12. 议论文-观点态度，说明利弊，解决问题 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

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备战2023年中考英语书面表达
（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）
第四章 议论文
观点态度+说明利弊+解决问题
简单来说,议论文就是通过对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,阐明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张,一般由三个要素组成,即论点、论据和论证.通俗来讲,就是是什么、为什么和怎么做.在我们写作时,以下几点需要牢记在心：
1.人称.
议论文,是要自己为自己的某个观点辩护,或者提出自己的看法,因此一般都是使用第一人称“I”.
2.分段.
议论文一定要分段书写,根据议论文的组成要素,我们一般都是按其要素划分成三段,这样可以使文章的结构更加清晰.
3.逻辑词的使用.
议论文很大的特点就是强调逻辑性.因此,我们要适度使用逻辑词、连词等,使我们的文章前后紧密相连,环环相扣.

Part 1 观点态度型
写法点拨
在写作的时候,我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：
1.表明态度.在陈列别人的观点之后,要清楚明确地表明自己的态度和立场,可以支持某观点,或者不同意某观点,为下文的辩论做好铺垫.
2.论据支撑论点.这是文章的重要部分.作者立足于自己的观点,从各个方面证明自己观点的正确性,可通过反例或者经典例子证明自己的观点是正确的.
3.总结全文.在文章结尾处要总结全文,再次强调自己观点的准确性,呼应前文,使文章的结构更完整.

必备词汇
1 表示赞成或喜欢
approve同意；赞成
agree同意
share分享
prefer更喜欢
wise明智的
reasonable理智的
favorable赞成的
admire赞赏
appreciate欣赏
Think highly of高度评价
cannot agree more 非常同意
2 表示反对或厌恶
disapprove不赞成
disagree不同意
unwise不明智的
ridiculous荒唐的
foolish愚蠢的
childish幼稚的
hate讨厌
hatred厌恶
angry生气的
irritated愤怒的

必备句型
1 表明观点
(1) I fully agree with the statement that...because...
我完全同意······这种说法,因为······
(2) More and more people are talking about whether we should shop online.
越来越多的人讨论我们是否应该网上购物.
(3) My opinion is that we should spend more time with our family.
我的观点是我们应该多花时间和家人待在一起.
(4) I think that traditional festivals are much more important than western festivals in China.
我认为,在中国,传统节日比西方节日更重要.
(5) As far as I am concerned, I think that we should pay more attention to environmental protection.
就我而言,我认为我们应该多花时间在环境保护上.
(6) Personally, I like to advocate that students should spend more time in exercise.
个人而言,我提倡学生多花时间锻炼.
(7) I don't think it is a good idea to lose weight by diet.
我认为节食减肥不是个好主意.
(8)For me, the former is surely a wise choice.
对我来说,前者无疑是个明智的选择.
(9) From where I stand, I support that...
从我的角度来看,我支持·.....
2 陈述理由
(1)I hold the view for the reason that...
我坚持这个观点的理由是·.....
(2)What is more, it will do good to our environment.还有,这对我们的环境是有益的.
(3) I think that B is a better choice for the following three reasons.
我认为B会更好,有以下三个理由.
(4) Firstly,(Reason 1).Secondly,(Reason 2).Thirdly,(Reason 3).
第一点,(理由一).第二点,(理由二).第三点,(理由三).
(5) The reason is that...理由是·.....
(6) For one thing, I think it is much more convenient to go by bike. For another thing, by doing so, we can lower the emission of carbon dioxide.
一方面,我认为骑单车更方便.另一方面,这样做可以减少二氧化碳的排放.
(7) On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值.
3 总结全文
(1) Thus we can conclude that...
因此我们总结出······
(2) So it can be concluded that...is important to us.
所以可以得出结论说,······对我们很重要.
(3) In a word, ..-play (s) an important role in our life.
总而言之,······在我们生活中扮演着重要角色.
(4) From what has been discussed above, you may agree that...
根据上面讨论的,你也许会同意··...·
(5)In conclusion, we should pay more attention to...
总之,我们要更加重视··

