考向47 应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞-备战2022年高考英语一轮复习考点微专题

考向47 应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞

通知

【背诵满分靓句】

1．May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.

请大家注意，我要宣布一则通知。

2．Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.

请注意，我有重要的事要宣布。

3．Those who are interested in the contest are welcome.

欢迎所有对竞赛感兴趣的人参加。

4．Those who want to take part/join in the activity please sign up at the Student Union.

想参加活动的人请在学生会报名。

5．There are varieties of out­of­class activities in our school, which we can take part in after class.

在我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，我们课后可以参加。

6．You mustn't/Don't miss the chance/opportunity.

毋错过机会。

7．Make sure that you come on time and don't be late.

务必准时到达，不要迟到。

8．Look forward to your participation.

期待你的参与。

【佳作示例】(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)

Notice

①All the students are welcome to watch an English short film (欢迎所有学生观看英文短片) Growing Together, which is related to the history of our school.

②If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, don't miss the opportunity (如果你对我校的历史好奇或关心我校的未来，不要错过这个机会)! As scheduled, the film will be shown in the school hall from 2：00 to 3：00 this Friday afternoon.

We encourage any kind of feedback on the film from our viewers. Hopefully, you can send your advice or opinions to us by the school QQ or WeChat. ③Look forward to your participation (期待你的参与)．

Student Union

演讲/致辞

【背诵满分靓句】

1．My name is ... Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. I shall be speaking about ...

我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……

2．Good morning, everyone! It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on ...

大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。

3．Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls, I'm ... I'm greatly honoured to speak here on behalf of my school. I'm going to talk about ...

女士们、先生们/同学们，我是……很荣幸代表我校在此演讲。我要谈论的是……

4．What really matters/counts is whether you can concentrate on your lessons.

真正要紧的是你是否能全神贯注于你的功课。

5．Above all/Most important of all, you should believe in yourself.

最重要的是，你要相信自己。

6．It played an increasingly important role/part in our life.

它在我们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用。

7．That's all. Thank you for your attention/listening.

我的演讲到此结束，谢谢大家。

8．I hope I have made myself understood.

我希望我已经非常清楚地表达了我的意思。

【佳作示例】

Hello, everyone. ①It's a great honor for me to give my speech on Respecting the Elderly (我很荣幸做关于尊敬老人的演讲)．

What I want to stress firstly is that the elderly deserve our respect due to their efforts in bringing their children up and their contributions to society. If we don't respect them, how can we count on younger people to respect us when we grow old? Consequently, we should try our best to care for them, ②helping them live their lives to the fullest (帮助他们过得更充实)．

Respecting the elderly is a traditional Chinese virtue. Let's keep and develop that virtue together.

Thank you for listening.

【检测训练】

1．假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织美国交换生到孔子庙参观，委托你通知相关事宜, 请你写一则书面通知，要点包括:

1 .集合时间和地点;

2.活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏；

3.预先准备:简要了解孔子文化。

注意:

1.可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

3. 词数:100左右。

参考词汇:1.孔子庙the Confucius Temple   2.木偶戏puppet show

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【参考范文】

Notice

To help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple. I’d like to share with you some details about it.

As scheduled, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate, first visit the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture. Then, we will visit some ancient architecture. After that, we are going to enjoy some puppet shows. You will be greatly impressed with it. Finally, we can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious. By the way, knowing briefly about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.

If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me! Looking forward to seeing you.

The Student Union

【写作分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写一则书面通知，通知交换生参观孔子庙的相关事宜。

【写作步骤】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时

结构：总分

要求：

1. 通知的目的

2. 参观孔子庙的相关事宜

1）集合时间和地点

2）活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏

3）预先准备:简要了解孔子文化

 第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

tell sb. sth./ inform sb. of sth./ plan to do sth./ learn about/ set off/ pay a visit to/ date back to/ set up/ in order to/ have a better understanding of/ be impressed with/ in advance

第三步：连词成句

1.    In order to help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple, which dates back to thousands of years ago.

