技巧04 如何解决冲突-高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练

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高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练
技巧04 如何解决冲突

读后续写首先力争读懂原文，找出记叙文的几要素，找到故事情节中到底有什么冲突或问题。然后读懂需要续写的两段的首句，根据首句推测故事发展的走向和两段的大致内容。读后续写的文章属于叙事类文体，大部分故事都是围绕conflict（冲突）和solution（问题解决）来运转的，因此矛盾冲突在叙事类读后续写语篇中尤为重要。矛盾冲突的解决能推动故事情节的发展。矛盾冲突分预设与解决技巧，可以帮助学生在基于篇章主题意义下更好地发散思维，做到有话可说，有事可写。 同时，在学生创设矛盾冲突进行续写的过程中，可以联系上文已有的故事冲突，提高故事的完整性和连贯性。学生掌握了矛盾冲突的基本写作技巧，有利于在续写的故事创作中打开思路，提高语言的综合运用能力。
故事冲突的预设与解决的7个技巧
技巧1：面对问题，人物产生的消极或积极情绪
【技巧举例】
（2021年6月，浙江高考，Para.1）The pay day arrived at last.I was delighted to finally get the payment after I worked hard for two weeks. On the way home full of excitement, I thought about how to make use of the “huge” sum of money. “I needed a new football in the future. ” I whispered to myself.Approaching my house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck of my family, looking sad. It seemed as if something wrong had happened... ...
【分析】续写第一段中的“On the way home full of excitement”表明了故事主人公心情非常好，但是当面对新的问题“my dad and mom standing beside the old truck of my family, looking sad”时，故事主人公内心开始出现冲突与疑问，这就反映在“something wrong”上面。两种心态的冲突描写前后衔接自然、且恰到好处。
【用语储备】
“感到一阵 ……”：feel a flush of...= feel a wave of...= feel a feeling/sense of...[joy(高兴), excitement(兴奋), pride (骄傲), anger(愤怒), rage(狂怒), panic(惊慌), alarm(惊慌) , terror(恐惧), horror(恐惧), fear(恐惧), unease (不安), sorrow (悲伤), sadness(悲伤), grief(悲伤), embarrassment(尴尬), disappointment(失望), shame(羞愧), guilt(愧疚)]。
例如：She felt a wave of panic, but forced herself to leave the room calmly.
她感到一阵惊慌， 但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房间 。
技巧2：面对复杂的情境，人物产生急迫/复杂的心理
【技巧举例】
（2021年1月，浙江高考，Para.2）The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween.
【分析】续写第二段首句提示语提供了一个新的情境，即“The video was posted online”，这让故事主人公内心冲突加剧（Embarrassed and a little annoyed），但当听力母亲的话之后，主人公开始阅读网上的评论，这又将主人公引向另一情境，结果主人公内心又起了变化（marveled）。情境的不断变换，加剧了故事主人公内心的矛盾冲突的不断变换。
【用语储备】
（1）心里想： think /say to oneself
（2）害怕；恐慌：with fear /panic /terror; tremble; shiver; shake; quake; tremble with fear; be seized with panic; scream with panic/terror; freeze/shake with terror
（3）生气；愤怒：with rage; be red-cheeked with rage; tremble /shake with rage; feel like crying with rage; be speechless with rage; be boiling with rage
（4）兴奋；激动：with excitement; yell with excitement; jump up and down with excitement; scream with excitement; go wild with excitement
（5）悲伤；流泪：Tears blurred one’s eyes.泪水模糊了她的双眼。/One’s eyes got misty.一个人的眼睛都模糊了。/One’s eyes misted /dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊。/tears roll down one’s eyes /cheeks /face泪水落下
技巧3：面对他人的行为或行动，人物展开了新的动作/行为
【技巧举例】
(2021年，新高考I卷，Para.2）The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
【分析】续写第二段中，当双胞胎叫醒母亲（woke their mother up）后，母亲的动作首先有“saw”和“was very surprised”，之后在双胞胎发出节日问候“Happy Mother’s Day”时，母亲的动作有“hugged”和“kissed”。这种“动作主动应对”模式在休息的故事情节冲突拓展过程中是比较重要的，因为动作上的变化往往承载了人物对情节中的矛盾冲突的回应模式及态度。
【用语储备】
（1）常用词语：open one’s mouth; widen one’s eyes; rise to one’s feet; jump to one’s feet; shout at the top of one’s lung; reach out（伸出手）
（2）常用句式：如：Having passed the exam, he was so happy that he was at a loss what to do. 通过考试后， 他非常高兴，不知所措 。
She opened the gift with her hands shaking slightly. 她用轻微颤抖的手打开了礼物。
技巧4：人物沉浸在某一情境中，于是出现了新问题
【技巧举例】
（2018年6月，浙江高考, Para.1）Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on!” All of a sudden the horse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.
