中考英语材料作文专项训练

材料作文

1．词数：60-70词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

假如你是李华，你和家人正在上海度假，请你根据下面的要点提示给你的笔友David写一张明信片。

提示：

1.       上海天气如何？

2.       此刻你正在做什么

3.       你的家人及他人正在做什么？

4.       你的感受是什么？

Dear David ,

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See you soon.

 Li Hua

2．生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。白杨是我的同学。她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________

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3．Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic "I Like Outdoor Sports"（以“我喜欢户外运动”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于50个）

*Why do you like outdoor sports?

*What do you do for sports?

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4．书面表达

假设你遇到一位来自澳大利亚的商人，你从他那里了解到下列表格中的情况。请你根据以下表格中的信息用英语写一篇介绍Bill Smith的短文。

要求：语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，内容可适当补充，词数：80左右。

参考词汇：start，finish one’s studies，the Garden City，live a better life

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5．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：

注意：1. 词数70左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

参考词汇：高大健壮tall and strong       运动do sports   听音乐listen to music   最喜欢的科目favourite subject风趣幽默funny and humorous   乐于做某事be ready to do sth.          相处get on with

Dear Jack,How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes

Yours,

 Li Hua

6．随着电脑的普及，许多中国学生逐渐忽视书写。针对该现象，请你根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿，阐述书写的重要性。

注意：

1. 必须包括表中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

4. 词数不少于90字（文章开头已经给出, 不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：handwriting 书法；字迹；书写（不可数名词）inherit     传承（及物动词）Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important.

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7．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词。

每年十月份，越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶。请你根据以下提示，说说如何给游客可留下“景美人更美”的好印象，从自身做起，做文明本溪人！

提示词：beautiful views美丽的景色

要求：

1．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。

2．文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。

3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves (枫叶) in October.                             

8．假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生，你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选．以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息．请你根据表格内容，写一篇短文，向社会宣传自己的学校，并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事，为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。

要求：（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3）80～100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．I'm from No．3 Middle School． My school is making its effort to be a civilized school． Let me introduce it．

There are many experienced teachers in my school． They help us make progress in many ways．

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9．为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。

要点：

1. 时间：5月16日下午2:30;

2. 地点：学校操场;

3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等；

4. 感受：对传统文化有了进一步的了解……

要求：

1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；

2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；

4. 词数：80—100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.)     开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.)       表演 performance ( n.)致辞 make a speech

Dear John,

How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

10．请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。

1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。

2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。

3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。

4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。

5.请就此事谈谈你的看法......

要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。3.词数:80-100。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads       在……犹豫不决 hesitate in

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参考答案

1．Dear David

   Now I’m in Shanghai with my patents.We are on holiday here.The weather is sunny,but hot and wet.We are on the beach now.The beach is very beautiful and clean.I’m lying on the beach.My parents are taking photos.Some other people are swimming in the sea.This is a very beautiful and interesting place.I like it very much.I hope you will come here one day.

See you soon.

Li Hua

【详解】这是一篇要求介绍自己和家人度假的情况。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态和现在进行时态，注意不同时态的谓语动词的正确形式，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

重点短语：on holiday在度假，on the beach在沙滩，be doing在做某事

2．There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.

My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.

She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.

【详解】这是一篇人物介绍。人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。who has a serious illness为定语从句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，她仍然笑对生活。No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。

3．参考范文

Outdoor sports help people keep healthy and happy. Taking part in outdoor sports is the best way to keep fit. Of all the sports I like football best. Though I can't play it very well，I still like it because through playing football. I will be strong in health and character. In addition，through playing football I can learn to be responsible and cooperative .In short，playing football builds your character and teamwork besides keeping fit.

【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应将所给要求全部写进作文。

2、例文点评：例文采用总分总结构，先总说户外运动的好处，再说自己最喜欢足球以及原因等，最后再小结，呼应足球作为户外运动的好处。用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时。叙述完整且条理清晰。

3、高分亮点：

高分短语：help sb. do sth.；learn to do；in addition；in short。

高分句型：

1.Taking part in outdoor sports is the best way to keep fit.

2.Of all the sports I like football best.

4．Bill Smith is a businessman from Australia. He is 45 years old. He likes computer and music. There are three people in his family. His wife is a doctor and his son is a student. He works hard and carefully. He is kind and helpful. Bill Smith has started two big factories in Fuzhou. With his help, ten poor children have finished their studies. He is sure that the Garden City — Fuzhou will be more and more beautiful and the people here will live a better life in the future.