美文引路
题目：现在,越来越多的学生喜欢带手机上学,这引起了人们的热议.有人同意,也有人反对.请就你是怎么看待学生带手机上学这种行为写一篇文章,80词左右.
要求：
1.表明你的观点,是支持还是反对；
2.说明理由；
3.总结.
注意：可适当添加细节,使短文完整连贯.
思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
题目要求写“我”的观点,因此使用第一人称“I”.
主体时态
议论文通常使用一般现在时为其主体时态.
写作贴士
题目要求中明确给我们指出了三点思路,因而我们在写作时要注意分段.
第2步：列提纲
(1)补充背景信息,表明观点；
(2)解释自己的观点等；
(3)再次强调自己的观点.
第3步：参考词句
(1) mobile phone; school; favor; personally; helpful...
(2) on the one hand, on the other hand; easier; get in touch with; colorful; pressure...
(3) in a word; allow; school...
第4步：连句成篇
Today, more and more students go to school with mobile phones. Some people are in favor of it, while others not. Personally, I think it's helpful to take mobile phones to school.
On the one hand, it will be easier for students to get in touch with their friends and parents if they have a phone. On the other hand, mobile phones can make students' life more colorful because they are under too much pressure.
In a word, I think students should be allowed to take mobile phones to school.
参考译文
如今,越来越多的学生带手机上学.有人支持这种做法,有人不支持.就个人而言,我认为学生带手机上学是有用的.
一方面,如果学生有手机的话,他们可以更容易地和朋友、父母联系.另一方面,手机可以让学生的生活更多姿多彩,因为他们的压力太大了.
总之,我认为应该允许学生带手机上学.

范文1
Some people think that private cars will cause more pollution problems, so we should use public transport as much as we can. From my point of view, l agree that we should use more public transport.
First of all, as the number of private cars is increasing, the traffic jam is becoming more and more serious. Then we should limit the number of private cars and make full use of buses, undergrounds, etc. More importantly, by doing so, we can lower the emission of carbon dioxide.
Thus, we should advocate using more public transport.
参考译文
一些人认为私家车会导致更多的污染问题,所以我们应该尽量多使用公共交通工具.我的看法是,我认同我们应该多使用公共交通工具这一观点.
首先,随着私家车数量的增多,交通堵塞的问题变得越来越严重.于是我们需要限制私家车的数量,并且充分利用公交车、地铁等.更重要的是,这样做可以降低二氧化碳的排放量.
因此,我们应该提倡多使用公共交通工具.
亮点词汇
1 private cars私家车
2 from my point of view 在我看来
3 traffic jam 交通堵塞
4 make full use of 充分利用
5 more importantly 更重要的是
6 lower/v.减弱；减少；放下；降下；贬低
7 emission /n.(光、热等的)发射；散发；排放
8 carbon dioxide 二氧化碳
出彩句型
1 Some people think that private cars will cause more pollution problems, so...
一些人认为私家车会导致更多的污染问题,所以···.
2 From my point of view, I agree that...就我看来,我同意·...
3 More importantly, by doing so, we can lower the emission of carbon dioxide.
更重要的是,这样子做可以降低二氧化碳的排放量.
高分点评
本文内容充实,结构清晰,详略得当.在行文中,作者通过“Some people think that...”等别人的看法引出自己的观点,然后通过“First of all, Then, More importantly”等词语引出论据,很具说服力,值得大家学习.