【分析】续写第一段首句承接源语篇提供了一个新的情境，即“rabbit jumped out”，从而引发了马与人的一系列的避险动作，并且马由于受惊而奔跑起来，最终将主人公带入了另一个困境，即“we were way off the track”。
【用语储备】
（1）不幸的是 (unfortunately)
But bad luck for sb, ... 但是某人真不走运
She tried her best, but in vain. 她尽力了，但没有成功。
（2）某人做了某事，不知道下一步该做什么。
Sb did sth, wondering what to do next.
Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next.
技巧5：情况好转或情境向好，人物突然有了一个想法
【技巧举例】
（2020年7月，浙江高考，Para.2）At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.
【分析】续写第二段首句预设了一个新的情境“the helicopter arrived”，于是故事主人公的心情好转（My heart leaped with joy），并且当再次遇到熊的攻击时，主人公就又有了新的想法（we throw all the food we have），这将故事的冲突与发展带到另一个情境中；此外，当获救后，主人公又开始感谢（Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound）。可见，用新的想法接续“情况好转”可以充分展现人物对整个事件的回应过程中的特写镜头。
【用语储备】
“某人突然想到 ……”：It suddenly occurred to sb that...=It hit sb that...=It struck sb that...=It dawned on sb that...
技巧6：面对他人的鼓励/激励/帮助等，人物找到了解决办法
【技巧举例】
（2017年6月，浙江高考,Para.2）A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
【分析】续写第二段首句提示给出了来帮忙的人（the other two cyclists arrived），之后又不断有人加入（Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles/ More and more cars stopped），故事中的人物有了一系列与狼对抗的动作，如“circled the wolf”“took out the sticks from the cars”“took out the knives”等，这些将故事中人狼对峙的冲突进一步推向高潮。
【用语储备】
（1）鼓起勇气 (做某事):take /gather /one’s courage (to do sth)
（2）毫不犹豫/选择：without a second thought/without delay/without hesitation/having no choice
技巧7：获得新的成长，人物开始总结、点题并呼应前文
【技巧举例】

（2022年1月，浙江卷, Para.2）One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson’s was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
【分析】续写第二段中主人公最后发现能与队友和谐相处并最终完成了项目（We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time），这引发了主人公的反响，并且主人公的这种体验不断地深入（从“we also learned the significance of teammates”到“a group of persons can travel farther”），充分展现了主人公内心的矛盾冲突从不断激化到出现转机、再到一步步迎刃而解的过程。
【用语储备】
（1）直到 …… 才意识到 ……
倒装句： Not until... did sb realize /notice that...
强调句： It was only... that sb realized that...
（2）表达经历与教训
What a valuable lesson I have learned from...! 我从 ……中得到了宝贵的教训 。
What an unforgettable experience! 多么难忘的经历啊!
（3）结尾点题
God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。
Everyone is the architect of his own fate.每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。
Life is full of laughter and tears. Only by accepting both can we enjoy life.生命就是充满欢笑和泪水的。只有同时接受两者，我们才能享受生活。
Never underestimate the power of your action.永远不要低估你的行为的力量。

1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Random Acts of Kindness
I was driving along Clarendon Street in South Melbourne on my way to Castlemaine to visit my parents. As I stopped at a traffic light, I noticed a man lying on a bench seat on the footpath beside the road. It was early evening and his rough appearance and the fact that he was holding a bottle wrapped in newspaper confirmed my immediate suspicions — he was a drunk.
