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Part 1题型总览
【题型综述】
概要写作是一种“阅读+写作”的复合型任务,测试学生的阅读理解、概括归纳和书面表达方面的综合能力。选材上，提供一篇350词以内的短文，一般以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主，要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要（注意：少于40或多于80词扣两分），而新写的语篇，既要做到在结构、衔接和连贯性等方面与原文保持一致，又要做到简明扼要、意义完整、结构严密和语句通顺。
【答题策略】
1.读懂原文，明确篇章结构
写概要之前，一定要先通读原文， 确定文章的体裁和主题。在正确把握文章主旨和段落大意后，明确原文的篇章结构。 根据意义划分文中的自然段，意义段的数量对应的就是要点的数量。
注意一个自然段不一定是一个要点，有时几个自然段说明一个要点，有时一个自然段包含数个要点。
2.去次留精，提炼关键信息
·明确全文的篇章结构后， 就要处理原文的内容，目的是保留主要内容，删除次要内容。
·先找出主题句，同时标注与主题相关的关键词，最后归纳的要点往往是这些词句的同义转述。
·原文描述性的语言、细节性的信息如列举数字和列举的事例等无须在概要中一一列出。
3.归纳要点 合理表达
明确每个意义段的关键信息后，接下来应用自己的语言准确地表达各意义段的要点。 为避免和原文的句子重复， 可利用同义转述和句式转换这两种形式归纳要点。各要点的词数应根据文中对应内容的篇幅来定，分清主次。
句式多样 注意过渡
在概要中合理使用非谓语、从句和特殊句式等使句式丰富多样，但句子结构不可过长，也不要用太复杂的句子结构。同时选用适当的过渡衔接词衔接上下文，保证概要部分内容的连贯性。
Part 2真题感悟
Passage 1
【真题详解】
【2019·浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It’s a really gd idea t visit clleges befre yu apply because their websites can all start t lk and sund the same. Nthing will give yu the sense f what it will actually be like t live n a cllege campus(校园) like visiting and seeing fr yurself the drms, classrms and athletic equipment and, f curse, the students. It seems a little crazy nce senir year hits t find the time t visit cllege campuses, and it can als be pricey if the schls yu are applying t happen t be mre than a car ride away. But keep in mind that yu are making a decisin abut the next fur years f yur life, and d all the research yu can t make sure yu are making the right ne.
There’s n excuse nt t visit the schls in yur lcal area. In fact, a lt f cllege applicatins even ask if yu have visited campus, and bviusly, if yu live acrss the cuntry that wn’t be as much f a pssibility, but if yu live nearby, g check it ut!
If campus visits aren’t ging t happen befre yu apply, at the very least yu shuld find sme time between applying and getting yur acceptance letters t visit the schls yu’d like t attend. It can save yu a lt f heartache if yu rule ut nw the things that yu dn’t like abut certain campuses, things that yu wuldn’t knw unless yu actually visit.
Nw, if time and mney are making it impssible, then check ut the nline cllege fairs at CllegeWeekLive. It’s a chance t chat nline with admissins fficers, students, and cllege cunselrs (顾问), and it wn’t cst yu a penny! Yu can register fr its nline cllege fair at cllegeweeklive.cm. While visiting an nline cllege fair can’t take the place f an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tl that alng with all yur ther research will help yu make an infrmed decisin abut which clleges r universities yu’d like t attend.
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【答案】
It’s really wrthwhile t pay a visit t their desired clleges persnally befre applying. Undubtedly, students shuld visit their lcal clleges, which may be included in applicatins. At least, they shuld visit the schl and figure ut its real cnditins in advance. Fr students wh are shrt f mney and time, registering fr the nline cllege fair is a gd alternative t help them better understand schls.
【分析】
本文要求阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要，即用尽可能少的词汇集中展现原材料的主要思想和观点。这主要是考查学生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及总结概括能力，熟练掌握从句、非谓语动词等语法知识和遣词造句的能力。
【详解】
1. 要先读懂、读透原作。这是准确再现原文、写好概要的前提。动笔前多读两遍原文，直至弄懂读透。
2. 抓住文中的关键句，确定写作主题。开头It's a really gd idea t visit clleges befre yu apply点明了本文主题；But keep in mind that yu are making a decisin abut the next fur years f yur life, and d all the research yu can t make sure yu are making the right ne. There’s n excuse nt t visit the schls in yur lcal area.说明了去大学看看的必要性和可行性；If campus visits aren’t ging t happen befre yu apply, at the very least yu shuld find sme time between applying and getting yur acceptance letters t visit the schls yu’d like t attend.在时间上提供了更多选择；if time and mney are making it impssible, then check ut the nline cllege fairs at CllegeWeekLive.为不能亲自去大学看的学生提供了另外一种方法。
3.拟好提纲。有了提纲，写概要时就会有章法，也不会遗漏原作中的要点。
4.快速成文，反复推敲。按照文章要求和拟好的提纲一气呵成，写完初稿。
5.对照修改润色，再读原文，查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要内容。用词是否恰当，可有可无的删掉。注意词类、时态、语态的适当调整。
【点睛】
范文观点明确，重点突出，语言简练，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句which may be included in applicatins.和wh are shrt f mney and time.动名词registering nline作主语，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【提分词汇】
undubtedly adv. 确实地，毋庸置疑地
applicatins n.申请
figure ut 算出
【亮点句型】
It’s really wrthwhile t pay a visit t their desired clleges persnally befre applying. 在申请之前亲自参观一下自己心仪的大学是非常值得的。
Fr students wh are shrt f mney and time, registering fr the nline cllege fair is a gd alternative t help them better understand schls.对于那些缺乏资金和时间的学生来说，报名参加网上高校招聘会是一个很好的选择，可以帮助他们更好地了解学校。
Passage 2
【真题详解】
【2019·上海卷】
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Where are the bees?
