专题08 智慧解困类-备战2024高考读后续写真题逐步解析专练

这是一份专题08 智慧解困类-备战2024高考读后续写真题逐步解析专练，共10页。

（2017年6月浙江卷）
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled(骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wlf's teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn't think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragragh 1:
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
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Paragragh 2:
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
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真题解析
2.1 整体把握：
2.2逐句写作：
第一段：
1. 麦克跳下自行车，冲向车门。
Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car.
2. 但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就追上了，扑了上去。
But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack.
3. 幸运的是，魔法喷雾第三次救了麦克。
Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time.
4. 看到狼退后，保罗迅速打开车门，受惊的人很快爬上车，重重地关上身后的车门。
Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily.
5. 贝西从后窗往外看，看见狼站在麦克的自行车上，好像那是一场杀戮。
Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill.
6. 不久，那只动物跑了。
Sn after, the animal ran ff.
第二段：
7. 他们对所见的感到震惊，于是加入保罗的行列。
They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul.
8. 麦家的一个朋友挑出一些生肉扔给了狼。
One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf.
9. 狼对得到的东西很满意，就跑进了树林。
Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds.
10. 麦克感谢保罗和贝基，“你停下来救我，我真是太感谢你了，我还活着，这都归功于你。”
Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.”
11. 由于麦克受伤，这三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家。
As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
2.3 范文赏析
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car. But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily. Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Sn after, the animal ran ff.
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul. One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.” As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
素材积累
3.1 情绪类素材积累
主题语境
人与社会--人与环境、人与动植物
语篇话题
本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为Mac和朋友们在骑行的过程中，遭遇了狼的追赶；Paul和Beeky开车路过，帮着Mac摆脱狼的追赶。
情节梳理
故事要素
when：On a bright, warm July afternn
where：the way t Alaska
wh：Mac Hllan and his friends; Paul and Beeky
what：Mac Hllan was cycling frm his hme t Alaska and they met a wlf. Paul and Beeky drve and helped them escape frm the wlf.
情节走向
通过第一段首句“ The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.”可预测，续写思路为：Mac上车--狼追上来--麦克与狼智斗--Mac成功上车
通过第二段首句“A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.”可预测，续写思路为：两人震惊--两人与狼智斗--狼离开--大家脱离险境
绝望 desperately/hpelessly
令人害怕的 frightening/terrifying
毫不犹豫 withut hesitatin
3.2 动作类素材积累
消失 disappear/fade away/be gne
上车 get in /hp in
大声尖叫 scream ludly/shriek ludly
冲出 rush ut f
转头 turn ne’s head arund
冲进 rush int
追赶 chase after
扔出 thrw ut
一跃而起 jump t ne’s feet 3.3 环境描写类素材积累
太阳开始缓缓升起，给山披上了一层金纱。
The sun began t rise in the sky, bathing the muntain in glden light.
夜幕降临。
The night settled in.
天空非常黑暗，风在她的四周可怕地怒吼着。
It was very dark, and the wind hwled hrribly arund her.
天空乌云密布。
The sky is cvered with dark cluds.
天气晴朗，吹来阵阵清风。
The day was bright with a fresh breeze blwing.
一场暴雪侵袭了整个城市。
A snwstrm blanketed the entire city.
四、模拟演练
练习（一）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Ever since he was a kid, Clin had taken great interest in hiking (远足）. T celebrate his 40th birthday, he planned t climb Muntain Sunshine.
The night befre his jurney, Clin filled his backpack with hiking ples, a hmemade hamburger, and sme ther necessities. He drve ff at 7 am the next day, his muntain bike in the trunk(后备箱）。When he was already n the way, he suddenly realized there was a pssibility f bear attack.
Abut an hur later, he arrived at a camp and checked in.“Is there anything yu need?”Vit,the camp manager, asked him.
“Bear spray(驱熊喷雾），”said Clin.
After finding a bttle, Vit ffered him a ride. They trucked alng a rad until the frest gt t thick. As Clin put his muntain bike against a bush s that he culd recver it n the way back, Vit said, “I'll cme fr yu if yu're nt back when the night falls." “Nthing t wrry abut,” Clin replied in a cnfident vice.
With the bear spray in ne pcket,Clin started hiking.He marked his trail(足迹，踪迹） and made lts f nise t drive away any curius animals.
Befre he knew it, it was getting dark. Nt wanting t get caught in the dark, and satisfied with what he'd finished that day, he started t climb dwn the muntain, and sn recvered his bike.
As he passed a marker shwing 3 kilmeters away frm the camp, he suddenly stpped his bike-a bear std in the middle f the narrw rad,sme hundred meters away. Knwing it culd easily attack him if he sped up, Clin decided nt t anger the bear.
注意：
1.写作词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The animal came in his directin, clser and clser.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: At that very mment, a truck stpped right in frnt f him.
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练习（二）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a ht July day in Philadelphia. The five bys I was with had been sick f playing marbles and burning hles in dry leaves. S when little Ned suggested climbing the cliff, the rest f kids all agreed excitedly, except me. I hesitated. I lnged t be brave and active, like them, but I’d been a sickly child mst f my eight years and I actually wasn’t as strng as the ther bys.
“Cme n!”Called Jerry, my best friend. “Just being sick is n reasn t be a cward（胆小鬼）.” “I’m cming!” I yelled, and ran alng after them. Thrugh the park and int the wds we went, finally we std beneath the near vertical（垂直的）wall f the cliff, abut 60 feet high. T me it lked like the very symbl f the Frbidden and Impssible.
