未来与梦想 热点 04 -备战中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点04 未来与梦想

一、话题作文

1．中国的高速发展离不开每个人的努力，科技的飞跃，社会的进步和文化的传播都离不开一个个优秀的个体。假如你是李华，请用“My dream job”为题，写一篇英语文章向校报投稿。

内容包括：

1. 阐述你将来想做什么样的工作。

2. 能为我们祖国做哪些贡献。

注意事项：

1.90字左右。

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

My dream job

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My dream job

As the saying goes, “Great dreams make a bright future.” My dream is to be a doctor in the future.

I think it’s great to be a doctor. When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. What’s more, being a doctor isn’t only about treating patients. Doctors also do research and experiments so that they can make a contribution to medical service of our country.

I’ll make an effort to become a doctor.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文为一篇写梦想中的工作的记叙文。

②时态：本文应用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态。

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出文章的主题：我梦想中的工作是什么。

第二步，介绍喜欢这份工作的理由，以及这份工作能为祖国做出什么贡献。

第三步，总结全文，表达原望。

[亮点词汇]

①as the saying goes 俗话说

②can’t help doing sth. 忍不住做某事

③make a contribution to… 为……做出贡献

[高分句型]

①When I see sick people in the hospital or on TV, I can’t help worrying about them and want to give them a hand. (when引导的时间状语从句)

②If I become a doctor, I can help many patients get well. (if引导的条件状语从句)

2．三年的初中生活就要结束了，崭新的高中学习即将到来，回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾，展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories”为题，给英文报纸《21st Century》“青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。

1. 内容要包含对过去的回忆和对未来的憧憬；

2. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名，班级和学校名称；

3. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Unforgettable Memories

How time flies! I’m going to finish my junior middle school soon.

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Unforgettable Memories

How time flies! I’m going to finish my junior middle school soon. Lots of memories left in my mind. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in my mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much.

With their help I’ve made great progress. But I’m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided.

Senior high school is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, but our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；

③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步：表明写作意图。内容是以“Unforgettable Memories”为题，给英文报纸21st Century“青春校园”栏目写一篇征文，介绍一下你对过去的回忆和对未来的憧憬。

第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先承接短文开头，从学业有成、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾和对未来的憧憬几个方面详细地叙述。

第三步：书写结语。表示“我相信我能做到。”

[亮点词汇]

①lots of许多

②stay in my mind留在我的脑海里

③go through通过

④be friendly to对……友好

⑤be strict with对某人要求严格

⑥think over仔细考虑 

[高分句型]

①How time flies!（how引起的感叹句） 

② Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. （and连接的并列句）

③And I always make mistakes which can be avoided.（which引导的定语从句）

④As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, but our choice.”（谚语的应用） 

⑤The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. （and连接的并列句）

二、材料作文

3．梦想是一个人的信念与支撑，你有什么样的梦想。请你写一篇短文来阐述你未来的梦想工作，以及如何去实现它。

要求：1.词数不少于80词，

2.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。

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【参考范文】：

I want to be an English teacher when I grow up.

I’m going to study really hard especially the English subject. Now I am very interested in English. And my English teacher is very funny. She always has great ways to make her classes lively. I want to learn from her and become a humorous teacher just like her. I know it requires much to be an excellent teacher. But I will try my best. I hope my dream will come true someday.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”及“一般将来时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明自己梦想的工作；

第二步，具体说明自己如何实现它。

[亮点词汇]

①especially尤其

②excellent优秀的

[高分句型]

① I hope my dream will come true someday.（省略“that”的宾语从句）

4．学校英语报举行“未来之城”征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。短文需包括下图所以提示内容。

注意：

1. 词数不少于80词；

2. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名词。

Our City of the Future

What will our city be like in 2050?

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Our City of the Future

     What will our city be like in 2050? I think it will be quite different from now. The living environment will be greatly improved in the following ways.

     The houses will be both green and smart. Everything will be made by environmental-friendly materials. What’s more, the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without going out. Most of the time people will work at home and they will have fewer working hours because of new technologies. If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all. You can take different kinds of transportations, such as the flying buses: and the driverless cars. The most exciting thing for students will be the widely use of E-books and VR technology at school. As a result, there will be paperless exams and more fun in learning.

      Our city in 2050 will be full of hope and we should work hard to realize it.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍未来城市的房子；

第二步，介绍未来城市的工作和交通情况；

第三步，最后介绍未来的学校。

[亮点词汇]

①What’s more而且

②such as比如

③As a result结果

④be full of 充满

[高分句型]

①the house will be connected to the shops and hospitals so that you can order all kinds of services without going out.（so that引导的目的状语从句）

②If you want to go travelling, there will be no traffic jam at all.（if引导的条件状语从句）

5．假如你是李华，马上面临初中毕业，迎接你的将是充满挑战却又让你满怀期待的高中生活。请根据以下图表信息规划一下你的高中学习和生活。

要求：

(1)参考提示语，可适当发挥；

(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

(3)文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；

(4)词数：不少于90词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)

My Life in Senior High School

My name is Li Hua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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My Life in Senior High School

My name is Li Hua. In three months, I’ll finish my junior school years and go to senior school for another new start in life.