Bees are essential t the prductin f fd we eat. Bees make hney, but they als pllinate large areas f crps, such as straw berries, apples and nins. Abut a third f the fd we eat is a result f pllinatin f the bees. Unfrtunately, bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate.
In 2006, bee keepers started reprting abut smething called Clny Cllapse Disaster (CCD).The main sign f CCD is the lss f adult hney bees frm a hive. In Octber f 2006, sme beekeepers reprted that they had lst between 30 and 90 percent f their hives.
There were many theries fr the disappearance f the bees. But the mst cnvincing ne has t d with pesticides and lifestyles f bees tday. Nwadays, beekeeper get mst f their incme nt frm prducing hney but frm renting bees t pllinate plants. This means that the life f the typical bee nw cnsists f travelling all arund the cuntry t pllinate crps as the seasns change. That means a lt f traveling n trucks, which is very stressful t bees. It is nt unusual fr up t 30% f the hive t die during transprt due t stress. In additin, bees that spend mst f their time lcked up n trucks are nt expsed t what they usually live n. Instead, they live n a sweet liquid frm crn, usually plluted with pesticides.
The exact reasn fr the disappearance f bees is nt sure, but lsing bees is very cstly t the ecnmy. The bee pllinatin services are wrth ver $8 billin a year. With n bees, pllinatin will have t be dne by hand, which wuld have effects n the quality f fd and increased fd priced. We hear a lt abut big envirnmental disasters almst every day. But ne f the biggest may just be the less f that tiny flying insect.
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【答案】
Bees nt nly prvide us with hney, but als help pllinate crps. Hwever, they are disappearing at an alarming rate fr unknw reasn, which will be disastrus t us and ecnmy. Sme peple think it is the pesticide while thers think it is due t transprt.
【分析】
本文属于环保文章，介绍蜜蜂正以惊人的速度消失，这可能和运输、农作物使用杀虫剂以及环境有关，但是没人知道确切原因。要求考生阅读完总结论点，不能超过60个词。
【详解】
第一步，归纳各个段落的段落大意，第一段讲述蜜蜂对我们很重要，但是却以惊人的速度消失，第二段讲述蜜蜂出现这种状况的情形，第三段讲述可能造成此现象的原因；第四段讲述这种现象对我们和经济的影响。
第二步，可以择出重要的信息，蜜蜂对我们很重要，但是却以惊人的速度消失，可能造成此现象的原因，以及影响。
第三步，得出答案，注意过渡与衔接，字数控制在60字以内。
【点睛】
概要写作做题技巧。概要写作不是对段落大意的简单堆积，需要学生读懂文章的大概意思和文章结构，还需要一定写作替换技巧，且注意语言的简洁性。第一步，确定文章的话题和各段的段落大意，比如本文话题为蜜蜂的消失，第一段讲述蜜蜂对我们很重要，但是却以惊人的速度消失，第二段讲述蜜蜂出现这种状况的情形，第三段讲述可能造成此现象的原因；第四段讲述这种现象对我们和经济的影响；第二步，分析各个段落的逻辑关系，确定主观点和次要观点；第三步，注意一定的写作技巧，比如同义词、近义词的替换，句型和结构的转换；第四步，检查单词拼写，语法规则，字数问题等。
【提分词汇】
prvide ... with 给...提供…
【亮点句型】
Hwever, they are disappearing at an alarming rate fr unknwn reasn, which will be disastrus t us and ecnmy. 然而，由于未知的原因，它们正在以惊人的速度消失，这对美国和经济将是灾难性的。
Sme peple think it is the pesticide while thers think it is due t transprt.一些人认为是杀虫剂，而另一些人认为是由于运输。
Part 3专题强化
Passage 1【真题自测】
【2020·上海卷】
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint( s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
It's undeniable: Being amng the first t try ut a new piece f technlgy is cl. There's the excitement f ding what has never been dne befre-the feeling that yu're living in the future. And when yu're the sle member f yur scial circle with the latest ht gadget, peple stare in fascinatin. They ask yu questins. They see yu as the hlder f pwerful, secret knwledge-fr a little while, until the next big thing cmes alng. Peple tend t underestimate the csts f this temprary clness, which they pay in mre ways than ne. Dn't fall int the early adpter trap. Dn't jin the first wave f cnsumers wh invest in the latest media-hyped hardware; instead, wait and see.
T put it frankly, early adptin is a bad investment. First, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, they are als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be. Cmpanies are presumably attempting t recver the cst f prductin as fast as they can, and they knw that there are serius tech-lvers wh will pay a great deal t be first. Once the revenues frm early adpters' purchases are safely in their hands, they can cut the price and shift t the next marketing phase: selling the prduct t everyne else. This is why the cst f the riginal iPhne drpped abut U. S. $200 nly eight mnths after its release. Plus, electrnics hardly ever becme mre expensive because intense cmpetitin in the industry puts dwnward pressure n prices ver time. Prices f gadgets will fall shrtly after release, and they will likely keep falling. Many new TV mdels drp significantly in price as little as ten days after hitting the market. Further, electrnics rapidly depreciate because they becme bslete (废弃的)s quickly. This means that early adpters pay the maximum price fr an item that des nt hld nt its value. The resale price f a cell phne r laptp can drp by fifty percent within just a few mnths.
