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    这是一份初中英语2024届中考作文写作方法讲解与练习(共23篇),共15页。试卷主要包含了与人为善,视力保护,变废为宝,我抓住的机会,值得庆祝的一天,一次有趣的做饭经历,我心中的中国元素,课后延时服务等内容,欢迎下载使用。

    中考英语作文写作方法讲解与练习
    1.与人为善
    【题目】
    与人为善是中华民族传统美德,请你结合自己的经历谈谈你对这一美德的感受。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]概念+意义开头
    Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people.
    I think it is very important for everyone.
    [第二段]举个“栗”子
    Last year, a new student transferred to our class. He was a quiet person and was bad at almost every subject.
    Most students in the class didn’t like him. I volunteered to sit with him and helped him with his lessons.
    We encouraged each other to challenge ourselves and finally we both made great progress.
    [第三段]happy+ 谚语结尾
    I was very happy that I could help him.
    As the saying goes, “The roses are in her hands, the flavor is in mine”. Let’s be kind to others.
    【范文赏析】
    美德类作文的重点是举好例子,这个例子是否恰当决定了作文的成败。这个例子最好是你提前准备好的一个例子,至于是否经历过无关紧要,哪怕是你听说的、读到的,都可以提前准备好,修改好语言,背下来,到时候套进去即可。
    考场上的作文和平时写作文有本质的区别,考场考验的是你的“速度”+“准确度”+“书写整洁度”,那么平时准备好“自己的”范文+背诵下来,就显得格外重要,如果你胸中有10-20篇范文,中考那点作文难度,岂不是被你顺手拿下?
    2.视力保护
    【题目】
    你的朋友Jack近期来信,诉说自己的视力下降很快,请你给他分析一下原因并提出建议。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]平铺直述,常见原因
    Dear Jack,
    I am sorry to know that your eyesight is getting worse. I think the reasons might be that you have a bad reading habit, or you have used the mobile phones too much.
    Here are some suggestions for you.
    [第二段]提出建议,条理清晰
    First of all, it is important for you to do eye exercises regularly. It will make your eyes relaxed.
    Furthermore, you need to have a good reading habit. For example, don’t put your eyes too closely to the books you read and don’t read for too long.
    At last, I think you should do more outdoor activities and use less electronic devices.
    [第三段]祝福健康
    I hope your eyesight will be better soon.
    【范文赏析】
    对于健康求助类的作文,其格式比较简单,刚开始肯定是“I am sorry to know that+ 问题”这样的套路句,然后直接说I would like to give you some suggestions这样单刀直入的引出句即可。
    之后提出中肯的建议,健康类的建议务必要真实、有效、大众化,切勿追求新颖或独特,然后由于知识有限而出现错误,贻笑大方。
    最后给出真诚的祝福即可。
    3.变废为宝
    【题目】
    请结合你的经历,讲一个“变废为宝”的故事。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]开门见山,概括述说
    How can we put the waste to good use and live a green life? Here is my story.
    [第二段]讲一个简单的故事
    There used to be a lot of used newspapers in our house.
    One day, my friend Jack saw them and told me that we could make them into little paper boxes.
    We learned the procedures online and started to work on them. After two hours of hard work, we got almost twenty nice paper boxes.
    We used these boxes to hold our toys and books.
    [第三段]感叹结尾
    It really feels good to recycle old things and put them into good use.
    【范文赏析】
    写环境类的作文,不仅要积攒点子,比如如何保护环境(比如多种树、少开车、节约能源、垃圾分类等),还得要积攒故事,比如你在保护环境中的一些经历(如打扫公共场所、做环境保护宣传、种树、回收再利用等)。
    本文就是要结合自己的经历来讲回收再利用的故事。诸如此类的,平时要多积累,初中几年累计写200篇以上作文的人,何愁中考英语不高分?
    4.我抓住的机会
    【题目】
    机会稍纵即逝,在生活中,你是否有抓住某次机会的经历,请分享一下你抓住的机会和最终的结果。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]机会难得,遇到则抓
    Chances are valuable, and we should catch them when they come.
    [第二段]分享经历,细化过程
    Last year, our school wanted to choose two students to study abroad as exchange students.
    Although my English was poor, I picked up my courage and wrote a letter to the headteacher.
    I told him how much I wanted to go there, and I promised to try my best to improve my English as well as academic performance.
