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第一种：纠结打架型
人在矛盾的时候，内心就像有两个小人在打架，相信打架都有这个情绪体验。在读后续写中，把这种心理状态表达出来，会让文章显得更加传神。
摘选一：我没主意：把它放了吧，它准是死；养着它吧，家里没有笼子。我捧着它，好像世界上一切的生命都在我掌中似的。我不知怎样才好。——老舍《小麻雀》
摘选二：他痛苦地吐了一口气。他低声对自己说：“我不能再这样做！”“那么你要怎样呢？你有胆量么？你这个老好人！”马上就有一个声音在他的耳边反问道。……他立刻就知道这是他自己在讲话。他气恼地再说：“为什么没有胆量呢？难道我就永远是个老好人吗？” ——巴金《寒夜》
举例：（2016年10月浙江卷 夫妻吵架迷路）
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
续写场景节选：The sight f the dark frest sent a wave f terrr running thrugh her heart. “Shuld I give up trying?” A vice whispered in her ear. “N. Only a cward des nthing but wait,” anther vice cuntered suddenly.
看到黑暗的森林，她的心头。“我应该放弃尝试吗？”有一个声音在她耳边耳语。不只有懦夫才什么也不等。”另一个声音突然反驳道。
练习：
1.（2020年7月浙江卷 熊口逃生）A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
请描写我脑子里的两个小人，一个说跑，一个说斗：
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2.( 2018年6月浙江卷) We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
请描写我脑子里的两个小人，一个说等待，一个说寻找出路：
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答案：
The sight f its gaping muth sent a wave f terrr running thrugh my heart. “Shuld I run away?” A nervus vice eched in my head. “Just fight it r yu wuldn’t run that far.” Anther vice warned suddenly.
看到它张大的嘴巴，一股恐惧的浪潮涌上了我的心头。“我应该逃跑吗？”一个紧张的声音在我的脑海里回响。“只要战斗，否则你就不会跑得那么远。”另一个声音突然警告道。
2. Like a bat lst n the sea, we lked arund aimlessly, surrund by a wall f silence. “Shuld we wait here fr help?” I thught nervusly. “That is n better than a cward.” A vice sneered in my head.
就像一艘迷失在海上的船，我们漫无目的地环顾四周，周围是一堵寂静的墙。“我们应该在这里等帮助吗？”我紧张地想。“这并不比像个懦夫好。”一个声音在我的脑海里冷笑着。
第二种：大锅炖型
人的情绪表现有时候是复杂的，并不是单一的。如果能把这种混合的情绪表现出来，那么心理描写就显得非常生动。在读后续写中，惊讶感激之中，往往伴随着比较复杂的情绪。
摘选一：他两手捂着脸，既不敢相信他真的得到了幸福，担心这件侥幸的事会给他带来新的不幸，又极力想在手掌的黑暗中细细地享受这种新奇的感情。——张贤亮《灵与肉》
摘选二：我紧紧地而又久久地握住妻的手，默默地注视着那温柔的泪水，顺着伊的脸颊，缓缓流下。——这是辛酸的泪，也是幸福的泪。此时此刻，又觉得，什么言语，都似乎是多余的了。——田野《离合悲欢的三天》
举例：（2016年10月浙江卷）
It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
续写：… Jane hugged her husband tightly, tears f regret and gratitude in eyes. Hardly culd she believe she was saved eventually. Meanwhile, hw eagerly she wanted the time with Jack t last as lng as it culd!
简紧紧地拥抱着她的丈夫，眼睛里充满了遗憾和感激的泪水。她几乎不敢相信自己最终还是得救了。与此同时，她多么急切地希望和杰克在一起的时间尽可能多长！
…Jane tk his hand and kept her eyes glued t his face in silence, her tears rlling dwn her cheeks slwly — tears regret, f gratitude. That was when she felt nthing can express her lve.
简握住他的手，眼睛默默地盯着他的脸，眼泪慢慢地顺着脸颊滑落——眼泪遗憾，感激。那时，她觉得没有什么能表达她的爱。
练习：
1. （2020年7月浙江卷）
Paragraph 2: At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
请续写我拍摄的一幕感人照片，同时感到为熊的饥饿感到遗憾。
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2.（2020年1月浙江卷）
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.