Speaking f becming bslete, thse wh are first t leap int a new technlgy risk (三野志) wasting mney and time n smething that will never catch n. Anther gd reasn t resist the early-adptin temptatin is that the first versin f a prduct typically has defects that cst a lt in time and frustratin. Such prblems are s cmmn with new technlgy that early adpters are basically unpaid beta testers and trubleshters. Unless this sunds t yu like a fun way t spend yur time, dn't be amng the first users. If yu wait t learn what the prblems are with a new electrnic gadget, yu can lk frward t a smther experience—r chse a less trublesme prduct.
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【答案】
Dn't be the first users f the latest electrnic equipment. Firstly, the earliest versins f devices are the mst expensive. Secndly, the electrnics will be ut f date rapidly. Thirdly ,the first versins f a prduct are with sme defects generally. Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the latest electrnic prducts.
【分析】
本文是一篇议论文。文章主要论述了虽然成为购买最新的电子产品的第一批人是很酷的，但是考虑到价格昂贵、产品易过时且新品通常有缺陷等因素，购买最新的电子产品是一项糟糕的投资。
【详解】
1. 要点摘录
①Dn't jin the first wave f cnsumers wh invest in the latest media-hyped hardware; instead, wait and see.
②First, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, they are als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be.
③Speaking f becming bslete, thse wh are first t leap int a new technlgy risk wasting mney and time n smething that will never catch n.
④Anther gd reasn t resist the early-adptin temptatin is that the first versin f a prduct typically has defects that cst a lt in time and frustratin.
⑤Unless this sunds t yu like a fun way t spend yur time, dn't be amng the first users.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4、5三个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Dn't be the first users f the new electrnic equipment．
The reasns are as fllwing: Firstly, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, but als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be.
Secndly, electrnics will be ut f date rapidly.
Thirdly, the first versins f a prduct are with sme defects generally. Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the new prducts.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Secndly， electrnics will be ut f date rapidly．句子里，固定短语 ut f date 表示“过时”，表达比较高级。
[高分句型2] Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the latest electrnic prducts.运用了不定式作后置定语。
Passage 2【真题自测】
【2019·浙江】
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, authr f The A t Z Guide t Raising Happy and Cnfident Kids, says, “We’ve gne t the ppsite extreme f a few decades ag when parents tended t be mre strict.” By giving kids a lt f praise, parents think they’re building their children’s cnfidence, when, in fact, it may be just the ppsite. T much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid t try new things r take a risk fr fear f nt being able t stay n tp where their parents’ praise has put them.
Still, dn’t g t far in the ther directin. Nt giving enugh praise can be just as damaging as giving t much. Kids will feel like they’re nt gd enugh r that yu dn’t care and, as a result, may see n pint in trying hard fr their accmplishments.
S what is the right amunt f praise? Experts say that the quality f praise is mre imprtant than the quantity. If praise is sincere and fcused n the effrt nt the utcme, yu can give it as ften as yur child des smething that deserves a verbal reward. “We shuld especially recgnize ur children’s effrts t push themselves and wrk hard t achieve a gal,” says Dnahue, authr f Parenting Withut Fear: Letting G f Wrry and Fcusing n What Really Matters. “One thing t remember is that it’s the prcess nt the end prduct that matters.”
Yur sn may nt be the best basketball player n his team. But if he’s ut there every day and playing hard, yu shuld praise his effrt regardless f whether his team wins r lses. Praising the effrt and nt the utcme can als mean recgnizing yur child when she has wrked hard t clean the yard, ck dinner, r finish a bk reprt. But whatever it is, praise shuld be given n a case-by-case basis and be prprtinate(相称的) t the amunt f effrt yur child has put int it.
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【答案】Parents tend t g t extremes when it cmes t praising their kids. (要点一) Yet, bth t much and t little praise can be equally damaging. (要点二) When giving praise, parents shuld be sincere and cncentrate n the prcess instead f the result. (要点三) Similarly, they ught t give praise fr hw much effrt their kids have invested in the wrk they’re invlved in. (要点四)
【分析】
本次浙江高考书面表达采用了概要写作题型。概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，考查的是学生在实现自由的思维表达之前，对他人的信息在理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。选材上，提供一篇350词以内的短文，题材不限，要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
【详解】
完成一篇概要写作，需要经过三个步骤，
1. 读懂原文，抓住段落主题句。在阅读过程中，需要准确把握文章的段落大意，学会剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。
2. 组织语言，转换表达。在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上，组织好语言，注重语言表达的独立性和准确性以及高级性，不全盘照抄原文句子，尽量用自己的语言转换表达，同时要注意篇幅的比例安排，用较多的文字去表达重要的内容。
3. 通读全文，逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。
Passage 3【模拟自测】
（2021·上海静安区·高三一模）Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Surveys indicate that a third f Britns regularly eat n their wn. OpenTable, an nline restaurant bking app, fund that sl dining in New Yrk increased by 80% during the past 5 years. And in Japan, the wrld capital f sl dining, a trend fr "lw interactin dining11 has taken ff. Restaurants are pening which facilitate the ultimate sl dining experience: passing bwls f ndles thrugh black curtains int individual bths.
Is this a wrrying trend? We think s. Research is revealing the negative impacts f eating alne, which has been fund t be linked t a variety f mental and physical health cnditins, frm depressin and diabetes t high bld pressure.
S it's cheering that hundreds f fd sharing initiatives have sprung up arund the wrld. There's Lndn's Casserle Club, fr example, whse vlunteers share prtins f hme-cked fd with peple in their area wh aren't always able t ck fr themselves, in which case they put an end t fd waste. Or there is Suth Africa's Fd Jams, scial gatherings in which participants are paired up, preferably with strangers, and given a prtin f the meal t prepare. Many participants interviewed mentined that their lneliness was greatly relieved. Such initiatives ffer lessns f all kinds t thse thinking abut hw ur fd systems need t change. They als smewhat cmpensate fr the undesirable utcmes sle eating brings.