范文2
With the development of science and technology, we can get a lot of in-formation on the Internet. Then is it necessary to read paper books? Yes, I think it is.
Firstly, even if we can get a lot of information online, reading books is an experience that cannot be replaced. Moreover, there is so much information on the Internet that we have to tell right from wrong. So we have to read books ourselves and not just depend on the Internet.
In a word, paper book is important to us and it is the source of our wisdom.
参考译文
随着科学技术的发展,我们可以在网络上获得很多信息.那我们还有必要阅读纸质书吗?我认为是有必要的.
首先,即使我们可以在网上得到很多信息,但是阅读纸质书是一种不可取代的体验.还有,网络上的信息太多,所以我们需要分辨出错误的和正确的信息.因此,我们一定要阅读纸质书,而不能仅仅依靠网络.
总之,纸质书对我们很重要,它是我们智慧的源泉.
亮点词汇
1replace /v:取代；代替；替换；更换；把·····放回原处
2 moreover /adv:而且；此外
3 tell right from wrong 辨别对错
4 source /n.来源；水源；原始材料
5 wisdom/n.智慧；才智；明智；学识；至理名言
出彩句型
1 With the development of science and technology, we can get a lot of information on the Internet.
随着科学技术的发展,我们可以在网络上获得很多信息.
2 Then is it necessary to read paper books?那我们还有必要阅读纸质书吗?
3 Moreover, there is so much information on the Internet that we have to tell right from wrong.
还有,网络上的信息太多,所以我们需要分辨出错误的和正确的信息.
高分点评
文章的逻辑结构很清晰,上下文的联系很紧密.第一段通过反问句提出了自己的观点“有必要阅读纸质书籍”,第二段通过“firstly, moreover, so”等词语解释理由,第三段用“In a word”结尾,简单而有力.值得我们参考.


Part 2 说明利弊型
写法点拨
在进行利弊型议论文写作时,我们可以分为四部分进行：
1.描述某一现象或事物.在文章的开头首先要指出我们评论的对象或事件,为下文我们指出该事件或事物的利弊做好铺垫.
2.分析缺点.针对所指出的事物分析其缺点或不足之处.可以是本身的不足,也可以是其给社会带来的不良影响,或者是对环境造成的伤害等.
3.指出其优点.要客观看待事物,在分析缺点的同时还要指出该事件或对象的优点或可取之处,可以说给人们生活带来了方便,或者有利于社会的稳定等.缺点和优点的顺序可以互换.
4.作者看法.客观对事物进行了分析之后,作者要提出自己的观点,是怎么看待该现象或事物的,是利大于弊还是弊大于利,是应该提倡还是禁止等.

必备词汇
1 描述现象或事物
be popular with...受到······的欢迎
be familiar with sth.很熟悉某物
raise a heated discussion 引起热议
2表示优点
advantage优点
benefit益处
Be beneficial to对······有益
Do good to对······有好处
be of great benefits 有很大的益处；有很大作用
be of great help 帮助很大；有很大帮助
have a positive effect on 对······有积极影响
exert a positive influence on 对······产生积极影响
3表示缺点
disadvantage缺点
Side effect副作用
Do harm to对······有害
useless无用的
Be of no help没有用
defect缺陷
Have a negative effect on对······产生消极作用


必备句型
1 描述现象或事物
(1) There is a heated discussion about...关于······的讨论很激烈.
(2)...has brought us much convenience along with much inconvenience.给我们带来了方便的同时,还带来了不便.
(3)...has raised hot discussion.··..··已经引起了人们的热议.
(4)...has its advantages and disadvantages, just like everything does.和所有东西一样,···也有它的优点和缺点.
2 说明事物优点
(1)There are three advantages in/of...(某事物／现象)有三个优点.
(2)The first advantage of..is that...(某事物／现象的)第一个优点是·.....
(3)...can provide convenience for us in life.(某物)能为我们的生活提供便利.
(4)With the help of., our life can be much better and more convenient.
在······的帮助下,我们的生活可以更加幸福和便利.
(5) In spite of the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.尽管有缺点,它还是有对应的优点.
(6)Nothing can be compared with... in terms of.. 在(某方面),很少有东西能和··..··媲美.
(7)... has a positive impact on people's life......对人们的生活起到一种积极的作用.
(8) Sth. exerts a favorable influence on people's life.某物对人们的生活产生了有利的影响.
(9) ... is playing an increasingly important role in people's lives..····在人们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用.
3 说明事物缺点
(1) However,...has its negative side as well.但是,····也有其不好的一面.
(2) On the contrary, its disadvantages can not be ignored, either.相反,它的缺点也是不能被忽视的.
(3) Nevertheless, it still has some drawbacks.但是它还是有一些缺陷的.
(4) Just like everything has two sides,...also has many disadvantages.
正如每个事物都有两面性一样,···也有很多缺点.
(5)However, by doing so, we may cause some problems.然而,这么做的话,我们可能会引发一些问题.
(6) Nonetheless, it's sometimes blamed for its obvious defects.但是,它有时候会因一些明显的缺陷而受到指责.
(7) As the proverb goes that every coin has its two sides...is no exception.俗话说硬币都是有两面的,····也不例外.
(8) However, its negative aspects are also evident. To begin with,.. To make matters worse,...Worst of all,...
然而,它的不足之处也是很明显的.首先,······更糟的是,·····最后·.....
(9) The side effects...have exerted on human beings can be seen as follows. Firstly.... Secondly,...In addition,.
··对人类产生的副作用如下所示.其一,····其二,··.此外··...·
4 表明个人观点
(1)From where I stand, I think its advantages carry more weight than its disadvantages.
从我的立场来看,我认为它的优点大于它的缺点.
(2)Anyway, I still believe..has more advantages than disadvantages.不管怎样,我仍然相信··..·的优点比缺点多.
(3)But for me, I think it has more positive sides than its negative sides.
对我来说,我认为它的积极面比消极面更多.
(4)From the comparison between these positive and negative effects, we should take it reasonably.
通过这些积极面和消极面的对比,我们要理智地对待它.
(5)Therefore, we should take it seriously.因此我们应该要认真对待它.
(6)In my view, we should make full use of its advantages and reduce its side effects.
在我看来,我们要充分利用它的优点,降低它的副作用.


