十年(14-23)高考英语真题分项汇编专题 29 书面表达记叙文、短文投稿、报道类（含解析）

这是一份十年(14-23)高考英语真题分项汇编专题 29 书面表达记叙文、短文投稿、报道类（含解析），共32页。

2023年
Writing 1
【2023▪全国甲卷】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Cnfucius is a well-knwn figure in Chinese histry. His teachings emphasized the imprtance f mral values, respect fr elders, and scial harmny. Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety.
The significance f Cnfucius cannt be verstated. His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. Even tday, his ideas cntinue t guide individuals and cmmunities in China and beynd.
Cnfucius’s life ffers valuable lessns. He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld. His teachings remind us f the imprtance f integrity, cmpassin, and scial respnsibility.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-knwn → famus
人物：figure → persn
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：fundatin → basis
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, which fstered respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge.
Writing 2
【2023▪全国乙卷】
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. That was the first time I had watched a live musical perfrmance. The fantastic players tuched me deeply.
I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginners. In the beginning, it was quite difficult t read the ntes n the stave. Hwever, it did nt demralize me. I spent mst f my leisure hurs t practice pian. Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely.
Even thugh I will nt pursue as my life career, I will still cntinue learning and playing pian as my hbby. It is simply because music is the best medicatin fr my sul.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：pprtunity → chance
使沮丧：demralize → discurage
满意的：satisfied → cntent
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply. I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply, s I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.
2022年
Writing1
【2022年全国甲卷】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
When it cmes t cean, its pllutin is becming mre and mre serius. Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.
Ocean plays a key rle in ur wrld. Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature. Thus, it is imperative t prtect cean. First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins. Fr example, garbage can’t be thrwn int cean. What’s mre, we can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean. The mre peple are invlved, the better the cean envirnment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting cean. T prtect cean is t prtect urselves.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：mre and mre→increasingly
重视：place imprtance n→attach imprtance t
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s mre→furthermre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.
拓展句：Wrld Ocean Day, which falls n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it cmes t cean, its pllutin becming mre and mre serius.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins.(使用了主语从句)
Writing 2
【2022年天津卷第二次】假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请；
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】One pssible versin
Hell, everyne! I’m Li Jin, a member f the Spken English Club f ur schl. I’m here t invite yu t jin us. This will be a gd chance fr all English lvers.
The club ffers varius interesting activities. We can participate in English speech cntests, watch classic English mvies, sing English sngs and attend inspiring lectures. All f them help t stimulate ur interest in learning English and make ur schl life much mre enjyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lt. I have nt nly imprved my spken English, but als made a lt f friends.
Nw, it’s yur turn t jin us. We are lking frward t having yu in the club!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，并介绍口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →pprtunity
参加：participate in →take part in →jin in
愉快的：enjyable →jyful
激发：stimulate →mtivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club activities have benefited me a lt.
拓展句：The club activities which I have jined in have benefited me a lt.
2021年
Writing 1
【2021年天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China. It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan Irrigatin prject.
Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince. What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes. What’s mre , walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals like giant pandas, glden mnkeys. There are als many species f rare plants prtected here. Anther famus scenic spt is Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject. It dates frm ver 2,000 years ag. Hwever, it is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday.
I’m sure the visitrs will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigu as well as the cnstructin Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
【解析】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求：
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置：中国西南部
②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be lcated in；wrld-famus；places f interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance t d…；rare animals；scenic spt；date frm；play an imprtant part in；be amazed by
第三步：连词成句
(1) Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China.
(2) It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan Irrigatin prject.
(3)Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince.
(4) What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals such as giant pandas, glden mnkeys.
(6) There are many species f rare plants prtected here.
(7) Anther famus scenic spt is Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject.
(8) It dates frm ver 2,000 years ag.
(9) It is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday.
(10) I’m sure the visitrs will be amazed by its cnstructin.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表递进关系：what is mre
2.表转折关系：hwever
3.表示列举：such as, like
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes.（what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals such as giant pandas, glden mnkeys.（现在分词作状语）
2020年
Writing 1
【2020·新课标Ⅰ】
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
The persn I respect
We have a lt f respectable peple arund us. They may be ur teachers, parents r ne f ur elders. As fr me, my father is the persn I respect mst. My father is a teacher wh lves his wrk and his students very much. He wrks very hard every day but he will als spare sme time t accmpany me and share many funny things with me abut his wrk.