请续写男孩对小狗的疼爱和感激。
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答案：
…She pressed the buttn f her camera just in time t recrd the mst precius scene. Hardly culd she believe what she had experience. Meanwhile, she culdn’t help feeling srry fr the hunger the bear suffered.
她按下了相机的按钮，及时录下了最珍贵的场景。她简直不敢相信自己的经历。与此同时，她也忍不住为这只熊所遭受的饥饿感到难过。
2. …He nestled the little dg in his arms, smiles spreading acrss his face — fr the cmpany it kept Pppy, fr the warmth it brught t the huse. At the mment, he felt any language was unnecessary.
他把小狗依偎在怀里，脸上露出了微笑——因为陪伴着Pppy，因为它给房子带来的温暖。此刻，他觉得任何语言都没有必要。
模拟演练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Many years ag, when I was fresh ut f schl and wrking in Denver, I was driving t my parents' hme in Missuri fr Christmas. I stpped at a gas statin(加油站)abut 50 miles frm Oklahma City, where I was planning t stp and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hell t an lder cuple wh were als paying fr gas.
I tk ff, but had gne nly a few miles when black smke pured frm the back f my car. I stpped and wndered what I shuld d. A car pulled up behind me. It was the cuple I had spken t at the gas statin. They said they wuld take me t my friend's .We chatted n the way int the city, and when I gt ut f the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrte him and his wife a thank-yu nte fr helping me. Sn afterward, I received a Christmas present frm them. Their nte that came with it said that helping me had made their hlidays meaningful.
Years later, I drve t a meeting in a nearby twn in the mrning. In late afternn I returned t my car and fund that I'd left the lights n all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I nticed that the Friendly Frd dealership - a shp selling cars - was right next dr. I walked ver and fund tw salesmen in the shwrm.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me.
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it.
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翻译小练习：
1. 我立刻认出了他。这两个推销员是老两口，他们是Friendly Frd经销商的老板。
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2. “嘿，是你！你帮过我，记得吗？“我激动地对他们说。
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3. “是的，我们有！“老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。
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4. 你知道吗，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
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5. 他们再一次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不接受我的钱。
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6. 他们告诉我，刚开始经营这家店的时候，从来没有人抽时间给他们写信说声谢谢，但现在他们收到的感谢信越来越多，他们真的很高兴。
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参考答案：
1. 我立刻认出了他。这两个推销员是老两口，他们是Friendly Frd经销商的老板。
I recgnized him at nce. The tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership.
2. “嘿，是你！你帮过我，记得吗？“我激动地对他们说。
“Hey, it’s yu! Yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly.
3. “是的，我们有！“老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。
“Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple.
4. 你知道吗，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
Yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
5. 他们再一次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不接受我的钱。
They slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney.
6. 他们告诉我，刚开始经营这家店的时候，从来没有人抽时间给他们写信说声谢谢，但现在他们收到的感谢信越来越多，他们真的很高兴。
They tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
参考范文：
Paragraph 1
I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me. I recgnized him at nce. The tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership. “Hey, it’s yu! Yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly. Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple. Yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
Paragraph 2
After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it. They slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney. They tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
模拟演练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dawn came slwly. A shaft f sunlight reached int the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal f the bmb shine. The bys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried nt t lk at the huge shape f the bmb that appeared ver them.
Harry suddenly pened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and bth bys strained their ears. They culd hear a man talking sftly. The vice seemed a lng way ff. Jack went t shut, but Harry clamped his hand ver Jack's muth. "Dn't shut/' he hissed（发出嘘声），"We'll be blwn int pieces."
The sft vice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the tp f crater. He was talking t a muthpiece（话筒）arund his neck. He stpped talking when he saw the bys. "What the..." he said, “Wh are yu?" Hairy fund his vice, "Jack and Harry Brwn." "Is that dg dead?" asked the captain. “N： he’s sleeping," said Harry.
The captain spke int the muthpiece again, “Sergeant（中士）," he said, stpped and tk a breath befre he went n. “There are tw kids and a dg dwn here." Then the captain cruched dwn and stared clsely at the bmb. “Dn't mve and dn't speak," he said, "r we'll all g up." He began talking quietly t his sergeant.
Jack and Harry were t stiff t mve. They held Raf, the dg, tightly and waited. Anther man appeared at the tp f the crater. "I thught s," he said, "It's them all right?"
