专题07 书面表达（名校模拟+地区真题)-冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（杭州专用）

这是一份专题07 书面表达（名校模拟+地区真题)-冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（杭州专用），共19页。

①可适当添加内容让行文通顺、连贯。
②字数不少于80词。
T: Li Ping
Frm: Sam
Subject: What shuld I d?
Dear Li Ping,
Hw is everything ging with yu? I’m stressed ut these days. My last exam results drpped nce again and I really dn’t knw hw t imprve my grades. What’s wrse, my parents always cmpare me with thers and expect t much frm me. It’s difficult t get n well with them. I am s upset. What shuld I d? Please give me sme advice.
Lking frward t yur quick reply!
Yurs,
Sam
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2．（2023·浙江杭州·统考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到外国好友Jrdan的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Hw is everything ging? I am planning a tw-week hliday as my graduatin trip in China! Yu can’t imagine hw excited I am! Yu knw China is such a large cuntry, and I really want t make full use f my hliday t see and experience smething different. By the way, are yu available in July? If pssible, wuld yu like t travel with me r suggest sme great cities fr me t g t?
Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Jrdan
注意：文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等个人信息。
Dear Jrdan,
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Li Hua
3．（2023·浙江杭州·校考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到外国好友Tracy的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。词数80左右。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Tracy,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
4．（2023·浙江杭州·杭州市公益中学校考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到外国好友Mike的电子邮件，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使全文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Hw is everything? S excited that I’m cming t Hangzhu and living at yur hme! Thank yu fr hsting me! We haven’t seen each ther fr 6 years! I’m wndering if yu have changed a lt. D yu still lve burgers and play cmputer games every day? Have yu lst sme weight? Als, since I dn’t knw yur family members well, can yu intrduce them t me?
All the best,
Mike
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5．（2023·浙江杭州·校考二模）假设你是李平，亚运会即将在你所在的城市举办。你在亚运组委会网站上看到一则邮件，请阅读后进行回复。
要求：
1. 回复邮件必须包含邀请函中的要点问题，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯；
2. 回复邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。
6．（2023·浙江杭州·统考二模）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复，词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
T: LiPing@mail.cm
Subject: Yur hbby
Dear Li Ping,
Hw is everything? Thank yu fr the stamps yu sent me. I really like them. Yu knw my hbby is cllecting stamps and they have brught me a lt f fun. What d yu like ding in yur free time? When did yu take up the hbby? Hw ften d yu d it? And what d yu learn frm it?
Hpe t hear frm yu sn!
Jack
Dear Jack,
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Li Ping
7．（2023·浙江杭州·校联考二模）假定你是李平，你的笔友Rse发来一封邮件，她计划九月份来杭州观看第19届亚运会。请根据Rse在电子邮件中的提问，给她写回信。词数80左右。
T liping@sina.cm
Frm rse@mail.cm
T rse@mail.cm
Frm liping@sina.cm
8．（2023·浙江杭州·统考二模）假设你叫李华，请根据下面的邮件提示，给你在美国的堂哥李峰回复一封邮件。
要求：
1. 内容可根据所给的提示适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（邮件称呼及落款已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Li Feng,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
9．（2023·浙江杭州·杭州市十三中教育集团（总校）校考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到了即将搬来杭州居住的新邻居Tracy的电子邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复。
注意：
1．词数80-120个词左右；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
T: Tracy
Frm: Li Hua
Hi Tracy!
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Yurs,
Li Hua
10．（2023·浙江杭州·杭州春蕾中学校考二模）假定你是李华，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tny,
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Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文：
Dear Sam,
I’m srry t hear abut yur prblems. First f all, ne test desn’t mean anything. As lng as we cntinue t study hard, I’m sure yur grades will imprve. If yu have any prblems, be sure t ask yur teachers and classmates fr help in time. Secndly, yu can find sme time t have a gd talk with yur parents. And they will surely understand yu. Finally, yu shuld learn t relax yurself. Yu can relax yurself by listening t music, ding running, etc., and ding smething yu like. I hpe yu find these suggestins helpful.
Lking frward t yur gd news.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件中的提到的问题给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提到的问题具体给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①as lng as只要
②in time及时
③listen t music听音乐
[高分句型]
①If yu have any prblems, be sure t ask yur teachers and classmates fr help in time.(if引导条件状语从句)
②I hpe yu find these suggestins helpful.(宾语从句)
2．例文
Dear Jrdan,
I am very happy t hear that yu are cming t China fr a tw-week trip. Hwever, I am pretty srry that I am nt available t jin yu in July because I have t attend a swimming curse. Therefre, I am recmmending sme great cities fr yu t visit during yur stay in China.
