07 求助信 --英语满分作文分类话题---应用文万能句型写作速成技能突破加模板与练习

  07  高中英语满分作文分类话题---万能句型写作速成技能突破加模板与练习

                     —————求助信

【篇章结构】

      1. 自我介绍，点明写作目的

      2. 具体陈述所需要哪方面的帮助或者自己遇到的困难

      3. 恳请对方帮助并表达谢意

【话题词汇】

1. challenge 挑战
2. facing 面临 (常置于句首作状语)

Facing so much pressure she didn't know what to do

3. faced with面临(常置于句首作状语)

Faced with so much pressure, she could hardly stand it.

4.beg sb.to do sth. 恳求某人做某事

5.beg sb.of sth.恳求某人提供某物

Can I beg you of your help?

6. beg sb.for sth.向某人恳求某物

7. average一般的

8.follow one's advice 采纳某人的建议

 I'll follow your advice and try to do my work well.

9. make progress 取得进步

I'm sure with your help I'll make greater progress in my English study.

10. have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难

I have much difficulty in my English study.

11 .have trouble in doing sth.做某事很费力

12. help sb.out of difficulty帮助某人摆脱困境

13. would like sb.to do sth.请某人做某事   

【核心句型】

 一 凤头

1. I’m writing to ask for your help.

我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。

2. I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.

  我写信想问您是否可以帮我个忙。

3. I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.

  我写信希望您能给我帮助。

4. I’m writing in the hope of your assistance in preparing for the approaching singing talent show.

 我写信是希望您能帮我为即将到来的唱歌才艺大赛作准备。

二 猪肚

1. I am poor in overcoming the difficulties in the English study on my own.

我不擅长自行解决英语学习中遇到的困难。

2. I have some difficulties in writing the articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals.

我在撰写有关美国人如何度过节假日的短文上遇到了一些困难。

3. I can’t be passionate and energetic in English class so as not to make every moment meaningful and splendid.

  我英语课上没有激情不活跃，这样不能让每一分钟有意义和令人满意。

4. I have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and putting them into use in my speaking and writing,  which has been annoying me for a long time.

我在掌握高级语法方面有困难，而且不能运用到说和写中，这困扰了我很长时间。

5. I'm not sure whether I have got my ideas across, so I have no choice but to turn to you in the hope that you can correct the mistakes as well as give me some favorable advice on writing.

我不确定我的想法是否已经表达清楚了，所以我只好向您求助，希望您能帮忙纠错，同时针对写作给我一些可行的建议。

6. As it is getting close to the end of the semester, we need to find a part­time job for social practice. I intend to apply for one position in a company.

随着本学期的结束，我们需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算申请一家公司的职位。

7. Because it is the first time that I have written an application, I wonder if there is anything to pay attention to. So, I'm writing you the letter, hoping you can do me a favor.

因为这是我第一次写个人申请，不知道该注意些什么。所以我写信求助，希望您能帮忙。

8. It is the first time for me to apply for a job, and I'm not quite familiar with the format of the resume and the job application, which I have prepared. So would you please do me the favor to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials?

这是我第一次申请工作，我对我准备的个人简历以及工作申请的格式不是很熟悉。所以您能帮我纠正材料中措辞和格式方面的错误吗？

  三 豹尾

1. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to prepare myself for college life.

 如果你能给我一些关于如何为大学生活做准备的建议，我将不胜感激。

2. It would be of great help if you can offer me some valuable suggestions on how to make a wonderful English speech.

  如果您能帮我提一些关于英语演讲的建议，那将会是很大的帮助。

3. I'd be very grateful if you could do me a favor.

如果您能帮忙，我将感激不尽。

4. If possible, when can I come to meet you at your earliest convenience? Will Friday afternoon do?

如果可能的话，您什么时候方便我去见您？星期五下午行吗？

【礼貌升华练一练】

1. if...could

Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。

It would be very nice of you if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.

2. appreciate

Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。

It would be greatly appreciated if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could have my draft polished at your convenience.

3. possible

Please polish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。

Is it possible if you could have my draft polished at your convenience?

【话题词汇写一写】

1. 挑战  _______________

2. 面临 (常置于句首作状语) _______________

3. 面临(常置于句首作状语) _______________

4. 恳求某人做某事 _______________

5. 恳求某人提供某物 _______________

6. 向某人恳求某物 _______________

7. 一般的 _______________

8. 采纳某人的建议 _______________

9. 取得进步 _______________

10.做某事有困难 _______________

11 .做某事很费力 _______________

12. 帮助某人摆脱困境 _______________

13. 请某人做某事  _______________

【经典考题】

假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：

1. 行程信息；

2. 钱包特征；

3. 联系方式。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                          Yours sincerely

                                                                          Li Hua

【满分作文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London.

I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one . What’s worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.I’d appreciate it if you could help me to get it back.

Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com

Thank you for your time and support.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【习作点评】

第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane, on arrival…, I found it gone. it must have……Has anybody happened to find it? Thank you for your time and support.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【高分句型1】

What’s worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it.

更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。What’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。

【高分句型2】

I’d appreciate it if you could help me to get it back.

如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。

【模板仿写】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

____________________________我写信report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London.

I clearly remember it was with me____________________________我一登上飞机. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one . __________________________更糟糕的是, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. ____________________________和上面的东西一起的, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.____________________________我将感激不尽 if you could help me to get it back.

____________________________有人偶然发现它了吗？Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com

Thank you for your time and support.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【即时训练】　　　

　假如你叫李华，在光明中学读书,在学习英语的过程中你遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助。现在你给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下:

1.学习英语时遇到的问题生词多，记忆有难度

2.课文长,背诵不可能

3.语法难,理解有障碍

4.向英语老师提出帮助

注意:

 1.词数100左右;

   2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

   3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear teacher.

   I am writing this letter to say sorry to you for my fault that got you injured.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

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                                                                                     Yours,

                                                                                     Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear teacher.

My name is Lihua. I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met much difficulty in learningEnglish First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.Besides,the texts are too long for me to recite.What's more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.

Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily? In the meanwhile,I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you.Also,I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar.

I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.

                                                                                     Yours,

                                                                                     Li Hua