Unit 1 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?

单元话题满分范文必背

1．请以“My trip to——”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。

要求：

1.请在题目空格处填入你旅行的地点，如：Beijing，Jinan或Qingdao等；

2.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息。否则不予评分；

3.不少于60词。

提示：

1. Where did you go?

2. What did you do there?

3. How did you feel about the trip?

My trip to ________

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【答案】My trip to Beijing

Have you ever been to Beijing?I’ve been there once.I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation.

I visited many famous places of interest,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest.I took a lot of photos with my camera.On the Great Wall I met some foreigners and I talked with them in English.I told them there’s an old saying.He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.They liked the saying very much and they told me that they were true men at that time.We all laughed happily.I ate Beijing roast duck.It was very delicious.

I felt a little tired but I was happy.I look forward to visiting Beijing again.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文。题目是“My trip to        ”，记叙你的一次旅行。给出了提示要点。提示要点是本文的写作提纲要点。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，并做适当发挥。字数应在80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

我的青岛之行

去年暑假，我和家人去了青岛。我们乘火车去了那里，住在海边的一家大旅馆里。我们在那里呆了三天。

第一天，我们沿着海边散步。之后，我们去游泳，在那里拍了很多照片。第二天，我们在一个著名的市场买了许多纪念品。最后一天，我们在海边野餐。当地人表演了很多节目，这让我们很高兴。我们都很开心。这是难忘的。

青岛是游览的好地方。如果我有机会，我会再去那里。

【点睛】

书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有：On the first day, /The next day / The last day, /We all enjoyed ourselves./ Qingdao is a good place to visit. If I have a chance, I will go there again.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。   （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

2．假如你是林涛，去年夏天去北京度假，参观过许多地方。以My vacation 为题，写一篇60词左右的短文。

内容包括： 1. 旅游景点（the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, Tian'anmen Square, Beijing hutong)； 2. 天气、活动； 3. 观点或感受等。

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【答案】My vacation

Last summer, I went to Beijing on vacation with my father. The weather was sunny and hot. First we visited the Great Wall. There were a lot of people on the Great Wall. It is really the longest wall in the world. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square. We took many photos there. We also visited some other interesting places in Beijing. We visited Beijing hutong, too. We had a great time there. I hope to go there again.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给写作信息，以“My vacation”为话题，把“旅游景点、 天气、活动以及观点或感受”等有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般过去时态为主，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了on vacation, a lot of，in the world, the next day，take many photos，and, have a great time，hope to do等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了It is really the longest wall in the world.最高级比较的句型，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

3．请你根据以下提示，写一篇90词左右的英语短文。

提示：1．“五一”期间你和家人去杭州旅游，在那儿待了三天；

2．第一天乘船赏西湖美景，漫步苏堤，参观了著名的雷峰塔；

3．第二天去了西溪国家湿地公园，拍了很多照片；

4．第三天去了吴山广场购物、吃美食；

5．你们玩得很开心，希望将来有一天能再去那儿游玩。

参考词汇：苏堤Su Causeway

西溪国家湿地公园Xixi National Wetland Park

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【答案】One possible version:

My family and I went to Hangzhou during the May Day holiday. We stayed there for three days. On the first day, we enjoyed the beauty of the West Lake by boat, walked along the Su Causeway and climbed onto the famous Lei Feng Tower. On the second day, we went to Xixi National Wetland Park and took many photos there. On the third day, we went to Wushan Square. We did some shopping and enjoyed delicious food there. We had a wonderful time in Hangzhou. I hope to visit there again some day.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍五一假期的旅游情况，包括不同的景点、美食及感受等，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，可适当运用过渡语使文章通畅，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

4．根据下列表格内容写一篇短文,介绍一下你上周末的活动。(90字以上)

【答案】I had a good weekend last week．

On last Saturday morning I went bike riding with my best friend．In the afternoon I went fishing with my father．And in the evening，I went to the movies with my family．We watched a comedy．I thought it was very interesting． Then on last Sunday，I went sightseeing in our city all the day．And on last Sunday evening I had a rest．What a wonderful weekend I had!