Firstly, as the capital city f China, Beijing is really wrth visiting. There are many places f interest in Beijing, such as the Great Wall, Frbidden City, Tiananmen Square and s n. Secndly, Guangzhu is als a must-visit city fr thse wh want t experience a variety f Chinese cultures. Yu can enjy delicius Cantn fd while shpping n Beijing Rad and take a ship t travel alng the Pearl River at night, watching the ancient and mdern buildings alngside the river. In fact, there are numerus wnderful cities fr yu t explre in China. If it is pssible fr yu, try t visit as mre cities in China as yu can and enjy the unique Chinese cultures during yur trip.
I hpe yu can have a wnderful trip in China.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封回信，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已在信件中给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，回复邮件中的问题，引出话题；
第二步，简要介绍推荐给Jrdan去游览的若干个中国城市，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，祝愿Jrdan在中国玩得愉快并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①attend a swimming curse上游泳课，参加游泳课程
②recmmend sth fr sb向某人推荐某物
③be wrth visiting值得一游
④a variety f各种各样的
[高分句型]
①I am very happy t hear that yu are cming t China fr a tw-week trip.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Hwever, I am pretty srry that I am nt available t jin yu in July because I have t attend a swimming curse.（that引导的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
③Secndly, Guangzhu is als a must-visit city fr thse wh want t experience a variety f Chinese cultures.（wh引导的限制性定语从句）
④Yu can enjy delicius Cantn fd while shpping n Beijing Rad and take a ship t travel alng the Pearl River at night, watching the ancient and mdern buildings alngside the river.（现在分词作伴随状语）
3．例文
Hi Tracy,
I’m glad t hear that yu will cme t Hangzhu t pay a visit. There are sme differences at the dinner table in China.
We can’t eat until the elderly sit arund the table. It’s nt plite t use the chpsticks t pint at thers. We can’t stick ur chpsticks int the bwl. If yu are invited t a friend’s hme, yu had better arrive there n time. Yu can take sme gifts, but avid the number “4”. Chinese peple are friendly and hspitable. S dn’t wrry, and just make yurself feel at hme.
I think these suggestins are useful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己听到对方要来杭州的喜悦之情；
第二步，介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
[亮点词汇]
①nt until直到……才
②pint at指着
③had better最好
[高分句型]
①I’m glad t hear that yu will cme t Hangzhu t pay a visit.（that引导宾语从句）
②There are sme differences at the dinner table in China.（there be句型）
4．例文
Dear Mike,
Everything is well with me and yu can’t imagine hw I’ve missed yu since I saw yu last time.
Because I stick t exercising every day, I am taller and strnger than befre nw. I als lse sme weight because dctrs say being t fat is nt healthy. But I still lve burgers and play cmputer games every day.
There are three peple in my family. They are my parents and me. My parents are teachers and they are very friendly. They are lking frward t seeing yu.
Lking frward t yur early cming.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：根据邮件中的内容进行回复，介绍自己现在的变化以及自己的家人，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的变化；
第三步，介绍自己的家人；
第四步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①stick t坚持
②lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①Because I stick t exercising every day, I am taller and strnger than befre nw.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I als lse sme weight because dctrs say being t fat is nt healthy.(动名词作主语)
5．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Ping. I wuld like t wrk as a vlunteer fr the Asian Games in Hangzhu. Hpe yu can chse me!
I’m a girl f 16. As a middle student, I am interested in sprts and can speak English fluently. S I suppse I’m qualified t be a vlunteer fr the Games. Besides, I have a gd cmmunicative skill and I’m cnsidered t be an utging and helpful persn at schl. What’s mre, I’m familiar with the traffic transprtatin, the lcal fd and s n. I can take athletes t visit museums and help them learn abut Chinese culture. At the same time, I will take them t visit ur lcal famus scenic spts. I’m sure I can als ffer the best service t the athletes in the Games in Hangzhu.