"It’s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lwered the ladder int the lse earth next t the tw bys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held n at the tp. Old Tin Hat started t cme dwn the ladder very slwly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bttm, and with ne mvement, he lifted Jack n his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed t take an age.
Paragraph 1:
With a sudden fall f earth, Old Tin Hat frze halfway up.
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Old Tin Hat pulled Harry nt his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
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翻译小练习：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
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2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
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3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
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4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
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5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
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6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
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7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
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8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
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9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
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10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
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11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。
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参考答案：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
Harry gasped with terrr but luckily the ladder was steady.
2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
Old Tin Hat started up again. N sner had he gt t the tp than hands reached ut and Jack disappeared.
3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
Again dwn the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiusly.
4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
Eventually, he jined Harry and Raf.
5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
Thugh he suggested that dg went last, Harry insisted that they wuld be tgether.
6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
Old Tin Hat started t climb the ladder fr the secnd time.
7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
The weight f the by and the dg made him gasp.
8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
With great effrts, they came t the tp f the crater.
9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
Everybdy was rescued! A faint cheer rse frm a lng way ff.
10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
A grup f peple crwded behind the barrier.
11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。
And there was, “Mm!” Hurry rushed ver, hugging his mm tightly. Later, news came that the bmb was taken away, safe.
参考范文：
With a sudden fall f earth, Old Tin Hat frze halfway up.
Harry gasped with terrr but luckily the ladder was steady. Old Tin Hat started up again. N sner had he gt t the tp than hands reached ut and Jack disappeared. Again dwn the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiusly. Eventually, he jined Harry and Raf. Thugh he suggested that dg went last, Harry insisted that they wuld be tgether.
Old Tin Hat pulled Harry nt his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
Old Tin Hat started t climb the ladder fr the secnd time. The weight f the by and the dg made him gasp. With great effrts, they came t the tp f the crater. Everybdy was rescued! A faint cheer rse frm a lng way ff. A grup f peple crwded behind the barrier. And there was, “Mm! Hurry rushed ver, hugging his mm tightly. Later, news came that the bmb was taken away, safe.
第一种：纠结打架型
人在矛盾的时候，内心就像有两个小人在打架，相信打架都有这个情绪体验。在读后续写中，把这种心理状态表达出来，会让文章显得更加传神。
摘选一：我没主意：把它放了吧，它准是死；养着它吧，家里没有笼子。我捧着它，好像世界上一切的生命都在我掌中似的。我不知怎样才好。——老舍《小麻雀》
摘选二：他痛苦地吐了一口气。他低声对自己说：“我不能再这样做！”“那么你要怎样呢？你有胆量么？你这个老好人！”马上就有一个声音在他的耳边反问道。……他立刻就知道这是他自己在讲话。他气恼地再说：“为什么没有胆量呢？难道我就永远是个老好人吗？” ——巴金《寒夜》
举例：（2016年10月浙江卷 夫妻吵架迷路）
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
续写场景节选：The sight f the dark frest sent a wave f terrr running thrugh her heart. “Shuld I give up trying?” A vice whispered in her ear. “N. Only a cward des nthing but wait,” anther vice cuntered suddenly.
看到黑暗的森林，她的心头。“我应该放弃尝试吗？”有一个声音在她耳边耳语。不只有懦夫才什么也不等。”另一个声音突然反驳道。
练习：
1.（2020年7月浙江卷 熊口逃生）A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
请描写我脑子里的两个小人，一个说跑，一个说斗：
___________________________________________________________
2.( 2018年6月浙江卷) We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
请描写我脑子里的两个小人，一个说等待，一个说寻找出路：
___________________________________________________________
答案：
The sight f its gaping muth sent a wave f terrr running thrugh my heart. “Shuld I run away?” A nervus vice eched in my head. “Just fight it r yu wuldn’t run that far.” Anther vice warned suddenly.
看到它张大的嘴巴，一股恐惧的浪潮涌上了我的心头。“我应该逃跑吗？”一个紧张的声音在我的脑海里回响。“只要战斗，否则你就不会跑得那么远。”另一个声音突然警告道。
2. Like a bat lst n the sea, we lked arund aimlessly, surrund by a wall f silence. “Shuld we wait here fr help?” I thught nervusly. “That is n better than a cward.” A vice sneered in my head.