When I cme acrss the prblems f learning in my study, my father will listen t me patiently and encurage me t vercme the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lt in his wrk, respected by his students. S, in my mind my father is the persn I respect mst and I lve him deeply.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.人物简介：
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
As fr me；spare sme time；listen t me patiently;
第三步：连词成句
1.As fr me, my father is the persn I respect mstly.
2.He wrks very hard every day but he will als spare sme time t accmpany me and share many funny things with me abut his wrk.
3.My father will listen t me patiently and encurage me t vercme the difficulties bravely.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因
2.表示并列补充关系：As fr; and; but; S
第五步：润色修改
Writing 2
【2020·新课标Ⅱ】
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；
3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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【答案】 My Weekend
Last weekend，we tk part in a picking activity. We drve frm the schl, and the farm was abut 2 kilmeters away frm ur schl. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds f animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided int tw grups. One grup was respnsible fr picking fruits, the ther packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was ver. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lt frm it. Thrugh this activity, we knw hw hard the farmers are and hw precius the fd is. We shuld treasure the fd planted by the farmers.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.农场情况；
2.采摘过程；
3.个人感受
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
tk part in；was respnsible fr ；a meaningful day；shuld treasure
第三步：连词成句
1. Last weekend, we tk part in a picking activity.
2. One grup was respnsible fr picking fruits the ther packed up the fruits.
3. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lt frm it
4. We shuld treasure the fd planted by the farmers.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受
2.表示并列补充关系：and ;But; Thrugh
第五步：润色修改
2018年
【2018年江苏卷】请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名（ratings）进行消费的现象；
2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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【答案】Pssible versin ne:
As a majr channel f cnsumptin infrmatin, the rating is an efficient surce f infrmatin fr shpping in ur wn cnsumptin. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences n different cnsumers.
I tend t cnsult cnsumptin ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality f the prduct, r better service. Based n the ratings, I bught my belved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicius fds. Secndly, ratings can save time t make decisins in shpping. Fr example, there are huge amunts f reference bks which I am ften cnfused t chse frm. In that case, it is bth cnvenient and ecnmical t buy bks accrding t the ratings.
There is n dubt that it is unwise t depend cmpletely n the ratings in cnsumptin. The advantages and disadvantages f ratings are ften clsely related. It is necessary t hld an bjective attitude twards ratings.
Pssible versin tw:
Nwadays, mst cmmdities r services are rated thrugh certain channels. These ratings, easy t access, are playing an increasingly imprtant rle in custmers' purchase decisin. Hwever, results are smetimes unsatisfactry.
There is n denying that such ratings might bring cnvenience t cnsumers, but they are ften misleading and unreliable. As we all knw, mst f the ratings are based n thers’ judgment n the prduct r service cncerned. Every judgment cmes frm a specific need r a unique psychlgical state. Apparently, blindly fllwing thers' advice will affect ur wn judgment. Anther fact shuld nt be neglected that sme f the ratings are the utcme f a careful manipulatin f cmpanies r sellers. It has becme a cmmn practice fr sme t pay
fr gd ratings n their prducts r services s as t increase their sales.
Therefre, we shuld give a secnd thught t these ratings whenever we g shpping.
【解析】今年作文仍然是读写作文，即先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。
文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了n-line rating，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出nline rating的不靠谱。
然后写你对nline rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。
文章属于议论文，要注意主题句的使用，论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时，第三人称来写。
2016年
Writing 1
【2016年浙江卷】“Planning is gd, but ding is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。
要求如下：
1. 简述你对这句名言的理解；
2. 用一个具体事例加以说明；
3. 给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1. 文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
Planning Is Gd, But Ding Is Better
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【答案】One Pssible Versin
Planning Is Gd, But Ding Is Better
Planning is gd as it decides in detail hw we d what we want t d. Hwever, a plan can bear n fruit withut being actually carried ut.
My experience in the English speech cntest last Octber is a case in pint. A mnth befre the event, I spent hurs wrking ut a schedule utlining my gals and practical steps. After that, I set ut t read widely fr an inspiring tpic, wrte a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful prnunciatin with gd public speech skills. I finally came ut f the cntest as the first prize winner.
I knw hw I achieved my success. It came frm gd planning and better ding cmbined.
【解析】
本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。​
考点：考查开放式作文
Writing 2
【2016年四川卷】某中学生英文报正举办“The Seasn I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节；
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好；
3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；
4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
【参考范文】
The Seasn I Like Best
Each f us knws that there are fur seasns a year. Different peple like different seasns; my favurite seasn is spring. I lve t smell the fragrance f flwers, see the new green trees and hear the singing f small birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees ver the flwers. Smetimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The rain mistens the trees and the flwers. And I can play utside t! Whether we like riding bikes, jgging r ging n lng walks, spring allws us t enjy utdr activities that we had t put n the back burner during winter. Of curse, there are many ther reasns t explain why I’m s excited abut the spring. Thank yu, spring!