【解析】

【详解】

1. 本题为材料作文，根据表格内容，注意有哪些活动。

2. 用第一人称来写，时态用过去时。

3. 注意时间顺序，先写last Saturday的活动，在写last Sunday的活动。

4. 最后要把周末活动的感受也写一下。增强语感。

5．假如你是汤姆，刚刚度过愉快的暑假。请根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的短文，讲述一下你的假期经历。

要点提示：1. 去海南旅游，在沙滩上玩；

2. 做自己喜欢的事情，如去书店买书；

3. 和朋友踢足球，参加体育锻炼；

4. 每天早上读英语，写作业。

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【答案】例文

I am Tom. I had a good time this summer vacation. I went to Hainan with my family and had fun on the beach. During the vacation, I often went to my favorite bookstore and bought many books there. In the afternoon I usually played soccer with my friends. I think doing sports can keep us healthy. I also spent time studying. I read English every morning from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. And I did all my homework. All in all, I had a good time during ray vacation.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇为材料作文，要求按照提示完成一篇你如何度过一个愉快的暑假的短文，讲述自己的假期经历。

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以Tom的身份，用第一人称的方式讲述如何度过一个愉快的暑假；讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。

2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，做自我介绍；正文部分详细地描写自己假期的活动，买书、踢足球、读书、做作业等；结尾以All in all, I had a good time during my vacation.总结全文。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。

3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。With伴随状语；and并列结构；I think… 宾语从句；spend… doing sth；have fun on the beach ；play soccer with my friends ；do sports ；keep；healthy ；read English do one’s homework等详细地描述了假期的活动；用have a good time 总结全文，文句精彩，行文通畅。

6．你一定有过许多难忘的假期。请你用英语（80词左右）写出你印象最深刻的那个假期。包括以下内容：

1. Where did you go?

2. What did you do?

3. How was the weather there?

4. How were the people and the food there?

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【答案】例文：

I went to Qingdao last summer. The weather was very sunny. We went to a beautiful beach. In the morning, we swam in the sea. We had a good time. In the afternoon, it rained heavily. We had to stay at the hotel. We played chess all the afternoon. We had seafood for dinner. The food was very delicious. The people in Qingdao were very friendly. We took many photos with them.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文结构完整、时态统一、句式简洁。文中last summer，a beautiful beach，in the sea，have a good time，have to do，stay at the hotel，play chess，all the afternoon，for dinner，take photos等大量短语的使用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，为文章增色不少，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．假如你是王伟，你在“学雷锋纪念日”参加了志愿者去敬老院慰问老人的社会实践活动。请你根据以下提示，给你的美国笔友Lisa写一封电子邮件，向她介绍此次活动。

提示：活动：送鲜花、水果；打扫卫生；读报 ……

你参加活动后的感想：……

要求：要点齐全，80词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,

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Yours,

Wang Wei

【答案】I went to an old people’s home with some volunteers. We did many things for the old people. We brought them some flowers and fresh fruit. And we helped clean their rooms. After that, some of us sang songs and danced for them. Some of us read newspapers to them. Some of us talked with them. How happy they were!

I think this activity is very meaningful. I learned that we should care for the old around us every day.

Yours,

Wang Wei

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇要求介绍自己的公益活动。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

8．Linda暑假过得很开心。假如你是Linda，请根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文讲述一下是如何度过暑假的。

要点提示：

1. 去海南旅游，沙滩上玩；

2. 做自己喜欢的事情，比如：逛书店买书；

3. 和朋友踢足球，进行体育锻炼；

4. 每天早上读英语，上午安排两个小时做作业。

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【答案】I enjoyed my summer vacation. I traveled to Hainan with my parents and we had fun on the beach. During the vacation I often went to my favorite bookstore and bought many interesting books. Sometimes I played soccer with my friends in the afternoon. Playing sport could keep us healthy. I also spent some time in studying. Every morning I read English, and from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. I did my homework.

【解析】

【详解】

本篇作文属于材料作文，主要表达如何度过暑假。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用了时态语态和主谓一致，特别是一些亮点词句，如enjoy, have fun, playing sports could keep us healthy, also等，增加了逻辑关系，增强了上下文的意思连贯性，用词准确，句子通顺。

【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．根据汉语提示，用英语写一篇日记。80个单词左右。

提示：4月11日，星期六，天气晴朗，你与父母一起乘汽车去青岛旅游。你们去了海滩、参观了博物馆和五一广场(square)、购物、品尝海鲜(seafood)。虽然很累，但玩得很高兴。

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【答案】例文：

Saturday April 11th  Sunny

It was a fine day. I took a trip to Qingdao with my parents. We got there by bus. Qingdao is a nice city. During our trip, we went to the beach and swam in the sea. We ate seafood and bought lots of gifts. We also visited the museum and Wuyi Square. Although we were all tired, we felt very happy. What a great day we had.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按日记格式写：左上角时间，右上角天气。要点较多，要都囊括于其中。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景；描述故事时，场景应描写细致；要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。