As soon as I saw him, I felt a strong feeling of sympathy for him. But like so many other people, I had other places to be and other things to do. As I watched, I saw two policemen approach and instantly I felt relieved. After all, it was their responsibility to clean up the streets and make sure men like him got a chance to be somewhere safe for the night. As I sat waiting for the traffic lights to turn green, I couldn’t believe what I saw. The two police walked around and when they reached the man, both of whom turned their heads the other way, as if not to see, and walked right past. Suddenly, a firm belief streamed through my mind, “Life is never so busy that there is no time to serve.”
Right then I looked up and the traffic lights turned green — and I had a decision to make. I knew that if I drove off, I would have no peace, so I turned left, drove around the block, parked the car and walked back to the man. As I approached him, I felt completely unconfident to deal with the situation and even a little foolish. What was I going to say? What was I going to do? At the very least I could drive him home — if he had a home. I found him sleeping soundly and at first, he didn’t respond to me at all, so I reached out and gently shook him awake.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He woke up, staring at me angrily.
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Much to my relief, the man agreed to get into my car.
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2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
At first, Michael Surrell didn’t see the black smoke or flames shooting from the windows of his neighbors’ home. He and his wife had just parked around the corner from their own house in Allentown, Pennsylvania, when they got a call from one of his daughters, “The house next door is on fire!” He went to investigate. That’s when he saw two women and a girl hysterical (歇斯底里的) on their porch.
“The baby’s in there!” one of the women cried. Though the fire department had been called, Surrell, then 64, instinctively ran inside. The baby was 8-year-old Tiara Roberts, the woman’s granddaughter and a playmate of Surrell’s three youngest kids, then 8, 10, and 12. The other two on the porch were Tiara’s aunt and cousin.
Entering the burning house was like “running into a bucket of black paint” Surrell says. The thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe. The conditions would have been hazardous for anyone, but for Surrell, who has chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (慢性阻塞性肺疾病), they were life-threatening. He was the last person who should have run into a burning building—he has lung disease. But that didn’t stop him.
After a few minutes in the smoke filled house, he retreated outside to catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately. “The second floor.” her aunt shouted back.
Surrell knew he couldn’t hold his breath for long. So he uttered a little prayer, “Well, Lord, this is it. You gotta help me, because I’m not coming out without that little girl.” Taking a deep breath, he went in a second time.
The darkness was overwhelming. Yet because the house had a similar layout to his, he found the stairs and made it to the second floor. He turned to the right and was met by intense heat. He was already out of breath.
“Baby girl, where are you?” His throat and lungs burned as if he’d breathed in fire instead of the smoke and soot (烟灰) in the air. All he could hear was the crackling and popping of burning wood. Then a weak but distinct voice emerged. Still unable to see, Surrell fell to his knees on the hot wood floor. He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl. An ominous thought crossed his mind: I’m probably gonna die up here.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。
Finally he touched something.
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A voice told him, “You have to breathe for her.”
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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Neesha, an 8-year-old golden retriever, is a lucky dog. After spending a fortnight on her own without food or real shelter, the tough dog was accidentally spotted by a couple, who in spite of the cold weather, were hiking the range and came across her.
Two weeks earlier, Neesha’s owners had taken her and their other dog, a German shepherd named Harley, for some outdoor exercise. Frightened by a deer, both dogs ram away. Harley found his way back to the parking lot the next day, but Neesha did not.
The family made a thorough search. They left a laundry basket of unwashed clothing near the spot where they’d last seen Neesha in the hope that she’d head straight towards the familiar smell marker. They even turned to the Internet for help in finding Neesha—but there was still no sign of her.
“We posted our experience on social media. Then a weekend later, we were still looking for her. We were starting to give up hope,” said the pet’s owner Erina O’Shea Goetelen told The Irish Times.
Eventually, the family began to accept that Neesha might not be coming home. “We just thought she is 8, and it’s been two weeks. There was no way she could survive.“
Doctors Ciara Nolan and Jean Francois Bonnet must truly be crazy hikers. They braved the elements on the freezing day when the couple decided to reach one of Wicklow’s peaks. As they neared the top, Nolan was shocked to see a dog shaking in the snow.
“She was frightened, freezing cold. She didn’t have enough energy to bark or stand, ”Bonnet said in an interview. “We tried to get her to walk, but she couldn’t stand. So we covered her with our spare clothes and gave her some food.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain.
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Neesha’s owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive.
