专题 08 读后续写主旨升华之万能公式 ---2023年新高考英语满分作文读后续写高分突破+万能金句

专题  08 

读后续写之 主旨升华 万能公式

--新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破

   主旨升华—助人型

 在在读后续写中传达积极向上的正能量，是取得高分的要素之一。主人公受到别人的帮助或者帮助别人，是续写的重要主题之一。运用以下两种技巧，轻松写出助人型的主旨升华句。。

升华技巧一： from then on+行动

1. From then on, I would try my best to help sb. like sb. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.

从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力去帮助某人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。

【点评】本句表达积极帮助他人，并传递这种正能量属于升华了文章，且使用倒装句，故属于高级加分亮点句。

2. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me.

从那天起，每次我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是联系他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给我的善意传递给我。

3. From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands. ”

从那时起，我就决定把“爱”传递给别人。正如一句谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”

4. From then on , Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way, could more and more people help each ot从那时起，伯纳德就决定去帮助那些需要帮助的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。

升华技巧二： 感动+感悟

1.【2022年1月浙江卷读后续写】

From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.

从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。正如俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。

2.【山东省潍坊市五县市2022-2023学年高三10月统考英语试题】

From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.、

从这些经验中，我充分意识到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值，因此，这激发了我继续追求我的梦想。

3. I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.

我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。正是爱让这世界转动，在我心里深深感受到了这一点。

 【点评】本句使用了独立主格结构还有一个强调句型，另外运用了非限制性定语从句，这些不仅传神地升华了主题，而且都是作文中的高分句型。

   主旨升华—成长型

在改变中成长，是读后续写的一个重要主题。而改变的表达，可以从以下几个方面来进行升华。

升华技巧 一： 学习知识促成长

It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.

学习永远为时不晚。每个人都有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。

【点评】individual 这里表示“个人,个体”;make more attempts“做更多尝试”。

升华技巧 二： 发挥天赋促成长

Actually, every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.

事实上，每个人都有天赋。当你发现它的时候你要勇敢，也要努力。你能最终创造奇迹。

【点评】 possess“拥有”;create miracles 表示“创造奇迹”。

升华技巧 三： 追逐梦想促成长

1.   【2022年新高考I卷】That day, David got a special award for his courage. He was shining on the winner’s podium. David, with so many birth problems, was a hero to all of us and most importantly, to himself!

那天，大卫因为他的勇气而获得了一个特别奖。他在获胜者的领奖台上闪耀着光芒。大卫有这么多出生问题，是我们所有人的英雄，最重要的是，是他自己的英雄！

2.It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.

追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。

3.As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想,不被困难所阻挡,一切皆有可能。

【点评】 take full advantage of“充分利用”;realize your dreams 表示“实现梦想”。

升华技巧 四： 战胜恐惧促成长

Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.

战胜恐惧和实现目标,需要决心和乐观。

升华技巧 五： 战胜自卑促成长

1.  【2023届江苏省南京市第一中学高三一模试题】 In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates and got along well with them. Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.

在课堂上，我尽力抓住一切机会来提高自己。渐渐地，我开始和我的同学们进行正常的交谈，并和他们相处得很好。生活中的一切都在变得越来越美好了。

2.   I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now,I am proud of what I look like and much happier,because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.

我笑了,因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲,而且更快乐,因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。

【点评】 eventually表示“最后,终于”;personality表示“个性”。

升华技巧 六： 克服困难促成长

The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goa success) finally.

通往成功的路不会平坦,它会充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，

们最终会实现我们的目标。

【点评】 smooth 表示“平坦的"; 短语彰显高级overcome all the difficulties；make every effort; as long as。

升华技巧 七： 战胜消极促成长

Attitude is more important than facts for us. We can- not change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.

态度对我们来说比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去;我们不能改变事实。然而,我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。

【点评】 Attitude 表示“态度”;positive attitude 就是“积极的态度”。“积极”思维，最终让我们成长改变,这种主题,是读后续写中比较常见的正能量的升华。

   主旨升华—脱困型

在往年高考真题中,曾经考过: 拍摄北极熊遇险;父子骑马迷路;骑车游玩遇狼脱险。读后续写常涉及到某些危险的情节,我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型，如：火灾、森林遇到猛兽等。可以采取下列升华技巧。

升华技巧 一： 经历+感悟

1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.

那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。

2.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.

最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困难。

升华技巧 二： 名言/句型+感悟

1.Life will hit us unexpectedly, but there is always someone to help us out and there is always hope waiting for us.

生活总会出乎意料地打击我们，但总有人帮助我们,总有希望在等着我们。

3.   There is no perfect life in the world. But we can change our fate. If we have confidence and work hard, we will absolutely be victorious and the most important thing is “Never give up!” I believe that nothing is impossible!

世界上没有完美的人生。但是我们可以改变我们的命运。如果我们有信心并且勤奋努力，我们一定会胜利。最重要的是“永不放弃”。我相信没有什么是不可能的！

4.   Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.

直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。

【点评】运用倒装句和强调句强化“勇敢”，属于点睛之笔。

5.We will meet various challenges in life, but never give up easily. Just as the famous saying goes, sunshine always comes after the rain.

人生中会碰到各种挑战，但是不要轻易放弃。正如名言所说，风雨后总能见阳光。

   主旨升华—人与社会型

升华技巧 一： 感悟

1.【2022年1月浙江卷读后续写】Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.

正如俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。

2. Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me, there is none other than my mom Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can do sth. When I am older and have children my own,1hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.

每个人都有一个他们崇拜的榜样。对我来说不是别人，正是我妈妈。如果我的生活中没有她，我将不知道我是否能做某事。当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望能成为像妈妈一样伟大的母亲。

升华技巧 二： 画面定格

1. 【2021年新高考I卷读后续写】The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.

孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。

3. 【2021年1月浙江卷读后续写】 In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.

那天晚上，爸爸回来了。我骄傲地拿出了我自己的钱，递给了爸爸。

升华技巧 三： 修辞

1. 【2020年1月浙江卷读后续写】 I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear.

我迅速拿出相机，拍下了这一罕见的场景——我们被一只北极熊抢劫了。

2. That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming

那份亲情像一杯清茶,沁人心脾，温暖人心。

升华技巧 四： 对话

1.【江苏省南京市金陵中学2022-2023学年高三试题】Warmth ran through his body and tears welled up in his eyes, murmuring “you saw me barefoot and gave me shoes but how will I be able to give you feet?”

温暖透过他的身体，泪水在他的眼睛里涌了出来，喃喃地说：“你看见我光着脚，给了我鞋子，但我怎么能让你光脚呢？”

2.【江苏省扬州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期试题】Lucy’s mom sensed her daughter’s worry and gave her a reassuring (令人宽慰的) pat on the back. “You’ll be great, dear. Just do your best. That’s all that matters.”

露西的妈妈感觉到了女儿的担忧，拍拍她的背（令人宽慰的）。“你会很伟大的，亲爱的。尽你最大的努力。这才是最重要的。”

升华技巧二:比喻

升华技巧 五： 收尾呼应

【开头】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day

一天，在Arthur 上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。

【结尾】What a funny day!Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious .

多么有趣的一天啊!每当Arthur 想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。