S why d peple stp eating tgether? There are a variety f reasns. Authrs such as Michael Pllan argue that it is due t the fact that peple attach less value t hme-based labr, including cking. The widening f the wrkfrce, which brught many wmen ut f the kitchen and int the wrkplace during the 20th century, als cntributed. Meanwhile, the grwth in insecure and incnsistent wrking patterns amng a grwing prprtin f the ppulatin als discurages meals eaten cmmunally.
【答案】
The trend f sle dining is catching n in majr cuntries. Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness. Eating tgether has declined because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。单人用餐的趋势正在主要国家流行起来。然而，它确实会伤害身体和精神。幸运的是，食物共享计划通过避免食物浪费和对抗孤独来弥补它的不良影响。由于人们低估了在家做饭的价值，更多的女性进入职场，以及工作关系的弱化，在一起吃饭的人数有所下降。
【详解】
1 要点摘录①.Surveys indicate that a third f Britns regularly eat n their wn. OpenTable, an nline restaurant bking app, fund that sl dining in New Yrk increased by 80% during the past 5 years.
②.Research is revealing the negative impacts f eating alne, which has been fund t be linked t a variety f mental and physical health cnditins, frm depressin and diabetes t high bld pressure.
③.There's Lndn's Casserle Club, fr example, whse vlunteers share prtins f hme-cked fd with peple in their area wh aren't always able t ck fr themselves, in which case they put an end t fd waste.
④.The widening f the wrkfrce, which brught many wmen ut f the kitchen and int the wrkplace during the 20th century, als cntributed.
2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句The trend f sle dining is catching n in majr cuntries. Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness.Because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships, they ften chse t eat alne.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. (使用hwever对前文内容表达转折，physically和mentally副词作状语修饰动作des harm。)
[高分句型2]Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness.(运用介词by+ding作方式状语，表达比较高级。)
[高分句型3]Eating tgether has declined because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships.(使用动名词eating作主语，because f后接名词短语和动名词作并列宾语，充分使用了非谓语动词里的高级表达。)
Passage 4【模拟自测】
（2020·浙江宁波市·高三月考）概要写作
An allergy, als knwn as an allergic disease, is an immune system reactin t nrmally harmless things, such as dust，plants, animals r certain fds. Symptms vary depending n the allergy. Cmmn cld symptms such as lw fever, sneezing, and a sre thrat may all indicate allergies.
What causes an allergic reactin is a questin still puzzling scientists. Types f allergies have greatly increase since the mid-20th century， leading sme experts t suggest the increased envirnmental pllutin is held respnsible. Sme experts suggest that allergies are related with genes with twins being particularly likely t share the same prblems. Often，an allergic reactin will develp in childhds but since many reactins are likely t wrsen with repeated expsure, symptms can start t appear at any age. Hwever，sme peple may vercme childhd allergies with age grwing.
Testing fr an allergy can be a tricky prcess，particularly if an allergic reactin culd threaten the victim's life. Dctrs ften use a skin test methd fr a variety f pssible allergic reactins. In skin testing, a tiny amunt f an allergen (过敏原) is sht int a marked place f skin t see if the skin reacts negatively. If serius reactins are a cncern , dctrs can als use a bld test， althugh this takes mre time and may be less accurate than skin testing.
Treatment may depend n the type and severe degree f the patient allergic respnse. In sme mild cases， such as sneezing caused by animal expsure， patients are tld t avid expsure when pssible. Aviding the fd is als key with many fd allergies, particularly thse that can cause severe respnses. When aviding is impssible,sme dctrs may recmmend shts. This intends t build up tlerance in the immune system by expsing the patient t increasing small amunts f the allergen ver time.
【答案】
An allergy is a reactin perfrmed by the immune system t cmmn things with varius symptms. As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear. Besides，mst allergies will develp with repeated expsure, but sme may be vercme. T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary. Mrever，in case f the actual cnditins，with aviding expsure being mst imprtant, different treatments are used accrdingly.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍过敏。过敏可能表现出各种症状。过敏的测试过程是很困难的，只有避免接触过敏原才能避免过敏。
【详解】
1 要点摘录
①An allergy, als knwn as an allergic disease, is an immune system reactin t nrmally harmless things.
②What causes an allergic reactin is a questin still puzzling scientists.
③Sme experts suggest the increased envirnmental pllutin is held respnsible.
④Sme experts suggest that allergies are related with genes with twins being particularly likely t share the same prblems.
⑤Testing fr an allergy can be a tricky prcess.
⑥Dctrs ften use a skin test methd fr a variety f pssible allergic reactins.If serius reactins are a cncern, dctrs can als use a bld test.
⑦Treatment may depend n the type and severe degree f the patient allergic respnse.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行简写；第2、3、4三个要点进行重组；将第5、6两个要点进行整合；将第7个要点进行重写。
3.遣词造句
An allergy is a reactin perfrmed by the immune system t cmmn things with varius symptms.
As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear.
T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary.
