2023高考英语满分作文万能模板（5）读后续写

2023高考英语满分作文万能模板（五）

                           读后续写

【题型分析与写作方法】

题型解析：

读后续写是写作的一种新题型，顾名思义就是我们在阅读一篇还未写完的文章之后，按照语段所给的开头写出两个语段（约150词），从而把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。

读后续写不仅要求考生准确使用词汇和语言框架，会合理润色语言，更重要的是，它还要求考生能够明白应该如何整理续写内容，以使得其形成和前文统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。

应该说，这种题型是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，它不仅考查了考生在阅读文章的基础上分析文章逻辑的能力，又考查了考生的创造力、想象力，以及运用准确丰富的语言进行表达的能力。

解题方法：

下面是读后续写类作文的写作步骤：

1. 读文

精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，比如，是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”完成续写。确定文章体裁和主要内容（话题）。注意文中的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件等信息。

2. 审题

仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生才能做到“心中有数”。

3. 谋段
4. 在读文、审题的基础上，先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据原文情节确定好段落大意，找出每一段的写作要点，然后再补充相关细节和常识，这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数的要求。初写

拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性及语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。写作时要注意，所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致。

5. 定稿

完成初稿后，考生需先结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容，既要确保所写内容没有与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要保证内容上前后连贯，语句通顺；然后润色续写部分，可使用高分单词或短语，运用各种从句、介词短语结构、非谓语动词等高级表达，合理添加过渡词；最后誉写文字，这个过程考生务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。

【万能模板之读后续写“八步走”】

1. 情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。
2. 细节-----进一步描述。
3. 转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。
4. 转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。
5. 失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。
6. 想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。
7. 结局-----在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。
8. 点题-----呼应前文

备注： 这八步不是固定的，考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序，也可以略写个别环节。此步骤，可让续写有话可说，让情节续写跌宕起伏，前提是要读懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脉络。

【模板范文】

    前文提要：在我小的时候，我的家里有一个传统：在万圣节进行雕刻南瓜比赛。我很想赢得比赛，于是每年都选择一个很大的南瓜。有一年，我在雕刻南瓜的时候不小心把头卡在了南瓜里。

I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My head span dizzily as if the world swirled. At my wit's end, I felt a stab of fear. (“我”的情绪：慌张、无奈）“Don't panic! Papa, Papa, we need your help," Jason exclaimed. In time over came my father.(借助外界帮助）He embraced my neck and pulled back with strength while Jason pinned/pressed down the pumpkin.（一系列动作描写）It didn't work, though. (问题未解决）“Why not tear the pumpkin directly?" suddenly rang out mother's voice. ( 新 想 法 ) In a split second, a creak broke out overhead, followed by a ray of light, which I seemingly hadn't seen for ages. (问题得到解决）But what did I see? My mother was filming all the way. (衔接句）

That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. To my surprise, soon my video was followed by a sea of likes, my mailbox flooded with similar stories. (衔接句）My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic. A little embarrassed as I was, a wave of warmth welled up inside. (细节描写之我的心情）Then a good idea flashed across my mind. (想法）“Isn't it a good idea to share stories online to choose the funniest? " I told Jason, jumping with joy.（做法，为结局做铺垫）“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Competition. "Jason giggled. (Jason的反应，照应开头）

【万能模板之高分素材】

【高分素材之单词和短语】

1. 情绪描写＆2.细节描写：

哭： howling(嚎哭)， sob, weep, burst into tears, burst out crying. (one's eyes) brim with/be filled with tears

害怕： horror, frightened, scared, speechless, in(a)panic, in a cold sweat, be filled with terror, rooted to the spot, freeze, one's knees feel weak, (hands)sweat

高兴、激动：（动词）dance, jump/leap with joy, feel a surge of joy/ excitement, whistle, overcome with happiness/ delight /joy / excitement, (one's eyes) twinkle,(one's heart) beat/ pound wildly;

(形容词）delighted, overjoyed, excited, thrilled, wild with joy

伤心、痛苦: feel a surge of sadness, (sadness) surge within sb. , one's heart ache, overcome with sadness

