2020中考英语作文：人生哲理 试卷

07人生哲理篇
（一）
英雄源于平凡，在新冠肺炎疫情发生期间涌现出了很多平凡而伟大的英雄，李华的妈妈就 是其中之一，她是一位援鄂医疗队的医生．假如你是李华，请根据以下信息及提示，以"Mum is my hero" 为题完成一篇学校"战疫情"主题征文．
基本情况
1． 医生，40多岁，工作15年．
2． 瘦高个，长发，微笑．
3． 善良，热心…
援鄂行动
1． 面对危险，主动请战，剪短头发．
2． 严谨工作，救治病人，带去希望．
3． 每天工作超过11小时，奋战了一个月．
对我的影响
1． 妈妈微信告诉我……
2． 我为妈妈感到骄傲，……
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头己给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
Mum is my hero
My mum is a doctor．________________________________________________________________
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After hearing of the outbreak of novel Corona﹣virus， my mum offered to join the medical team assisting Wuhan．________________________________________________________________________
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During the stay in Wuhan，my mum sometimes chatted with me on WeChat．_____________________
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【满分范文】
Mum is my hero
My mum is a doctor． She is in her forties and has worked in People's Hospital for fifteen years．My mum is tall and slim and smiles often． She's kind and warm﹣hearted and she often helps the sick in our community．（基本情况）
After hearing of the outbreak of novel Corona﹣virus， my mum offered to join the medical team assisting Wuhan to work better and save time， she even had her long hair cut short．【高分句型一】 In the past month， she worked hard and carefully． She worked for over eleven hours a day and did whatever she could to help the sick． All her patients belied in her because she not only saved their lives but also took them the hope．（援鄂行动）
During the stay in Wuhan， my mum sometimes chatted with me on WeChat． She told me not to worry about her and it was her duty to save lives．【高分句型二】 She is my hero and I hope to be an excellent doctor like her when I grow up．（对我的影响）
（二）
亲爱的同学，假如你是 Alex， 初中生活即将结束，你所向往的高中生活即将来临．由于疫情（epidemic situation） 原因，你将代表（represent） 初三毕业生，做一个网络直播演讲．
请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿．
（1）对初中三年学习生活的总结（至少三个方面）
（2）对老师、同学及父母的感谢，并简要说明原因
（3）谈谈你对未来的梦想和肩负的社会责任，以及你得如何去实现
要求：1．文章语句通顺，句式多样．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校和班级．
4．词数：100词左右．
Dear ladies and gentlemen，
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That's all for my speech． Thank you for your attention!
【满分范文】
Dear ladies and gentlemen，
It's my honor to make a speech at the graduating ceremony．【高分句型一】（点题）
It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school．Our school is very beautiful．We have colourful activities every term．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．【高分句型二】We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years．（对初中三年学习生活的总结）
We should thank our teachers，our parents and our classmates．The first group is my classmates．We've worked hard together and we've even shared some difficult times together．The second group is our parents．I thank you for making a home where I feel both safe and relaxed．I also thank you for your help with my homework．The third group is our teachers．We can never pay you back for your kindness，your patience，and gift of knowledge which you have offered us．（对老师、同学、父母的感谢以及原因）
In the future， I want to be a teacher to help more people in need．I will study hard and realize this dream as soon as possible．（未来梦想以及如何实现）
That's all for my speech． Thank you for your attention!
（三）
礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：1) When should we say “thank you” at home?
2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?
3) ...
要求：1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。
2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3) 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇：wash, encourage, open
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us. __________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求介绍我们在家和在学校怎么做个有礼貌的人。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
重点短语和句型：say"thank you"to sb 对某人说"谢谢"，it's+形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说怎么样，help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，as often as possible尽可能经常的。
【满分范文】
When to Say Thank You
It's polite to say "thank you" when others help us or say something kind to us. Being polite is a good tradition in our country. Nobody likes a person who is impolite. It's important for us to be polite. We should say "thank you" to parents when they cook for us. We should say "thank you" when they wash clothes for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out questions, we should say "thank you" to them. When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say "thank you". When someone opens the door for us, we should say "thank you". We should say "thank you"as often as possible. If everyone is polite to others, the world will be more and more beautiful.