    He was deeply moved by my words and finally accepted my application.
    [第三段]结果如何,且听我讲
    Now I am back in China and my English has been greatly improved during the past two semesters in England.
    This is a chance I caught. What about you?
    【范文赏析】
    近几年,以某个主题来分享过去的某次经历的作文越来越多,比如“一次有意义的经历”,“一次做饭的经历”,“我抓住的一次机会”等。
    还有“假如你能见到一个名人,你想见谁,见了谈什么,请写一篇作文”等,比比皆是。
    这类作文关键就在于你得有自己的核心积累,比如就以上文中的去国外交换作为题材,可以用来写很多东西,比如我抓住的一次机会,还有一次有意义的经历(将交换缩短成一个月的交流既可以写),等等。
    总之,建议大家提前写一些自己的小故事,修改后背下来;如此以来,不论遇到什么类型的题目,都可以套,这样岂不是始终都立于不败之地?
    5.值得庆祝的一天
    【题目】
    每个人都有值得庆祝的事情或时刻,请以“值得庆祝的一天”为题写一篇作文。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]叙述背景
    Two months ago, my school organized an English speech competition.
    I was afraid to sign up for it because my oral English was not good enough.
    But my English teacher encouraged me to have a try.
    [第二段]叙述过程
    She helped me practice oral English every day.
    She listened to my speech and helped me correct the wrong words and pronunciation.
    I got up very early in the morning to practice.
    [第三段]叙述结果
    After two weeks’ hard work, I eventually I got the first prize in the English speech competition.
    I think I deserve it. It was really a day for me to celebrate in my life.
    【范文赏析】
    对于叙述某个过去事件之类的作文,建议大家提前积累或写一些通用的素材,比如“最难忘的一天”,“最难忘的一件事”,“初中三年最难忘的老师或同学”,“最快乐的一天”,或者“遇到过的一个烦恼”之类的,这些其实都可以用一件事情来写,比较省事。
    当然如果学有余力,可以多准备一些素材,用于不同的素材,比如用参加英语比赛来写老师或同学的帮助;用踢球踢碎了玻璃,逃跑后后悔,来写诚实的重要性;又比如用扶老人过马路来写助人为乐等,各种情况的素材都积累一点,在考场上写起来才能胸有成竹,立于不败之地!
    6.一次有趣的做饭经历
    【题目】
    请叙述你一次有趣的做饭经历。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]写最熟悉的菜,先说菜名
    I cooked for the first time last week. The dish was scrambled eggs.
    [第二段]步步为营,处处逗乐
    First, I cracked some eggs, but I was so nervous that I splashed the egg white everywhere.
    Then, I washed some tomatoes. I almost cut my fingers when I cut the tomatoes into the pieces.
    After that, I heated the oil. I was too afraid to put the ingredients into the frying pan. When I finally did, I quickly jumped away from the pan. I didn’t want to be burned by the splashing oil.
    [第三段]简单总结,完美收官
    I was happy that the dish tasted good at last. This was an interesting cooking experience of mine.
    【范文赏析】
    写“做饭”经历,或其他类似的经历的文章,一定要结构简单,思路清晰,不要东拉西扯,也不要写太多心理活动。
    写做饭,最重要的就是食材和步骤,将二者巧妙结合起来,每一步都注入一个有趣的现象,比如鸡蛋打得到处都是,没切过菜差点切到手,炒的时候盐放多了或怕油都行。
    另外一定要选自己熟悉的话题,比如这里我就选择了西红柿炒鸡蛋,最好写,笑点也多,容易写出花儿来。
    7.我心中的中国元素
    【题目】
    你最喜欢的中国元素是什么?请以the Chinese element in my heart为题写一篇作文吧。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]选择元素,单刀直入
    When it comes to Chinese elements, the Spring Festival comes into my mind at once.
    [第二段]套用春节写法即可
    It is the most popular traditional festival in China and is a time when family members get together and celebrate the lunar New Year.
    On the eve of the festival, people will wear new clothes, decorate the rooms with red couplets, and sit together to watch the Spring Gala.
    Meanwhile, people will also set off fireworks and give lucky money to kids. At last, they will have a big meal together.
    [第三段]再表心迹,首尾呼应
    I really love it because I can receive lucky money and set off fireworks.
    It is the best Chinese element in my heart.
