福建高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

申请信

1．假定你是某国际学校学生李华，为迎接新西兰学生代表团，你校计划筹办一场以“唐诗宋词”为主题的文艺演出，现在正在招募演员。请你给负责人Ms. Mary写封自荐信，要点如下：

1.写信目的；

2.个人优势；

3.表达期待。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

Dear Ms. Mary,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hu

2．假定你是李华，作为交换生(exchange student)在英国伦敦某中学就读，你很想参加Carsten教授的团队组织的2023年人工智能大会(AI Conference 2023)。请你给Carsten 教授写一封信，内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.询问参会要求；

3.想参会的原因。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Prof. Carsten,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，正在新西兰读书，得知学校计划创办一份中文报纸并招聘编辑。请你给相关负责人写一封邮件，申请担任编辑。内容包括：

1.写邮件的目的；

2.申请缘由；

3.你的优势。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

4．假定你是李华，打算应聘你校学生英语报Youth的Growing Up Stories栏目的编辑，请用英语写一封应聘信，内容包括：

1.对栏目的理解；

2.个人优势。

注意：

1.写作词汇应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Chief Editor,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

5．假设你是李华，你校即将举办以“福文化”为主题的中外学生交流活动，正在招募志愿者，请你根据以下内容，写一封申请信。

1. 写信目的；

2. 自我介绍；

3. 希望获准。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 信件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；

4. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Sir,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你从报纸上得知当地博物馆正在招募英文志愿者，请你根据以下要点提示，写一封申请信，内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 自身优势；

3. 希望获准。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节、以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校为即将召开的校园科技节（Campus Science Festival）招募志愿者，请你给项目负责人Peter写信应聘，内容包括：

1.个人优势；

2.相关经验。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Two. …

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李明，从网上看到一则国际中学生环保夏令营招募启事，欢迎各国学生参加。请你写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容包括：

1.申请参加

2.个人优势

3.希望获准

注意：词数80字左右，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯，开头已写好，不计入字数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Ming, a middle school student from China.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

9．假定你是李华，你从网上得知某英语报社要在你所在的城市招募一名中学生记者。请你结合自己的情况，用英语写封求职信，内容主要包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 个人情况；

3. 致谢并表达希望。

注意： 1. 词数80词左右；   

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假设你是李华，伦敦奥组委(Olympic Committee) 向全球中学生招募志愿者。你申请参加，希望能得到实践锻炼。请根据以下要点给组委会负责人Mr.Stevens写封信：

1. 自我介绍（性格特点，自身优势……）

2. 申请原因（服务、交友、提高语言水平）

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总次数）

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Stevens,

I’m Li Hua from China and

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Ms. Mary,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 3. Learning that you are recruiting actors for the art show, I’m writing to apply to be one of them.

I’m convinced that I’m suitable for the work. First of all, I have a good knowledge of Tang Poetry and Song Ci. Besides, I’m easy-going and good-natured, making it easy for me to get along well with others. Most importantly, I have participated in many art shows and gained considerable acting experience, which makes me more qualified.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校负责人Ms. Mary写封自荐信，推荐自己担任以“唐诗宋词”为主题的文艺演出的演员。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先： First of all→ Firstly

与某人相处得好：get along well with sb.→ be on good terms with sb.

参加：participate in → take part in

回复：reply→ response

2.句式拓展

现在分词作后置定语改成定语从句

原句：I’m easy-going and good-natured, making it easy for me to get along well with others.

拓展句：I’m easy-going and good-natured, which makes it easy for me to get along well with others.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m convinced that I’m suitable for the work. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Most importantly, I have participated in many art shows and gained considerable acting experience, which makes me more qualified. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)

2．Dear Prof. Carsten,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China, who is studying in London this term. Knowing that the AI Conference 2023 will be held around the corner, I am writing to apply to take part in it.

Could you please inform me of some details about the conference? I wonder whether I need any experience before. I have a preference for AI. What’s more, it is a good way to broaden my horizon.

Hopefully, you can give me the opportunity. Expect to hear from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给Carsten教授写信，表示想参加Carsten教授的团队组织的2023年人工智能大会(AI Conference 2023)。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：take part in→participate in

告知：inform sb. of sth. →tell sb. sth.

喜欢：have a preference for→be fond of

机会：opportunity→chance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hopefully, you can give me the opportunity.

拓展句：I hope that you can give me the opportunity.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Knowing that the AI Conference 2023 will be held around, I am writing to apply for a chance to take part in it.(that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2]

I wonder whether I need any experience before.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句)

3．Dear Sir/Madam,

 I’m Li Hua. Learning that the school is planning to start a Chinese newspaper and is recruiting editors, I’m writing to apply for it.