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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My family’s house was close to a road. And on the far end of the road stood a big tree. My parents, together with me, often crossed the road to the big tree to have fun with our neighbors. But I wasn’t allowed to cross the road to go there by myself for my safety.
One day, for some reason, the big tree would be cut down. It was just before dinner time. A large crowd of neighbors gathered at the far end of the road to watch the falling of this tree. I watched from my house as the tree, tied with ropes, was lowered down. Soon, the huge tree fell safely to the ground with a big sound. But the kids and grown - ups didn’t leave. They moved closer to stay around this wonderful old tree.
Like them, I wanted to touch the tree with my hands and say good - bye. But I was only five years old and wasn’t allowed to cross the busy road alone. But as I became sadder when watching the tree nearly disappear, I thought to myself, “What’s the worst thing that could happen?” I didn’t see any cars coming, so I ran across the road to say good - bye to the fallen tree.
After standing around and talking with some of the neighbors, I realized that I had stayed there too long. “I am late for dinner, and I’m in trouble.”I told myself. Without even thinking, and without seeing if there were any cars coming, I dashed out between two parked cars and raced toward the other side of the road.
I didn’t see a car rushing forward from the other end of the road. And the driver didn’t expect I’d cross the road at that moment. When spotting me, he tried to stop his car, whose tires produced loud and unpleasant noises. But it was too late.
注意：
1. 写作词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Before knowing what had happened, I was struck down.
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Paragraph 2:
At the hospital, it was discovered that luckily I was not seriously injured.
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5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes. The roles we often expect our fathers to play—protector, provider—can make them difficult to understand. That’s how it was with my dad. He came to Canada at the age of ten and settled in an immigrant community. He was never much of a talker. He rarely drank. He didn’t tell stories about himself at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way.
It seemed impossible to ask him questions about his early life before I was born—his early hopes and dreams, his loves and heartbreaks, let alone share my own feelings with him. I didn’t want to threaten the integrity (完整) of his hard shell. I had gotten used to it, and it made me feel secure.
But when my relationship with my wife and career took a hit a year ago, things had to change. I was facing serious problems about my own nature, and I wanted to know whether he had faced them too, and I desperately needed to know how he had found his way, because I felt like I had lost mine.
In a severe moment of desperation, it occurred to me that sending an email might be the key. An email can be crafted slowly and carefully. He’d be up in his office-a comfortable place filled with bookshelves, dusty CD-ROMs and piles of old newspapers. I’d be at my desk in an apartment 20 minutes away. So I could speak at a comfortable distance and give him room to adjust.
So I wrote to him. I told him about my regrets and fears, and I asked him to answer, if he felt like it, and to share something about himself, something that would give me much-needed perspective on my life, especially on relationship and career.
Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box.
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I closed the email and started to cry.
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参考答案
1.【参考范文】
He woke up, staring at me angrily. The smell of alcohol on his breath was overwhelming and I stepped back. I can’t remember exactly what I said to him — probably something no better than, “Mate, are you OK?” Still lying on the bench seat, the man went quiet, looked up and fixed his eyes on mine. Then his eyes filled with tears and he said to me, “God sent you, didn’t he?” A little surprised, the only reply I could think of was, “Well... yes, he asked me to take you home”.
Much to my relief, the man agreed to get into my car. While driving him home, he wept and poured out the sorrows of his heart. Suffering multiple tragedies, he turned to the only source of comfort he knew: the bottle. I patiently comforted him that everyone would encounter various kinds of difficulties. If we faced them positively, all the difficulties would disappear. At his door, he thanked me sincerely and promised not to drink again. From the steady look in his eyes, I learnt a lesson: If life becomes hard, soften it with random acts of kindness.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在路上注意到一个男人躺在路边人行道上的长椅上，从他的样子作者判断出他是一个酒鬼，作者以为警察会帮助确保他在安全的地方过夜，但是警察绕过去了，没理那个男人，作者后来去把车停好，走回那个男人身边，伸手轻轻地摇醒了他。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他醒了，生气地盯着我。”可知，第一段可描写那个男人看见作者后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“使我松了一口气的是，那个人同意上我的车。”可知，第二段可描写那个人向作者倾诉自己的困难，作者开导他。
2.续写线索：询问——男人的反应——男人倾诉——安慰开导——感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①盯着看：fix one’s eyes on/stare at
②倾吐悲伤：pour out the sorrows/reveal the sorrows
③安慰：comfort sb./console sb.
