专题8.4 人教（GO FOR IT)七年级英语上册When is your birthday Writing知识点+练习题学案

【话题分析】

本单元写作要求同学们能简单介绍学校的活动安排，包括活动项目和时间安排。

1. 能用基数词，序数词和月份表达年龄和生日；

2. 能用We have…句型介绍活动内容；

3. 能用in，on等介词来表达月份和日期。

【典例】这个学期(this term)你班来了个新同学，名叫Tom，来自美国。昨天是他的生日，他邀请了你和其他几个好朋友参加他的生日聚会。请根据表格内容写一篇短文，介绍一下你的新同学以及昨天的生日聚会情况。

要求：1. 70词左右，可适当发挥。[来源:Z.xx.k.Com]

2. 内容包含表中所有信息。

3. 语句通顺、连贯。

【佳作展示】

I have a new classmate this term. His name is Tom Green. He is from American. He is thin, of medium build and he has curly blonde hair. He is very friendly and outgoing. He likes reading and playing basketball.

Yesterday was his birthday. At 8:00 last night, we went to his home. For dinner, we ate some beef, noodles and dumplings. The food was very delicious. After dinner, we sang, danced happily. Tom sang a beautiful English song. That’s great! When we ate cakes, we said ＂Happy birthday＂ to Tom.

We had a great time last night. I never forget that night.

一、 以读促写。

根据短文内容和所给的汉语或首字母提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。

Dear Eric,

We have some interesting and fun ________ (事情)this term.On ________ (九月) 28th, we have a school ________ (旅行). We will go to Yuliao Beach. We have an a________ festival on October 22nd. I can play the piano in the festival. On November the ________ (第十二), we have a basketball game in our school. Do you like sports? Please come to our school ________ (在)November. In J________ —the first ________ (月)of a year, we have a New Year ________ (聚会).

This is a really ________ (忙碌的) term. I think we will have a good time.

Yours,

Gina

二、 书面表达。

A

根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇40词左右的英语短文介绍你的朋友Paul。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I have a friend. His name is Paul.______________________________________________________________

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B

（一）

假如你的好朋友王明今天过生日，请你用英语给他写张贺卡，注意格式。

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（二）

现在是晚上八点钟，告诉我你的家人他们在干什么。再告诉我在周末他们都干什么。注意时态，句子要连贯。

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C

这个学期(this term)你班来了个新同学，名叫Tom，来自美国。昨天是他的生日，他邀请了你和其他几个好朋友参加他的生日聚会。请根据表格内容写一篇短文，介绍一下你的新同学以及昨天的生日聚会情况。

要求：

1. 70词左右，可适当发挥。

2. 内容包含表中所有信息。

3. 语句通顺、连贯。

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D

你每天的家庭作业都是什么时间完成的？需要父母的帮忙吗？请你结合上面文章的内容，写一篇短文。内容包括：

1. 每天大概花多少时间做作业？

2. 能不能自觉独立地完成自己的作业？

3. 你怎样看待家庭作业？

要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

I often spend nearly two hours to do my homework every day. _______________________________________

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If so, we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

一、 以读促写。

things；September；trip；art；twelfth；in；January；month；party；busy

二、 书面表达。

A

I_have_a_friend. His_name_is_Paul. His birthday is May 28th.He is 14.His telephone number is 592－368. His favorite colors are white and red. He likes rice, eggs and chicken.

B

（一）

To: Wangming,

Happy birthday!

Wish you happy everyday!

From: Jim

（二）

It’s eight o’clock in the evening. My family are all at home. My father is in the reading room. He is reading. My mother is watching TV in the living room. My brother and I are in our bed room. We are doing our homework. On weekends, my father likes to play cards with friends, and my mother likes to go shopping .My brother and I just stay at home. We usually play computer games.

【名师点评】

第一个书面表达是制作生日贺卡，内容比较简单，只要注意格式，再加上一两句祝福的话语即可。第二个书面表达根据要求可知，这是要叙述正在进行的动作和经常的习惯性的动作，因此要注意人称和时态及主谓一致问题。同时要注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这两个书面表达涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。第一个贺卡格式正确，祝福的话语简单明了。第二个书面表达人称、时态使用准确，符合七年级学生的能力要求。建议在学习中注意积累一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

C

I have a new classmate this term. His name is Tom Green. He is from American. He is thin, of medium build [来源:学#科#网]

We had a great time last night. I never forget that night.

【名师点评】

这篇短文要求我们介绍新同学Tom Green及聚会情况。在表格中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容，主要包括五部分。一是姓名；二是外貌；三是性格；四是爱好；五是聚会情况。虽然主要内容已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】

这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者将短文分成三段，介绍了同学Tom Green及聚会情况。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错，如We had a great time last night. I never forget that night.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如He likes reading and playing basketball.等。[来源:Z*xx*k.Com]

D

I often spend nearly two hours doing my homework every day. To be honest, I really don’t like to do so much homework, but I have to. I know it is good for my study. I can do my homework by myself and often do it carefully, but I don’t do it as soon as I get home. Sometimes I watched TV for too long and didn’t finish my homework on time.Then I had to do it till deep night. I think doing homework is necessary, but it can’t take us too long time.

If so, we will feel tired and don’t want to do it carefully.

【名师点评】

这是一篇提纲作文，所给提纲要点清晰，要求明确，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文能够根据写作提示，较好地把阅读文章中与写作相关的内容进行归纳，内容覆盖所有要点，更富有条理。