就像一艘迷失在海上的船，我们漫无目的地环顾四周，周围是一堵寂静的墙。“我们应该在这里等帮助吗？”我紧张地想。“这并不比像个懦夫好。”一个声音在我的脑海里冷笑着。
第二种：大锅炖型
人的情绪表现有时候是复杂的，并不是单一的。如果能把这种混合的情绪表现出来，那么心理描写就显得非常生动。在读后续写中，惊讶感激之中，往往伴随着比较复杂的情绪。
摘选一：他两手捂着脸，既不敢相信他真的得到了幸福，担心这件侥幸的事会给他带来新的不幸，又极力想在手掌的黑暗中细细地享受这种新奇的感情。——张贤亮《灵与肉》
摘选二：我紧紧地而又久久地握住妻的手，默默地注视着那温柔的泪水，顺着伊的脸颊，缓缓流下。——这是辛酸的泪，也是幸福的泪。此时此刻，又觉得，什么言语，都似乎是多余的了。——田野《离合悲欢的三天》
举例：（2016年10月浙江卷）
It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
续写：… Jane hugged her husband tightly, tears f regret and gratitude in eyes. Hardly culd she believe she was saved eventually. Meanwhile, hw eagerly she wanted the time with Jack t last as lng as it culd!
简紧紧地拥抱着她的丈夫，眼睛里充满了遗憾和感激的泪水。她几乎不敢相信自己最终还是得救了。与此同时，她多么急切地希望和杰克在一起的时间尽可能多长！
…Jane tk his hand and kept her eyes glued t his face in silence, her tears rlling dwn her cheeks slwly — tears regret, f gratitude. That was when she felt nthing can express her lve.
简握住他的手，眼睛默默地盯着他的脸，眼泪慢慢地顺着脸颊滑落——眼泪遗憾，感激。那时，她觉得没有什么能表达她的爱。
练习：
1. （2020年7月浙江卷）
Paragraph 2: At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
请续写我拍摄的一幕感人照片，同时感到为熊的饥饿感到遗憾。
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2.（2020年1月浙江卷）
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.
请续写男孩对小狗的疼爱和感激。
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答案：
…She pressed the buttn f her camera just in time t recrd the mst precius scene. Hardly culd she believe what she had experience. Meanwhile, she culdn’t help feeling srry fr the hunger the bear suffered.
她按下了相机的按钮，及时录下了最珍贵的场景。她简直不敢相信自己的经历。与此同时，她也忍不住为这只熊所遭受的饥饿感到难过。
2. …He nestled the little dg in his arms, smiles spreading acrss his face — fr the cmpany it kept Pppy, fr the warmth it brught t the huse. At the mment, he felt any language was unnecessary.
他把小狗依偎在怀里，脸上露出了微笑——因为陪伴着Pppy，因为它给房子带来的温暖。此刻，他觉得任何语言都没有必要。
模拟演练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Many years ag, when I was fresh ut f schl and wrking in Denver, I was driving t my parents' hme in Missuri fr Christmas. I stpped at a gas statin(加油站)abut 50 miles frm Oklahma City, where I was planning t stp and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hell t an lder cuple wh were als paying fr gas.
I tk ff, but had gne nly a few miles when black smke pured frm the back f my car. I stpped and wndered what I shuld d. A car pulled up behind me. It was the cuple I had spken t at the gas statin. They said they wuld take me t my friend's .We chatted n the way int the city, and when I gt ut f the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrte him and his wife a thank-yu nte fr helping me. Sn afterward, I received a Christmas present frm them. Their nte that came with it said that helping me had made their hlidays meaningful.
Years later, I drve t a meeting in a nearby twn in the mrning. In late afternn I returned t my car and fund that I'd left the lights n all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I nticed that the Friendly Frd dealership - a shp selling cars - was right next dr. I walked ver and fund tw salesmen in the shwrm.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me.
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it.