2.    I want to share with you some details about it.

3.    As planned, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate.

4.    Firstly, we will pay a visit to the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture.

5.    We will visit some ancient architecture, which will leave a deep impression on you.

6.    We are going to enjoy some puppet shows.

7.    You will be greatly impressed with it.

8.    We can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious.

9.    By the way, knowing something about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.

10.    If you have any questions, please contact me!

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

2．元旦即将来临，学生会(The Students’ Union)将举办一场英语晚会(an English Evening party)，现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加，通知包含以下要点：

晚会主题：迎新春，享受英语

时间：12月31日星期五晚上8：00-10：00

节目内容：1.英语短剧(English short-play performances) 演唱英语歌曲，讲英语故事

2.邀请外国学生为我们演唱中国歌曲

其他：1.全体学生要求准时出席；

2.晚会上不要乱扔垃圾（扔垃圾：litter）；

3.欢迎大家光临晚会，玩得开心。

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【参考范文】

NOTICE

In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy your English” is going to be held by our Students’ Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, 31st. December on our school playground. There will be many activities from the students, such as English short-play performances, English story telling and English songs. What’s more, some foreign students will be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party. All students are expected to attend it on time and required not to litter. At last, you are welcome to our English party and we are sure you will enjoy yourself.

The Students’ Union

【写作步骤】

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一则通知；元旦即将来临，学生会(The Students’ Union)将举办一场英语晚会(an English Evening party)，现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加。人称应为第三人称，时态应为一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：theme（主题），Welcome new year and Enjoy your English（迎新春，享受英语），from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, 31st. December（12月31日星期五晚上8：00-10：00），English story telling and English songs（演唱英语歌曲，讲英语故事），on time（准时）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【写作亮点】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in order to，with a theme of，such as，what’s more，at last等等；本文中的被动语态运用地非常自然和流畅，如In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party about/with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy your English”is going to be held by our Students’ Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, 31st. December on our school playground.；What’s more, some foreign students will be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party.；All students are expected to attend it on time and required not to litter.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

3．你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家参加即将举行的书法讲座，内容包括:

1. 讲座目的；

2. 讲座内容；

3. 讲座时间、地点。

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇:书法 calligraphy

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【参考范文】

In order to make us students learn more about Chinese calligraohy and arouse our awareness of protecting the traditional Chinese culture, a lecture about Chinese calligraphy is to be held  in the lecture hall of the Art Building on May 15th this Sunday. It will last two hours from 8 am to 10 am. The lecture will be given by ShenYang , a famous Chinese calligrapher. It mainly consists of three parts: first, listen to a lecture for one and a half hours , then have a discussion for half an hour; after that  observe the calligrapher improvising on the spot.                                                                                                                                                              

All the students are required to  arrive before 7:30 am. Do be punctual!                     

                                                   Students’ Union
 

【写作步骤】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文  通知

时态：一般现在时和一般将来时

结构：分两部分，第一部分发出通知和通知的具体内容， 第二部分希望按时参加。

要点：

1.通知全校学生参加书法讲座，对书法讲座作介绍

①     书法讲座主讲人

②    书法讲座的具体安排：地点 、时间、内容

2.希望准时参加。

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语  ）

in order to ; Chinese traditional culture; Chinese calligraphy; arouse one’s awareness of ;

Chinese characters ; last two hours; consist of ; on the spot; be required; be puncutal

第三步：连词成句

1.In order to arouse our awareness of protecting the traditional Chinese culture.

2.A lecture about Chinese calligraphy is to be held  in the lecture hall of the Art Building on May 15th this Sunday.

3. It mainly consists of three parts

4.You will observe the calligrapher improvising on the spot.

5.All the students are required to arrive before 7:30 am.

8.Do be punctual / on time! 

