中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 20 减负 (含答案)

热点20 减负

减负无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：减负。

【预测题目】

（一）

许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,

内容包括:

(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;

(2) 我的压力是什么;

(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。

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【答案】

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I'm always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That's all. Thank you!

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关于对减负看法的 80~100字左右

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【答案】

Nowadays we students have too much homework ,and we are made very tired to spend so much time doing it Very often we can't go to bed until 11:00 or 12:00 pm.We don't have enough sleep.The next morning we feel tired when we go to school.So I think it is necessary for us to reduce the amount of homework we do every day.If we have less homework,we can then have more time for sports and for our hobbies.With less homework,we will be stronger and healthier.I 100 % agree if we can have much less homework to do every day.

（一）

减负后，你有了更多的可自由支配的时间。请写一篇短文，记述你上周末的活动及感受。内容需包括：

　　1. 你和父母或你和同学(朋友)的一次外出活动;

　　2. 你的自主学习活动;

　　3. 你的感受。

注意

1.不可逐条翻译;

2.词数不少于100词。

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【答案】

　　Since our learning burden was reduced, we have had much more time to enjoy ourselves and develop our own abilities.

　　Last Saturday, I, together with my friends Zhang Ming and Li Hua, went to the bookstore. We had intended to buy some books to be used as extra homework. But we found that there were so many wonderful books, such as Chicken Soup for the Soul, that we just could not bear to put them down. At last after much mental struggle, we each bought 5 books, including 3 different copies of Chicken Soup for the Soul, so that we could exchange after reading.

　　Of course I did not forget my academic study. After I finished my homework, I previewed what to be learned in the next week. I also went online to get some information about what I did not understand in my studies, from which I gained a lot of knowledge.

　　In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.

　　punished by being barred from streaming content for up to five years.

（二）

给学生“减负”成了当前的热门话题,结合实际情况谈谈看法，自由发挥，写篇不少80字的文章。

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【参考范文】

Since our learning burden was reduced, we have had much more time to enjoy ourselves and develop our own abilities.

Last Saturday, I, together with my friends Zhang Ming and Li Hua, went to the bookstore. We had intended to buy some books to be used as extra homework. But we found that there were so many wonderful books, such as Chicken Soup for the Soul, that we just could not bear to put them down. At last after much mental struggle, we each bought 5 books, including 3 different copies of Chicken Soup for the Soul, so that we could exchange after reading.

Of course I did not forget my academic study. After I finished my homework, I previewed what to be learned in the next week. I also went online to get some information about what I did not understand in my studies, from which I gained a lot of knowledge.

In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.

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给学生“减负”成了当前的热门话题,结合你自己的实际情况谈谈看法，自由发挥，写篇文章。

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【参考范文】

Middle middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. In the past, they spent about 6.5 hours in their classroom a day. At home, it took them 5 hours to finish their homework. So they only got less than 7 hours sleep. Their free time was only three hours. As a result, their health was badly damaged.

Now the things are getting better. About five hours are spent in class and the time for homework had been reduced two hours. So that they have eight hours＇sleep and also two more hours to do whatever they like.

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给学生“减负”成了当前的热门话题。那么，你认为学生的负担重不重？重在哪里？过重的学业负担会造成什么样的后果？请你就这些问题，结合你自己的实际情况谈谈看法，并将你的看法写成一篇因果说明文。

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【参考范文】

We are at senior high school. Every day, we have many exercises that we cant complete and many books that we cant finish reading. The teachers continually repeat the words that we are already able to recite.

Teachers and students all work hard in order to improve the percentages of those entering college. But the burden of work in class is so heavy that we have little time to do sports, which has left many of us in poor health. What’s worse, many students have lost interest in their studies altogether.

It is known to all that good health is as important as knowledge. Virtues such as bravery, discipline and love of our motherland cant be learned only in classes, but should also be learned through social practice. We should be given the time and opportunity to be exposed to society so we can learn what cant be taught from books.

We are young and we have young hearts. We love study as well as amusements. We hope that the number of exercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities. In this way we will be able to learn much more and be more effective in our studies.

本文第一段和第二段前半部分是摆学校课业负担重的事实，谈的是原因。从第二段后半部分开始分析负担过重带来的结果。作者分析了四种结果，即负担过重会影响身体健康，会使学生失去学习兴趣，会使学生学不到社会公德，还会使学生失去娱乐活动的机会。所以，本文是一因多果说明文。

1. So I think this activity benefits not only our health but also our study.
2. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier.
3. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
4. In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
5. In this way we will be able to learn much more and be more effective in our studies.
6. In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.
7. Middle middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework.
8. We are young and we have young hearts.
9. We love study as well as amusements.
10. We hope that the number of exercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities.
11. How nice to hear from you again!
12. You want to know what is going on in schools in China?

