2020中考英语作文：传统文化 试卷

11 传统文化篇
（一）
假如你是李华，来自中国，今年暑假你将参加一个国际夏令营，你需要准备一篇 60 词左右的英文发言稿，内容包括你的自我介绍、中国的一个代表性事物（如大熊猫）和一个传统节日（如端午节）。
要求：1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2．可结合实际情况，适当发挥。
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【满分范文】
Dear friends，
I’m Li Hua from China．I’m thirteen．I like sports． I often play basketball after school．And I go to school on foot every day．I think it’s a good way to exercise．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍我的国籍、年龄、爱好及上学的方式．）Do you know about China？ It’s the home of pandas． And there are many important festivals in China， like the Dragon Boat Festival．On that day，we eat delicious zongzi and watch the exciting boat races．（高分句型二）（要点二，介绍我们中国的一个代表性动物及传统的节日．）
Welcome to China one day．Thank you!（要点三，欢迎有一天来到我们中国．）
（二）
你的笔友不久要来中国访友，为了不影响与他人的交流沟通，他向你询问一些关于在中国初次见面打招呼，就餐，访友等方面的风俗礼仪习惯，请你写一封信给他提供一些意见和建议，方便他的中国之行。开头和结尾已给出。
要求：1. 字数60－80词左右；
2. 句子及篇章结构准确，连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关的信息。
Dear __________________,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs.
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Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!
Best wishes.
【满分范文】
Dear Paul,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs.Chinese people are very friendly,so you don’t worry about the customs.In China,when you meet someone,you are supposed to shake hands.It’s important for you to know some table manners.You are supposed to use chopsticks instead of knives and forks,You are not supposed to pick up your bowl to eat.It’s rude to stick your chopsticks into your food.If guests have no food in their plates,it’s polite to put food on their plates
.People in China and America behave differently at the dinner table.There are many different table manners here.I will tell you more when you come to China.If you visit someone ,you’d better make a call first.
Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!
Best wishes
【解析】
这是一篇要求给笔友介绍关于在中国初次见面打招呼，就餐，访友等方面的风俗礼仪习惯。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
（三）
为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。
内容提示：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。
要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
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【满分范文】
Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。
（四）
假如你是小明，你的笔友Sam给你发了电子邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复．
要求：1．逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范．
2．词数80左右．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．
chairman：主席 unique：特别的
Dear Xiao Ming
How are you doing？
I am writing to ask you something about the Chinese Culture Week that we are going to hold in September． As the chairman of the Chinese Learning Club at school， I am thinking about how we can organize a unique and amazing activity． Therefore， could you please give me some good suggestions on what theme might be better and what exactly we are going to do？Thanks．
Sam
Dear Sam，
It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Xiao Ming
【满分范文】
Dear Sam，
It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．It's a good opportunity for you to learn more about culture．（开篇点题）First ，a paper﹣cutting exhibition is a good choice for you． As a traditional Chinese art， paper﹣cutting includes different themes like plants， animals， stories and so on． （剪纸展览）Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（书法比赛） What's more， lectures about Chinese history， poems， traditional festivals，or even food， are surely welcome．（历史，诗歌，传统节日，食物等讲座） And a Chinese painting show is always attractive．（中国画展览）I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．【高分句型二】
Yours，
Xiao Ming
【名师点评】
高分句型一：
Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．
第二，举办中国书法比赛也能激发人们的兴趣，这对学习中国文化很有帮助．arouse one's interest激发某人的兴趣，which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture本句使用了非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：
I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．
我希望我的建议对你有很大帮助．be of great help 有很大帮助
（五）
广州某电台英文频道将开设 Welcome to Guang zhou栏目，目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。

