专题02 近十年 高考英语书面表达满分范文（二）-备战高考英语满分作文万能模板

专题一 近十年高考英语书面表达满分范文  （二）

书面表达

（2021年6月浙江卷）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：

1. 展览时间、地点；

2. 观展感受；

3. 推荐观展。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

In order to enrich students’ after-school life, an exhibition of students’ traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school, which sparks a growing love for traditional art. The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school library. Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.

Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. The exhibition will last for two weeks; every student is welcome to visit.

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。

1. 词汇积累

绘画：drawing→ painting

激发：spirit→spark

欣赏：appreciate→admire

欢迎：greet→welcome

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：

The exhibition will last for two weeks; every student is welcome to visit.

合并句：

The exhibition will last for two weeks, during which every student is welcome to visit.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】

an exhibition of students’ traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。

【高分句型2】

Most of the students think highly of this exhibition, which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。

【高分句型 3】

 Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. not only...but also连接的并列句。

    【2020年】

（2020·新课标Ⅰ）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:

1. 人物简介；

2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。

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【答案】

The Person I Respect

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.人物简介：

2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;

第三步：连词成句

1.As for me, my father is the person I respect most.

2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因

2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So

第五步：润色修改

（2020·新课标Ⅱ）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:

1. 农场情况；

2. 采摘过程；

3. 个人感受

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 题目已为你写好。

题目:My Weekend

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My Weekend

Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits; the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day when we learn a lot from it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.农场情况；

2.采摘过程；

3.个人感受

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

took part in；was responsible for；a meaningful day；should treasure

第三步：连词成句

1. Last weekend, we took part in a picking activity.

2. One group was responsible for picking fruits; the other packed up the fruits.

3. But it was a meaningful day when we learn a lot from it

4. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受

2.表示并列补充关系：and ;But; Through

第五步：润色修改

（2020·新课标Ⅲ）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:

1. 剧情简介；

2. 指导内容；

3. 商定时间地点。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 结束语已为你写好。

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【答案】

Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going? I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight. On the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?

Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于The Steamboat改编短剧的支持。第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。

结构：总分总法

第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

write to；according to；combine； adaption；challenge；attached to；convenient

第三步：连词成句

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

（2020·江苏卷）请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(documentary)的对话，并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容；

2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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【答案】

CCTV 9 broadcast Du Fu: China’s Greatest Poet, a documentary produced by BBC. This well-made film provides foreign audiences with a fresh way of better knowing China’s past and present.

Documentaries about China, produced either in China or in other countries, are becoming increasingly popular among foreigners. For one thing, the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.

For another, China enjoys a long history and rich culture. It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese. These documentaries present a splendid picture of China in front of their audiences ― its history, landscape, art, food, or even traditional Chinese medicine.

Because of these films, some foreigners have begun to think of coming to China. In this way, they can form a true picture of China themselves.

【解析】这是一篇读写任务。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。要求阅读中国题材纪录片的对话，写一篇150个词文章。包括两部分。(一)用30词概括对话内容。(二)谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。要求至少两点原因。

第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落、次要段落、段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，概括对话内容。第二段和第三段，中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因。第四段，总结因为电影吸引外国人想来到中国。

第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: produced by, provide…with, either…or, be keen on, present, because of, in this way, the overall development，so striking that，feel eager to familiarize themselves with.

第四步:确定较为高级的句子: 非谓语动词结构a documentary produced by BBC； 定语从句的运用:It has always been an attraction for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese.

第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: for one thing, for another.

第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。