初三英语中考书面表达方法讲解含范文 教案
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初三英语中考书面表达专题讲解
书面表达
●命题导向：初中英语写作既考查学生掌握基本词汇、基础语法、句型的能力，同时也考查学生的观察能力、联想能力以及灵活运用所学知识进行表达的能力。写作各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、要点涵盖、语言表达、词数规定、卷面整洁、书写规范。
●解题技巧：
1．正确理解提供的情景和要求；
2．拟定提纲，提炼要点；
3．掌握格式，行文准确；
4．连词成句，连句成篇；
5．通读文章，纠正语病。
●评分标准：
各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、要点涵盖、语言表达、词数规定、卷面整洁、书写规范。
●实战演练
话题
- 保护环境
亮点句型速成
常用句型：Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful.
推荐句型：If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
常用句型：We should plant many trees, and we can live better and healthier.
推荐句型：→① We are supposed to plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.
→② If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and healthier in the future.
开头句：
1. We should not throw litter onto the ground.
2. We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees.
3. We are supposed to plant more flowers and trees.
4. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.
中间句：
5. Trees are very helpful and important for us.
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. It’s necessary to save water.
8. Recycling trash is also important.
结尾句：
9. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
10. It’s our duty to protect our environment.
11. It is very important to take care of our environment.
典例剖析
假设你叫王磊，目前，我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。
Place: train station;
Time: from 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morning;
People: you and some classmates;
Activities: clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground;
Feelings: a little tired but happy.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1. 文章为电子邮件，要求向朋友讲述在响应“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的活动中，我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动（包括时间、地点、人物、 活动、感受）。2. 本文描述自己的经历，写作时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称。3. 回忆事件通常用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁，语法正确。4.词数应不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
Bob,
I’m writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. We got the train station at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier. First, we cleaned the benches, and then we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left.
We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city.
Hope to write soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Lei
2.学校生活
常用句型： I have a happy school life.
推荐句型：→① With these special memories, I have a happy and colorful school life.
→② I have a happy school life which I will never forget.
常用句型：I like playing football.
推荐句型：→① I like playing football on the playground.
→② I like playing football on the playground with great interest.
常用句型：I feel very sad today, because I didn’t pass the math exam again.
推荐句型: →① I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam.
→② How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam.
开头句：
1. My favorite subject is physics.
中间句：
2. It’s difficult but interesting.
3. Last week’s talent show in our class was
a great success.
4. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.
5. It is easy for me to understand...
6. Teenagers should be allowed to...
7. There are a lot of rules in my school.
8. You have given me so much help that I will never forget...
9. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as...
10. Our school where there are many trees and flowers around is clean and beautiful.
典例剖析
A Talk to Myself
提示：在初中三年的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。
要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数 不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
【审题指导】
1. 写作的对象是“我自己”,行文用第一人称。2. 从①三年中的快乐；②三年中的遗憾；③对自己说的话及对未来生活的希望三个方面陈述。3. 陈述“我”在学习生活中的快乐和遗憾时，用一般现在时态；如果表达对未来充满希望，则用一般将来时态。4. 短文应包括提示的全部信息：初中三年学习和生活中的快乐和遗憾；在毕业之际，要给自己说的话。5. 词数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
A Talk to Myself
How time flies! I’m leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to myself.
Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness and sadness in our school life.
However, I’m also upset sometimes. I don’t take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. I know it’s not good for me. I’ll try my best to join in more.
I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.
3.学着如何学习
亮点句型速成
常用句型：You can solve the problems carefully.
推荐句型：→ ① You must be careful when you solve the problems.
→ ② You can’t be more careful while solving the problems.
→ ③When you solve the problems, you should be as careful /as possible /you can.
开头句：
There are three good ways that can help you to learn English well.
中间句：
1. I think you should read a lot, practice more and ask others for help.
2. It is also a good idea to take notes because it can help you review the lessons.
3. You could try to improve your English by discussing in a group, developing good habits and making full use of time.
4. You should study hard and never give up.
5. You can study it by asking more and learning more from others.
6. Don’t be shy and never be afraid of losing face.
7. The method is so creative!
结尾句：
1. Practice makes perfect.
2. Helping others means helping yourself.
3. Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning.
4. Think twice before you do it.
典例剖析
A. A happy time
B. Let me tell you _______
要求：
- 请从所给的A，B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“Let me tell you my dream”, “Let me tell you how to learn English”, “Let me tell you I love you, Mom”等。
2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guang ming Middle School。
4. 词数不少于60。
【审题指导】
细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1. 把题目补充完整，Let me tell you how to learn English； 2. 可以为说明文，也可以用具体事例来写成记叙文； 3. 注意写作时的前后顺序，使文章连贯； 4. 词数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
Let me tell you how to learn English
In our life, English is getting more and more important. But many people don’t know how to learn it. Now let me tell you some ideas to learn it.
If you want to use English well, first you should remember English words. Then you can listen to English songs to improve your listening skills, and you can also talk with your classmates in English in order to improve your spoken English. If you do like this, maybe you’ll find your English is getting better.