2015年
Writing 1
【2015年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，你校英文报＂外国文化＂栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 稿件内容；
3. 稿件长度：约 400 词；
4. 交稿日期：6月28 日前。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like t ask yu t write an article fr ur schl’s English newspaper. __________________________
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like t ask yu t write an article fr ur schl’s English newspaper.
The “Freign Cultures” sectin in ur newspaper is very ppular amng us students. It carries articles written by freign friends abut the cultures f their hme cuntries. Wuld yu please write smething abut the culture in yur part f the United States? And we wuld especially welcme articles abut hw Americans spend their hlidays and festivals, and the life f American high schl students. Yu can write anything relevant s lng as it’s interesting and infrmative. 400 wrds wuld be fine. Culd we have yur article befre June 28?
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by freign friends abut the cultures f their hme cuntries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we wuld especially welcme articles abut hw Americans spend their hlidays and festivals, and the life f American high schl students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be ppular amng, s lng as, lk frward t , hear frm等。
Writing 2
【2015年浙江卷】在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinin”为题，用英文写一篇100～120个词“短文。要求如下：
1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；
2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。
When I Have a Different Opinin





【参考答案】
When I Have a Different Opinin
We may have different pinins in rganizing class activities. We may have varius ways t deal with such a situatin. When I have a better idea, I wuld chse t stick t it . By ding s, I can nt nly share gd ideas with thers but als learn t express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where t g fr an uting. Mst f my classmates wanted t g t a park while I had an idea f ging t a nicer peace. I managed t persuade my classmates int accepting my idea. We did have a gd time that day . Gd pinins are wrth sticking t because they can benefit us all.
An alternative student versin:

When I Have a Different Opinin
We may have different pinins in rganizing class activities. When I have a different pinin, I may chse t give it up and respect the pinin f the majrity.
The main reasn fr my chice is that being brught up in a culture emphasizing cllectivism; I tend t sacrifice my wn interest fr the grup benefit. Once we were left t decide whether t have a picnic in a park r g t a museum. I wuld lve t g t a museum, but mst f my classmates wanted t g fr a picnic. Withut hesitatin, I decided t fllw them and we did have lts f fun that day. Smetimes giving up a little can mean getting mre.
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。
3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如nt nly …but als…不仅而且。
运用连词while 表对比观点。运用because 表达原因。
运用了表语从句表达原因The main reasn fr my chice is that …。
运用了宾语从句 decide whether d have a … ；discuss where t g fr an uting
运用了介词短语 By ding s, Withut hesitatin.
运用了强调句 we did have a lts f fun that day.
此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be wrth ding sth; stick t sth.; have a gd time; have lts f fun , tend t d 等。
Writing 3
【2015年重庆卷】请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。
If yu culd give yur yunger self ne piece f advice, what wuld yu say?
要求：
（1）作出回答并说出理由；
（2）词数不少于60；
（3）在答题卡上做答。
【参考答案】
Were I three years yunger than I am nw, I wuld strngly recmmend that I set mre practical and specific gals. As an ld saying ges, living withut a clear and achievable aim is like sailing withut a cmpass. Cmpared with many abstract bjectives, practical nes can bring us mre curage and cnfidence whenever we make ne step frward. If nly I culd g back and reset my gals.
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如I wuld strngly recmmend that I set mre practical and specific gals.宾语从句；Cmpared with many abstract bjectives, practical nes can bring us mre curage and cnfidence whenever we make ne step frward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；If nly I culd g back and reset my gals.还运用到虚拟语气。
Writing 4
【2015年安徽卷】某英文杂志正在举办以 "Fancy yurself as an interviewer" 为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famus Chinese I Wuld Like t Interview" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 采访的对象；
2. 采访的原因；
3. 想提的问题。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
A Famus Chinese I Wuld Like t Interview
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【参考答案】
A Famus Chinese I Wuld Like t Interview
The persn I wuld like t interview is Yang Liwei.
I wuld really like t interview him because he is nt nly the first Chinese t g t space but als ne f the greatest astrnauts in the wrld. I have lng been interested in space explratin and I believe I culd learn a great deal frm him abut it.
If I culd interview him, I wuld ask him what made him an astrnaut and hw he was trained. I wuld als like t knw hw he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I wuld like t ask a few questins abut his persnal life, which must be very interesting.