13.In order to improve students’ heath, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce students’ pressure.

14. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.

15. Recently I’ve made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school．

（一）

你校为推进素质教育，进行了教学“减负”活动。假如你是学校学生会的学习部长，对“减负”前后的情况进行了调查，调查情况如下图，请根据此图写一篇文章发表在校报上。

注意：1.短文必须包括图表内容；
      2.可适当增加评注性语言；
      3.词数100左右；
      4.文章的第一段已经给出，不计入总词数。
     Recently I’ve made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school．_________
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【参考范文】

Recently I have made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school.We middle school students used to be heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. We spent more than 6 hours in the classroom. At home, we still had to spend over 3 hours on our homework. So we had less than 7 hours to sleep. Besides, we had only about 3 hours‘ free time. As a result, our health was hardly damaged.Now things are getting better, thanks to the activity. We can only spend about 5 hours in the classroom and hours for homework are shortened to about two hours so that we have two more hours to sleep and also two more hours for free time.So I think this activity benefits not only our health but also our study.

（二）

写作要求：

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片

的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：

1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；

2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；

3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

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【参考范文】

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.

The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.

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最近,为了给学生减负,部分地区出台了一系列政策限制学生上各种各样的补习班。对此,家长和学生持有不同的观点。请你以“Should parents stop pushing their children from class to class?”为题,参照表内提供的信息,写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.所写内容必须包括表格中家长的观点和你的至少三个观点。

2.       词数:80词左右。

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【参考范文】

Should parents stop pushing their children from class to class?

Nowadays, some parents stop pushing their children from class to class, but some don’t. Because they want to prepare better lives for their kids. And they believe it can help them learn more, which is good for their future. After all, know-ledge is life.

However, I don t think so. On the one hand, we students need organized activities. On the other hand, we are under too much pressure, so we need time and freedom to relax ourselves. Also, we need time to do things by ourselves.

So, I think parents should give us a bit more time to ourselves.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目要求写要不要给孩子上各种补习班，为什么家长要给孩子上补习班，最后给出自己的观点。

2.例文点评：例文通过对要不要给孩子上各种补习班，为什么家长要给孩子上补习班，最后给出自己的观点等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。

3.高分亮点：stop doing，prepare ……for，it做形式宾语；非限制性定语从句；after all，谚语know-ledge is life，On the one hand……On the other hand，by ourselves等。

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为了促进中小学生健康成长，近日教育部印发了《中小学生减负措施》（减负三十条）。假如你是李华，请你站在中学生的立场从下面几个方面向你的英国笔友Mike简单介绍其中的内容，并谈谈你自己的看法。

1.作业方面：初中家庭作业不超过90分钟；

2.电子产品方面：严禁学生将手机带入课堂；

3.习惯方面：上课专心听讲，课后主动复习；

4.你的看法……

注意：1.词数80~100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce （减少） students' pressure （压力）. Let me tell you something about them.________________________________________________________

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Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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Dear Mike,

In order to improve students’ heath, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（减少）students’ pressure（压力）. Let me tell you something about them.

Generally, it falls into four parts. And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students. Firstly, homework for middle school students should take no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.

Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.

Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.

In my opinion, these rules are helpful to us students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.

Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

题目解读：本文是一篇书信作文，作文内容是向笔友介绍《中小学生减负措施》，提示给出三个方面：作业方面、电子产品方面和习惯方面。除介绍这三个方面外，还需要发表自己的看法。字数控制在80-100字。根据提示可知，文章主要人称是第三人称，时态为一般现在时，题材为说明文。

例文点评：本例文采取多段式的写法，第一段总领全文，以“Let me tell you something about them.”开头，引出下文对措施的介绍，第二、三和四段采用分条分段的方式，分别从作业方面、电子产品方面和习惯方面三个方面介绍，第五段以“In my opinion…”开头引出自己的想法。这样分段条理清晰，表述明确。上下文的连接过渡词使用得当，文中多次应用被动语态、从句和一般将来时，为文章增色。

高分亮点：

短语：be expected to；go over；in time；so that；in my opinion；be helpful to；as well as。

句型：And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.；Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.；If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.