 I’m confident that I’m qualified. Firstly, I am so keen on the events of our school that I am capable of editing the stories happening in the school. Besides, I have such a good command of Chinese that I have no difficulty in editing articles in Chinese. Last but not least, I am good at art and photography, so I can make a beautiful page for the newspaper and make it more attractive.

 If chosen, I’ll be devoted to the job.

 Looking forward to your early reply.

 Yours

 Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校计划创办的一份中文报纸的相关负责人写一封邮件，申请担任编辑，内容包括：1.写邮件的目的；2.申请缘由；3.你的优势。

【详解】1.词汇积累

有资格的：qualified→eligible

另外：besides→moreover

能够：be capable of→be able to

擅长：be good at→do well in

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Last but not least, I am good at art and photography, so I can make a beautiful page for the newspaper and make it more attractive.

拓展句：Last but not least, I am good at art and photography, which enables me to make a beautiful page for the newspaper and make it more attractive.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that the school is planning to start a Chinese newspaper and is recruiting editors, I’m writing to apply for it. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Firstly, I am so keen on the events of our school that I am capable of editing the stories happening in the school. (运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句)

4．One possible version:

Dear Chief Editor,

Hearing that some editors are needed for the Student English Newspaper, I’m writing to apply for the post sincerely.

I’m Li Hua, a student from senior three. As an English lover, I have been reading the Student English Newspaper since I became a student of the school. I have learnt a lot about English learning skills and foreign culture by reading it.

Fluent in English writing, I am sure that I will be capable of doing well as an editor. Besides, I once worked as the chief editor of the English Newspaper of our class, which I believe will be helpful for the job.

I would appreciate it if my application could be taken into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封关于应聘学校学生英语报Youth的Growing Up Stories栏目编辑的应聘信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

需要：need→want

职位：post→position

回复：reply→response

考虑：take into consideration=take into account

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I’m Li Hua, a student from senior three. As an English lover, I have been reading the Student English Newspaper since I became a student of the school.

拓展句：I’m Li Hua, a student from senior three, who have been reading the Student English Newspaper as an English lover since I became a student of the school.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, I once worked as the chief editor of the English Newspaper of our class, which I believe will be helpful for the job. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Hearing that some editors are needed for the Student English Newspaper, I’m writing to apply for the post sincerely. (运用了现在分词作原因状语)

5．Dear Sir,

  I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the activity called “China Fu Culture” in our school. I think I am qualified for this job.

  First of all, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese Fu culture. In addition, since I entered senior high school I have taken part in many voluntary activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. Furthermore, I am good at paper cutting, if I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can teach them how to make paper-cut.

  I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

                Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。文章要求考生李华写信申请成为“福文化”为主题的中外学生交流活动的志愿者。

【详解】1.词汇积累

此外：in addition → what’s more

参加：take part in → join in

擅长于：be good at → do well in

机会：opportunity → chance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

简单句: I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the activity called “China Fu Culture” in our school.

复合句: I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the activity which is called “China Fu Culture” in our school.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese Fu culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Furthermore, I am good at paper cutting, if I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can teach them how to make paper-cut. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

6．Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, who is a middle school student. Knowing from the newspaper that the city museum is taking in some volunteers, I am writing to apply to be one.

My advantages can be listed as follows. First of all, I have a good command of English so that I have no trouble communicating with others. Additionally, I am friendly and helpful, which allows me to help those in need. Most importantly, I worked as a volunteer last month, which has equipped me with some relevant experience, so I have the confidence that I’ll be a qualified volunteer and live up to your expectations.

I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“当地博物馆正在招募英文志愿者”一事，写一封求职申请信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

招募：take in→recruit

此外：additionally→what’s more/in addition

充当：work as→serve as

考虑某物：take sth. into consideration→take sth. into account

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：My advantages can be listed as follows.

拓展句：My advantages can be listed as follows, which make me suitable for a volunteer.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am Li Hua, who is a middle school student. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】First of all, I have a good command of English so that I have no trouble communicating with others. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)

【高分句型3】Additionally, I am friendly and helpful, which allows me to help those in need. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．Possible version:

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Two. Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Campus Science Festival, I’m writing to apply to work as a volunteer.

I think I’m qualified for the job. First, I’m keen on science and have a good knowledge of it, so I can introduce the latest scientific information to the schoolmates. Besides, I’m warm and friendly, which enables me to get along with others. Most importantly, my voluntary experience helps me cope with the potential problems with ease.