In case f the actual cnditins，with aviding expsure being mst imprtant different treatments are used accrdingly.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear. 运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，把要点3、4进行了重组，while表示对比，对第二个要点进行了阐述。
[高分句型2]
T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary.运用了不定式做目的状语，引出第5个要点，同时其后使用了and的并列句，对第6个要点进行了压缩。
序号
内容
Part 1
题型总览
题型综述 答题策略
Part 2
真题感悟
品读范文 提分词汇 亮点句型
Part 3
专题强化
真题自测 自测模拟
Part 1题型总览
【题型综述】
概要写作是一种“阅读+写作”的复合型任务,测试学生的阅读理解、概括归纳和书面表达方面的综合能力。选材上，提供一篇350词以内的短文，一般以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主，要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要（注意：少于40或多于80词扣两分），而新写的语篇，既要做到在结构、衔接和连贯性等方面与原文保持一致，又要做到简明扼要、意义完整、结构严密和语句通顺。
【答题策略】
1.读懂原文，明确篇章结构
写概要之前，一定要先通读原文， 确定文章的体裁和主题。在正确把握文章主旨和段落大意后，明确原文的篇章结构。 根据意义划分文中的自然段，意义段的数量对应的就是要点的数量。
注意一个自然段不一定是一个要点，有时几个自然段说明一个要点，有时一个自然段包含数个要点。
2.去次留精，提炼关键信息
·明确全文的篇章结构后， 就要处理原文的内容，目的是保留主要内容，删除次要内容。
·先找出主题句，同时标注与主题相关的关键词，最后归纳的要点往往是这些词句的同义转述。
·原文描述性的语言、细节性的信息如列举数字和列举的事例等无须在概要中一一列出。
3.归纳要点 合理表达
明确每个意义段的关键信息后，接下来应用自己的语言准确地表达各意义段的要点。 为避免和原文的句子重复， 可利用同义转述和句式转换这两种形式归纳要点。各要点的词数应根据文中对应内容的篇幅来定，分清主次。
句式多样 注意过渡
在概要中合理使用非谓语、从句和特殊句式等使句式丰富多样，但句子结构不可过长，也不要用太复杂的句子结构。同时选用适当的过渡衔接词衔接上下文，保证概要部分内容的连贯性。
Part 2真题感悟
Passage 1
【真题详解】
【2019·浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It’s a really gd idea t visit clleges befre yu apply because their websites can all start t lk and sund the same. Nthing will give yu the sense f what it will actually be like t live n a cllege campus(校园) like visiting and seeing fr yurself the drms, classrms and athletic equipment and, f curse, the students. It seems a little crazy nce senir year hits t find the time t visit cllege campuses, and it can als be pricey if the schls yu are applying t happen t be mre than a car ride away. But keep in mind that yu are making a decisin abut the next fur years f yur life, and d all the research yu can t make sure yu are making the right ne.
There’s n excuse nt t visit the schls in yur lcal area. In fact, a lt f cllege applicatins even ask if yu have visited campus, and bviusly, if yu live acrss the cuntry that wn’t be as much f a pssibility, but if yu live nearby, g check it ut!
If campus visits aren’t ging t happen befre yu apply, at the very least yu shuld find sme time between applying and getting yur acceptance letters t visit the schls yu’d like t attend. It can save yu a lt f heartache if yu rule ut nw the things that yu dn’t like abut certain campuses, things that yu wuldn’t knw unless yu actually visit.
Nw, if time and mney are making it impssible, then check ut the nline cllege fairs at CllegeWeekLive. It’s a chance t chat nline with admissins fficers, students, and cllege cunselrs (顾问), and it wn’t cst yu a penny! Yu can register fr its nline cllege fair at cllegeweeklive.cm. While visiting an nline cllege fair can’t take the place f an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tl that alng with all yur ther research will help yu make an infrmed decisin abut which clleges r universities yu’d like t attend.
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【答案】
It’s really wrthwhile t pay a visit t their desired clleges persnally befre applying. Undubtedly, students shuld visit their lcal clleges, which may be included in applicatins. At least, they shuld visit the schl and figure ut its real cnditins in advance. Fr students wh are shrt f mney and time, registering fr the nline cllege fair is a gd alternative t help them better understand schls.
【分析】
本文要求阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要，即用尽可能少的词汇集中展现原材料的主要思想和观点。这主要是考查学生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及总结概括能力，熟练掌握从句、非谓语动词等语法知识和遣词造句的能力。
【详解】
1. 要先读懂、读透原作。这是准确再现原文、写好概要的前提。动笔前多读两遍原文，直至弄懂读透。
2. 抓住文中的关键句，确定写作主题。开头It's a really gd idea t visit clleges befre yu apply点明了本文主题；But keep in mind that yu are making a decisin abut the next fur years f yur life, and d all the research yu can t make sure yu are making the right ne. There’s n excuse nt t visit the schls in yur lcal area.说明了去大学看看的必要性和可行性；If campus visits aren’t ging t happen befre yu apply, at the very least yu shuld find sme time between applying and getting yur acceptance letters t visit the schls yu’d like t attend.在时间上提供了更多选择；if time and mney are making it impssible, then check ut the nline cllege fairs at CllegeWeekLive.为不能亲自去大学看的学生提供了另外一种方法。
3.拟好提纲。有了提纲，写概要时就会有章法，也不会遗漏原作中的要点。
4.快速成文，反复推敲。按照文章要求和拟好的提纲一气呵成，写完初稿。
5.对照修改润色，再读原文，查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要内容。用词是否恰当，可有可无的删掉。注意词类、时态、语态的适当调整。
【点睛】
范文观点明确，重点突出，语言简练，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句which may be included in applicatins.和wh are shrt f mney and time.动名词registering nline作主语，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【提分词汇】
undubtedly adv. 确实地，毋庸置疑地
applicatins n.申请
figure ut 算出
【亮点句型】
It’s really wrthwhile t pay a visit t their desired clleges persnally befre applying. 在申请之前亲自参观一下自己心仪的大学是非常值得的。
Fr students wh are shrt f mney and time, registering fr the nline cllege fair is a gd alternative t help them better understand schls.对于那些缺乏资金和时间的学生来说，报名参加网上高校招聘会是一个很好的选择，可以帮助他们更好地了解学校。
Passage 2
【真题详解】
【2019·上海卷】
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Where are the bees?