【名师点评】
如果想在写作方面拿到高分，请大家关注以下几个方面：
1. 务必保持卷面整洁，书写清晰，阅卷老师的第一印象极为重要。
2. 认真审题（确定体裁，格式，人称，时态）-列出提纲（把所要表达的内容按一定顺序列成若干条。）-打草稿-修改-定稿的写作流程。
3. 学会用英语思维表达，适当使用增强连贯性的连接词，好词、好句的积累，扩句练习和改错练习，学以致用。
4. 加强练习，多写多练，学会升级词汇，不用重复句型，注重从句的使用，使句子在写对的基础上，再写好、写优美。
（四）
Write a review（评论） of the following story in about 120 words． The review has to include the following points．（阅读下面的故事，请根据下面的提示，写出一篇约120词的评论）．
（1）The title of your review．（你撰写的评论的标题．）
（2）Your idea（s）， examples and the reason（s） for unhappiness and happiness in the story．（你归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因．）
（3）Your idea（s） of happiness， examples for happiness in your daily life．（归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明．）
（4）Your conclusion about happiness．（关于幸福的结论．）
（5）The words you may use．（你可能用到的词） be satisfied with（对……满意） desire n．欲望 contentment 知足 the key（关键） to happiness．
A long time ago， in a rich and beautiful country， there lived an unhappy king． He slept badly and didn't feel like eating． He often cried for no reason． This made the queen and his people worried． So they called a doctor to examine him．But he found nothing wrong with his body．He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear．That would make him happy．
The prime minister was called to the palace． But when they explained the king's situation to him， he said，"Although I have a lot of power， it doesn't make me happy． I'm always worried about losing my power．"
Then the king's banker came to say， I'm afraid I'm not happy either． I have a lot of wealth， but I'm always worried about losing money． Someone tries to steal my money． Next， the palace singer was called to say， "I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others． I can't be free．"
Finally， the top general was told to go out to find a happy man． He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone． Everyone seemed to have their own problems， and no one was truly happy． Just as he wanted to give up． he saw a poor man on the street． He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself． The general went to him and said，"What makes you so happy？ You have no power， money， or fame．" The man said，"I have everything I want． and I don't want what I can't have． So I'm happy， and my song comes from the happiness in my heart． ""Can you give your shirt to me， I need it， "said the general．"What shirt？ I don' t have any shirts．"answered the man．
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求写评论的文章，根据下面的故事中的相关信息写出一篇约120词的评论。所提供的材料中列举了撰写的评论的标题。主要从：（1）归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点，举例子并说明原因。（2）归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点，并举例说明；（3）关于幸福的结论。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意评论中必须包含材料上的故事情节，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【满分范文】
My Thoughts about Happiness
Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.
What can always make me happy？Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.
All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.
【名师点评】
（1）高分句型一 For example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快乐，因为他们害怕失去钱，而穷人真正快乐是因为他对自己所拥有的感到满足。句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引导的原因状语从句。
（2）高分句型二 All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 总之，不要想你不能拥有的东西。句子what you can't have.作think about的宾语。
（五）
文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。
写作要点：
I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)；
2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability...)；
3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…).
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【满分范文1】
I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better.
For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool.
So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks.
【满分范文2】
In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like.
A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person.
For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face.
So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks.
（六）
学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下：
1. 三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦；
2. 父母为教师，在校深受欢迎；
3. 分担家务，周末户外活动；
4. 相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长；
5. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意：
1．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2．词数：60 – 80；
3．内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： popular adj. 受欢迎的 activity n. 活动 rule n．规矩
My Family
I’m _______________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
【满分范文】
My Family
I’m Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get along well with, try one’s best to do, accompany with, communicate with, help sb do以及grow up，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
（七）
为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容：
1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；
2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。
你的感想：
1．师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；
2．倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；
3. ……（考生自己发挥）
要求：
1．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。
2．所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：市民广场Civic Square
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _____________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。
【高分句型二】
In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来朗朗上口。
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假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记．请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法．
（l）一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢．
（2）地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵．
（3）你认为……
参考词汇： 开始呕吐 begin to vomit；挤向座位 push towards the seat；争吵 have a quarrel
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个；
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed _____________________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
【参考范文】
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things around me．（开篇点明题意）
The first thing I met is about a boy．The boy didn't feel well．He began to vomit．A beautiful girl saw the boy．She helped him clean the floor【高分句型一】．Then the boy thanked her for helping．The second thing is about the underground．When the underground got to the station．a lot of people pushed towards the seat．So some people couldn't get off the underground．Some had a quarreel because of this．（介绍碰到的两件事情）
In my opinion，The girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this society．As for the underground．It shows your quality there．If you wait in a line，others will get off the underground easily．If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful【高分句型二】．（表达自己的观点结尾）
【名师点评】
（1）高分句型一：
She helped him clean the floor.
