专题06：书信作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）

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专题06：书信作文-2023年中考英语作文考前强化特训（四川成都）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号

一、书信作文
1．进入初三后，我们的学习生活发生了很大的变化，就目前的情况，请你给你的好友Eric写一封信，告诉他你最近的一些情况。
要点：
1、初三生活的变化，至少谈论4点。（学科变化，日常锻炼变化，休息时间变化……）What did it use to be like? Now?
2、向你的好友寻求一些建议。
要求：
1、文章结构完整，句式多样；
2、词数：120词左右。
3、不得出现真实的人名、地名。
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2．你即将成为一名高一的新生，你所在的高中为了新生的多元发展，想开设一些学生社团，喜欢发展兴趣爱好的你向校长写了一封信件，申请创建一个俱乐部，内容包括。

要求及注意事项：
1. 文段的开头已经给出，请你补出标题、续写剩余部分（主体和结尾）；
2. 参考提示内容，可适当取舍并发挥；
3. 书写工整，语言正确，语句通顺，语篇前后连贯且合乎逻辑；
4. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的真实个人信息；
5. 词数：不少于70词。
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3．假如你是来我校的交换生 Jack，在中国生活2年以来，你对中国有了更多的了解。在新年到来之际，你打算给远在美国的朋友Tom写信。请根据下图，完成书信的内容。
About Chinese study
beforeafter

I find a good way to improve…
AboutChinese Invention

Who? How?What do I think of it?
AboutChinese family
(in my class)
allowed to make own decision on future job?
My opinion...reason...
要求：
1. 要点齐全，每个部分要有主题句。
2. 书写工整，卷面整洁，字数100词左右。
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4．《西游记》是中国初中生必读书目之一。假如你是小明，请根据下图提示，向你远在美国的笔友Eric写封英文信，简要介绍该书和你的读后感，并向他推荐这本书，并请他推荐一本美国作家的书。

注意：1.须全面反映图文提示信息；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3.词数100左右。
参考词汇:monster n. 妖怪
Dear Eric, How’s everything going? I have read a good book named Journey to the West.
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Xiao Ming


5．假如你是李华，上周收到来自意大利笔友Linda的一封信，在信中她告诉你她对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣，希望能了解中国瓷器（Porcelain）。请根据下列表格所给关键词和图片信息，给她写一封回信。
注意：
1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Chinese Porcelain
Material
kaolin, a special kind of clay
Function
make plates; give as a gift
Process
(shape)                (fire)             (polish and paint)
Meaning
wealth and higher class
Dear Linda,
I got your letter last week. In your letter, you told me that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua




6．年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭，传统的年夜饭是除夕祭祖后才能食用。假如你是李华，请给你以Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，向你的外国笔友Jack介绍你家的年夜饭—包括菜式(至少三种)、寓意以及相关的文化习俗，描述吃年夜饭的场景以及家人的感受等，并邀请他明年除夕来你家共聚。

要求：1.文章应涵盖所有要点。内容简洁明了，衔接过渡自然。
       2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
       3.词数：100词左右。
参考词汇：团圆饭reunion dinner   祭祖worship the ancestor
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7．假如你是李华，你三年没见的美国笔友Tony，打算春节到成都旅游，他将于2023年1月15日上午10点到达成都双流国际机场。你到时会穿着红色外套在1号出口处等他。在你给他的回信中还会包括以下内容，同时为了提升你的英语，请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法。

注意：
1.词数：100左右；
2.开头已经给出，不计入总词汇之中。
3.参考词汇：成都双流国际机场 (Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport)，1 号出口处 (Exit 1)
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua


8．假设你是李华，你的笔友Mike对中国传统文化十分感兴趣，他尤其喜欢中国传统工艺品木雕。他将在明年到中国学习，为了让他更好地解中国，请结合下图给他写一封信介绍中国近年来的发展变化并目简单介绍木雕。同时，为了提升你自己的英语，请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法。
要求：1.短文涵盖图表所有内容    2.110词左右，格式已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：雕刻 carve  v.微信 WeChat

Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua


9．假如你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的传统的寓意，同时邀请他在中考前来你家过端午节，一起放松心情。
注意：
1.注意书写格式；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3.词数100左右； 颠倒 upside down
参考词汇：福字the character Fu  中考the Senior High Entrance Exam  颠倒upside down
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10．新学期带来了新变化。“双减”新规(The new rule)的提出让学生们的学习、生活发生了很大的变化。“双减”后，你的生活与之前发生了什么变化？请给学校的校长(Headmaster)写一封信。
1.要点：
1）从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈你是否满意现在的变化；
2）你还有哪些烦恼；
3）请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。
2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2）词数100左右。
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Eric,
I’m writing to tell you about my changes. I found that my life has changed a lot.
We used to have some spare time to do something we enjoyed, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet and listening to the music and so on. But now, we are so busy doing lots of homework. So we can’t do the things we like anymore. Also, we used to have enough time to do sports, but now we get used to staying up so late to study and getting up so early that I nearly have no time to do exercise or relax and I feel tired. Thirdly, my friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together as usual. As a result, it exactly makes a bad influence on our friendship. At last, with the study task becoming heavier and heavier, I often feel more and more pressure and I can’t concentrate on everything I do. I think the life now is busy, tiring but important. But I am worried about the problems above. Could you please give me some suggestions?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：本文以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍进入初三之后自己的学习生活变化，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己的生活发生了很大的变化；
第二步，详细介绍在学科，日常锻炼，休息时间等方面的具体变化；
第三步，讲述自己现在存在的一些问题，并向对方寻求一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be busy doing sth.忙于做某事
②get used to doing sth.习惯做某事
③stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①We used to have some spare time to do something we enjoyed.（省略that的定语从句）
②but now we get used to staying up so late to study and getting up so early that I nearly have no time to do exercise or relax and I feel tired.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
2．参考例文
Dear headmaster,
This is Danny. I want to apply to the school for a new club—English club, because we don’t have much time to use English in our daily life. I want to increase the opportunities for students to use English through the activities in this club. Anyone who loves English or wants to improve his or her English can join us, no matter which grade he or she is in. We plan to hold some activities related to English learning in the small meeting room in the school library from 7:30 to 9:30 every Friday night. We will organize this club in many ways, with a group of leading students organize every activity properly.
I really hope our English club can be started with the support of the school. Thank you!
Yours,
Danny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明写信意图，说明申请什么社团；
第二步，根据要点提示，分别阐述开办社团的原因、谁可加入、何时何地举办何种活动以及如何运营社团等，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达希望学校支持的希望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①related to与……有关的
②organize every activity properly尽善尽美地组织每次活动
③with the support of在……的支持下
[高分句型]
①I want to apply to the school for a new club—English club, because we don’t have much time to use English in our daily life.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Anyone who loves English or wants to improve his or her English can join us, no matter which grade he or she is in.（who引导限制性定语从句；no matter which引导让步状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Tom,
     After studying in China for two years, I know a lot about this country. Let me tell you about the things I learned.
     First, I found a good way to improve my Chinese. When I first got here, I was sad because I can’t improve on my Chinese. But after a few weeks, I found it’s helpful for me to study my Chinese in
the evening every day. Second, I learned that tea is one of China’s inventions. Shennong discovered tea while tasting hundreds of herbs. I think tea is very delicious, and it can help us refresh ourselves.
Third, I learned about the families in my class. More than half of my classmate’s parents didn’t allow their children to make their own decisions on future jobs. I don't think this is correct because we need
freedom on our lives and choices.
     What do you think? Please write back to me.
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                        Jack


