2020中考英语作文：兴趣爱好 试卷

08 兴趣爱好篇

（一）

假如你是贝贝，你远在澳大利亚的笔友Andrew给你写了一封邮件，告诉了你关于他们读书周的事情，并想了解你的一些情况跟看法．请你根据他的提问，回复一封英文邮件．

注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥．使全文连贯、通顺．

Dear Andrew，

I'm glad you will have a Reading Week．

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I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．

Best wishes.

Beibei

【满分范文】

Dear Andrew，

I′m glad you will have a Reading Week． （引出话题）I think reading is really important because it's really useful．【高分句型一】（我的观点） It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us relaxed．（作用） I usually read for an hour every day． I like reading novels best．高分句型二 And I often borrow books from the school library． （我的做法）I have just finished a book about Robinson． It is a novel about how Robinson successfully survived after spending many years on a little island and finally went back to his family． From him， I learned that whatever we met， we should never give up．（我朗读的书籍及给我的启示）

I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．（希望）

（二）

为深入贯彻习近平总书记关于弘扬中华优秀传统文化的讲话精神，落实立德树人的根本任务，2019年7月15日定西市教育局与定西市语委办联合举办了首届定西中小学生诗词大会。大会的成功举办，在定西市再次掀起了“全民读书”的热潮。请以“Grow up with reading”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文，向《中学生导报》投稿，谈谈你对阅读的看法，并建议大家多读书，读好书。

要求: 1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；

2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；

3. 词数:80-100词左右；

4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。

参考词汇:身心body and mind

【满分范文】

Grow up with reading.

Reading plays an important part in our life. First，reading can open up our eyes. The more we read, the more we know about the outside world. Second, reading can make us cleverer and happier. We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book. Everyone can become cleverer by reading.

However, some students spend most of their time on Internet games instead of reading. As a result, they fall behind others in their schoolwork. This is harmful to them.

I would like to suggest that all of us should do more reading. Let's grow up with reading!

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目要求包含图片里的内容，写出阅读的重要作用，建议大家多读书，读好书等。可以分点写，有条理性。

2.例文点评：例文通过对图片里的内容，写出了阅读的重要作用，建议了大家多读书，读好书等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。

3.高分亮点：词组：plays an important part；open up；a healthy and happy life；become cleverer；instead of；As a result；fall behind等；

句型：Reading plays an important part in our life./The more we read, the more we know about the outside world. /We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book./As a result, they fall behind others in their schoolwork.

【点睛】

书面表达：

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如plays an important part；open up；a healthy and happy life；become cleverer；instead of；As a result；fall behind等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

（三）

假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。

参考词汇：congratulation

祝贺注意事项：

1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Dear Harry,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。  学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。

（1）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；

（2）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援   的帮助等）；

写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。

【参考范文】

Dear Harry,

Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!

I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.

Hoping you will make greater progress.

Yours,

Li Hua

（四）

文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。

内容包括：

1. 简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动；

2. 该课外活动给你带来的收获及感受(交朋友;放松自我)。

写作要求：

1. 词数80词左右；开头已写好，不计入总词数；

2. 文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful

Nowadays after-class activities are becoming more and more important ________________________

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【写作思路】

这是一篇话题作文，让我们写一篇关于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来。写作需要用第一人称，注意各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括：简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动，时态用一般过去时；你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和感受，时态以一般现在时为主和一般将来时为主；最后总结自己的心得体会。

【参考范文】

After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful

Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.

In the volleyball club, I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.

All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.

【名师点评】

高分句型一：I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我习惯放学后打排球。be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事。

高分句型二：And it is also a good way to relax myself. 这也是放松自己的好方法。动词不定式to relax myself用作后置定语。

高分句型三：All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 总之，课外活动使我的生活更加丰富多彩，更有意义。

more colorful and meaningful用作my life的宾语补足语。

（五）

如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括：1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划

写作要求；1.词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.  文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

Dear Mr. Smith,

It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________

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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Smith,

It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you．

My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．

I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

（六）

假设你叫李华，你校英语报正在以“我最喜欢的一天”为题，向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据如下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。

1. 你最喜欢的是星期五；

2. 原因：

(1)这天有你最喜欢上的音乐课(从小就喜欢音乐，音乐老师和音乐课很有趣)；

(2) ……

要求：

(1)所写内容必须包括以上要点和自行补充要点；

(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

(3)内容连贯并进行合理拓展；

(4)100词左右；题目已经写好，不计入总词数。

My Favorite Day

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【写作思路】

本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我最喜欢的一天”为题，根据所给出的内容提示写一篇英语短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称。写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇，句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【参考范文】

My Favorite Day

Everyone has their favorite day． My name is Li Hua．Now let me introduce my favorite day．My favorite day is Friday．Because it has my favorite music class．I have loved music since childhood．I also like my music teacher． Her music class is very interesting．There's a P．E． class on Fridays．I like playing football in PE class．I think it's good for my health．We can also develop friendship through sports．This is also a time which I can spend together with my parents．So I think this is the best day of the week and I love it best．