美文引路
题目:随着科学技术的发展,互联网开始走进千家万户,有人认为这是好事,有人认为这影响了我们的正常生活.写一篇文章说说你的看法,内容要求如下,约80词左右.
要求内容：
1.通过网络,我们可以足不出户而知天下事,获取信息；
2.网络容易泄露个人信息；
3.你的看法及其理由.
思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
题目要求的是“我”的看法,且属于议论文写作,故主体人称为“I”或“we”.
主体时态
议论文通常使用一般现在时为其主体时态.
写作贴士

题目要求中明确给我们指出了三点思路,但是我们应该把优缺点整合起来
作一个要点,并在文章开头补充背景信息的说明.
第2步：列提纲
(1)引出话题－互联网；
(2)介绍其优缺点；
(3)个人看法及理由.
第3步：参考词句
(1) Internet; advantage; disadvantage...
(2) obtain; information; steal; online...
(3) through the Internet; on the one hand; on the other hand...
第4步：连句成篇
Nowadays, the Internet has been part of people's life. There are both advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.
On the one hand, the Internet brings convenience to us. Through the Internet, we can learn what happens in the world and obtain information without going outside. On the other hand, personal information is easily stolen online, which will cause our loss.
From comparing its advantages and disadvantages, I think that the Internet will improve our life if we take it carefully.
参考译文
当今,互联网已经成了人们生活中的一部分.互联网既有它的优点,也有它的缺点.
一方面,互联网给我们的生活带来了便利.通过互联网,我们不需要走出家门就可以知道世界上发生什么事和获取信息.另一方面,个人信息在网络上很容易被盗取,这会导致我们的损失.
通过对比互联网的优点和缺点,我认为如果我们小心使用互联网,互联网会改善我们的生活的.

