team. To realize this dream, I will devote myself to learning business knowledge and managerial skills desperately, and strive to make progress every day. And when I encounter difficulties, I will never give up.

Olympic champions’ success comes from their diligence and perseverance, so does mine.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。21世纪英语报拟举行“奥运冠军永不言弃的精神给我的启迪”主题英文征文活动，要求考生以此为题写一篇英文稿子参加征文活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

运动员：athlete → sportsman

引人注目的：remarkable → noticeable/extraordinary

投身于：devote myself to → throw oneself into

毅力，坚持不懈：perseverance → persistence

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To realize this dream, I will devote myself to learning business knowledge and managerial skills desperately, and strive to make progress every day.

拓展句：I will devote myself to learning business knowledge and managerial skills desperately, and strive to make progress every day so that I can realize this dream in the future.

【点睛】[高分句型1] What impresses me most is that Olympics champions dedicate all their efforts and never give up.(运用了连接代词what引导主语从句和连词that引导表语从句)

[高分句型2] And when I encounter difficulties, I will never give up.(运用了从属连词when引导时间状语从句)

7．Learn to Relax Before An Examination

Nowadays, as Senior Three students, we have to face many examinations. Many of us feel quite anxious before various examinations, not sleeping well in the night or feeling frightened and blank in the mind just before the examinations, which has a negative impact on our health as well as our performance during the examinations.

How to cope with the anxiety before an examination may vary from person to person. Generally, doing some light exercise is a good way to relieve our anxiety, which can help us to relax both physically and mentally. In addition, chatting with our good friends also works out well because a casual talk will help us move away from the examination for a moment. Last but not least, thinking about some happy things in our life may also contribute to our relaxation before an examination.

All in all, don’t let anxiety stand in your way. Take it easy and everything will be OK.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Learn to Relax Before An Examination”为主写一份英文演讲稿参加英文演讲，内容包括考前焦虑的坏处并给考生们提出合理建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

面临：face →be faced with

影响：impact →influence

应对：cope with →deal with

此外：in addition →what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：How to cope with the anxiety before an examination may vary from person to person.

拓展句：How we should cope with the anxiety before an examination may vary from person to person.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Many of us feel quite anxious before various examinations, not sleeping well in the night or feeling frightened and blank in the mind just before the examinations, which has a negative impact on our health as well as our performance during the examinations.（运用了现在分词短语作状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】In addition, chatting with our good friends also works out well because a casual talk will help us move away from the examination for a moment.（运用了动名词短语作主语以及because引导的原因状语从句）

8．One possible version:

Good morning. my dear fellow classmates! It is my great pleasure to share with you one of my favorite autobiographies. It is the English version of The Story of My Life, written by Helen Keller.

In the book, Helen gave a vivid account of her own experiences from her eventful childhood to her extraordinary adulthood. The highlight is particularly about life spent with her teacher, Anne Sullivan, for whose help she expresses her deep-felt gratitude. The language is beautiful, you can find peace and power in her accounts. It is always considered one of the classical works in American literature.

I believe by reading the book, not only will you get a taste of the beauty of English language, you may also find yourself inspired and touched, thus having a more inclusive and optimistic attitude toward life.

That’s all! Thank you for your listening!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍一本喜欢的人传记(biography)或自传(autobiography)，在外教Michael的口语课上做一个简短的英文阅读分享，内容包括书目名称以及分享的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

描述：account →description

表达：express →convey

认为：consider →think

感动的：touched →moved

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It is the English version of The Story of My Life, written by Helen Keller.

拓展句：It is the English version of The Story of My Life, which was written by Helen Keller.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The highlight is particularly about life spent with her teacher, Anne Sullivan, for whose help she expresses her deep-felt gratitude.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I believe by reading the book, not only will you get a taste of the beauty of English language, you may also find yourself inspired and touched, thus having a more inclusive and optimistic attitude toward life.（运用了not only…but also…连接的并列结构以及倒装句和现在分词作结果状语）

9．    Hello, everyone! I am Lihua. It’s such a privilege for me to give a speech here. Today, I am going to share with you something about reducing the emission of carbon dioxide.

    Personally, a low-carbon lifestyle means saving more energy and producing less waste. In daily life we can do something to reduce. First, it makes sense to turn off water and electricity when we don’t use them. Besides, using reusable products like cloth bags is a good way to reduce pollution. Finally, we can travel on foot if possible, which is both environmentally friendly and beneficial to health.

    Every individual’s efforts count for a low-carbon society. Therefore, I appeal to you to take action now.

    That’s all. Thank you!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“践行低碳生活，从我做起”为主题写一篇英文演讲稿，讲述对低碳生活的理解，如何做到低碳生活以及发出倡议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

荣幸/光荣：privilege→honor

发表演讲：give a speech→deliver a speech

就个人而言：personally→in one’s opinion

减少：reduce→cut down

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, using reusable products like cloth bags is a good way to reduce pollution.

拓展句：Besides, using products like cloth bags can reduce pollution, which is a good way .

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, it makes sense to turn off water and electricity when we don’t use them.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

【高分句型2】Finally, we can travel on foot if possible, which is both environmentally friendly and beneficial to health.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

10．                                                            Person of the Year

In my heart, “Person of the Year” should be someone who attracted widespread attention in the current year.

I recomend my classmate Li Ming to be the most beautiful person of the year. As our monitor, Li Ming is not only good at learning, but also willing to help students with poor grades. Under the influence of his example, our class got the first place in this semester. What’s more, he saved an old man who suddenly fainted last month. In the current situation of lack of trust between people, he did not consider personal gains and losses, and did first aid to the old man without hesitation, saving his life in time.

So I recommend Li Ming the Person of the Year.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作，你校英文报正在征集以Person of the Year为题的征文，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括：1.你心中的“年度人物”；2.选择该人物的原因；3.你得到的启发。

【详解】1.词汇积累

广泛的：widespread→extensive

擅长：be good at→be skilled in

值得：be worthy of→be worth

此外：What’s more→Besides

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I recomend my classmate Li Ming to be the most beautiful person of the year. As our monitor, Li Ming is not only good at learning, but also willing to help students with poor grades.

拓展句：I recomend my classmate Li Ming to be the most beautiful person of the year, because as our monitor, Li Ming is not only good at learning, but also willing to help students with poor grades.

【点睛】[高分句型1] In my heart, “Person of the Year” should be someone who attracted widespread attention in the current year.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] In the current situation of lack of trust between people, he did not consider personal gains and losses, and did first aid to the old man without hesitation, saving his life in time.(运用了现在分词作状语)