    【范文赏析】
    我心目中的什么...此类的话题,重在选角。你选好了角,这出戏就好演多了。比如,这里我选择了春节,上来就说我心目中最好的中国元素就是春节,接下来就按照介绍春节的套路来写了。春节本身就是大家最熟知的节日,可写的东西非常多,可以选择自己最会写的来写,不容易写错。
    有的同学选择茶、中国结、国画、剪纸、京剧等来写都没问题,但重点是你要对这一领域熟悉,不能稀里糊涂地选一个自己不熟悉的领域来写,这样最容易搞砸。
    此外,大家在平时的素材积累中要提前写一写、背一背自己喜欢的文化素材,以便于在遇到此类作文时随意选择、游刃有余。
    8.课后延时服务
    【题目】
    教育部要求中小学提供课后延时服务,你怎么看这个政策,请写一篇作文谈谈你的想法吧。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]介绍背景,亮明立场
    My school has started to offer us after-school service since last year.
    I fully support this policy because it really gives me a lot of conveniences.
    [第二段]前后对比,形成论据
    Before the policy was carried out, my parents had no time to pick me up after school. Furthermore, they didn’t have time to look after me when I got home. I often played computer games and forgot to do my homework.
    Now we have the after-school service and I can easily finish my homework at school under the guidance of my teachers. We can also take part in various after-school activities, such as art performance and sports.
    [第三段]格式结尾,完美收官
    All in all, it is really a good policy for me. What do you think of it?
    【范文赏析】
    课后延时服务是这几年JY部“双减”新政的一部分,为广大中小学生和家庭提供了非常好的减压服务。
    像这一类政策性的作文,写法一般都是先陈述背景,然后谈谈政策实施前后大家(或自己)的情况变化,以此来论证自己的观点(是否赞成这个政策)。
    对于政策影响这类的作文,一定要用we或I第一人称来写,避免用you第二人称,以免让老师觉得你在颐指气使,把自己摘干净,然后指导别人怎么办。
    9.我喜欢的发明
    【题目】
    请以“我喜欢的发明”为题写一篇发言稿。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]发言稿套语开头
    I am very happy to be here to make a speech today.
    The topic of my speech is my favorite invention. Among all the inventions, I like Internet best.
    [第二段]介绍两个原因
    On one hand, it is very easy for us to search for different kinds of information on the internet, which can be very helpful to our study and life.
    On the other hand, we can see different things or communicate with different people from all over the world on the internet.
    [第三段]再次回顾+总结
    Internet is really a wonderful invention.
    It not only brings us a lot of convenience, but also provides us with a great deal of possibilities.
    Thank you for your attention.
    【范文赏析】
    演讲稿的前后都有套语,这个不能免,中间的内容就和普通作文类似。My favorite invention这类是典型的说明文。首先要明确选定要介绍的发明,建议选择好写一点的,比如internet,比如汽车,比如电灯,比如人工智能都行。选择的话题决定了写作的难度,要选择自己熟悉的,或者写过的,这样比较有把握。
    其他就可以自由发挥了,这类作文总体而言比较简单,不用太多思考。
    10.如何控制愤怒
    【题目】
    生活中我们经常会生气、会愤怒,但生气和愤怒并不好,我们要学会控制它,那应该如何控制它呢?请写一篇80-120字的作文说说看吧。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]泛泛而谈VS 具体化
    Anger is not a good thing because it may easily get us into trouble.
    It is important for us to learn how to control it. Here is my method.
    [第二段]个人控制愤怒的经历
    If I get very angry, I’ll try to calm down first. I will stay in my room or have a walk alone.
    I often use this time to think about what happened and how I feel about it.
    Then I'll tell myself to set free my negative thoughts and focus on the positive ones. Very soon, I will feel better again.
    [第三段]有效+拓展
    I’ve used this method many times and it has been very useful.
    I hope it will help more people.