【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I wuld like t interview is Yang Liwei；原因状语从句because he is nt nly the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I culd learn a great deal frm him abut it，②what made him an astrnaut and hw he was trained；条件状语从句If I culd interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样；
范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：nt als...；ne f the...；the first t d sth；be interested in；a great deal；等，使作文的内容变得更加丰富；
范文注意使用nt als, and, als和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。
Writing 5
【2015年湖北卷】请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文。
Questining is a bridge t learning. When yu begin t dubt smething and search fr an answer,yu will learn.
注意：1.无须写标题；
2.除诗歌外，文体不限；
3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
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【参考答案】
Questining can lead t searching fr an answer. If we are in the habit f raising dubts as t whether what we are tld is true, we can find the crrect answer and learn mre.
Tw years ag, ur teacher ffered us an answer t a difficult math prblem in class. Althugh the answer seemed a little strange, nbdy but I dubted it. Thinking that his slutin might be wrng, I carefully analyzed the prblem and tried t wrk it ut in a different way. Half an hur later, I managed t find the crrect answer. When I shwed my answer t him, the teacher praised me fr my independent thinking.
Frm this experience I have learnt that questining can serve as a bridge that helps us t seek the truth.
【亮点说明】首句“Questining can lead t searching fr an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了状语从句“If we are in the habit f raising dubts as t whether what we are tld is true, we can find the crrect answer and learn mre.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his slutin might be wrng,…”等句型，为文章增色不少。此外，一些短语的使用也恰到好处，如ffer sb. sth.，wrk sth. ut，manage t d sth.，praise sb. fr sth.，serve as等。
Writing 6
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin accrding t the instructins given belw.
【2015年湖南卷】请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；
2. 续写词数不少于120个；
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】
One pssible versin：
As_a_student,_I_can_tell_yu_that_there_is_nthing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_befre_my_classmates.
Yesterday afternn, Li Ming and I went hme tgether after schl. Suddenly we saw an ld lady kncked dwn by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran ver t find that the ld lady's head was bleeding. She had already lst cnsciusness. Immediately I tk ut my handkerchief and cvered the wund with it. Li Ming stpped a taxi quickly. Tgether we put the ld lady int the taxi and drve her t the nearest hspital.
The ld lady was saved and we als felt very pleased. What's mre, I remembered the number f the car, and the traffic plice caught the driver later.
2014年
Writing 1
【2014年新课标Ⅱ卷】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1.家庭：
2．工作：
3.业余生活。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.开头语已为你写好。
One pssible versin:
I ften imagine what my life wuld be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years .I will be twenty -eight years ld by then. I will have my wn family, prbably with a lvely child . I hpe I will wrk in a cmputer cmpany as a prgram designer. I will enjy my wrk and get alng well with my clleagues I’ll d a gd jb in whatever I d. In my free time , I will cntinue t take regular exercise , such as swimming, running and varius ball games . On my hlidays , I will travel arund the wrld. In a wrd, my life will be much richer and mre clrful.
Writing 2
【2014年广东卷】你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。
［写作内容］
请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
同年同月同日生的人：time twin
［写作要求］
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
［评分标准］
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Richard Avis, a British, was brn n December 1st,1974. In rder t understand the meaning f successful life in different cultures, Richard, frm 2011, began t seek time twins arund the wrld. With the help f the lcal media he has already fund 32 time twins frm 13 cuntries, f whm there are 17 males and 15 females. Their psitins include gvernment fficials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and s n. Richard intends t find 40 time twins befre his birthday and he is ging t write a bk based n this experience.
[解析] 根据写作要求可知要考生为当地英语晚学科报写一篇关于英国人查理德·阿维斯的报道，报道中查理德，阿维斯以前做过的事情，句子的时态应该用一般过去式，他通过调查而得来的有关其他人现在的情况，叙述这些人的目前的情况应该用一般现在时。学科根据要求必须用 5 句话，表示出要表达的那么多的信息量的句子，考生必须有扎买的语法知识的功底，能够正确使用复合句来表达所写的信息。
Writing 3
【2014年大纲卷（广西卷）】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1.家庭：
2．工作：
3.业余生活。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.开头语已为你写好。
I ften imagine what my life will be like in the future. _________________________________________
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Writing 4
【2014年福建卷】如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( qutatin)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability t g frm ne failure t anther with n lss f enthusiasm."