3. 生气、愤怒：felt/ get angry/furious, feel a surge of anger/rage/fury, eyes blaze, storm out of/into/off, storm/say angrily, sth. makes sb. 's blood boil, sth. makes sb. extremely angry, clasp one's fists/teeth, sb. 's blood is up转折：个人努力或借助外界

鼓起勇气：pluck up/take/gather/summon up one's courage

毫不犹豫：without even thinking, without delay, without hesitation, without a second thought

4. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰

似乎：as if, seemingly, appear, seem

欣慰：breath a sigh of relief, sigh with relief, to one's relief5.

5. 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题:

徒劳 : in vain, no use, without success

茫然 : at a loss, at sea, blankly, be lost in a fog

6. 想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）

occur to, hit, strike, flash into one's mind, crowd in one's mind, dawn on

7. 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折:

过了一段时间：not long, shortly afterwards, before long, for an instant/moment

令人惊讶的是 :to one's surprise, strangely enough

8.总结：点题，呼应前文

realize, echo, linger, whisper in one's mind, down deep in one's heart

【高分素材之句式】

★情绪描写＆细节描写

哭：

1. A lump came to his throat.

2. Her eyes were red from crying.

3. Her eyes brimmed with tears.

4. Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.

害怕：

1. She was too frightened to tell her family what had happened.

2. His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.

3. Liza was so frightened that she couldn't make a sound.

4. I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at my father's cloudy face.

5. My brain is blank. I just want to leave this horrible place.高兴、激动：

1. When she knew. . .she felt excited/thrilled.

2. When she knew. . .her eyes twinkled with excitement.

3. When she knew. . . her heart was pounding with wild joy.

4. When she knew. . .a wild excitement took hold of her.

5. Knowing...she felt a surge of excitement.

伤心、痛苦：

1. A sadness came over her.

2. Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.

3. Numb with grief, she became speechless.

4. Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldn't help crying bitterly.

5. Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.

生气、愤怒：

1. Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.

2. He felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.

3. Boiling with rage, he shook his fist at me.

4. Filled with fury, she was unable to utter a single word.

★转折：个人努力或借助外界

鼓起勇气：

1. He summoned up his courage and lodged a protest with his father.

2. I finally plucked up the courage to ask her for. .

毫不犹豫：

1. She could hardly wait to. . .

2. Hardly thinking/Without even thinking, he ran to. . .

★转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰

1. It seemed as if/that someone was coming to save us.

2. Oftentimes our tears of remorse reveal a glimmer of hope.

3. A wave of relief flooded through me. . .

4. A wave of relief washed over him. . .1.ltsuddlyoccur1

★失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题1. But bad luck for me, I failed in my attempt to persuade her.

2. She closed her eyes tightly in a vain attempt to hold back the tears.

3. All our efforts were in vain.

4. She kept pacing, wondering what to do next.

5. With tears streaming down her face, she didn't know what to do next.

6. With tears streaming down her face, she was unsure of what to do next.

7. She was at a loss what to do.

8. He was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.

★想法：突然有了一个想法

1. It suddenly occurred to him that...

2. It hit me that I had a choice.

3. A thought struck her that. . .

4. It dawned that. . .

5. An idea occurred/came to me that

6. A ludicrous thought/idea flashed/came through Harry's mind.

★结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折

1. It didn't take long before. . .

2. It took some time before. . .

3. To my surprise enough, it turned out that...

★总结：点题，呼应前文

直到·······意识到

倒装句：Not until+时间状语＋did sb. realize/notice that+从句

强调句：It was only+时间状语＋that sb. realized that+从句

还记得某人的话：

1. One's words echoed/rang out in one's ears.

2. One's words/voice/lingered/whispered in one's mind/head

3. One's head was still full of. . .

经历与教训

1. What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson she taught me/I learned from her!

2. What a/an enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/valuable experience I had!3. Down deep in my heart, it was an interesting experience I had ever had.