    【范文赏析】
    如何控制愤怒?如何控制脾气?如何写作文?如何交朋友?^_^
    这种类型的作文其实都是方法类的作文,其结构之前我们讲过,非常简单:第一段要么讲背景,要么解释一下概念,要么讲重要性,第二段给出2-3个建议,第三段收尾。
    但对于如何控制愤怒等类型的作文,涉及心理知识,如果泛泛而谈去讲建议,可能一般初中生并不能讲好,或者可能讲错。所以这里我建议写个人的控制愤怒的经历,这样就算不对,也只是自己的一家之言,不会造成“无知而无畏”的扣分效果。
    所有的写作方法都是死的,但人是活的,灵活发挥是作文更上一层楼的最基本要求。
    11.传播快乐
    【题目】
    快乐可以让人健康长寿。我们不仅要学会自己感受快乐,而且还要学会传播快乐。请以“传播快乐”为题写一篇文章。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]提出需求和问题+引出建议
    Everyone wants to be happy, but few know how to spread happiness to others.
    Here are a few tips.
    [第二段]直抒胸臆,三点到位
    Funny things could bring us happiness. When someone feels down, try to send him a funny message, which may bring laugh and happiness to him.
    Praising is another way to spread happiness. My mother often praises me for my improvement in study. I like the feeling of being praised.
    Being humorous is also important. People all want to talk with people who are humorous because they can feel happiness in the conversation.
    [第三段]好东西要分享,提出希冀
    Happiness a good thing. We should not keep it to ourselves.
    Let's enjoy it together.
    【范文赏析】
    人生苦短,及时行乐。快乐是人生最重要的元素之一。我们不能将快乐攥在手中,需要将它分享出来,才能真正感受到它的魅力。正所谓:独乐乐不如众乐乐嘛!
    如何传播快乐呢?不同的人有不同的办法,但无非就是一点:用自己的方式逗别人开心。有人喜欢讲故事,有人喜欢发信息,还有人喜欢嘴甜夸奖别人,还有人通过捐款捐物,为他人带来实惠,等等。
    无论如何,你都得有自己的办法,而且这个办法还要让阅卷老师信服,这样才能得高分。所以,关于快乐这件事,不光是在书本上就能学明白的呢。你懂了么?(*^▽^*)
    12.如何提高学习效率
    【题目】
    学习效率对于学生很重要,那怎么才能提升学习效率呢?请就此写一篇作文吧。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]重要性+怎么办
    High efficiency is important for a busy student. So how can we improve our efficiency of study.
    [第二段]三个建议
    First, I think the most important thing is to make a good study plan. A plan is just like a time table, which tells us what we should do in a certain time.
    Second, the right method of learning is also critical. If a certain method is useless, we should try another method until we find the right one.
    At last, never hesitate to ask for help. If we meet problems that we can’t solve, we should ask the teachers for help in time.
    [第三段]一句话总结
    With these tips, I have made great progress in my study.
    【范文赏析】
    方法类的说明文都遵从这样一个公式,开头是:“重要性+怎么办”,其中重要性是指今天要写的这个东西对于我们很重要,比如,如何保护环境,首先说:一个好的环境对于我们的生存至关重要,类似的话。怎么办就是其字面意思,一般写一句So how can we protect our environment?或者It is important to know how to ...这类的都行。
    第二段就是具体的建议(笔者称为点子),写2-3个,取决于这些建议的长度,最好不要写太小众或太复杂的内容,要写得让所有人都能看明白才行。
    最后就是谈谈效果或提出希望,1句或2句皆可。
    方法类作文的结构很清晰,是最为典型的三段式,但很多人仍然写不好,究其原因,大多是胸中无墨水,点子想不出来,或者写出来的点子太幼稚,比如保护环境,他就只会写多种树,多骑自行车,除了这种建议就不会写别的,这种情况下自然和其他同学没法比,分数自然高不了。
    还是要多读多写,积累一些素材,写一些让老师“看得起”的点子,比如环境保护这块,可以写一些诸如:使用可再生能源,低碳生活、垃圾分类之类的时髦的内容,增加老师“佩服”你的程度,分数何愁不高?
    13.如果我有很多钱...
    【题目】
    如果你有很多钱,你会做什么呢,请以“If I have a lot of money...”为题写一篇文章。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]正能量开局
    If I have a lot of money, I will do many meaningful things both for me and for other people.
    [第二段]分三段叙述
    First of all, I will donate some money to the poor children in the mountain villages. They can use the money to pay for their education, food and clothes. They can also get the chance to travel to other places of China to broaden their horizon.
    As for me, I want to spend some money on electronic devices, such as AI robots, advanced computers and high-quality cameras. Those are my favorite products.
    Finally, I think I will also save some money for my future.