First of all, I must study hard. Because only by going to a good university can I have better job opportunities in the future. At the same time, I also want to exercise hard. I like playing basketball very much. As long as I have time, I will spend time reading every day to enrich my knowledge. I will also use the weekend to do volunteer activities outside to help those in need.

As far as I am concerned, my life in senior high school will be much more colorful than before.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，主要从学习计划、运动以及爱好等方面来介绍高中的生活。具体内容要包含所给提示，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称为主，主体时态为一般将来时，描述现在的情况可以使用一般现在时。文章采用三段式，第一段介绍即将要开始高中生活；第二段从学习、运动以及爱好等方面逐一介绍自己的计划；最后一段总结，展望自己的高中生活。

6．每个人都憧憬美好未来，请以“My Future Life”为题写一篇80词（不含已给的部分）左右的短文，要求短文科学合理，符合逻辑。

My Future Life

My life will be happy and successful in the future. Twenty years later, I will be about 35 years old.

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My Future Life

My life will be happy and successful in the future. Twenty years later, I will be about 35 years old. I will have a really happy family. There will be six people in my family, my parents, my handsome husband and two lovely kids. My dream will also come true. What’s my dream? I will be an astronaut as Wang Yaping. Flying in the sky with a spaceship has been my dream since I was young. Mrs. Wang is my ideal model. At that time I will communicate with her in the sky. My parents will be living a healthy life with their grandchildren. My two kids will study hard and read both Chinese and English a lot. My family will lead a better life with our hard work. Life will be really happy for me!

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“My Future Life”“我的未来生活”为题进行写作，描述未来的生活情况，可以大胆想象，但要科学合理，并且符合逻辑。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文采取一段式写作，开头已经给出，接着介绍未来的家庭情况，自己实现了什么梦想以及家人的生活情况。写作时做到无语法和标点错误。

7．随着我国航天技术的发展和进步，实行太空移民不再是梦。请根据以下提示，写一篇文章介绍未来太空生活。

1.衣服可以检测身体健康

2.住在智能房子，有机器人做家务

3.驾驶飞船，用太阳能行驶

4.自由发挥两点内容

5.你的感受

注意：1词数：80字左右（文章开头己给出，不计入词数）

2短文必须包含所有要点，并适当发挥；

3文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

Space life in the future

Space migration is coming soon. I would like to introduce the space life in the future.

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【参考范文】

Space life in the future

Space migration is coming soon. I would like to introduce the space life in the future.

In the future, the clothes we wear can detect our physical health so that we can know our health at any time. And we will live in a smart house with robots doing housework. We will have more time to do what we are interested in. What’s more, we will fly a spaceship running on solar power. At last, there will be no pollution in the space and there will be much better living environment.

I think this kind of life is very wonderful. I’m looking forward to it.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是以“Space life in the future”为题，并结合所提示内容，介绍未来的太空生活，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点介绍未来的太空生活；第三段介绍自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

8．今年三月份，中国国家宇航员王亚平及她的伙伴们又一次给全国的孩子们带来了别开生面的天宫课堂，一个个有趣的物理实验激发了大家探索太空的兴趣。假设你是李雷，请你以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英文短文谈谈你的观后感，并使用以下提示问题，词数80左右。

1. Do you want to explore space?

2. What will you do if you are in space?

3. How will you achieve your space dream?

注意事项：

1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

My Space Dream

It’s reported that millions of students and teachers watched the space lecture hosted by Wang Yaping and her partners in the space station lately.

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My Space Dream

It’s reported that millions of students and teachers watched the space lecture hosted by Wang Yaping and her partners in the space station lately.

I have a dream. I want to become an astronaut when I grow up. I am eager to explore space in the future. One day, I will take a space walk like Wang Yaping. I will observe many unknown planets carefully. I will have a view of China from our mysterious space.

As for now, I plan to study science knowledge well, strengthen my body and make preparations for realizing my space dream.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“My Space Dream”为题，根据提示问题写短文谈谈自己的太空梦。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。可分为三段式写作：第一段用已给出开头；第二段介绍自己的太空梦及将会在太空中做什么；第三段介绍将如何实现自己的太空梦。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

9．“If the youth are wise, the country will be wise. If the youth are strong, the country will be strong.” “少年智则国智，少年强则国强。”出自梁启超的《少年中国说》。

作为当代青少年，应该努力学习，不断进取，做一个坚强、自信、独立的少年，以期不久的将来报效祖国。那么，在成长过程中青少年应该做什么？怎么做？请你根据下表提示以 “The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country” 为题，写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法。除了提示中的内容，请你至少再补充一条。

参考词汇：

confident自信的，successful成功的, failure失败，make progress进步

注意：

①主题突出，要点齐全，条理清晰，语言规范；

②可适当发挥，80词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数；

③文中不得出现真实的学校、姓名等信息。The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country

As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country

As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.