Bees are essential t the prductin f fd we eat. Bees make hney, but they als pllinate large areas f crps, such as straw berries, apples and nins. Abut a third f the fd we eat is a result f pllinatin f the bees. Unfrtunately, bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate.
In 2006, bee keepers started reprting abut smething called Clny Cllapse Disaster (CCD).The main sign f CCD is the lss f adult hney bees frm a hive. In Octber f 2006, sme beekeepers reprted that they had lst between 30 and 90 percent f their hives.
There were many theries fr the disappearance f the bees. But the mst cnvincing ne has t d with pesticides and lifestyles f bees tday. Nwadays, beekeeper get mst f their incme nt frm prducing hney but frm renting bees t pllinate plants. This means that the life f the typical bee nw cnsists f travelling all arund the cuntry t pllinate crps as the seasns change. That means a lt f traveling n trucks, which is very stressful t bees. It is nt unusual fr up t 30% f the hive t die during transprt due t stress. In additin, bees that spend mst f their time lcked up n trucks are nt expsed t what they usually live n. Instead, they live n a sweet liquid frm crn, usually plluted with pesticides.
The exact reasn fr the disappearance f bees is nt sure, but lsing bees is very cstly t the ecnmy. The bee pllinatin services are wrth ver $8 billin a year. With n bees, pllinatin will have t be dne by hand, which wuld have effects n the quality f fd and increased fd priced. We hear a lt abut big envirnmental disasters almst every day. But ne f the biggest may just be the less f that tiny flying insect.
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【答案】
Bees nt nly prvide us with hney, but als help pllinate crps. Hwever, they are disappearing at an alarming rate fr unknw reasn, which will be disastrus t us and ecnmy. Sme peple think it is the pesticide while thers think it is due t transprt.
【分析】
本文属于环保文章，介绍蜜蜂正以惊人的速度消失，这可能和运输、农作物使用杀虫剂以及环境有关，但是没人知道确切原因。要求考生阅读完总结论点，不能超过60个词。
【详解】
第一步，归纳各个段落的段落大意，第一段讲述蜜蜂对我们很重要，但是却以惊人的速度消失，第二段讲述蜜蜂出现这种状况的情形，第三段讲述可能造成此现象的原因；第四段讲述这种现象对我们和经济的影响。
第二步，可以择出重要的信息，蜜蜂对我们很重要，但是却以惊人的速度消失，可能造成此现象的原因，以及影响。
第三步，得出答案，注意过渡与衔接，字数控制在60字以内。
【点睛】
概要写作做题技巧。概要写作不是对段落大意的简单堆积，需要学生读懂文章的大概意思和文章结构，还需要一定写作替换技巧，且注意语言的简洁性。第一步，确定文章的话题和各段的段落大意，比如本文话题为蜜蜂的消失，第一段讲述蜜蜂对我们很重要，但是却以惊人的速度消失，第二段讲述蜜蜂出现这种状况的情形，第三段讲述可能造成此现象的原因；第四段讲述这种现象对我们和经济的影响；第二步，分析各个段落的逻辑关系，确定主观点和次要观点；第三步，注意一定的写作技巧，比如同义词、近义词的替换，句型和结构的转换；第四步，检查单词拼写，语法规则，字数问题等。
【提分词汇】
prvide ... with 给...提供…
【亮点句型】
Hwever, they are disappearing at an alarming rate fr unknwn reasn, which will be disastrus t us and ecnmy. 然而，由于未知的原因，它们正在以惊人的速度消失，这对美国和经济将是灾难性的。
Sme peple think it is the pesticide while thers think it is due t transprt.一些人认为是杀虫剂，而另一些人认为是由于运输。
Part 3专题强化
Passage 1【真题自测】
【2020·上海卷】
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint( s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
It's undeniable: Being amng the first t try ut a new piece f technlgy is cl. There's the excitement f ding what has never been dne befre-the feeling that yu're living in the future. And when yu're the sle member f yur scial circle with the latest ht gadget, peple stare in fascinatin. They ask yu questins. They see yu as the hlder f pwerful, secret knwledge-fr a little while, until the next big thing cmes alng. Peple tend t underestimate the csts f this temprary clness, which they pay in mre ways than ne. Dn't fall int the early adpter trap. Dn't jin the first wave f cnsumers wh invest in the latest media-hyped hardware; instead, wait and see.
T put it frankly, early adptin is a bad investment. First, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, they are als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be. Cmpanies are presumably attempting t recver the cst f prductin as fast as they can, and they knw that there are serius tech-lvers wh will pay a great deal t be first. Once the revenues frm early adpters' purchases are safely in their hands, they can cut the price and shift t the next marketing phase: selling the prduct t everyne else. This is why the cst f the riginal iPhne drpped abut U. S. $200 nly eight mnths after its release. Plus, electrnics hardly ever becme mre expensive because intense cmpetitin in the industry puts dwnward pressure n prices ver time. Prices f gadgets will fall shrtly after release, and they will likely keep falling. Many new TV mdels drp significantly in price as little as ten days after hitting the market. Further, electrnics rapidly depreciate because they becme bslete (废弃的)s quickly. This means that early adpters pay the maximum price fr an item that des nt hld nt its value. The resale price f a cell phne r laptp can drp by fifty percent within just a few mnths.