If yu are interested in me, please email me at liping2002@163.cm.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示你愿意成为一名亚运会的志愿者并说明原因；
第二步，介绍自己能为外国人、运动员做的事情；
第三步，介绍自己的联系方式。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth想做某事
②be interested in sth对某事感兴趣
③be qualified t d sth有资格做某事
④be cnsidered t be被认为是
⑤be familiar with熟悉
[高分句型]
①If yu are interested in me, please email me at liping2002@163.cm.（条件状语从句）
6．Dear Jack,
I’m very glad t hear yu like the stamps I sent yu. Fr me, my hbby is reading. I lve reading in my spare time.
When I was in primary schl, I always felt bred n weekends. One day, my father tk me t the library. That was my first experience with many bks and sn I fell in lve with them. Since then, bks have been my gd friends frever. I spend my mst time reading in the library. I have learned a lt frm bks. I als get many great ideas frm bks which help me slve many prblems I faced in life.
Nw I read every day. Reading is really helpful and it makes me better.
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题干中没有给出明确的写作要点，考生要根据邮件的内容，谈谈自己的爱好，具体包括爱好是什么、如何培养起来的以及从中学到了什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对对方喜欢自己送的邮票表示高兴，并介绍自己的爱好是什么；
第二步，介绍自己是什么时候以及如何培养的这个爱好；
第三步，介绍自己从中学到了什么；
第四步，介绍自己做这个爱好的频率，并总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① fall in lve with 爱上
② since then 自从那时起
③ spend time ding sth. 花时间做某事
[高分句型]
① I’m very glad t hear yu like the stamps I sent yu.（省略that的定语从句）
② When I was in primary schl, I always felt bred n weekends.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ I als get many great ideas frm bks which help me slve many prblems I faced in life.（which引导的定语从句）
7．One pssible versin:
Dear Rse,
I am ding great! Hw are yu?
I’m glad t receive yur email. Yu asked me hw t learn Chinese well. Here’s sme advice fr yu. I think it’s imprtant t take Chinese classes. Yu’ll find it helpful.
What’s mre, yu culd imprve yur Chinese by watching Chinese mvies. It is als a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs. Yu’ll learn mre Chinese wrds by ding that. If pssible, yu can even make sme Chinese friends. They will be pleased t help yu and it’s a gd chance fr yu t learn mre abut Chinese culture. Learning is a lifelng jurney. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring smething new. As fr gifts, I suggest yu buy tea. It is a symbl f Chinese civilizatin. Yur friends will lve it.
I’m lking frward t yur cming! Wish yu all the best.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己将提供一些建议；
第二步，具体阐述这些建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad t高兴做某事
②What’s mre另外
③a symbl f……的象征
[高分句型]
①it’s a gd chance fr yu t learn mre abut Chinese culture.(it固定句型)
②Learning is a lifelng jurney.(动名词作主语)
8．例文
Dear Li Feng,
Hw time flies! I’ll start my senir high schl life sn.
It’s exciting t guess what my senir high schl life might be like. My senir high schl life will be busy. Hwever, just because f this, it will make me have a sense f achievement. I’ll als make mre new friends in senir high schl and they will make my senir high schl life clrful. I’ll learn mre things that are useful, t. What’s mre, I will wrk harder t enter the key university. All in all, the senir high schl life wn’t be s easy fr me, but I’m ready nw.
I wish yu all the best in America.
Yur cusin,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以“我将很快开始我的高中生活”为开头，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍自己的学习计划以及高中的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①because f因为
②a sense f achievement成就感
③make friends交朋友
④what’s mre并且
[高分句型]
①I’ll learn mre things that are useful, t.（that引导定语从句）
②What’s mre, I will wrk harder t enter the key university.（动词不定式作目的状语）
9．例文
T: Tracy
Frm: Li Hua
Hi Tracy!
It’s a great hnr t give yu sme advice.
I think a Chinese knt is a gd birthday gift fr yur little cusin. It is red and pretty. As yu knw, red is a symbl f gd luck in China. I believe yur cusin will like it very much. What’s mre, it is made f cttn, s it desn’t cst much. Yu can buy it directly frm the shps n Hefang Street near the West Lake which have the mst kinds f Chinese knts. S yu can chse ne yu like. By the way, yu can pay it by Alipay r Wechat. Online payment is ppular in Hangzhu.
