北京中考英语书信写作专项训练

书信作文

1．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。

提示词语：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture

提示问题：When should you hand in the poster?

                 What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your email.__________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

2．凡人微光，处处闪烁。4月底以来，在疫情防控、社区守护、物资保供等方面，数万普通人站出来担当志愿者，共同守护家园。

某英文网站正在开展为社区防疫工作者写一封感谢信的征文活动。假如你是李华，请结合你在社区、村镇的所见所闻，为这些可敬的“凡人英雄”写一封感谢信，表达你对他们的敬意并谈谈你的感受和收获。

提示词语：community，check identification(身份)，take a COVID-19 test，respect，proud

提示问题：

·What did you see?

·How do you feel?

·What have you learned from them?

Dear heroes,

I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to all of you for your hard work.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．2021年10月16日，我国神舟XIII宇宙飞船成功发射。3名宇航员已在太空生活和工作近3个月。假设你是李华，你们学校的英文网站正在开展“给宇航员的一封信”征文活动。请你给宇航员王亚平写封信，说明你的写信目的，你对太空知识的了解及你想问她的问题。

提示词语：interested, admire, astronaut, exciting

提示问题：● Why are you writing the letter?

● What do you already know about the space?

● What questions do you want to ask her?

Dear Wang Yaping,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student in Beijing. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李华，你打算邀请你的美国笔友Peter来北京游玩。北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等，都有文化的印记。请你用英语给他推荐一个你眼中的北京文化旅游，对其作简要介绍，并告诉他你们准备去哪里玩，都会做些什么，说明推荐理由。

提示词语：

show, traditional, love, treasure, important, The Great Wall, Bird’s Nest.

Beijing Opera, Beijing Duck, delicious

提示问题：

Where are you going?

What are you going to do?

Why do you advise Peter to go there?

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to invite you to come to Beijing._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

5．从题目中根据中文和英文提示，完成—篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

冬奥会即将在北京召开，某英语网站正在开展冬奥志愿者的招募活动，假如你是李华，请你用英语给该网站写一封自荐信，谈谈你为什么想成为冬奥会的志愿者，以及你可以为冬奥会做些什么。

提语：communicate, good at, experience, easy-going

提示问题：

• Why do you want to be a volunteer for the 2022 Winter Olympics?

• What can you do for it?

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to recommend myself to be a volunteer for the 2022 Winter Olympics. _________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

6．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出的内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，你们学校要举办一场关于中华传统艺术的讲座，你打算邀请你们的交换生Peter参加，告诉他讲座的时间和地点，讲座的大概内容。

提示词语：lecture（讲座），traditional，information

提示问题：

（1）When and where will you have the lecture?

（2）What is he going to learn about in the lecture?

（3）What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

I’d like to invite you to attend a lecture on traditional Chinese culture in our school.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

7．从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。

文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，学校英语社团的负责人，你校将在本月为外国交换生举办一次“指尖上的中国”传统文化体验活动（Hands-on Experience of Traditional Chinese Culture)。请你用英语写一则活动推送，介绍该活动的时间、地点、内容和意义。

提示词语：mooncake, Chinese clay art, make, symbol, spread

提示问题：

● When and where are you going to hold the activity?

● What are you going to do?

● Why is the activity held?

8．下星期学校将举办英语演讲比赛，组委会正在招募英语主持人。假如你是李华，请你用英语给负责此次演讲比赛的老师写一封自荐信，内容包括：你的基本信息，申请英语主持人的理由，以及你将做哪些准备工作。

提示词语：apply, spoken English, be good at, practice, perform

提示问题：

●What’s your basic information?

●Why do you want to be an English host?

●What skills do you have to be a host?

参考答案

1．例文

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your email. As it is required, you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.

Being your close friend, I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost, the basic safety rules are of great importance, which should be included in your poster. In the second place, following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means least, if I were you, I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness, considering that better safe than sorry. In addition, it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.

If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，要求以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：告诉Peter海报上交的时间；和他分享一些设计海报的想法。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数和第二人称来写，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时承接短文开头，直接告诉Peter上交海报的时间，作为第一段；第二段是和他分享一些设计海报的想法，这是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First，Second，Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。

2．One possible version:

Dear heroes,

I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to all of you for your hard work. Recently, as volunteers in our community, you are busy organizing people to stand in a line and checking identification of them when they need to take a COVID-19 test.

I am so proud of you. I want to express my respect for you because of your patience, kindness and the selfless spirit.