情绪类
①惊讶：surprised/astonished
②真诚地：sincerely/genuinely
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I can’t remember exactly what I said to him — probably something no better than, “Mate, are you OK?” (由what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I patiently comforted him that everyone would encounter various kinds of difficulties. (由that引导的宾语从句)
2.【参考范文】
Finally he touched something. A shoe, then an ankle. He finally came to her. He pulled Tiara toward him gently but quickly. She had already passed out and wasn’t breathing. He took her into his arms and managed to stand up. He felt the heat of the flames on his cheeks. Turning around, he fought through the smoke and ran blindly into the blackness. The next thing he knew, he was at the front door, then outside. Surrell put Tiara down on the porch.
A voice told him, “You have to breathe for her.” He started CPR—the first time he’d ever done so though he knew a little about it. The women stood behind him, praying anxiously. Soon a soot-filled cough came from Tiara’s throat. Surrell gave five more breaths. She coughed again. Her eyelids moved a bit. He gave one final breath. She opened her eyes and took a breath on her own. Their eyes met. Surrell hugged her tight and said, “Uncle’s got you.” Though exhausted, he smiled with relief.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Michael Surrell接到女儿打来的电话，知道隔壁着火了，他听见了房子里女人的呼救，说有个叫Tiara的女孩困在里面，虽然呼叫了消防部门，他还是本能地冲进房子救人，他患有慢性阻塞性肺病，浓烟对他来说是致命的，他来到房子的二楼，搜索那个女孩的踪迹，他有不祥的念头，就是自己可能会死在那里。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“最后他碰到了什么东西。”可知，第一段可描写Michael Surrell找到了Tiara。
②由第二段首句内容“一个声音告诉他:“你必须为她做人工呼吸。””可知，第二段可描写Michael Surrell如何为Tiara进行急救。
2.续写线索：发现Tiara——带Tiara到前门——急救——感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抱起某人：take sb. into one’s arms/scoop sb. up in one’s arms
②开始心肺复苏术：start CPR/begin CPR
③喘口气：take a breath/catch one’s breath
情绪类
①担心：anxiously/worriedly
②筋疲力尽：exhausted/dog-tired
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] He started CPR—the first time he’d ever done so though he knew a little about it. (由the first time引导的时间状语从句和though引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Though exhausted, he smiled with relief. (由though引导的让步状语从句和省略句)
3.【参考范文】
Bonnet lifted Neesha onto his back for the long path down the mountain. After the dog and the man fell several times, Bonnet thought of a good way to hold Neesha. He wrapped her in a scarf. As soon as they reached level ground, the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter. The dog lost a great deal of weight and was very weak, but surprisingly except for a few cuts and scrapes, the tough dog was in good condition. The couple contacted her owner via the information on the Internet.
Neesha’s owners could hardly believe it when they learned their dog had been found alive. “We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad. But now, we are so relieved and happy,“ Erina said. “Thousands of words can’t express our gratitude to them for their great efforts to bring Neesha back home. “They are so nice. Neesha is really a lucky dog,” said the excited woman. A random act of love may make the world a warmer place.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了8岁的金毛Neesha是一只幸运的狗。一天，Neesha跟着主人去户外锻炼，因被一只鹿惊吓跑丢了。在没有食物也没有真正的栖身之所的情况下，Neesha独自生活了两周，在奄奄一息的时候，被两位爬山的医生发现。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Bonnet把Neesha背在背上，沿着长长的山路往山下走去。”可知，第一段可描写两位医生如何把Neesha带下山以及他们如何安置Neesha。
②由第二段首句内容“当Neesha的主人得知他们的狗还活着时，他们简直不敢相信。”可知，第二段可描写Neesha的主人在获悉Neesha获救之后的感受以及对医生夫妇的感激之情。
2.续写线索：用围巾裹——到收容所——联系主人——主人感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①裹：wrap/bind
②联系：contact/get in touch with
③表达：express/show/convey
情绪类
①高兴：happy/delighted
②激动：excited/thrilled
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] As soon as they reached level ground, the couple took the dog to an animal rescue shelter.(由As soon as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] We had thought we would have lost her forever and were very sad. (由that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
4.【参考范文】
Before knowing what had happened, I was struck down. At the moment I was knocked down, I let out an instinctive scream. My neighbors heard me screaming, and people ran around me. My parents came, too, very worried about me, but they didn’t dare move me. When the driver got out of the car, he kept apologizing to me. I lay weak on the ground and just wanted to rest, so I said nothing. Someone called the police and an ambulance came and rushed me to the hospital.