- Sir Winstn, Churchill
内容要求：
1．你对该引语的理解：
2．你的相关经历：
3．恰当的结尾。
注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：
2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：
3．词数：120左右。
This qutatin frm Winstn Churchill tells us that __________________________________________
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【答案】
This qutatin frm Winstn Churchill tells us that we shuldn't get discuraged right after failures. Rather, we shuld keep trying with enthusiasm. Success cnsists in the ability t cntinue effrts thrugh failures.
At the age f twelve, I gt a nice bike as a birthday gift. S excited was I that I culdn't wait t try my hand at riding it. Hwever, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed t heavy and difficult t cntrl. Wrse still, I tk many falls ff the bike. I was abut t give up when my father came and encuraged me t keep ging. With mre practice, I did better and better. Lking back, I feel I wuldn't be able t ride a bike had I lst heart.ZXXK
Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's imprtant is that we shuld stick at it.
【解析】
试题分析：如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( qutatin)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题，自己对于该引语的理解；第二段写出自己的相关经历；第三段恰当地结尾。2. 时态：自己的相关经历用一般过去时；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【亮点说明】I was abut t give up when my father came and encuraged me t keep ging.这里含有一个时间状语从句。What's imprtant is that we shuld stick at it.这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。
考点：话题类书面表达
Writing 5
【2014年湖北卷】请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we d can make us a respnsible member f the sciety.
注意：①无须写标题； ②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
【答案】
It isn’t hard t grw up int a respnsible member f sciety.
I can well remember an incident that happened n a rainy Sunday afternn. I was n my way t the bkstre and was waiting fr the green light at a crssing when a girl f abut ten was kncked dwn by a passing car, which drve ff quickly. A man immediately rushed t the girl t give her first aid and I jined in withut hesitatin. Luckily she was nt badly injured and we sent her t the nearest hspital. Cmpared with the escaped driver, I am prud f what I did.
As a member f the sciety, I am aware that being respnsible is what it takes t make a better sciety.
【亮点说明】文章第一句It isn’t hard t grw up int a respnsible member f sciety就鲜明概括并亮出了作者的观点。文中使用了定语从句I can well remember an incident that happened n a rainy Sunday afternn以及非限制性定语从句which drve ff quickly都为文章增色不少，一些短语和短句的使用也恰到好处比如knck dwn，drive ff，be prud f, rush t sb t d sth，cmpare with等并注意了句子的衔接如： when， luckily 等等。
Writing 6
【2014年湖南卷】学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_______”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。
内容：
1.说明设计理由
2.介绍新功能。
注意;:
1.词数不少于120个字
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】略
Writing 7
【2014年山东卷】某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
②Where there’s a will, there’s a way.
注意：1.词数：120-150；
2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：谚语 prverb
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【解析】
Writing 8
【2014年重庆卷】请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phne falls, I cry.”
要求：1. 就此材料发表你的看法；
2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；
3. 词数不少于60；
4. 在答题卡上作答。
【答案】
One pssible versin
This happens frequently in a teenager’s wrld which depends n cell phnes t much. In the eyes f the yungsters’, friendship is imprtant. But when it cmes t the balance f friends and phnes, kids tends t regard the latter as their bigger share.
I dn’t think it is wise t neglect a devted human friend but favr the phne, because human friends can push us n in the fierce struggle in life while phnes are nly ur tls. S next time, when yur friend falls, dn’t laugh at him r her but help him r her stand up.
Writing 9
【2014年重庆卷】青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的＂最好礼物＂。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：
●赞同Susan的看法
●你收到或送出的最好的礼物是什么
●该礼物的意义
●期待大家回复
注意：1. 词数不少于80；
2. 符合语言规范；
3. 在答题卡上作答；
4. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
I am a high schl student frm China. ___________________________________________________
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【答案】
I am a high schl student frm China and I am quite fr yur pinin abut best gifts: the value f gifts lies in its intensin s we shuld devte mre t them.
The best gift I’ve ever received is a bk frm my English teacher, Debbie, which she brught t me when she returned frm her hliday in USA. The bk’s name is Chicken Sup fr the Teenage Sul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this bk because it shws me hw t keep the balance f friendship in a psitive way. And I must thank my favrite teacher fr her care abut me because she fund me at lss dealing with friends at ne time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.
I strngly recmmend yu t read it and share what yu gain with me in yur reply.
Yurs ever,
Li Hua
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As a student, I can tell yu that there is nthing better than being praised by my teacher befre my classmates.
人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（Richard Avis）
出生日期：1974年12月1日
时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义
相关信息：
借助当地媒体寻找
迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家
职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等
计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人
打算根据此经历写一本书