One by ne, the ther bys climbed upward, finding handhlds and tehlds n rcks. I hung back until the thers were partway up; then trembling and sweating, I began t climb. A hand here, a ft there, my heart punding in my skinny chest, I made my way up and up. At sme pint, I lked back and was hrrified. The grund at the base f the cliff seemed very far belw; ne slip and I wuld fall. But the bys were talking ludly and happily abve me. In a few minutes they started up t the tp while I still struggled and crawled, far behind.
“Hey, wait,” I begged. Sadly, they ignred my request and cntinued their way t the tp, frm where they wuld walk hme by an easier rute. Befre they left, they glanced dwn at me. “Yu can stay if yu want t”, teased Ned. Jerry lked cncerned, but he went with the thers.
I lked dwn and was vercme by dizziness; a nameless frce seemed t be dragging me t fall ff. I grasped the rck as the wrld spun arund. I culd never climb back dwn. It was much t far t g, t dangerus.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Hwever the way up t the tp was even wrse—higher, steeper, mre challenging.
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At first, Michael didn’t see the black smke r flames shting frm the windws f his neighbrs’ hme. He and his wife had just parked arund the crner frm their wn huse when they gt a call frm ne f his daughters: “The huse next dr is n fire!” He went t check. That’s when he saw tw wmen and a girl helpless and heartbrken n their drway.
“The baby’s in there!” ne f the wmen cried. Thugh the fire department had been called, Michael, then 64, immediately ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-ld Tiara, the wman’s granddaughter and a playmate f Michael’s three yungest kids.
Entering the burning huse was like “running int a bucket f black paint”. The thick smke caused Michael t stumble blindly arund, burned his eyes, and made it impssible t breathe. The cnditins wuld have been dangerus fr anyne, but fr Michael, wh has severe lung disease, they were life-threatening.
After a few minutes in the smke-filled huse, he retreated utside t catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately.
“The secnd flr,” her aunt shuted back.
Michael knew he culdn’t hld his breath fr lng. Hwever, taking a deep breath, he went in a secnd time. The darkness was verwhelming. Yet because the huse had a similar design t his, he made it t the secnd flr. He turned t the right and was met by intense heat. He was already ut f breath.
“Baby girl, where are yu?”
His thrat and lungs burned as if he’d inhaled fire instead f the smke in the air. Every blink stung his eyes. All he culd hear was the crackling and ppping f burning wd. Then a sft but distinct man emerged. Still unable t see, Michael fell t his knees n the ht wd flr. He crawled tward the sund, feeling arund fr any sign f the girl. An unlucky thught crssed his mind: I’m prbably gnna die up here.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Finally, Michael tuched smething.
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Paragraph 2: Tiara was safe nw; hwever, Michael fainted dwn t the grund, uncnscius.
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范文赏析
练习（一）
The animal came in his directin,clser and clser. Hands shaking,Clin grabbed the hamburger ut f his backpack, and threw it beside the bear, hping it wuld attract the animal. Hwever,the bear just tk ne smell, and then turned back, walking n. With the distance getting s clse,Clin tk ut the spray quickly and fired it at the bear. T his relief, it fell back, shaking its head.Seeing this,Clin rde tward the camp as quickly as he culd.Sadly,a mment later.he heard the bear raring and running after him.
At that very mment,a truck stpped right in frnt f him."Get in!" Smene shuted.It was Vit! Withut any hesitatin, Clin jumped ff his bike and gt int the truck, shutting the dr just befre the bear caught him. S angry was the bear that it kept raring and pushing the truck vilently. After what seemed ages,it gave up,turned arund, and disappeared int the wds, With his heart still in his thrat. Clin hugged his life-saver and thanked him again and again. Perhaps, he wuld never frget the life-risking experience fr the rest f his life.
练习（二）
Hwever the way up t the tp was even wrse—higher, steeper, mre challenging. I wuld never make it. I heard smene sbbing and maning; I wndered wh it was and realized that it was I. The ther bys must have been hme. Time dragged. And with each passing minute, my legs and arms grew sre/numb. Smething rlled dwn my cheeks. It was tears r sweat, r bth. The shadws gradually lengthened, the sun disappeared frm the treetps beynd the clearing belw, and dusk began t gather. The grund belw the cliff became dim. Can yu imagine hw desperate I was at that time?
I didn’t knw hw lng it had passed until a familiar vice came belw. I glanced dwn! It was my dad with a flashlight. But what culd he d? It was impssible fr him t climb up here and carry me dwn. “Cme n dwn, my brave by. Dinner is ready.” His cmfrting tne seemed t have a magic pwer. Smehw, fllwing his light, I struggled t inch ver ne step. And then anther. That’s hw it went. Finally I tk the last step dwn nt the bttm and int my father’s strng arms, sbbing a little, and then, surprisingly, feeling a sense f immense accmplishment and smething like pride.
练习（三）
Finally, Michael tuched smething. A she, then an ankle — It was Tiara! He scped her int his arms and std. Turning, he fught thrugh the smke and made his way t the utside. Michael put Tiara dwn n the drway. And He started CPR — the first time he’d ever dne s. The wmen std behind him, praying silently. Sn a slight cugh came frm Tiara’s thrat. He gave five mre breaths. She pened her eyes and tk a breath n her wn.
Tiara was safe nw; hwever, Michael fainted dwn t the grund, uncnscius. When he wke up, Michael fund himself in the hspital, surrunded by his neighbrs wh cnstantly said thank-yu t the her. Michael spent ver a week in the hspital. Tiara was released frm the hspital after a few days. The fire sickened Michael’s lung disease, and he feels the effects even tw years later. “It’s a small price t pay,” he always replies. “I’d d it again in a heartbeat. Wuldn’t give it a secnd thught.”