    [第三段]调皮结尾
    It is really a great plan, isn’t?
    【范文赏析】
    “如果我有很多钱,我会...”,“如果我有机会和一个名人见面,我会...”,此类的作文相对而言比较简单,考察的更多的是大家的词汇和句式,想法方面没有什么难度。大家尽可以自由发挥,但笔者建议还是多往正能量方面靠,多往大众的方向来写,不要写得阅卷人看不懂即可。
    对于钱相关的作文,正能量的话就是做慈善了,捐助贫困孩子,或者资助希望工程都行,另外就是投资自己的爱好等。
    简单的作文,也不能掉以轻心,多写多练才是根本。
    14.我眼中的友谊
    【题目】
    友谊是什么?每个人也许都有不同的理解,那么你心目中的友谊是什么样子的呢?请以“Friendship in my eyes”为题写一篇作文。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]选择角度,定义友谊
    What is friendship? Different people may have different definitions (定义). As the old saying goes, “a friend in need is a friend in need”.
    For me, the essence (本质) of friendship is that friends should help each other when they are in trouble.
    [第二段]抓住定义,举例说明
    Last year when I was in hospital, my friend Jack had been taking care of me after school for two weeks.
    But when I wanted to give him a present for his kindness, he refused. He said: “this is just what a true friend should do”.
    I was deeply moved.
    [第三段]简单重复,轻松结尾
    I think this is what friendship means in my eyes.
    【范文赏析】
    友谊这种类型的作文对于初学者来说比较难,为什么这么说呢?因为很多新手都倾向于下意识地去从心理学、社会学等各种复杂的角度去解释友谊,这样就难免超出了自己的驾驭能力,想写出好的作文,但最终写出来的却是错误百出的片段。
    其实对于抽象概念类型的作文,我们没必要按照科学的标准去解析它,因为这已经远远超出了中学生的水平。我们只需要采用抓住核心点,甚至采用比喻的手法来避实就虚,从而实现事半功倍的效果。
    比如这里,我就只抓住友谊中“帮助”这一核心点来写,其余的都不提,轻松成文。当然大家也可以用“分享”,“信任”,“尊重”等其他友谊的核心特征来写这篇作文,当然你同时也得想出一个故事来说明这个核心特征。相比之下,“帮助”是最容易在考场上快速写出来的点。
    那如何应对此类作文呢?事先写作并由家长和老师辅助修改,然后积累下来是最佳的方法。
    当常见的话题都见多了、写透了,你还会怕这样的题目吗?只有你做好了充足的准备,你才会始终立于不败之地!
    15.克服困难
    【题目】
    人生并非一帆风顺,时刻都充满着困难,请以你曾经克服的困难为材料,写一篇英语作文吧。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]直述困难,简单具体
    When I started learning English, I faced a great problem. I could not pronounce English words correctly because I had a very bad accent (口音).
    [第二段]如何克服,简叙经过
    In order to improve my pronunciation, I had to read English words loudly in the morning with the help of radio tapes and recorders.
    Sometimes I even had to use a stick to help correct my way of pronouncing a word. I kept this habit for three years and now my pronunciation is much better.
    [第三段]总结陈述,完美收官
    My English teacher also taught me how to read English patiently and slowly.
    I have made great progress in the past three years, and now I have finally overcome the difficulty in pronunciation.
    【范文赏析】
    对于如何克服某次困难这种记叙文,其写作套路和“最难忘的经历”之类的作文类似,开头直接点出过去的某个困难即可,然后第二段具体讲讲克服的过程,最后就说现在好了很多,感谢自己的努力之类的套话。
    全程需要用过去时,除了最后涉及到现在感受的部分。
    建议在平时写作中多积累一些过去的特殊经历的素材,这样不论是“过去遇到的困难”,还是“最难忘的经历”,还是“一次帮助他人或被他人帮助的经历”等等题目,都可以轻松拿捏,始终立于不败之地。
    16.如何应对压力?
    【题目】
    现在的中学生面临各种压力,如何应对这些压力对孩子们的健康成长非常重要。作为中学生,你觉得应该如何减轻压力呢?
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]描述现状+提出建议
    As middle school students, we are now facing great pressure in life.
    So how can we deal with it in the right way? Here are some tips.