Speaking f becming bslete, thse wh are first t leap int a new technlgy risk (三野志) wasting mney and time n smething that will never catch n. Anther gd reasn t resist the early-adptin temptatin is that the first versin f a prduct typically has defects that cst a lt in time and frustratin. Such prblems are s cmmn with new technlgy that early adpters are basically unpaid beta testers and trubleshters. Unless this sunds t yu like a fun way t spend yur time, dn't be amng the first users. If yu wait t learn what the prblems are with a new electrnic gadget, yu can lk frward t a smther experience—r chse a less trublesme prduct.
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【答案】
Dn't be the first users f the latest electrnic equipment. Firstly, the earliest versins f devices are the mst expensive. Secndly, the electrnics will be ut f date rapidly. Thirdly ,the first versins f a prduct are with sme defects generally. Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the latest electrnic prducts.
【分析】
本文是一篇议论文。文章主要论述了虽然成为购买最新的电子产品的第一批人是很酷的，但是考虑到价格昂贵、产品易过时且新品通常有缺陷等因素，购买最新的电子产品是一项糟糕的投资。
【详解】
1. 要点摘录
①Dn't jin the first wave f cnsumers wh invest in the latest media-hyped hardware; instead, wait and see.
②First, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, they are als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be.
③Speaking f becming bslete, thse wh are first t leap int a new technlgy risk wasting mney and time n smething that will never catch n.
④Anther gd reasn t resist the early-adptin temptatin is that the first versin f a prduct typically has defects that cst a lt in time and frustratin.
⑤Unless this sunds t yu like a fun way t spend yur time, dn't be amng the first users.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4、5三个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Dn't be the first users f the new electrnic equipment．
The reasns are as fllwing: Firstly, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, but als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be.
Secndly, electrnics will be ut f date rapidly.
Thirdly, the first versins f a prduct are with sme defects generally. Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the new prducts.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Secndly， electrnics will be ut f date rapidly．句子里，固定短语 ut f date 表示“过时”，表达比较高级。
[高分句型2] Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the latest electrnic prducts.运用了不定式作后置定语。
Passage 2【真题自测】
【2019·浙江】
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, authr f The A t Z Guide t Raising Happy and Cnfident Kids, says, “We’ve gne t the ppsite extreme f a few decades ag when parents tended t be mre strict.” By giving kids a lt f praise, parents think they’re building their children’s cnfidence, when, in fact, it may be just the ppsite. T much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid t try new things r take a risk fr fear f nt being able t stay n tp where their parents’ praise has put them.
Still, dn’t g t far in the ther directin. Nt giving enugh praise can be just as damaging as giving t much. Kids will feel like they’re nt gd enugh r that yu dn’t care and, as a result, may see n pint in trying hard fr their accmplishments.
S what is the right amunt f praise? Experts say that the quality f praise is mre imprtant than the quantity. If praise is sincere and fcused n the effrt nt the utcme, yu can give it as ften as yur child des smething that deserves a verbal reward. “We shuld especially recgnize ur children’s effrts t push themselves and wrk hard t achieve a gal,” says Dnahue, authr f Parenting Withut Fear: Letting G f Wrry and Fcusing n What Really Matters. “One thing t remember is that it’s the prcess nt the end prduct that matters.”
Yur sn may nt be the best basketball player n his team. But if he’s ut there every day and playing hard, yu shuld praise his effrt regardless f whether his team wins r lses. Praising the effrt and nt the utcme can als mean recgnizing yur child when she has wrked hard t clean the yard, ck dinner, r finish a bk reprt. But whatever it is, praise shuld be given n a case-by-case basis and be prprtinate(相称的) t the amunt f effrt yur child has put int it.
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【答案】Parents tend t g t extremes when it cmes t praising their kids. (要点一) Yet, bth t much and t little praise can be equally damaging. (要点二) When giving praise, parents shuld be sincere and cncentrate n the prcess instead f the result. (要点三) Similarly, they ught t give praise fr hw much effrt their kids have invested in the wrk they’re invlved in. (要点四)
【分析】
本次浙江高考书面表达采用了概要写作题型。概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，考查的是学生在实现自由的思维表达之前，对他人的信息在理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。选材上，提供一篇350词以内的短文，题材不限，要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
【详解】
完成一篇概要写作，需要经过三个步骤，
1. 读懂原文，抓住段落主题句。在阅读过程中，需要准确把握文章的段落大意，学会剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。
2. 组织语言，转换表达。在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上，组织好语言，注重语言表达的独立性和准确性以及高级性，不全盘照抄原文句子，尽量用自己的语言转换表达，同时要注意篇幅的比例安排，用较多的文字去表达重要的内容。
3. 通读全文，逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。
Passage 3【模拟自测】
（2021·上海静安区·高三一模）Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Surveys indicate that a third f Britns regularly eat n their wn. OpenTable, an nline restaurant bking app, fund that sl dining in New Yrk increased by 80% during the past 5 years. And in Japan, the wrld capital f sl dining, a trend fr "lw interactin dining11 has taken ff. Restaurants are pening which facilitate the ultimate sl dining experience: passing bwls f ndles thrugh black curtains int individual bths.
Is this a wrrying trend? We think s. Research is revealing the negative impacts f eating alne, which has been fund t be linked t a variety f mental and physical health cnditins, frm depressin and diabetes t high bld pressure.
S it's cheering that hundreds f fd sharing initiatives have sprung up arund the wrld. There's Lndn's Casserle Club, fr example, whse vlunteers share prtins f hme-cked fd with peple in their area wh aren't always able t ck fr themselves, in which case they put an end t fd waste. Or there is Suth Africa's Fd Jams, scial gatherings in which participants are paired up, preferably with strangers, and given a prtin f the meal t prepare. Many participants interviewed mentined that their lneliness was greatly relieved. Such initiatives ffer lessns f all kinds t thse thinking abut hw ur fd systems need t change. They als smewhat cmpensate fr the undesirable utcmes sle eating brings.
