07 运动与健康 中考英语满分作文赏析

07 运动与健康

NO.1

（2022·湖北恩施·中考真题）近期，恩施州《幺妹带你慢慢耍》职工工间操比赛掀起了全民健身的热潮，越来越多的人认识到了运动的重要性。请你为某网站写一篇文章，谈谈你最喜欢的运动。

要点提示：

1. 你最喜欢的一项运动；

2. 这项运动的好处（至少2点）；

3. 做这项运动时的注意事项（至少2点）；

4. 建议人们多运动。

写作要求：

1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；

2. 条理清晰，字迹工整；

3. 词数为80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。

Nowadays, more and more people take part in sports to keep healthy._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

Nowadays, more and more people take part in sports to keep healthy. Of all sports, I like swimming best. Because it can not only be good for my health, but also make me relaxed.

However, we should pay attention to this sport. First, we had better not swim too long. Because it may let us have a cramp in the leg. Second, we had better not swim in the evening, which makes us too excited to go to bed.

Let’s do sports from now on and enjoy it.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“运动”写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己喜欢的运动是什么，介绍这种运动的好处；第二段介绍游泳时的注意事项；最后一段呼吁人们运动起来。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.2

（2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）2022北京冬奥会的成功举办，掀起了全民对冰雪运动的热爱。SOS儿童村为了给孩子们进行冰雪专项训练，现招聘10名志愿者。请为SOS儿童村写一则招聘广告。

招聘条件：1.擅长冰雪运动（滑冰，滑雪ski）2.善于和孩子们相处 3.周六上午工作

联系人：丁老师（电话号码0542-5985211）

要求：1.字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确；2.词数：30-50词。

Volunteers Wanted for SOS Village

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【满分作文赏析】

Volunteers Wanted for SOS Village

SOS Village needs 10 volunteers for the children. Are you good at skating or skiing? Are you good with children? Are you free on Saturday morning? Please call Mr. Ding at 0542-5985211.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写招聘广告，要点要包括题目中提到的所有，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第二人称来展开描述；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确精炼，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

NO.3

（2022·湖北湖北·中考真题）饮食不当，可能会诱发多种疾病。以下图片是李华同学的一次就诊经历，请结合图片及所给提示词，发挥你的想象，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，讲述一下他经历了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

提示词：at the clinic (诊所)；junk food；stomachache；medicine

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【满分作文赏析】

Possible Version One:

One day, Li Hua had a stomachache. His father took him to a clinic right away.

At the clinic, a nurse asked what was wrong with Li Hua. He answered, “I had a stomachache, maybe I ate too much junk food last night.” Then, the nurse took him to see a doctor. The doctor examined him carefully. He told him to take some medicine and rest in bed.

One day later, Li Hua felt better. He realized that he would cat more vegetables and fruit, less junk food in the future.

Possible Version Two:

Li Hua is a boy who likes eating junk food very much. Last night, after dinner, he started eating again as usual. A few hours later, a strong feeling of stomachache struck him and his face turned pale at once. His father took him to the nearest clinic. Soon a nurse came and asked what happened. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to stay in bed. He didn’t feel better until he took the pills.

Junk food is delicious, but it is not so healthy. We should eat regularly and do sports often. The better living habits are, the healthier we’ll be.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据图片以及图片上的词汇展开想象写一篇作文，关于李华的就诊经历。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称以第三人称为主。结合题干内容和图片可知李华应该是肚子疼。所以可以围绕这一点展开叙述。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

NO.4

（2022·湖南郴州·中考真题）近段时间，某中学不少学生因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生会主席李华准备利用English Broadcast时间建议学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼，以提高身体素质。请你根据下表提示，为他准备一份英语，发言稿。

参考词汇： affect vt. 影响

要求：

（1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；

（2）词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

Boys and girls,Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all! Thanks for your listening!

【满分作文赏析】

Boys and girls,

Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union. Recently quite a few students in our school couldn’t have lessons as usual because they had a cold. This affected their studies. In order to make you stronger, I’ll give you some useful advice.

Firstly, it’s important to have a healthy eating habit. You should eat more vegetables and fruit but less junk food. Secondly, you’d better sleep well. Don’t stay up late. Besides, do exercise every day. You can take a walk or run. Lastly, a good attitude towards life is also good for your health.

I’m looking forward to seeing you happier and healthier! That’s all! Thanks for your listening!

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格提示要点，写一篇关于学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼的建议，以提高身体素质的作文。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时可分为三段，第一段承接开头，点明主题；第二段介绍具体的建议；第三段表示感谢。写作时可适当使用过渡词使文章通顺，另外确保作文逻辑清晰，无单词拼写和语法错误。