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翻译小练习：
1. 我立刻认出了他。这两个推销员是老两口，他们是Friendly Frd经销商的老板。
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2. “嘿，是你！你帮过我，记得吗？“我激动地对他们说。
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3. “是的，我们有！“老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。
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4. 你知道吗，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
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5. 他们再一次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不接受我的钱。
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6. 他们告诉我，刚开始经营这家店的时候，从来没有人抽时间给他们写信说声谢谢，但现在他们收到的感谢信越来越多，他们真的很高兴。
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参考答案：
1. 我立刻认出了他。这两个推销员是老两口，他们是Friendly Frd经销商的老板。
I recgnized him at nce. The tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership.
2. “嘿，是你！你帮过我，记得吗？“我激动地对他们说。
“Hey, it’s yu! Yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly.
3. “是的，我们有！“老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。
“Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple.
4. 你知道吗，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
Yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
5. 他们再一次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不接受我的钱。
They slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney.
6. 他们告诉我，刚开始经营这家店的时候，从来没有人抽时间给他们写信说声谢谢，但现在他们收到的感谢信越来越多，他们真的很高兴。
They tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
参考范文：
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I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me. I recgnized him at nce. The tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership. “Hey, it’s yu! Yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly. Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple. Yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it. They slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney. They tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
模拟演练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dawn came slwly. A shaft f sunlight reached int the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal f the bmb shine. The bys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried nt t lk at the huge shape f the bmb that appeared ver them.
Harry suddenly pened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and bth bys strained their ears. They culd hear a man talking sftly. The vice seemed a lng way ff. Jack went t shut, but Harry clamped his hand ver Jack's muth. "Dn't shut/' he hissed（发出嘘声），"We'll be blwn int pieces."
The sft vice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the tp f crater. He was talking t a muthpiece（话筒）arund his neck. He stpped talking when he saw the bys. "What the..." he said, “Wh are yu?" Hairy fund his vice, "Jack and Harry Brwn." "Is that dg dead?" asked the captain. “N： he’s sleeping," said Harry.
The captain spke int the muthpiece again, “Sergeant（中士）," he said, stpped and tk a breath befre he went n. “There are tw kids and a dg dwn here." Then the captain cruched dwn and stared clsely at the bmb. “Dn't mve and dn't speak," he said, "r we'll all g up." He began talking quietly t his sergeant.
Jack and Harry were t stiff t mve. They held Raf, the dg, tightly and waited. Anther man appeared at the tp f the crater. "I thught s," he said, "It's them all right?"
"It’s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lwered the ladder int the lse earth next t the tw bys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held n at the tp. Old Tin Hat started t cme dwn the ladder very slwly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bttm, and with ne mvement, he lifted Jack n his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed t take an age.
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With a sudden fall f earth, Old Tin Hat frze halfway up.
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Old Tin Hat pulled Harry nt his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
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翻译小练习：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
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2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
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3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
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4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
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5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
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6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
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7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
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8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
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9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
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10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
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11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。
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参考答案：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
Harry gasped with terrr but luckily the ladder was steady.
2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
Old Tin Hat started up again. N sner had he gt t the tp than hands reached ut and Jack disappeared.
3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
Again dwn the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiusly.
4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
Eventually, he jined Harry and Raf.
5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
Thugh he suggested that dg went last, Harry insisted that they wuld be tgether.
6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
Old Tin Hat started t climb the ladder fr the secnd time.
7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
The weight f the by and the dg made him gasp.
8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
With great effrts, they came t the tp f the crater.
9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
Everybdy was rescued! A faint cheer rse frm a lng way ff.
10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
A grup f peple crwded behind the barrier.
11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。
And there was, “Mm!” Hurry rushed ver, hugging his mm tightly. Later, news came that the bmb was taken away, safe.
参考范文：
With a sudden fall f earth, Old Tin Hat frze halfway up.
Harry gasped with terrr but luckily the ladder was steady. Old Tin Hat started up again. N sner had he gt t the tp than hands reached ut and Jack disappeared. Again dwn the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiusly. Eventually, he jined Harry and Raf. Thugh he suggested that dg went last, Harry insisted that they wuld be tgether.
Old Tin Hat pulled Harry nt his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
Old Tin Hat started t climb the ladder fr the secnd time. The weight f the by and the dg made him gasp. With great effrts, they came t the tp f the crater. Everybdy was rescued! A faint cheer rse frm a lng way ff. A grup f peple crwded behind the barrier. And there was, “Mm! Hurry rushed ver, hugging his mm tightly. Later, news came that the bmb was taken away, safe.
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