    [第二段]提出2个建议
    First, it is important for us to relax ourselves after a long day of hard work. Listening to music can be a good choice. It can help us relieve our pressure in life.
    Second, don’t hesitate to ask for help if we are in need. Our parents and teachers will be happy to help us.
    [第三段]以安慰结尾
    Above all, there is no need to be afraid of pressure if we follow the right methods to deal with it.
    【范文赏析】
    压力这个话题很普遍,总体而言比较好写。可以讲自己的一个小故事,然后写一写自己是如何做的,这种比较简单。
    也可以像上面我写的那样,为大家出主意,写2-3个小小的建议,这种难度也不大。重点在于语言表达,而不是立意。
    对于pressure这个词,很多同学容易用错,首先它是不可数名词,来自不同方面的压力可以说different kinds of pressure,不能变复数;另外pressure的词组也不太好把握,一般情况下有很大压力,可以用under great pressure,少用have great pressure这种,感觉到压力,可以用feel stressed等;减轻压力可以用relieve pressure这个词,面对压力可以用face great pressure等。
    中考英语作文也许可以有一成不变的套路,但没有一成不变的素材和内容,不同的话题就得对应不同的核心词汇和思路,只有见得多、写得多、背得多,才能够始终立于不败之地!
    17.如何和父母保持良好关系
    【题目】
    某报社正在就“青少年与父母关系”这一话题进行征文,请你以下述观点为内容,写一篇作文。
    父母管得多,总是让我学习,偷看我的手机等。
    你的解决办法和建议。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【题目】How to keep a good relationship with parents.
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]先说问题,再说已解决
    I used to have some problems getting along with my parents. They often forced me to study for a long time, and tried to look at my cellphone.
    However, after I had a long talk with them, they finally understood me. Now I have more free time and my scores are better.
    [第二段]提出自己的做法和建议
    As a child, we should try to understand our parents. We know they will always love us although they may set lots of rules for us.
    Parents should also try to stand in their children’s shoes so that they can make a better decision for them.
    [第三段]总结上文,交流为本
    Above all, if we want to have a better relationship with our parents, we should communicate with them sincerely.
    【范文赏析】
    随着社会越来越卷,孩子们的压力也越来越大,随之而来的就是和父母的关系越来越紧张。有的父母平时很忙,很少了解孩子的内心想法,只知道给钱和强迫孩子学习,导致孩子出现了叛逆的问题。还有的家长管理孩子就像管理罪犯,每天紧紧盯着,甚至偷看孩子的手机和日记,这都是不可取的做法,可能会导致严重的后果。
    当然对于这一类的英语作文,没必要写得那么深入,因为中考的英语作文很短,主要考察语言表达能力,不可能让你写出花儿来。所以我们也没必要根据自己家的实际情况去一板一眼地去写,以上述范文中的“模特”作为指标来写是最容易得高分的。
    有时候,写实往往不会得高分,反而套路是最容易得分的。懂得了众多套路,你才能始终终立于不败之地。
    18.绿色图书馆
    【题目】
    你心目中的绿色图书馆是什么样的?如果让你设计一个绿色图书馆,你会如何设计呢?请就此话题写一篇作文。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]直接点题+绿色原则设计
    I want to design a green school library. All the things of this library are designed based on the principles of green development.
    [第二段]罗列原则,加以解释
    First, the color of the library must be green, because it reminds people of environmental protection and energy saving. And I want to build it in the shape of a leaf. It symbolizes green life and it also tells us that the energy of the library will come from the sun.
    Second, I am going to use recycled materials to build the library, such as water bottles and waste metals. And it will have a large solar roof.
    Finally, people will find the library very bright, because it will use as much daylight as possible in order to reduce the use of electricity.
    [第三段]总结+展望
    This is how I want to design the green library. I hope it will provide people with a better and greener reading environment.
    【范文赏析】
    绿色原则的重点在于如何理解“绿色”,绿色一般而言是指:环保、节能以及材料的循环利用这三个方面。
    具体到图书馆设计上,可以从建筑的材料,建筑的电力来源,以及形状、装饰等方面来进行“绿色”设计。
    这类作文比较难的原因是考生平时接触这种话题较少,如果在考场上首次碰到这种话题,就可能会马失前蹄。
    建议考生平时可以多积累一些作文的素材,各种各样的题目都可以试一试,实在没时间写,也可以直接读一读或背一背范文,建立属于自己的素材库,这样才能始终立于不败之地。
    19.如何保持健康?