At the hospital, it was discovered that luckily I was not seriously injured. During the days when I was in hospital, my parents stayed with me every day. My kindergarten classmates often came to play games with me. The driver who knocked me down sent me an apology card, flowers and my favorite snack. The driver said, “I’m really sorry. I didn’t mean to do it. Please forgive me.” I told the driver it was my fault, too. I didn’t see what was going on in the road and ran out. That’s why I got hit.” The driver thanked me for forgiving him.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者五岁时，家里附近的一棵大树被砍倒，作者想和大树告别，在和一些邻居交谈后，作者意识到自己在那里待得太久了，吃晚饭快迟到了，想都没想，也没看有没有车开过来，就从两辆停着的车中间冲了出来，朝路的另一边跑去，结果被撞倒的故事。
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我还不知道发生了什么事，就被撞倒了。”可知，第一段可描写作者被撞倒后周围人是如何做的。
②由第二段首句内容“在医院里，人们发现我很幸运地伤得不重。”可知，第二段可描写作者在医院时家人和司机所做的事情。
2.续写线索：尖叫——送到医院——旁人的关心——司机道歉——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
①发出尖叫：let out a scream/shout a scream
②送医院：rush sb. to the hospital/take sb. to the hospital hurriedly
③道歉：be sorry/apologize
情绪类
①担心：be worried about/be anxious about
②感谢：thank sb./be grateful to sb.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] During the days when I was in hospital, my parents stayed with me every day. (由关系副词when引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] The driver who knocked me down sent me an apology card, flowers and my favorite snack. (由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
5.【参考范文】
Two weeks later; his response showed up in my email box. It was a scanned document. Apparently, my dad had carefully considered my message, reached back into his memory and crafted a response. In the letter, he shared his history of love, longing, self-doubt, fears and struggles in life. He also offered me some practical suggestions on how to handle my relationship and career. While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age. I was also impressed by the great perseverance he showed in the face of difficulty.
I closed the email and started to cry. I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn’t too late. I cried because in the midst of my own struggles, his letter instantly put me at ease. And I cried because in the end, it was so simple: I just had to hit “Send”. We’ve since had many exchanges. My problems haven’t been magically solved, but getting to know my dad better—and learning to love him more—has made the tough stuff more manageable and life sweeter. It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes, but I’m glad that I found a way to talk to mine.
【写作指导】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者父亲是一个很私密的人，他从来不讲述自己的过往，自己经历的苦难和悲伤，也不分享自己曾经有过的快乐。后来作者因在夫妻关系和事业遇到打击时，给父亲发了一封电子邮件，向父亲寻求帮助。后来父亲回信了，在信中，他分享了他一生中的爱、渴望、自我怀疑、恐惧和挣扎的历史，他还就如何处理作者的人际关系和职业生涯提出了一些切实可行的建议，并给了作者巨大的鼓励与安慰。作者看完邮件，开始哭了起来，那是为父亲帮助自己打开心扉而哭，为有机会了解父亲的内心世界而哭。自从那以后，作者自己找到了一种与父亲交流的方式。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“两周后，他的回信出现在我的邮箱里。”可知，第一段可描写父亲在信中告诉作者要如何处理当前的困难，作者受益匪浅。
②由第二段首句内容“我关上了邮件，开始哭了起来。”可知，第二段可描写作者为父亲帮助自己打开心扉而哭，为有机会了解父亲的内心世界而哭。
2.续写线索：看回信——阅读——收获——动真情——喜悦——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回忆：reach back into his memory/go back to his memory/look back to his memory
②.提出建议：offer me some practical suggestions/give me some practical suggestions/
③.放松：put me at ease/relax me
情绪类
①.感谢：be grateful/showing his appreciation/show his gratitude
②.高兴的：glad/happy
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]. While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age.（由while引导省略的状语从句和that引导的同位语从句）
[高分句型2]. I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn’t too late.（由连词because引导的原因状语从句）