【详解】这是一篇材料作文，要求用英语介绍澳大利亚商人Bill Smith的一些个人情况。整篇文章主要内容基本来自表格所给内容，不需要学生自主发挥，所以只需要将所给要点全部写进文章中即可，切忌信息遗漏。范文主要采用第三人称进行叙述，其中所用单词难度不大，且有部分参考词汇可供使用，但要注意一些谓语的第三人称单数形式的转换，以免出现语法错误。

5．Dear Jack

How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you．He is a 16-year-old boy． He has round face，black hair and bright eyes．He is tall and strong． He likes smiling very much He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．

He is humorous and funny．He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others．He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．

He likes winter very much，because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating, making snowman and so on．His dream is becoming an English teacher，because he wants his students to get good grades．I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!

Yours

LiHua

【分析】分析：

高分句型一

He likes smiling very much．此句是一般现在时的陈述句，运用短语like doing sth 喜欢做某事，短语very much非常，很，此句可翻译为“他很喜欢笑。”

注意like后加doing

高分句型二

He also spends much time taking part in after−school activities．此句是一般现在时的陈述句，运用短语spend some time（in）doing sth 花时间做某事，短语take part in 参加，此句可翻译为“他还花大量时间参加课外活动。”

【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。要求根据表格中的内容提示，用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第三人称。在写作的时候，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

6．Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important. Writing is an important part of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. Everyone's handwriting has personal meaning, for example, handwritten letters can express emotions better. I also think handwriting can improve students’ handwriting skill and interests; for another, it can teach students to love Chinese characters. In my view, practicing handwriting can make students improve both their bodies and minds. For middle school students, it is quite beneficial to write beautiful and generous words. So it is necessary to hold handwriting contests among students.

【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下书写的重要性。所提供的材料中列举了你的观点和理由。主要从电脑普及时代书写依然重要（观点）、理由：1．书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；2．每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写书信更能表达情感；3. 提高学生的书写技能和兴趣。4. 可以教学生热爱汉字。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须材料卡片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】I think that handwriting is still important. 我认为书写仍然很重要。

句子that handwriting is still important.是由that引导的宾语从句。

【高分句型二】Writing is an important part of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. 书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化。

（提出了书写的重要性，照应了作者的观点——电脑普及时代书写依然重要）

【高分句型三】In my view, practicing handwriting can make students improve both their bodies and minds. 在我看来，练习书法能使学生提高身心素质。

practicing handwriting是动名词做主语。

7．How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves（枫叶）in October. Let's leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views , but also as a Benxi citizen. How to be a polite citizen?

First, We must be friendly. Use"please,OK,welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors. Besides, we should be ready to help others.Try to be a helpful person. If visitors need us,we should help them. What's more, we should follow the rules. For example,we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers. We mustn't drop litter carelessly. At last, we also need to behave well in public. We stand for our city Benxi in public. So it needs our good manners.

Why not do as above points?Let's try our best to be a polite citizen.

【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以便使文章更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。注意不要遗漏任何要点内容。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

8．I'm from No．3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it.

There are many experienced teachers in my school. They help us make progress in many ways. And our head teacher is very friendly, too. For school facilities, we have a library, you can read books to learn more. You also can do sports in the playground. You can find something new in the science labs. As for our school environment, There are different kinds of trees and flowers. So our school is clean and beautiful. We also have safety education classes, these classes can protect ourselves. Finally, our students are polite , too. It will make our school full of civilization.

Let's try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school.

【详解】这是一篇根据表格信息介绍自己学校的材料作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作。内容包括：1. 师资情况：①有经验的老师帮助我们进步。②班主任和蔼可亲，与人为善。2. 学校设施：①一个大图书馆。②运动场。③一些科学实验室。3. 学校环境：①不同种类的树木和花卉。②安全教育课。4. 谈谈为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事。另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。常用的重点句型和短语有make progress，be friendly，as for，try one’s best to do sth，make our school more beautiful。

9．Dear John，

How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.

       The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.

       Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10．Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.

In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.

【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍发生在我的好朋友王强身上的一件事。

【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The lady hesitated……，but she was afraid……，he offered to……，Wang Qiang is…..等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了王强骑车回家的路上看见一位老太太不敢过马路，接下来介绍他主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口，最后我就这件事谈谈我的想法。此处on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。