S why d peple stp eating tgether? There are a variety f reasns. Authrs such as Michael Pllan argue that it is due t the fact that peple attach less value t hme-based labr, including cking. The widening f the wrkfrce, which brught many wmen ut f the kitchen and int the wrkplace during the 20th century, als cntributed. Meanwhile, the grwth in insecure and incnsistent wrking patterns amng a grwing prprtin f the ppulatin als discurages meals eaten cmmunally.
【答案】
The trend f sle dining is catching n in majr cuntries. Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness. Eating tgether has declined because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。单人用餐的趋势正在主要国家流行起来。然而，它确实会伤害身体和精神。幸运的是，食物共享计划通过避免食物浪费和对抗孤独来弥补它的不良影响。由于人们低估了在家做饭的价值，更多的女性进入职场，以及工作关系的弱化，在一起吃饭的人数有所下降。
【详解】
1 要点摘录①.Surveys indicate that a third f Britns regularly eat n their wn. OpenTable, an nline restaurant bking app, fund that sl dining in New Yrk increased by 80% during the past 5 years.
②.Research is revealing the negative impacts f eating alne, which has been fund t be linked t a variety f mental and physical health cnditins, frm depressin and diabetes t high bld pressure.
③.There's Lndn's Casserle Club, fr example, whse vlunteers share prtins f hme-cked fd with peple in their area wh aren't always able t ck fr themselves, in which case they put an end t fd waste.
④.The widening f the wrkfrce, which brught many wmen ut f the kitchen and int the wrkplace during the 20th century, als cntributed.
2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句The trend f sle dining is catching n in majr cuntries. Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness.Because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships, they ften chse t eat alne.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. (使用hwever对前文内容表达转折，physically和mentally副词作状语修饰动作des harm。)
[高分句型2]Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness.(运用介词by+ding作方式状语，表达比较高级。)
[高分句型3]Eating tgether has declined because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships.(使用动名词eating作主语，because f后接名词短语和动名词作并列宾语，充分使用了非谓语动词里的高级表达。)
Passage 4【模拟自测】
（2020·浙江宁波市·高三月考）概要写作
An allergy, als knwn as an allergic disease, is an immune system reactin t nrmally harmless things, such as dust，plants, animals r certain fds. Symptms vary depending n the allergy. Cmmn cld symptms such as lw fever, sneezing, and a sre thrat may all indicate allergies.
What causes an allergic reactin is a questin still puzzling scientists. Types f allergies have greatly increase since the mid-20th century， leading sme experts t suggest the increased envirnmental pllutin is held respnsible. Sme experts suggest that allergies are related with genes with twins being particularly likely t share the same prblems. Often，an allergic reactin will develp in childhds but since many reactins are likely t wrsen with repeated expsure, symptms can start t appear at any age. Hwever，sme peple may vercme childhd allergies with age grwing.
Testing fr an allergy can be a tricky prcess，particularly if an allergic reactin culd threaten the victim's life. Dctrs ften use a skin test methd fr a variety f pssible allergic reactins. In skin testing, a tiny amunt f an allergen (过敏原) is sht int a marked place f skin t see if the skin reacts negatively. If serius reactins are a cncern , dctrs can als use a bld test， althugh this takes mre time and may be less accurate than skin testing.
Treatment may depend n the type and severe degree f the patient allergic respnse. In sme mild cases， such as sneezing caused by animal expsure， patients are tld t avid expsure when pssible. Aviding the fd is als key with many fd allergies, particularly thse that can cause severe respnses. When aviding is impssible,sme dctrs may recmmend shts. This intends t build up tlerance in the immune system by expsing the patient t increasing small amunts f the allergen ver time.
【答案】
An allergy is a reactin perfrmed by the immune system t cmmn things with varius symptms. As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear. Besides，mst allergies will develp with repeated expsure, but sme may be vercme. T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary. Mrever，in case f the actual cnditins，with aviding expsure being mst imprtant, different treatments are used accrdingly.
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍过敏。过敏可能表现出各种症状。过敏的测试过程是很困难的，只有避免接触过敏原才能避免过敏。
【详解】
1 要点摘录
①An allergy, als knwn as an allergic disease, is an immune system reactin t nrmally harmless things.
②What causes an allergic reactin is a questin still puzzling scientists.
③Sme experts suggest the increased envirnmental pllutin is held respnsible.
④Sme experts suggest that allergies are related with genes with twins being particularly likely t share the same prblems.
⑤Testing fr an allergy can be a tricky prcess.
⑥Dctrs ften use a skin test methd fr a variety f pssible allergic reactins.If serius reactins are a cncern, dctrs can als use a bld test.
⑦Treatment may depend n the type and severe degree f the patient allergic respnse.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行简写；第2、3、4三个要点进行重组；将第5、6两个要点进行整合；将第7个要点进行重写。
3.遣词造句
An allergy is a reactin perfrmed by the immune system t cmmn things with varius symptms.
As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear.
T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary.
In case f the actual cnditins，with aviding expsure being mst imprtant different treatments are used accrdingly.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear. 运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，把要点3、4进行了重组，while表示对比，对第二个要点进行了阐述。
[高分句型2]
T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary.运用了不定式做目的状语，引出第5个要点，同时其后使用了and的并列句，对第6个要点进行了压缩。
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内容
Part 1
题型总览
题型综述 答题策略
Part 2
真题感悟
品读范文 提分词汇 亮点句型
Part 3
专题强化
真题自测 自测模拟
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