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides ,moreover ,

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile , in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but , however, although , though , yet , while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as , therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。

4．假如你是英华国际学校学生会主席李华，你在食堂发现有浪费粮食现象，打算向全校师生作"FOOD FOR LIFE"的演讲，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：

1.演讲的主题；

2.演讲的原因；

3.你的倡议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students!

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Thank you for your listening!

【参考范文】

Good morning. respected teachers and dear fellow students!

I feel so honored/privileged to deliver a speech themed at food for life. The past years have witnessed the severeness of food crisis worldwide. However, some of us haven't attached great importance to the issue. Food waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.

Facing the stern reality, I think it's high time that we stopped it. Not only are we expected to raise the awareness of saving food, but also go into action immediately. Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the process of saving food for a better life.

Thank you for your listening!

【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇题为“"FOOD FOR LIFE"”的演讲稿，号召同学们珍惜粮食。

【写作步骤】

1.词汇积累

发表演讲：maker a speech=deliver a speech

重视：pay attention to=attached great importance to

严峻的：serious → severe

行动：take action= go into action

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Food waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.

拓展句：It is especially in canteen that Food waste is still a common sight.

【写作亮点】

[高分句型1]：Not only are we expected to raise the awareness of saving food, but also go into action immediately.这句话运用了倒装句。

[高分句型2]：Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the process of saving food for a better life.这句话运用了强调句。

5．你校正在举办英语周活动，你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点：

1. 有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等；

2. 你的感悟。

注意：1. 词数120左右.

2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone!

It’s a great honor to be here and share something with you.

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【参考范文】

Good morning, everybody!

It's a great honour to be here and share something with you. I still remember how depressed I was after the midterm examination in Senior One, when I had hoped to be still among the best as in junior high school. At that time, my best friend came up and asked me to go to the playground. “You're always the best in my heart，” she comforted me. “There is always a road ahead.” Strangely, my heart was filled with warmth I had never sensed before. I felt much better.

Sharing is part of beauty. Just as a Swedish proverb goes, “Shared joy is a double joy; shared sorrow is half a sorrow.” Sharing can broaden our horizons. As for me, by doing this, I live a happier and more confident life.

Thanks for your attention!

【写作分析】这是一篇以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，这里是有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：It's a great honour todo sth.、share something with、come up、live a happier and more confident life等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：at that time、strangely等，使文章更加连贯完整。全文主要用的是一般现在时，时态做到使用准确。

6．假定你是李华，是新华中学的一名中学生。你班的外教Mr. Johnson即将回国，请你代表同学们在欢送会上致辞，内容包括:

1、对Mr. Johnson致谢；

2、准备了礼物，以留作纪念；

3、希望Mr. Johnson以后常回来看看。

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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【参考范文】

Good afternoon, everyone! Mr. Johnson has been teaching us for one year, and he will have to go back home. We all are very grateful for his devotion. We have witnessed Mr. Johnson working as our English teacher in his particular way. His patience with us students was impressive and his hard work has inspired many students. He is also a warm-hearted man, who spends a lot of his spare time staying in the school`s English Corner answering questions from us students.

To show our gratitude to him, we have made some presents for him ourselves, hoping that seeing these presents, he will remember us. Welcome to China again, Mr. Johnson. Do remember that there are a group of children in China missing you!

Thanks for listening!

【写作步骤】

第一步: 根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一则发言稿，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。关键要点如下：①外教Mr. Johnson即将回国；②对Mr. Johnson致谢；③准备了礼物，以留作纪念；④希望Mr. Johnson以后常回来看看。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：go back home（回国），be grateful for（感谢），presents（礼物），show our gratitude to（表示感谢）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。

【写作亮点】

本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合发言稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。

非限制性定语从句的使用He is also a warm-hearted man, who spends a lot of his spare time staying in the school`s English Corner answering questions from us students.

非谓语动词的使用To show our gratitude to him, we have made some presents for him ourselves, hoping that seeing these presents, he will remember us.