If you have good ideas to learn English well, please tell me.
- 未来的生活
亮点句型速成
常用句型： I have a dream. I want to be a teacher.
推荐句型：
①I have a dream that I can be a teacher.
②To be a teacher is my dream.
③I hope that I can be a teacher.
开头句：
1. Everyone has his dream, and I also have my own dream.
2. Life is full of challenges and hope. That’s why everyone longs for the future.
3. It’s important to have a dream, because it’s the power of our life and study.
中间句：
1. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
2. It’s interesting to be a guide in my opinion.
3. I’m going to be a reporter in the future.
4. Some students dream of being scientists.
结尾句：
1. As long as we work hard, we will realize our dreams.
2. Good beginning is half done.
3. We will never know what will happen in the future.
典例剖析
你班举行了以“What will you do when you grow up?”为主题的班会，大家畅所欲言，谈论自己的梦想，有的想当老师，有的想当记者……用英语写一篇短文，介绍你们讨论的情况。
参考词汇：1. teacher, reporter actor/actress...
2. interesting, helpful, important, famous, popular, busy, hard...
要求：
1.80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.至少写出三个梦想，每个梦想不少于两条理由，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Last week, we had a class meeting. We talked about “What will you do when you grow up?”. Now I’ll tell you what they expressed at the meeting.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：
1. 介绍你们主题班会讨论的情况，时态可用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；
2. 紧扣作文要求，必须至少写出三个梦想，并且每个梦想要陈述不少于两条建议；
3. 文章的词数在80词左右，不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
【高分范文】
Our Dreams
Last week, we had a class meeting. We talked about “What will you do when you grow up?” Now I will tell you what they expressed at the meeting.
Some students want to be teachers when they grow up. They think teaching is interesting and helpful though teachers are too busy sometimes. Besides, it’s fun to face lovely and smart children every day.
Some dream of being reporters because they like talking to people. What’s more, they have opportunities to meet important and famous people, and they can learn more from them.
There are still some other students who want to be actors. Actors are popular with people. They hope they can become famous some day.
5.健康与急救
How to keep healthy
Diet Don’t eat too much rich food, like meat
Eat fruits and vegetables ，Drink milk ，No junk food
Exercise Run，Play basketball，Do yoga
Sleep Go to bed and get up early，Don’t stay up
亮点句型速成
常用句型：A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful.
推荐句型：→A nurse gave me an injection which was a little painful.
常用句型：You mustn’t smoke. It’s bad for your health.
推荐句型：→You mustn’t smoke because it’s bad for your health.
开头句：
1. It is very important to keep healthy.
2. Nowadays, more and more people know
the importance of keeping healthy.
3. Health means much wealth to everyone.
中间句：
1. We can’t go to sleep too late. We can’t get up too late.
2. We should eat the food healthily.
3. We should do more exercise.
4. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks me over carefully.
5. He told me to take a rest and drink more water.
6. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.
7. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.
8. A lot of vegetables help you to keep in good health.
结尾句：
It’s easy to have a healthy lifestyle, and it’s important to eat a balanced diet.
2. If you follow my advice, you will be in a good health.
3. I hope everyone can keep in good health.
写作模板
Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. For me, there are 几种方法 to keep healthy.
First, it is necessary to 做法一； Secondly, we shouldn’t 做法二； Thirdly, it is important to 做法三.
If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they will 健康会有怎样的改善.
典例剖析
近20年来各方面调查表明青少年体质的下降令人担忧。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇60～80词的短文，说说你的看法和建议。
要求：主要包括以下内容，可以适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 体质下降的原因; 如：eat too much junk food, have too much homework...
2. 合理的健康建议。如：some useful advice, should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet（饮食平衡), enough sleep...
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining(体质下降) year by year. I think there are some reasons
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【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：
文章应首先根据内容提示写出体质下降的原因，
可用一般现在时表述，人称可用第一人称和第三人称；
- 就“保持健康”提出建议，所写建议尽量全面，涉及内容尽量多角度，深层次，文体为说明文。
【高分范文】
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining(体质下降) year by year. I think there are some reasons.
Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health. Then, how to keep healthy? Firstly, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet. We aren’t supposed to eat too much junk food. It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day. What’s more, we are supposed to have meals regularly. Secondly, we shouldn’t stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is also necessary. Thirdly, it is important to take regular exercises, such as swimming, jogging and so on.
If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they’ll greatly improve their health. I hope everyone can keep in good health.