I can als g there with yu. It will be an excellent shpping experience fr us.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己很荣幸为对方提供一些建议；
第二步，具体阐述这些建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a symbl f……的象征
②What’s mre另外
③be made f由……制成
④By the way顺便说一下
[高分句型]
①Yu can buy it directly frm the shps n Hefang Street near the West Lake which have the mst kinds f Chinese knts. (which引导定语从句)
②It will be an excellent shpping experience fr us. (一般将来时will d结构)
10．例文
Dear Tny,
Thanks fr yur mail. Hw are yu? I’m glad t hear that yu will cme t my hmetwn. I’d like t intrduce my hmetwn t yu. My hmetwn is a beautiful city. My hmetwn is in Hangzhu, Zhejiang Prvince. It is lcated in the sutheast f China. Yu’d better take a camera s that yu can take sme phts. Hangzhu is very beautiful. West Lake is the mst famus place. It attracts many visitrs every year. When yu cme, I’ll shw yu arund it. And I will take yu t taste the specials in Hangzhu, such as West Lake Fish, Dngp Prk and s n. Hangzhu is famus fr silk. Yu can buy it fr yur parents when yu g back hme. The peple here are als very friendly. If yu encunter any difficulties, they will certainly help yu in time. I think yu will have a gd time here. I’m lking frward t yur cming.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求阅读邮件并回复。学生可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的地理位置；
第二步，介绍家乡出名的景点；
第三步，介绍家乡的特色菜及可购买的礼物。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth想要做某事
②such as例如
③have a gd time玩得开心
④lk frward t盼望
[高分句型]
①When yu cme, I’ll shw yu arund it.（时间状语从句）
②If yu encunter any difficulties, they will certainly help yu in time. （条件状语从句）
③I think yu will have a gd time here.（宾语从句）
Hi, Li Hua,
I need yur help! The 19th Asian Games Hangzhu 2022 is in September. I’m cming t Hangzhu t pay a visit and watch sme f the events fr a week. I knw there are sme differences at the dinner table in China frm the West. Culd yu shw me ne f them? Besides, what else am I suppsed t pay attentin t if I’m invited t a friend’s hme? Is there any way t make myself behave better?
I really need yur advice. Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Tracy
Frm: Asian Games Organizing Cmmittee（亚运会组委会）
Dear students,
We are nw in great need f help fr the cming Asian Games. Wuld yu like t be a vlunteer t ffer sme help? Which jb d yu want t d and why?
Als, many freigners and athletes（运动员）are interested in Chinese culture, what can they d t learn mre abut it? Hw can they enjy themselves during their stay?
We welcme yur reply and lking frward t yu becming part f ur members!
Best Wishes!
Asian Games Organizing Cmmittee
T: Asian Games Organizing Cmmittee
Subject: Applicatin fr a vlunteer
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Ping
Hi, Li Ping
Hw are yu ding recently?
I’m really excited t tell yu that I will g t yur city Hangzhu fr the Asian Games in September. I think it will be a gd chance fr me t learn mre abut yur city and yur cuntry. I’m planning t learn Chinese. Can yu give me sme suggestins abut hw I can learn it well? And I knw Hangzhu is famus fr smething like tea, umbrellas, scissrs and s n. I want t buy sme f them fr my friends as gifts. Culd yu give me sme suggestins abut it? Hpe I culd get sme gd ideas frm yu.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Rse
Dear Rse,
Yurs,
Li Ping
Frm: Li Feng
Dear Li Hua,
Hw’s everything ging?
Yur junir high schl life is cming t an end. Sn yu will be a senir high schl student. What might yur senir high schl life be like? D yu have any plans fr yur study and life in senir high schl?
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yur cusin,
Li Feng
T: Li Hua
Frm: Tracy
Hi, Li Hua!
I’m mving t Hangzhu next week and I really need yur help. My little cusin’s birthday is cming sn and I want t buy him a present. He is a big fan f Chinese culture. What can I buy fr him? And culd yu please tell me if there is a gd place t buy smething nice in Hangzhu?
By the way, I’m afraid I can’t cmmunicate with the lcal peple well, s wuld yu mind ging there with me next Saturday?
Waiting fr yur reply.
Yur new neighbr,
Tracy
Hi there, Li Hua!
Hw is everything ging with yu? I’m s excited t g t Hangzhu t watch the Asian Games in September! And I really want t knw mre abut the city. Culd yu please tell me smething abut Hangzhu? What d yu think f Hangzhu? Is there anywhere interesting r anything delicius? By the way, what can I bring back as gifts when I’m leaving?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Tny