【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏提示句式和“提示信息”中“中文学习来中国前和来后的不同，找到的提高中文的好方法；谁发现的茶，如何发现的，你的对它的看法；班里大多数同学的父母不让他们自己选择未来的职业，你的看法及原因”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“在中国学习两年后，我对这个国家了解了很多。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“提高中文的方法；茶的发现与我的看法；班里同学的父母对于未来孩子的职业选择的做法以及我的看法和原因”重点介绍我在中国的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“请给我回信。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① go through通过
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
① Let me tell you about the things I learned.（let引导的祈使句）
② I think tea is very delicious, and it can help us refresh ourselves.（think引导的省略that的宾语从句）
4．例文：
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going? I have read a good book named Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China. I have watched the cartoon Monkey King many times since I was young.
It was written by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang Monk, the Monkey King , Piggie and Monk Sha.They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it.
The Monkey King is my favorite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges. The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. But it’s difficult to understand the ancient Chinese well. I believe I’ll have a better understanding of it if I read it more times. I think it’s worth reading.
Could you please share one novel written by an American writer with me? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Xiao Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，重点内容是图片上的所有提示信息，另外，还需要向他推荐该书，并请Eric推荐一本美国作家的书，此点不能遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明《西游记》的重要性，以及如何了解书中故事的。
第二步，表明关于该书的作者和主要内容，主要内容要体现教育意义。
第三步，描写书中最喜欢的人物和对于该书的看法，重点突出它值得读，即向Eric推荐此书。
第四步，表明请求Eric推荐书，并表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①get over difficulties克服困难
②look forward to期待
③hear from收到来信
④face difficulties and challenges面对困难和挑战
⑤be worth reading值得一读
[高分句型]
①The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it.（so...that...如此……以至于……）
②But it’s difficult to understand the ancient Chinese well.（“it’s +形容词+ to do sth”句型）
5．例文
Dear Linda,
I got your letter last week. In your letter, you told me that you are very interested in Chinese traditional art and want to know about Chinese porcelain. OK, let me tell you.
Chinese Porcelain is made from kaolin, a special kind of clay. It’s used to make plates in our daily life and is also given as a gift. To make Chinese porcelain, it usually has to experience some processes. First, kaolin is shaped by hand and then allowed to air-dry. After drying, they’re fired at a very high heat. Finally it is polished and painted with nature designs. It takes several weeks to complete everything. Now Chinese porcelain has some special meanings. It’s seen as a symbol of wealth and higher class.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明写信目的；
第二步，从材料、作用、过程和意义等方面介绍中国瓷器。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be made from由……制成（看不出原材料）
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①It’s used to make plates in our daily life and is also given as a gift.（含and的并列复合句）
②It takes several weeks to complete everything.（It固定句型）
6．例文
Dear Jack,
    I am glad to know that you are interested in the family dinner on the Spring Festival Eve.
    It is the most important reunion dinner in Chinese traditional culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner after worshipping the ancestors. There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means “having good luck and becoming better” in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means “every year has enough thing to spend”. One of the most important food is dumpling, which means “attracting wealth”. To me, the family dinner on the Spring Festival Eve means happiness. Because at that time, all my families get together and I can get a lot of lucky money.
    I hope you can come to China next year and celebrate the Spring Festival with my family.
                                                                                                                                                                      Yours
                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏参考词汇和“提示信息”中年夜饭的重要性，（至少）三种重要菜式以及它们的寓意，相关文化习俗，自己及家人的感受，以及邀请对方明年来共聚除夕，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“亲爱的杰克，我很高兴知道你对春节前夕的家庭晚餐感兴趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年夜饭的重要性；年夜饭中的代表菜式及它们的寓意；我和家人对年夜饭的感受及一些文化习俗”几方面重点介绍年夜饭的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望你明年能来中国，和我的家人一起庆祝春节。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① on the Spring Festival Eve在除夕夜
② all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①  There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks.（There be句型）
②  One of the most important food is dumpling, which means “attracting wealth”. （which引导的定语从句；one of the+最高级+名词复数表示“其中最……之一”）
7．例文：
Dear Tony,
    I’m glad to hear from you. We haven’t seen each other for three years. How is it going? I have changed a lot since three years ago. You know I used to be short and heavy, but I am tall and thin now. I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. I also study harder and I get better grades now. What about you? Do you have any changes?
   I am glad that you are going to take a trip to Chengdu during the Spring Festival. You will get to Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport at 10 a.m. on January 15th, 2023, I will meet you then at Exit 1 and I will wear a red coat.
   During your visit, you will visit places of interest in Chengdu with me and taste different Sichuang food. It is really delicious. Of course, we will eat dumplings on the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China. Family will get together happily and enjoy a big meal during it.
   I believe you will have a good time. By the way, can you teach me two ways to improve my English? I look forward to your letter.
                                                                                                                                                                     Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请在信中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍两人三年没见，自己的变化；
第二步，阐明对方将要来很开心，将会去机场接他，并制定了旅行计划，也向对方简单介绍春节；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝福，并顺便请教学好英语的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① used to 曾经
②get together团聚
③have a good time玩得开心
④by the way顺便问一下
[高分句型]
①I am more outgoing than I was three years ago. (运用形容词比较级)
②We haven’t seen each other for three years. (运用现在完成时)
8．例文
Dear Mike,
Nice to hear from you. Great changes have taken place in China in recent decades. Our living standards have greatly improved. For example, we used to pay paper money for things. Now we have WeChat and Alipay. You can pay with your mobile phone. In the past, we used to communicate face-to-face. Now we can communicate with wechat and QQ. Chinese Wood carving has a history of more than 4000 years. It needs to be carved, polished and colored. In fact, it is people’s good expectation and wish for life. It also represents China’s national culture. In addition, I’m not very good at English listening and writing. Can you give me some good ways to learn them?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中礼貌地向他请教两条提升英语的方法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。书信开头礼貌用语之后，总述中国近些年发生了巨大的变化；
第二步，具体阐述中国的巨大变化；
第三步，对对方感兴趣的木雕进行简单的介绍；
第四步，请教英语的学习方法。
[亮点词汇]
① used to过去常常
② pay for支付
③ communicate face-to-face面对面交流
④ in addition此外
[高分句型]
①Great changes have taken place in China in recent decades.(用现在完成时强调变化)
② It needs to be carved, polished and colored.(被动语态结构)
9．范文参考：
Dear Mr. Brown,
In your last letter you told me that you are confused why the Fu stuck on your neighbor’s door is upside down. The upside down character “Fu” merely represents the coming of happiness. It is one of our great traditions.
     By the way, there are nearly two months left before the arrival of the Senior High Entrance Exam. Before that, another important festival, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it with my family and have a taste of the delicious zongzi. I’m sure you will be satisfied with your journey.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一片书信作文。给外教Mr. Brown写一封信，介绍福字倒贴的传统的寓意，同时邀请他在中考前来你家过端午节，一起放松心情。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕书信主题可适当发挥，参考所给词汇，正确的描述福字倒贴的传统的寓意。同时确保语句连贯，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。
10．Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rule.
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself. I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time?
Thanks so much!
                                                                 Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。本文是一封学生写给校长的信，要求谈论“双减”政策出台后自己生活的变化及遇到的烦恼，并请校长提出建议来解决烦恼。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，重点描述现在的生活，因此时态使用一般现在时。作文可以分为三个部分：第一段说明写信目的；第二段描述“双减”后生活的变化；第三段陈述遇到的烦恼并请求对方的建议。写作时，注意条理清晰，语言连贯，确保无语法和标点错误。