Basically, we should build up our bodies by taking some exercise, such as running, swimming and so on. In this way, we can keep ourselves strong and healthy.

What’s more, developing some interests is also a good way. We can learn to play the piano, sing songs and so on.

In addition, I think it’s our duty to do some housework at home. Then our parents can live an easier life. Also, by doing this, we can learn to be independent.

Lastly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. The more books we read, the more powerful we’ll be. Thus, we can help build our country and enjoy a better life.

If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up a fully developed person.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以以“The Strong Youth Make a Strong Country”为题，根据要点提示写一篇短文介绍青少年如何做才可以成为一个坚强、自信、独立的少年。

2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时；人称主要以第一人称为主；在写作时要根据要点，从锻炼、培养兴趣、做家务以及学习四个方面进行叙述，注意要内容完整，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，无标点和语法错误。

10．你校英文报正开展以“未来的生活”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图文提示写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你对未来生活的设想。

要求：

1.所写内容包括以上要点；

2.内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

4.100词左右；标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Life in the Future

With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Life in the Future

With the development of science and technology, life in the future will be quite different. The environment will be nicer. The trees will be greener and rivers will be clearer. There is no heavy traffic any more on the earth. Buildings like houses, hospitals will be built in other planets or under the sea. So there is enough space for people on the earth. Robots will do dangerous and hard work instead of human beings. They make people have more time to relax and enjoy their lives. The clothes that we wear will change their colors and styles according to the weather and our moods. We’ll have easier and more convenient lives in the future.

【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知要求以“未来的生活”为主题，分别从环境、交通、植物、建筑、机器人以及危险工作等几个方面展开讨论，并且自己可以适当地添加一些合理内容，使文章内容更加丰富。

2.写作指导：这是一篇围绕未来生活的作文，时态以一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。题干开头已经给出，写作根据提示内容依次介绍即可，中还另外介绍未来人们的衣着变化，充实文章内容。

11．一家英语杂志社向中学生征文，主题是“二十年后的我”。请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文。

（1）工作；（2）家庭；（3）业余生活。

注意：（1）词数80～ 100；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；（4）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I often imagine what my life will be like in 20 years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】：

I often imagine what my life will be like in 20 years. With no doubt, my life will be very different.

I’ll be thirty-five years old by then. I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer, enjoying my work and getting along well with my fellow workers. At that time, probably with two lovely children. Believe it or not, I’ll continue to take exercise, I’ll travel around the world.

In a word, my life will be much more colorful.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于想象类作文。本文以“二十年后的我”展开，根据提示完成文章，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文应使用第一人称来书写；时态应选用一般将来时描述20年后的生活；文章的三个段落构成“总—分—总”结构，进行首尾呼应；文章第二段在具体描述20年后生活的时候，需要适当添加细节，注意词汇和句式的多样性，且条理清晰，合乎逻辑。

12．广州是一座历史文化名城。自古流传的“食在广州”和近年兴起的“广州过年，花城看花”，我们不难看出广州以她的美食和风景而闻名于世。广州以她特有的水土，孕育了开放包容的文化观念，滋养着一代又一代既尊重传统、心怀祖国，又敢于突破创新、具有国际视野的广州人。他们用汗水和智慧让这座城市发展成如今无论是社会、文化还是环保、科技等方面都有所成就的一个国际都市。那么，在广州学习与成长的你，是否也想为广州的未来做一些贡献呢？

    下周的英语课上，你们班将组织一场以“广州·一起向未来（Together for a shared future of Guangzhou）”为主题的演讲比赛，请你以未来广州主人翁的身份，按提示且结合自身经历准备一份演讲稿。

1. 你对广州的印象；

2. 你对未来广州的构想（选取一个方面展开描述）

3. 你的做法（请补充1~2点）

注意：1. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

  2. 不得透露自己学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Together for a shared future of Guangzhou

Guangzhou is a city with a long history.

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Together for a shared future of Guangzhou

Guangzhou is a city with a long history. It’s very famous for its food. Having morning tea is a tradition in Guangzhou. Moreover, it has got many achievements in technology and economy.

I think it will be better in the future. For example, it will attract many visitors from all over the world because of its rich culture and delicious food. In the future, more and more restaurants will be built in order to satisfy all people’s needs. All kinds of traditional food will be improved greatly to cater to different people.

In my opinion, I will study harder to make myself better. And then I will exercise more to keep healthy. In this way can I make contributions to the city better.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以“Together for a shared future of Guangzhou”为主题写一篇演讲稿；要求包含所有提示内容。

2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般将来时为主；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：阐述对广州的印象；第二段：阐述对未来广州的构想；第三段：阐述自己的做法。