2020中考英语作文：交友亲情 试卷

09交友亲情篇
（一）
初中生活即将结束，这三年一定给你留下很多美好的回忆．英语俱乐部征文要求写篇110词左右文章描述你难忘的校园生活、师生情或同学情．以及在临别之际，对他们说的感激和祝福的话．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名．
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How time flies!Our junior high school days are coming to an end ，and I'd like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me．【高分句型一】（点题）Firstly，I'd like to thank my great teachers．They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man．Though they look strict and serious，they are always kind to me．（感谢老师） Secondly，I want to thank my friendly classmates．As long as I have trouble，they are always around me．I miss the happy days when we stay with each other．I love all of you．（感谢同学）
Finally，I'm going to thank my parents．They always look after me very well to keep me healthy．And they often encourage me to work hard at school．【高分句型二】（感谢父母）
（二）
初三学生Sandy面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望及每天堆成山的作业感到非常苦恼，昨天因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列提示以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。
提示：
1．如何舒缓目前的压力；
2．如何安排好每天的学习和休息；
3．如何处理与父母的关系。
注意：
1．必须包括要点中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4．词数不少于90词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sandy，
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．____________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Nancy
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Dear Sandy，
I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．（点题）
First， it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure．【高分句型一】Second， you can make plans for your everyday life． After you study for about two hours， you can take a walk outside and try to relax． Besides， don’t stay up late． It’s not good for your health．Third， never argue with your parents． You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them． Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas． They will help you find better ways to solve them．（建议）
In a word， you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents．【高分句型二】（总结全文）
Yours，
Nancy
（三）
假如你是英语校报编辑徐玲．校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了自己面临的两个问题．请你根据Ben的来信，每个问题结合自己的过往经历提出一些建议并陈述理由．
Dear Xu Ling，
My name is Ben． I’m a Grade 7 student． Recently， I feel worried because I have trouble getting used to life in middle school．
I always feel lonely because I have few friends．
Also， I have problem remembering new English words．
Can you give me some suggestions to help me？ Thank you．
Best wishes，
Ben
注意：（1）回信应包括所有要点；
（2）词数90左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．
Dear Ben，
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school． In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends． I think ___________________________．
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Good luck with everything．
Yours,
Xu Ling
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Dear Ben，
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school．（表示理解） In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends． I think it is a good choice to join some clubs． In this way， you can make more friends who share the same interest with you．【高分句型一】 I used to go to the tennis club every day and that brought me good health as well as many good friends． What’s more， you’d better be friendly to others． A smile costs nothing but gives much．Also， you found it difficult to remember English words．
Reading more English stories can help you learn English words． Our English teacher once encouraged us to see English films to help us remember words． If you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day， it will be helpful．【高分句型二】（问题和建议）
I hope you will find these useful suggestions．（希望）
Good luck with everything．
Yours,
Xu Ling
（四）
根据所给图画，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文．要求完整叙述图画内容．

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Last week， my parents and I decided to go to visit my grandmother． We went to a shop at half past nine and bought some gifts．（去商店买礼物）We went there by bus． It took us forty minutes to get to my grandmother's house．（坐汽车去那儿）As soon as we arrived there， my grandmother and my uncle went out to meet us．【高分句型一】（外婆和舅舅出来接我们） My uncle prepared lunch for us． （舅舅准备午餐）At noon ， we had a wonderful lunch together． （聚餐）In the evening， after we said goodbye to my grandmother and my uncle ，we went home．（告别，回家）
What a happy day we had!【高分句型二】I hope we can visit them as often as possible．（感受）
（五）
假如你叫Paul，是第一中学九年级学生，今年夏天即将毕业．初中三年你变化很大，请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文，记录自己的成长过程，并谈谈你的暑假计划．

过去
1．性格内向，不敢在人前讲话．
2．对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好．
3．不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏．

