10 说明文 新旧对比-高中考试英语书面表达精讲精练

这是一份10 说明文 新旧对比-高中考试英语书面表达精讲精练，共3页。

【话题导入】
随着经济的飞速发展，我们周围每天都在发生着变化。对比过去，现在的我们有着更坚定的信心去建设更加美好的未来。
【写作指导】
新旧对比介绍类写作，属于说明文范畴。在进行对比类写作时，首先，我们需要将某一人或事物的过去和现状进行比较，找出变化所在；然后，进一步说明这些变化带来的影响；最后，做出总结或展望未来。在写作中多用现在时态和过去时态，在展望给未来时可用将来时态。
写作步骤
1.Intrduce as a whle;
2.Make cmparisns and explain changes;
3.Intrduce the influence r differences f the changes;
4.Make a summary r express an expectatin.
增色语料
精彩句型：
1.Great changes have taken place in my hmetwn in the last five years.
2.In the past,there weren’t... in ur city but nw we are enjying ... du t...
3.Instead,mre buildings have been built in the suburb area where there used t be ...
4.Nt nly can we enjy the beautiful scenery but we can als enjy...
5.Cmpared with traditinal...,the new type f ... is mre...
6.I believe ur city/schl/twn will becme mre and mre ppular the future.
范文赏析
假定你是高中生李华。三年前在你校做交换生的Tm最近和你取得了联系，他想了解你现在的情况。请你给他写份邮件，内容包括:
1.你的变化:外貌、兴趣、学习等方面；
2.询问他最近的情况。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
任务分析：本写作任务是一篇人物说明类作文。要求学生用英语给好友写一封邮件，从外貌、兴趣及学习等方面告知自己的变化，并询问对方最近的情况。在描述变化时，切忌面面俱到你，只需选取具有代表性的几个方面来陈述即可。写作时注意使用恰当的衔接手段，提高各要点之间的连贯性。
补句成文： 请根据汉语提示使用恰当的单词、短语或句子补全下面范文中所缺的内容，补全后请通读全文并建议记诵。
Dear Tm,
Glad t get in tuch with yu again.I’m writing t tell yu 1.__________________________(我身上发生了多么大的变化)in the last three years.T begin with, I nw have grwn much taller but (我过去留着长发，而现在留着短发). D yu still remember my hbbies?I still keep practicing the pian and I want t becme a pianist after graduating frm cllege.I have given up my hbby f dancing because I fund I didn’t enjy it as I had imagined. As fr my study,3.____________
________________________________(我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步). I’ve taken part in several speech cntests and wn a few prizes.
Hw are yu getting n recently? Are yu still ding vlunteer wrk?4.__________________________(关于你，我有很多事情想了解)，s please write t me.
Yurs
Li Hua
答案：1.Hw great the changes have happened t me 2. I used t have lng hair but nw I have shrt hair
3. I've made great prgress in my spken English 4. There is much I want t knw abut yu
【且学且练】
假定你是高三学生李华，你读高时在你校任教的外教 Smith来信询问你和学校近两年来的变化。请你据此用英文给他回一封信。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Smith,
It's s great t hear frm yu again. Nw I’d like t tell yu smething abut myself and ur schl.
Our schl has witnessed great changes during the past' tw years. Firstly, anther tw teaching buildings have been built because the ld ne culdn't hld the increasing number f students. Secndly, the stadium has been enlarged, which can accmmdate abut three thusand peple nw. Besides, there came three freign language teachers, all f whm are ppular amng us students, just like yu. As fr me, I have been studying hard and I have made great prgress in English. What's mre, I have built very gd relatinships with my classmates and teachers.
Hw are things ging with yu? Please write and tell me.
Yurs,
Li Hua