注意：1. 词数：80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. _____________________________________________________________________________________
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Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容：广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处，并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作，为时内容丰富、充实，应对每个话题进行拓展，详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构，要分清主次，合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【满分范文】
Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China，Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China. With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.
I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.
As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍：第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段是主体段，主要给读者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第三段和第四段是一个结尾，对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Located in the south of China，Guangzhou，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等等。
(六)
假如你是遵义育才中学的大明，你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施"山与海对话"（ Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea）项目．今年暑假，你的"手拉手"活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活动．请根据下列提示给他写一封80词左右的书信．内容包括：
自我介绍
年龄、性格、爱好……
校园生活介绍
社团活动……
家乡介绍
自然环境，名胜古迹……
你的建议
上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化……
注意：1．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数．
提示词：遵义海龙囤Zunyi Hailongtun Castle 遵义会址 Zunyi Conference Site
Dear Xiaohai，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea． Now let me tell you something about me and my city．_________________________________________________________________________________
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Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you．
                                                                        Yours sincerely，
Daming
【写作思路】
本题是一篇材料作文，也是书信作文。注意书信格式。本文人称主要是第一称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【满分范文】
Dear Xiaohai，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea． Now let me tell you something about me and my city．I am fourteen years old. I am outgoing and like making friends. I like sports, like playing balls and running. I also like collecting stamps. Our school life is very colorful. We can not only study very hard but also do all kinds of activities after class. After school, we often do some sports such as playing basketball, volleyball, Pingpong and so on. I join basketball club. I play basketball every Thursday afternoon after school.The natural environment in Zunyi is beautiful and there're many famous scenic spots and historical sites in Zunyi, like Zunyi Hailongtun Castle and Zunyi Conference Site. If you want to know more about Zunyi's history and culture, you can go online for it.
Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you．
Yours sincerely，
Daming
【名师点评】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
写作六步法：
1.审题：文体，时态，人称。
2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。
3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。
4.连句成文，合理使用连词。
5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。
6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
（七）
5月18日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。

注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人称和时态的不同，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Visiting museums has become one of the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.
Among them, the science museum is our favorite.
I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.
Museums make it possible for us students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?
（八）
为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。
要点：
1. 时间：5月16日下午2:30;
2. 地点：学校操场;
3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等；
4. 感受：对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：80—100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.)
表演 performance ( n.) 致辞 make a speech
Dear John,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear John，
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
（九）
假如你是李华，打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
要点：1. 端午节的时间（农历五月五日）、来由（纪念屈原）；
2. 活动安排：学包粽子、观看龙舟赛（时间：下午两点；地点：东坡湖；赛况）。
参考词汇：农历 lunar calendar
注意：1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文属于应用文体，介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【满分范文】
Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.
We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.
If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
（十）
假如你是李华，英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后，对广东文化产生兴趣，准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿，在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。
内容包括：
1. 推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。
2. 介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排。(包括活动的时间、地点和内容)
参考活动：欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera)，体验功夫(kung fu)，参加广东历史讲座等。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!
【写作思路】
这是一篇要求向来你校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流的学生介绍研学活动的相关安排。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般将来时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【满分范文】
Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. In Guangdong, you can enjoy many traditional foods. Such as shrimp dumplings, beef or fish balls, chicken feet and so on. Especially fish balls and chicken feet are really very delicious.I think you will love them. Tomorrow, in the morning, we'll go to the biggest theatre in Guangzhou. You are going to enjoy Cantonese opera there. We will go to Zhongshan Park in the afternoon. You can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture on history of Guangdong in the evening.
I hope you' ll enjoy your stay here!
（十一）
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位
最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表
幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所
婚礼，春节等
表达方式
剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼
提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
（十二）
为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容：
1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；
2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。
你的感想：
1．师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；
2．倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；
3. ……（考生自己发挥）
要求：
1．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。
2．所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：市民广场Civic Square
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. _____________________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【满分范文】
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。
【高分句型二】
In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来朗朗上口。
（十三）
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：1. 历史悠久，约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用；
2. 种植广泛，安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名：
3. 喝茶有很多好处：有利健康，醒脑提神等；
4. 世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。
写作要求：1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
China is famous for tea. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称单数，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【满分范文】
China is famous for tea. Chinese tea has a long history. It's said that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5, 000 years ago. Tea is produced in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea.
There are lots of advantages of drinking tea. It's good for health. A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh. It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.
As middle school students，we should know about tea culture and spread it around the world.
【名师点评】
这篇短文是一篇优秀的作文，文中用到了一些好的句型：There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health. A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh. It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.这些给文章增色不少。