现在
1．乐于分享，与同学相处很好．
2．各科成绩优异，…（举一例）
3．积极参加各类活动，…（举一例）
暑假计划
…（一至两点）
要求：1）词数100左右，文章开头已给，不计入总词数．
2）短文需包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥．
3）字迹工整，条理清楚，行文连贯．
4）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校．
I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．______________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________
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I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型】（性格内向，不敢在人前讲话）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏）
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（乐于分享，与同学相处很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型】（各科成绩优异）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（积极参加各类活动）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．【高分句型】（暑假计划）
（六）
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括:
What do you often do for your parents?
Why should we honor our parents?
How should we honor our parents?
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文。这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。
（七）
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋好友？还是……成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以“I am not a child anymore”为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的事，表明你已经不再是一个小孩子。
（注意：短文中不能出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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I am not a child any more
I am a 16-year-old girl now. I used to be weak and thin. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others. It was a Saturday evening. My mother is ill, so I cooked the meal. My mother said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper ,my mother said:“ Dear, you have grown up.” I realized I was not a child any more.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文，写作要点从我的改变和生活中经历的一件事展开描述。
2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称描述，时态主要为一般过去时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。围绕主题展开作文，逻辑性强，句子通顺。
3.高分亮点：used to do sth 过去常常做某事；as…as 如……一样；My mother said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty句型中“although”引导的让步状语从句。
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请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友。
2. 不参与打架斗殴。
3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。
参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）
3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴）
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【满分范文】
How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?
School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.
We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.
I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so?
（九）
学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下：
1. 三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦；
2. 父母为教师，在校深受欢迎；
3. 分担家务，周末户外活动；
4. 相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长；
5. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意：
1．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2．词数：60 – 80；
3．内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4．标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： popular adj. 受欢迎的 activity n. 活动 rule n．规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
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My Family
I’m Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get along well with, try one’s best to do, accompany with, communicate with, help sb do以及grow up，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
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假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。
Subject:
From: Linda
To: Li Ping
...
I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
Linda
Subject:
From: Li Ping
To: Linda
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前，应先阅读Linda的来信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况，她提出了三个问题，“他多大了”；“他是什么样子的”；“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”，回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答，并根据表达的需要，补充一些细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合题目要求，并且叙述要注意层次和结构；其次应注意英语的表达问题，应符合英文句式的特点以及表达习惯，不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。
【满分范文】
Dear Linda,
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.
My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者以李平的身份给Linda写了回信，介绍了哥哥的一些情况。首先短文内容符合题目要求，按照Linda在来信中的提问，介绍了哥哥的年龄、外貌、兴趣爱好等信息。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时、第三人称单数来叙述，符合题目要求，尤其注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化，这是学生们学习中的一个难点。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中主要使用了简单句、并列句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词，如动词不定式、现在分词等。文章中较好的句型和短语有：Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.、He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. 、He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.、He’s of medium height with short straight black hair.、 He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.等等。
（十一）
假设李华是你的同班同学，请根据以下提示及要求，用英语写一篇题为" My Classmate"的短文。
提示：1. 他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动；
2. 他乐于助人（举一个例子）；
3. 对他的评价。
要求：1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名；
2. 词数80左右。
My Classmate
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【满分范文】
My Classmate
Li Hua is my classmate and my good friend．He is tall and handsome．His grades are excellent and he always does well in exams．He is also good at sports because he thinks health is very important．【高分句型一】（外貌和特长）He is ready to help others．He often helps me with my English． Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣old boy who lost his way find his mother．（乐于助人）I think Li Hua is a kind person．Everybody in my class likes him very much． （对他的评价）I hope we will be good friends forever．【高分句型二】（愿望）
（十二）
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：
年龄与外表
16岁；高大健壮
兴趣与爱好
喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐；最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人
风趣幽默；乐于助人、容易相处
注意：
1. 词数70左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：
高大健壮tall and strong 运动do sports 听音乐listen to music
最喜欢的科目favorite subject 风趣幽默funny and humorous
乐于做某事be ready to do sth. 相处get on with
Dear Jack,
How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.
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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going？Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you. He is a 16-year-old boy. He has round face, black hair and bright eyes. He is tall and strong. He likes smiling very much.（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍男同学的外貌及特征）He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He is humorous and funny. He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others. 【要点二，介绍同学的性格】 He likes doing sports, reading and listening to music. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities.（高分句型二） He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating, making snowman and so on.【要点三，介绍同学的喜好】 His dream is becoming an English teacher, because he wants his students to get good grades. 【要点四，介绍同学的理想】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿）
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
He likes smiling very much．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语very much "非常，很"．此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑。"
注意like后加doing
【高分句型二】
He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．此句是一般现在时的陈述句。运用短语spend some time （in）doing sth "花时间做某事"。短语take part in "参加"，此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动。"
（十三）
假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历．用英语回信开导他。
To：subua@china.com
From：nathan.australia.com
Subjects： Learning from mistakes
Dear Su Hue,
I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?
Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?
Can you tell me one of your mistakes?
How did you deal with your problem?
What have you learned from the mistake?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Nathan
注意：
l. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；
2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes
Su Hua
【写作思路】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
【满分范文】
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
（十四）
最近，你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件——提出你的一些建议。
建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信……
要求：l．词数60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇：share solve respect friendly be honest to
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you. __________________
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I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文的写作要求是一封电子邮件。首先，对于朋友在交友过程中遇到难题表示歉意。用情态动词提建议，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步骤给出另外四个建议处理和同学们的关系。最后希望一切会好起来。
【满分范文】
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.
Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them.
Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.
Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.
I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文对于在和同学们交往中遇到的问题提出建议，分四步给出合理建议，最后指出对朋友要诚实，并希望能够交到更多朋友。用到的短语有：share sth. with sb.；get along with和……相处；be supposed to do应该做某事和Last but not least等，使得文章丰富多彩；长短句搭配合理。
（十五）
My best friend
My best friend is Jack. He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class.
His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home.
He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well. He gets on well with us, so everyone in our class likes him.