    【题目】
    请以“如何保持健康(How to keep healthy)”为题写一篇征文,投稿到某报纸。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [写法1]正面着手,分层陈述
    Health is very important to everyone. If we are not healthy, we can’t enjoy a happy life. Here are three suggestions about how to keep a healthy lifestyle.
    First, we should eat healthily. Fruits and vegetables can do a lot of good to our health, while junk food can do the opposite. So we should eat more fruits and vegetables and eat less junk food.
    Second, we should not stay late at night. Scientists find that people who don’t sleep at night suffer from a higher risk of diseases.
    Finally, we should take some exercise like running, playing basketball or hiking. They are really necessary for us to keep fit.
    In a word, in order to be fit, we should lead a healthy lifestyle.
    [写法2]反面着手,趋利避害
    More and more people are getting into the state of sub-health today. It is really a problem for our family as well as for our society. So what can we do to keep healthy?
    First, eating healthy is of vital importance. Don’t merely eat meat and eggs. It is better to have more vegetables and fruits; they are really friendly to our stomach.
    Second, playing less e-games and watching less TV are good for our eyes. It is important to avoid shortsightedness.
    Finally, sleeping on time is necessary. As the saying goes, the early bird catches the worm. If you want to get up early, sleep early, too.
    Let’s follow the above advice and be a healthy person.
    【范文赏析】
    对于“如何保持健康?”,“如何保护环境?”类似的说明文,可以从正面入手,先点出保持健康或保护环境的重要性,然后一二三列出你的措施即可,最后总结。这种比较简单,适合大多数人来写。
    也可以选择从反面着手,先可以指出普遍存在的一种不好的现状,而这种现状就是由于不好好保持健康或不好好保护环境造成的,然而下面用一二三列出补救措施,最后总结。这种稍微难点,适合中高阶选手使用。
    另外,就是不论采取何种方式来写,都要注意逻辑清晰、层次分明,这些是写好说明文必备的特质。这几年中考,以河南省为代表的多个省份都比较倾向于考说明文,主要是因为说明文简单好写,适合大部分同学,另外题目也好出,阅卷的标准化程度更高。
    提前准备好各个话题的素材,见到任何话题都能说出个一二三来,才能始终立于不败之地。
    20.我学会了...
    【题目】
    请以“我学会了XXX(I learned to ...)”为题写一篇作文。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]选自己熟悉的领域来写
    这里选取“照顾宝宝”为题:
    Since my little sister was born, I have learned to look after babies.
    I not only take care of my sister, but often help to look after other babies in our big family. It is tiring but interesting.
    [第二段]展开讲学会的内容
    When I am responsible for looking after babies, I often play toys with them and make faces to make them laugh. I am very happy to see smiles on their little faces.
    I can also help the adults make food for them or clean their messes. The work is difficult at first, but later I find it very meaningful.
    [第三段]概括意义和感受
    I think I have learned a lot in looking after the babies. I have become more confident and reliable. It really feels good to learn to look after babies
    【范文赏析】
    上述作文是否能够写好完全取决于选题,所以在写之前一定要三思而后行,胸中成篇之后再下笔才能稳操胜券。
    另外,时态上也要注意,可以采取讲故事的方法来介绍过去自己通过什么事情学会了做什么,这种情况下要使用过去时。
    当然也可以采用上述作文的写法,也即用现在的口吻来介绍你学会的技能,不去写你学的过程或细节,这样就可以全程采用一般现在时,减少了动词形式犯错的可能性。
    总之,写作文的时候一定要有些心机,不能做“傻白甜”,上来就写第一句,然后被第一句逼着写第二句,这样一环套一环,错了一个就错了一大堆,最后覆水难收。
    为何不一开始就策划好套路,从而立于不败之地呢?
    21.学校是个大家庭
    【题目】
    近期,你们学校将举办一次演讲比赛,题目是“学校是个大家庭”,请你用英文准备一篇演讲稿,要突出重点,感情充沛。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]概况1句+点题1句
    For most of us, school is the main place where we spend most of our time and get to know most of our friends.
    We love here because it is just like our home.
    [第二段]两个点子(帮助+分享)
    If we have trouble, our teachers and classmates will not hesitate to help us. We will also do the same for them if they are in trouble. They are just like our families.