Hopefully, I can receive your acceptance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校为即将召开的校园科技节（Campus Science Festival）招募志愿者，请你给项目负责人Peter写信应聘。

【详解】1.词汇积累

喜爱：be keen on→be fond of

另外，此外：besides→in addition

处理：cope with→deal with

掌握：have a good knowledge of→have a good command of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Most importantly, my voluntary experience helps me cope with the potential problems with ease.

拓展句：Most importantly, I have had a similar voluntary experience, which helps me cope with the potential problems with ease.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Campus Science Festival, I’m writing to apply to work as a volunteer. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, I’m warm and friendly, which enables me to get along with others. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

8．Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Ming, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am strongly interested in it.

Above all, having been exposed to English for 10 more years, I have a good command of both spoken and written English. Furthermore, I think it a rare opportunity to link my interest with social experience. Therefore, I think the position is a perfect choice for me.

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. (93 words)

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件申请参加国际中学生环保夏令营。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

强烈地：strongly→intensely

另外：furthermore→moreover

连接：link→connect

因此：therefore→hence

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Above all, having been exposed to English for 10 more years, I have a good command of both spoken and written English.

拓展句：Above all, I have been exposed to English for 10 more years, which makes me have a good command of both spoken and written English.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am strongly interested in it. (运用了that引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2]I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

9．Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to apply to be the reporter in a middle school that you recently advertised for. I am full confident that I’m the right person for the position.

First, I can speak English fluently. What's more, I’m expert at taking photos and skilled at computers, which I’m sure is beneficial to the interviewing work. As an outgoing boy, I take an active part in all kinds of activities. I love to express myself, while I’m a good listener as well.

I sincerely hope that my application will be taken into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向你所在的城市的某英语报社写一封求职信，申请中学生记者岗位。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在进行时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 写信目的；

2. 个人情况；

3. 致谢并表达希望。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

apply to do sth.; be expert at doing sth.; be skilled at doing sth.; be beneficial to; take an active part in; take…into consideration; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I'm writing to apply to be the reporter in a middle school that you recently advertised for.

2. What's more, I’m expert at taking photos and skilled at computers, which I’m sure is beneficial to the interviewing work.

3. As an outgoing boy, I take an active part in all kinds of activities.

4. I sincerely hope that my application will be taken into consideration.

5. Looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First

2.表并列补充关系：What's more

3.表转折对比关系：while

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] What's more, I’m expert at taking photos and skilled at computers, which I’m sure is beneficial to the interviewing work. 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型2] I sincerely hope that my application will be taken into consideration. 用了that引导的宾语从句。

10．Dear Mr. Steven,

      I’m Li Hua from China and I’m writing to you to apply for the job as a volunteer for the coming London Olympic Games.

      I’m a friendly and helpful girl and I’m active in taking part in volunteer activities. There will be less language difficulty for me because English is my favorite subject and I’m quite good at it. What’s more, I’ll graduate from senior high this summer and I’ll have proper time to work for the Olympics.

      I’m crazy about sports and if I can get the opportunity, I’ll try my best to serve the Olympics. On the other side, I’m sure that I will benefit a lot from the volunteering job, such as making new friends, improving my oral English and communicating skills. I’ll appreciate it very much if I can be given the chance.

      I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会负责人Mr.Stevens写封信，申请成为伦敦奥运会志愿者。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 自我介绍（性格特点，自身优势……）

2. 申请原因（服务、交友、提高语言水平）

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

apply for; helpful; be active in; take part in; difficulty; be good at; graduate from; be crazy about; opportunity; try one’s best; benefit a lot from; such as; oral English; appreciate; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.  I’m Li Hua from China and I’m writing to you to apply for the job as a volunteer for the coming London Olympic Games.

2. I’m a friendly and helpful girl and I’m active in taking part in volunteer activities.

3. There will be less language difficulty for me because English is my favorite subject and I’m quite good at it.

4. What’s more, I’ll graduate from senior high this summer and I’ll have proper time to work for the Olympics.

5. I’m crazy about sports and if I can get the opportunity, I’ll try my best to serve the Olympics.

6. On the other side, I’m sure that I will benefit a lot from the volunteering job, such as making new friends, improving my oral English and communicating skills.

7. I’ll appreciate it very much if I can be given the chance.

8. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then（供参考）

2.表并列补充关系：What is more,On the other side

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句) （供参考）

4.表因果关系：Because

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] There will be less language difficulty for me because English is my favorite subject and I’m quite good at it. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] On the other side, I’m sure that I will benefit a lot from the volunteering job, such as making new friends, improving my oral English and communicating skills. (运用了动名词作宾语以及that引导的宾语从句)