6.节假日活动
1. New Year’s Day 元旦
2. the Spring Festival 春节
3. Latern Festival 元宵节
4. Women’s Day 妇女节
5. April Fool’s Day 愚人节
6. Easter Day 复活节
7. May Day劳动节
8. Mother’s Day 母亲节
9. Children’s Day儿童节
10. Dragon Boat Festival 端午节
11. Father’s Day 父亲节
12. Teachers’ Day教师节
13. the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节
14. National Day国庆节
15. Thanksgiving Day感恩节
16. Christmas Day圣诞节
月份与季节
1. January 一月 2. February 二月
3. March 三月 4. April 四月
5. May 五月 6. June 六月
7. July 七月 8. August 八月
9. September 九月 10. October 十月
11. November 十一月 12. December 十二月
13. spring 春季 14. summer 夏季
15. autumn 秋季 16. winter 冬季
17. month月份 18. season季节
庆祝活动
1. celebrate 庆祝 2. enjoy 欣赏
3. present 礼物 4. flower 花
5. card 卡片 6. invitation 邀请
7. visit 拜访 8. relative 亲戚
9. mooncake 月饼 10. dumpling 饺子
11. turkey火鸡 12. fool 愚弄
13. performance 表演 14. traditional传统的
15. festival节日
重 点 短 语
1. say thanks to sb. 感谢某人
2. western festival 西方节日
3. a bunch of 一束
4. buy…for… 买……给某人
5. have a big dinner 吃丰盛的晚餐
6. enjoy the bright moon 欣赏明亮的月亮
7. on New Year’s Eve 除夕夜
8. give a performance 表演
9. have fun 玩得开心
10. summer camp 夏令营
11. summer vacation 暑假
12. winter vacation 寒假
13. get together 聚会
14. dress up 打扮；装饰
重 点 句 型
1. I will never forget the day I got the prize. 我将不会忘记我得奖的那一天。
2. Our Chinese people usually have a big dinner on the Spring Festival. 我们中国人经常在春节吃丰盛的晚餐。
3. The children wear their beautiful clothes to give a performance on the Children’s Day. 在儿童节，孩子们盛装表演。
4. Our family enjoyed the big， bright moon on the Mid-Autumn Festival. 我们一家人在中秋节欣赏大而明亮的月亮。
5. Zongzi is the most important food of Dragon Boat Festival. 粽子是端午节最重要的食物。
6. The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China， and it is often in January or February. 春节是中国最重要的节日，它通常在一月份或者二月份。
7. The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. 中秋节是中国的传统节日。
8. Mother’s Day is on the second Sunday in May. 母亲节在五月的第二个星期日。
9. It is time for people to give thanks to each other. 这是一个人们互相表达感谢的日子。
10. We usually dress up on that day to visit relatives. 在那一天我们经常盛装打扮，拜访亲友。
典型例题：
中国有很多传统节日，或是喜庆热闹，或是团圆相聚，或是寄托哀思。请你根据以下提示用英文写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
内容包括：
1. 你最喜爱的中国传统节日是什么？
2. 你在这个节日期间做什么？
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My favorite Chinese traditional festival is
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the Mid-Autumn Festival. On this day， we usually come back home early and have a big dinner. After dinner， we go outside and admire the full moon. The moon is bright and round. Everything looks peaceful under the moon. Eating mooncakes is my favorite part. The mooncakes are round， too. They are delicious.
All in all， the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day for families to get together and share the happiness and love. I always have a good time on that day.
- 家庭
亮点句型速成
常用句型: We often have arguments with our parents.
推荐句型：Nowadays, most of us have trouble in communicating with our parents.
常用句型：We should often stay with each other.
推荐句型：Both you and your parents should spend more time with each other.
常用句型：You do as I mentioned above. You can get on well with your parents.
推荐句型：If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.
开头句:
Nowadays, most of us have trouble in communicating with our parents, because we don’t have enough time to stay together.
2. It’s an increasing problem that we often find it hard to communicate with our parents.
3. I have a happy and warm family and there are three people in my family.
中间句:
How can we communicate with our parents well?
2. Here are some suggestions about how to get along well with our parents.
3. Try to talk to our parents politely.
4. We should also think more about our parents.
结尾句:
If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.
2. We will be happier if we can properly deal with the arguments with our parents.
3. It will be good for both parents and us to get on well with each other.
4. I love my parents more than anyone else.
5. Thank you for everything you have done for me.
写作模板
There are 几个家庭成员 in Brian’s family, 家庭成员 and him. His father works 职业和工作地点, and his mother is 职业和工作地点...They are 性格特点 and they 相处如何. His parents 怎样要求孩子. When he is at home, he 和父母一起做的活动. In short, Brian lives in 家庭总体评价 family.
典例剖析
随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难以与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法。
要求：
（1）内容包括
①分析这种现象产生的主要 原因;
②提出解决该问题的具体建议。
（2）词数：60~80词。
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名和地名。
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：
1. 围绕 “青少年与父母的沟通与交流” 这一话题用英语谈谈自己的想法，叙述这一社会现象时应使用第一人称复数（群体），有亲切感。建议学生联系自己与父母之间交流的实际情况时，可使用第二人称。
2. 提示语中包含的内容要求有两点，因此本文最好采取两段或者三段的形式来写，必须包括这种现象产生的主要原因，并提出具体的解决建议，应使用一般现在时。
3. 词数60-80词，不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
【高分范文】
Nowadays, most of us have trouble in communicating with our parents, because we don’t have enough time to stay together and can not understand each other.
How can we communicate with our parents well? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, both you and your parents should spend more time with each other. Secondly, try to talk to your parents politely. Thirdly, try to think more about your parents and help them with some housework, and you will find that you can understand them.
If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.