    In my school, teachers and students are like true friends, often sharing sorrow and happiness with each other. We will never feel lonely here.
    [第三段]重新点题,头尾呼应
    I can always feel warmth and love at school.
    It is really like a big family and I love it!
    【范文赏析】
    对于演讲稿类的作文,主要的就是要有感情,另外要紧扣主题,不要将重点放在逻辑分层或分析上面,要多注重点子的铺陈。
    另外,坚持使用三段式,开头解释一下演讲的主题,比如:这里是学校,学校是我们待得最多的地方,也是认识的朋友最多的地方,为下文的叙述做好铺垫。
    最后再次表明自己的观点,也即“我喜欢学校,它就像一个大家庭”,这样才有感染力,才比较符合一篇演讲稿的特征。
    当然,不论何种类型的作文,只要你学会模仿该类型作文的特征,那你就会始终立于不败之地。
    22.阅读对于英语学习的帮助
    【题目】
    阅读是学习语言的最重要方式之一,那么阅读对于你的英语学习有哪些帮助呢,请你写一篇作文简单说说吧。
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [写法一]讲故事法
    When I just entered middle school, my English was so poor that I could not ever open my mouth in the English classes. My English teacher gave me a suggestion. That was to read an English book every month.
    At first, I couldn’t finish one in a month. But with the teacher’s help, I quickly learned the right way to read. Two years later, I became the best student in the class. My English was especially excellent.
    Thanks to reading, my spoken English, listening and writing skills were greatly improved. I think I will never give up reading. Do you like reading?
    [写法二]拆解说明法。
    I like reading English magazines very much. Reading plays a very important role in my English learning.
    It helps to improve my listening ability. I managed to understand the English panda program on the radio after reading a lot of magazines on pandas.
    Reading is also very helpful in the improvement of my spoken English. I can now speak publicly about my opinions in English because I’ve read hundreds of books.
    Finally, my writing skills are also greatly improved in the process.
    I think reading opens new windows for us to know about other people’s lives. It is a habit that we should stick to in all our life.
    【范文赏析】
    对于不同的中考作文,我们应采取不同的套路,对于“阅读对于学习的作用”,我们可以从两个角度来考虑。
    第一,如果你比较喜欢讲故事,则可以采取第一种方法,也即讲一个你和阅读之间的故事,来阐明阅读对你的语言能力(中文或英语)的帮助,这样能够让人了解到你的感受,适合比较感性的同学。
    第二,如果你比较喜欢分析,则可以采取第二种方法,也即从阅读对听、说、写三个方面的影响来分析它对你的语言能力的帮助,这样能够让人了解到你的逻辑,适合比较理性的同学来用。
    总之,作为一个合格的考生,你必须知彼知己,了解自己擅长的写作方法,同时了解题意,在正确理解题意的基础上选择合适的方法来写作,才能立于不败之地。
    23.我最崇拜的科学家
    【题目】
    你最崇拜的科学家是谁?请简单介绍一下他/她的基本情况、主要事迹,以及你为什么喜欢他/她?
    要求:
    80-120字。
    层次清晰、表达流畅。
    【写作指导】
    [第一段]开门见山,概括述说
    The scientist who I admire most is Yuan Longping.
    He is a Chinese agriculturalist, and he was believed to be the greatest scientist in the history of new China.
    [第二段]运用套路,化繁为简
    Yuan Longping was born in a poor farmer’s family. When he was young, he learned the importance of agricultural technology.
    After graduation from college, he devoted himself into the development of hybrid rice.
    Finally he created a new kind of hybrid rice which greatly improved the production.
    [第三段]格式结尾,完美收官
    I admire him because he helps millions of people get away from hunger.
    He leads a simple life and cares little about money and fame. He is a noble man who we should always remember.
    【范文赏析】
    中考作文和高考作文越来越类似八股文,只要遵守一定的规范,学会大量的套路,就没有写不好的,得满分更是不在话下。那么有什么套路可以用呢?
    最简单的就是三段式或十句作文法,第一段开门见山,点题并引出下文,第二段是点子罗列,最后一段则是总结和展望。
    另外就是避免语法和词汇错误,句子尽量使用固定句式。这些句式需要在日常训练中背诵下来,或者背一些范文,然后交互印证,交互引用,始终立于不败之地。

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