From what you did, I’ve learned that I can do many things to serve people and make my efforts to help others. In a word, please accept my thanks and my best wishes for you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求向疫情中的“凡人英雄”写一封感谢信。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段谈谈自己在社区的所见所闻；第二段表达自己的感情和尊敬；最后一段介绍自己的收获。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

3．例文：

Dear Wang Yaping,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student in Beijing. When I learned from the TV news that on October 16, 2021, you successfully arrived in space in China’s Zhengzhou XIII spacecraft, I couldn’t help feeling a shock in my heart. You are 1,300,000,000 prides of the Chinese, you also became my hero in the heart. I’m writing to know something about your life and work in space for nearly three months. How do you eat, walk and write?

I know that scientific research into space is not an easy task. The pilot not only needs the hard technique, but also needs the self-confidence and courage. What did you see on the airship? I don’t know whether the space that you see is similar to the space that I fantasize! The space is extensive and limitless. You are all the heroes of the motherland. You are the pride of the motherland. You are our lasting model. When I grow up, I also want to be an astronaut.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。要求根据所给的要点提示王亚平写封信，文中要包含写信的目的，你对太空的了解以及你想问的问题。注意要点齐全。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和一般现在时来介绍。文章的开头和结尾已给出，文章的主体部分围绕所给的问题提示展开，力求内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

4．例文：

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to invite you to come to Beijing. I have made a plan for us. First, we can visit some places of interest, like the Great Wall. You will get some feelings about Chinese history there. And I will also take you to watch Beijing Opera because it’s a traditional Chinese art. Of course, we are going to Quanjude, a famous Chinese restaurant, to enjoy Beijing Duck. It’s delicious! As for the weather, it’s a little hot in Beijing in summer, so please bring some cool clothes. And don’t forget to take a camera. We are sure to take a lot of photos!

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据所给提示内容，向美国笔友Peter介绍北京文化旅游，包括要去的地方和要做的事情，并阐述原因。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般将来时和一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。在介绍时，可适当用一些短语句型和连接词使文章更出彩，同时也要确保无单词语法错误，条理清晰。

5．例文：

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to recommend myself to be a volunteer for the 2022 Winter Olympics. It will be held in Beijing, my hometown, I feel proud and hope to do something for it.

First, I’m good at English and I can communicate with foreigners freely. Second, I’m experienced in volunteering, so I can help people and meet their needs very well. What’s more, I’m an easy-going person and people might be willing to come to me for help.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：这篇作文属于书信写作。要求根据提示的问题，写一封自荐信推荐介绍自己，参加北京冬奥会志愿者的选拔。要求要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时和一般将来时相结合，人称使用第一人称。写作时，注意承接开头，要紧紧围绕两个提示问题，写清楚想做北京冬奥会志愿者的原因，以及作为志愿者应该要做些什么。注意行文连贯，无单词拼写和语法使用错误。

6．例文：

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

I’d like to invite you to attend a lecture on traditional Chinese culture in our school. Here’s the information for it. The place will be the lecture hall. The time is from 9:00 to 11:00 this Friday morning. The speaker is Mr. Li, an expert on Literature. You may ask questions at the end of the lecture. If you like, you can read online articles on the topic and get ready for your questions. If there is anything that I can do, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇应用文写作。题干要求根据所给提示问题，给你们的交换生Peter写一封信邀请他来参加你们学校要举办的关于中华传统艺术的讲座。其中要包含讲座的时间和地点以及大概内容。注意要点齐全。

2.写作指导：本文主要一般现在时来行文，人称主要使用第二人称。信的开头和结尾已经给出，中间部分主要介绍讲座的相关信息，以及你的建议；写作时注意保持主谓一致性，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。

7．One possible version:

Dear students,

We are going to hold an activity about traditional Chinese culture. You will have a hands-on experience of it.

We are going to organize the activity at school next Friday afternoon. We will experience Chinese traditions, such as making mooncakes, learning Chinese clay art and so on. It is a symbol of Chinese culture. We hope to spread Chinese traditional culture to the rest of the world. I hope we’ll enjoy ourselves. I believe you can learn more about China and love Chinese traditional culture by having this kind of activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply. At the same time, you can try to have hands-on Experience of it soon.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于事件推送，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段主要阐述活动的举办地点、时间，以及具体活动和活动的目的。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述活动；时态采用一般将来时为主；描述活动的目的时，理由应该具有吸引力；整个活动的时间地点、具体活动和目的应该保证条理清晰，层次分明。

8．例文：

Dear Miss Yang,

I know the English contest will be held next week. I’m writing to apply for the job as a host.

My name is Li Hua. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs in my spare time.

I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my spoken English. At the same time, I can help other students get more information which they are interested in.

In order to be a good host, I’m going to learn some good ways of learning English and know more about western culture. I’m good at speaking and singing. I’ll keep practicing to make myself better and perform for you.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇自荐信，文章的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示内容给老师写一封信，推荐自己当主持人，内容包括：自己的基本信息，申请英语主持人的理由，以及将做哪些准备工作。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，不要犯语法错误，可适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。