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅。

（七）

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：

注意：

    1. 词数70左右；

    2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

    3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；

    4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

参考词汇：

  高大健壮tall and strong      运动do sports     听音乐listen to music

  最喜欢的科目favourite subject  风趣幽默funny and humorous

  乐于做某事be ready to do sth.   相处get on with

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes

Yours,

 Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you．He is a 16-year-old boy．He has round face ，black  hair and bright eyes．He is tall and strong．He likes smiling very much．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍男同学的外貌及特征．）He likes doingh sports．reading and  listening to music．His  favourite subject is English ．because he thinks it is very interesting．He is humorous and funny．He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others． 【要点二，介绍同学的性格．】He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His  favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．（高分句型二） He likes winter very much， because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating ，making snowman and so on．【要点三，介绍同学的喜好．】 His dream is becoming an English teacher，because he wants his students to get good grades．【要点四，介绍同学的理想．】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿．）

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

高分句型一

He likes smiling very much．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语very much "非常，很"．此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑．"

注意like后加doing

高分句型二

He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语spend

some time （in）doing sth "花时间做某事"．短语take part in "参加"．此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动．"

（八）

临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是Rainbow小组的组长zhangHong,请你为你的组员Li Ming 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告。

内容包括：1. 他的爱好；

          2. 他的优点(两条)；

          3. 他的缺点或存在的问题；

          4. 你对他的建议(两条)。

要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

      2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等；

      3. 词数：不少于80 词 (所给内容不计入总词数)。

Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow.

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【参考范文】

Li Ming is a member of my team called Rainbow． Generally speaking， he is a warm- hearted and outgoing boy． He can also get on well with teachers and classmates． In his spare time， he likes reading books on history． So he knows a lot of knowledge about history．（他的爱好和优点）

But as a famous saying goes， "Every coin has two sides "，sometimes he doesn't work hard enough on his lessons．（他的缺点或存在的问题）

I advise him to spend more time on the subjects from now on．What's more， he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress．【高分句型一】（给他的建议）

I'm sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon．【高分句型二】（总结全文）

【名师点评】

【高分句型一】

What's more， he had better answer questions in class actively so that he can make great progress．更重要的是，他最好在课堂上积极回答问题，这样他才能取得很大的进步．

had better do sth最好做某事；so that引导目的状语从句．

【高分句型二】

I'm sure if he can try hard to improve himself who will be an excellent student soon．我相信如果他能努力提高自己，他很快就会成为一名优秀的学生．if引导条件状语从句．

（九）

第四届“丝绸之路”宁夏国际马拉松赛将于2020年5月举行。假定你叫李华，你想成为本届马拉松赛的一名志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：

1.个人优势：擅长英语，性格开朗，做事认真，爱好运动。（至少再补充两点）

2.个人承诺：尽力提供优质服务。

注意：

1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：volunteer志愿者

Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Hua. I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Road” International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020. _____________________________________________________________________________________

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I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly.

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Hua．I'm very glad that the 4h "Silk Road" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May，2020．I'd like to be a volunteer．

I'm a girl of 15，a middle school student．First of all，I do well in English．【高分句型一】I'm outgoing．I take everything seriously．Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before．【高分句型二】What's more，I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people．（个人优势）I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race．I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer．（个人承诺）

I'm looking forward to your early reply．

Yours truly，

Li Hua

【名师点评】

【高分句型一】

First of all，I do well in English．首先，我的英语很好．

First of all首先

do well in在……某方面干得好

【高分句型二】

Besides，I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before．此外，我对体育感兴趣，我曾经是一名志愿者．

 be  interested in 对…有兴趣

（十）

假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以"梦想职业体验"为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。

内容包括：1. 个人信息与兴趣爱好；

          2. 梦想职业与个人计划。

写作要求：1. 词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

          2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

Dear Mr. Smith,

It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．

Best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Smith,

It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.（开篇点明题意）

My name is Li Hua. I like reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school （高分句型一）．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp ，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance（高分句型二）．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．（从自己的个人信息和兴趣爱好出发进行介绍自己）

I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．（结尾给出期望）

Best wishes!

（十一）

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：

注意：

    1. 词数70左右；

    2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

    3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；

    4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

参考词汇：

  高大健壮tall and strong      运动do sports     听音乐listen to music

  最喜欢的科目favorite subject  风趣幽默funny and humorous

  乐于做某事be ready to do sth.   相处get on with

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes

Yours,

 Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. He is a 16-year-old boy. He has round face, black hair and bright eyes. He is tall and strong. He likes smiling very much.（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍男同学的外貌及特征）He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He is humorous and funny. He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others. 【要点二，介绍同学的性格】  He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.（高分句型二） He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating, making snowman and so on.【要点三，介绍同学的喜好】 His dream is becoming an English teacher, because he wants his students to get good grades. 【要点四，介绍同学的理想】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿）

Yours,

 Li Hua

【名师点评】

【高分句型一】

 He likes smiling very much．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语very much "非常，很"．此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑。"

注意like后加doing

【高分句型二】

He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．此句是一般现在时的陈述句。运用短语spend some time （in）doing sth "花时间做某事"。短语take part in "参加"，此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动。"