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事。这句话意为：她帮助他打扫干净地面。
（2）高分句型二：
If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful.
If引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则，即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时态。这句话意为：如果我们所有人都这样做，我们的世界将会变得更加美好。
（九）
初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，你校将举行"感恩"为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿．
要点提示：
1．感谢父母，教我如何生活，……
2．感谢老师，教我许多知识，……
3．感谢同学，给我美好回忆，……
写作要求：
1．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；
2．可适当增减词汇，使语句流畅、完整；
3．文中不能透露个人真实信息．
Good morning， everyone． I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．
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That' s all． Thank you．
【写作思路】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
【参考范文】
Good morning，everyone．I'm glad to be here to speak in front of you． Here I'd like to thank everyone of you．How time flies! We 'll graduate soon． I have so many words from my heart to say．At this moment，I want to say thanks to my parents，my teachers and my classmates．（开篇点题）
Dear dad and mom， you've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．You taught me how to get on well with my classmates．（感谢父母亲的关心，鼓励……）
Dear teachers，thank you for teaching me so well．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．I still remember when I failed in an exam， you encouraged me to keep trying． 【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life， you told me to be brave． Because of your help，I have made much progress．（感谢老师在学习上和生活上的帮助）
Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．【高分句型二】 When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and give me some advice．I never forget the days when we studied together．（感谢同学的帮助，鼓励，留下的美好回忆）
Words can't show my thanks to you!I'll remember all of you．
That' s all． Thank you．
【名师点评】
（1）高分句型一：
I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．我还记得当我考试不及格时，你们鼓励我继续努力．
I still remember 后跟了宾语从句，宾语从句中包含了when引导的时间状语从句，encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
（2）高分句型二：
Dear classmates， you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school．亲爱的同学们，自从我来这里以来，你们在我的学习中帮了我很多忙．
since自从，引导时间状语从句，主句用了现在完成进行时，从句用了一般过去时．
（十）
同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the envinmment”、 “Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和功能，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为 “I’m Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。
要点提示：
1. 家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；
2. 邻里和睦，礼貌待人；
3. 爱护环境，从我做起：
写作要求
l. 词数90左有（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，适当发挥；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：Work hard；be friendly to each other；get on well with；protect the environment；be volunteers
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息讲述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了题目：I’m Proud of My Family。主要从1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我做起：这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My families love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.
My families are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.
My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.
My families are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.
What a happy family! I’m proud of my family!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. 我的家人尽力保护我们日常生活中的环境。该句话运用了：try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事。protect the environment：保护环境。
【高分句型二】
My father is used to taking the bus to work. 我父亲习惯乘公共汽车上班。这句话运用了：be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事。
总之，本文运用了大量的简单句，虽然没有复合句，但是这写简单句把作者的一家人的生活描写的入情入理，就像是发生在我们的眼前一样。
（十一）
"你养我长大，我陪你变老。"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；
（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；
（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）。
注意事项：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth.
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【参考范文】
You bring me up．I will be with you in your life．You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）
Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事）
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．
when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，
【高分句型二】
It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．
本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who ...
（十二）
幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80-100词。
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【满分范文】
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
（十三）
对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩，因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧;对朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和力量。自从国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助学金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩，感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会!请以“感恩”为话题写一篇80—100字的作文。
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【满分范文】
What should we thank?
The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for.
The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life!
The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us.
The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life.
The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food.
Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.