人教版（2019）必修第一册书面表达写作技巧
展开如何用英语写旅行计划
【写作任务】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jim给你发来电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容给他回一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Hua, How time flies! I’m planning to go on a trip to Hangzhou or Wuhan next month. Could you get around with me if possible? By the way, could you please help me make travel plans? I’m longing for your early reply. Sincerely, Jim |
注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear from you! _________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求给英国笔友Jim回复一封电子邮件介绍旅行计划。旅行计划通常包括旅行的重要景点以及旅行安排等。
介绍旅行计划多用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。
二、谋篇布局
本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需写出正文部分即可。正文可分为三部分：
第一部分：表明写信目的；
第二部分：具体介绍旅行计划；
第三部分：表达期待。
三、组织语言
第一部分：表明写信目的。
★ I’m eager to take on the exciting trip to ... with you soon.
★ I’m happy / longing to take on the exciting trip with you.
★ I can’t wait to travel with you in ...
★ I’m writing to tell you about the travel plans.
★ I’m writing to share the travel plans with you.
★ I’m writing to introduce the travel arrangements to you.
第二部分：具体介绍旅行计划。
★ I plan a four-day trip, which starts on ...
★ On the first day, ... The next day, ... The last day, ...
★ After arriving there by ..., we can visit ...
★ The second day will be spent at ...
★ On the last day, we can go on / make a tour around the city ...
★ I prefer to go there by ... because ...
★ We can set off ... and come back on ... as scheduled.
★ Compared with ..., travelling by ... can be more comfortable and relaxing.
★ We’d better wear ... and take ... in case ...
第三部分：表达期待。
★ I’m looking forward to our dream trip / your coming.
★ If you have better ideas, let me know.
★ I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.
★ I can’t wait for the holidays to come and meet you.
★ I’m sure you’ll have a good time in ...
【范文欣赏一】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear from you! I’m eager to take on the exciting trip to Hangzhou with you soon. I’m writing to tell you about the travel plans.
After arriving there by high-speed train, we can visit the West Lake to see its natural beauty, which was listed as a world cultural heritage site by UNESCO in 2011. On the second day, we will go to the Longjing Village, where we can join the locals to pick tea, make tea and have a taste of Longjing Tea. On the last day, we can go on a tour around the city to enjoy delicious food like Dongpo Meat and buy something made of silk. Sounds great?
If you have better ideas, let me know. I’m looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文欣赏二】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear from you! I can’t wait to travel with you in Wuhan. I’m writing to share the travel plans with you.
We’ll set off to Wuhan by train, and our first destination will be Hubei Provincial Museum, where we can learn about some local history. The second day will be spent at the Yellow Crane Tower, which is famous in Chinese poems. From the top, you will get a good view of the city. On the last day, we can’t miss the largest city lake in China — the East Lake. It is popular and attracts a great number of visitors each year. There we can enjoy the beautiful scenery while walking or jogging.
I’m sure you’ll have a good time in Wuhan.
Yours,
Li Hua