范文1
Different people have different views on shopping online. Taking all factors into account, shopping online has both positive and negative effects just as every coin has two sides.
Many people think it is positive because online shopping is not only cheap but also convenient. Through online shopping, our goods can be directly delivered to our home. However, others believe that it is harmful for the reason that it is not safe when shopping online, which may causes our loss.
As far as I am concerned, we can buy some cheap and useful goods on the Internet while some valuable goods in the offline stores.
参考译文
不同的人对网上购物的看法不一.我们要把所有的因素考虑其中,正如每枚硬币都有两面一样,网上购物既有其积极的一面,也有其消极的一面.
很多人认为网上购物是有积极作用的,因为它不仅便宜而且方便.通过网上购物,我们的商品可以直接寄到家里.然而,其他人认为它有害的原因是网上购物并不安全,可能会导致我们的损失.
就我而言,我觉得我们可以在网上购买便宜而有用的商品,而到线下商店购买昂贵的商品.
亮点词汇
1 take sth. into account考虑到···..·
2 positive/adj.积极的；真实的；绝对的
3 negative/adj.负的；消极的；否定的；阴性的
4 convenient / adj. 方便的；适当的；实用的
5 as far as I am concerned 就我而言
6 valuable/adj. 有价值的；贵重的；宝贵的
出彩句型
1 Different people have different views on shopping online.不同的人对网上购物的看法不一.
2 Every coin has two sides.每枚硬币都有两面.
3 Through online shopping, our goods can be directly delivered to our home.
通过网上购物,我们的商品可以直接寄到家里.
4 As far as I am concerned, we can...就我而言,我们可以...
高分点评
本文给我们展示了上网购物的优点和缺点,同时作者提出了自己的看法.整体上看,文章结构清晰,段落分明,句法结构很出色.作者恰当使用短语补充说明句子,例如Taking all factors into account, Through online shopping, As far as I am concerned 等.是不错的范文,值得学习参考.

范文2
Nowadays, television plays an important role in our daily lives. It brings convenience to our life as well as disadvantages.
Generally, the advantages of television can be listed as follows: First, we can get information through television. Besides, we can learn foreign languages through some TV programs. But every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, there are many advertisements on TV which are useless. Moreover, some movies on the TV are violent and unhealthy.
Therefore, we should take it seriously and reasonably so that we will not be affected by its side effects.
参考译文
现今,电视在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要角色.它给我们带来了便利,也带来了不足.
总的来说,电视的优点如下：首先,我们可以通过电视获取信息.另外,我们可以通过电视节目学习外语.但是硬币都是两面的.电视的消极作用也很明显.首先,电视上有很多没有用的广告.还有,电视上有些电影很暴力,也不健康.
因此,我们要谨慎理智地对待电视,这样我们就不会被它的副作用所影响.
亮点词汇
1 play an important role in 在.·.···中扮演着重要角色
2 convenience /n.便利；便利的事物
3 generally /adv.通常；普遍地；一般地
4 as follows 如下所示
5 violent/adj.暴力的；猛烈的
6 reasonably /adv.合理地；相当地；适度地
7 affect /v.影响；感染；感动；假装
8 side effect 副作用
出彩句型
1 Nowadays, television plays an important role in our daily lives.
现今,电视在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要角色.
2 It brings convenience to our life as well as disadvantages.它给我们带来了便利,也带来了不足.
3 Generally, the advantages of television can be listed as follows.总的来说,电视的优点如下.
4 Its negative aspects are also apparent.电视的消极作用也很明显.
高分点评
文章的结构很清晰,前后内容关联紧密,紧扣主题.作者适度使用了连词,例如generally, first, besides, but, to begin with, moreover等,使文章层次分明.另外,高级词汇 convenience, reasonably等的使用使文章增色不少,值得学习.

Part 3问题解决型
写法点拨
在写作文的时候,我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：
1.提出问题.根据题目要求,在开篇把需要解决的问题提出来,可以是对现状,形式或某一困难的描述,为下文做好铺垫.
2.分析解决问题.这是文章的主体部分,列举做一件事或解决某个问题的几种办法.在列举对策时,可以通过 firstly, secondly, what's more, finally等连接词的使用来确保文章的连贯性和条理性.
3.总结.在文章结尾处要表明自己的观点或总结全文,简单说明对待这一问题的态度或做法,可以呼吁大家共同努力解决问题,也可以强调问题的重要性等.
必备词汇
1提出问题
serious严重的
A public problem公共问题
concern担忧
Be worried about担心
issue问题
Raise the question提出问题
with the development of science and technology 随着科学技术的发展
an increasing population 人口越来越多
play an important role in...在······中扮演着重要角色
become the focus of...成为······的焦点
2 陈列对策
Relieve the pressure缓解压力
Solve the problem解决问题
The way to解决······的办法
Take measures采取措施
workout想出(办法、途径、措施等)
Figure out找出(办法、途径、措施等)
firstly第一
First of all首先
To begin with首先
secondly第二
thirdly第三
next接着
then然后
moreover还有
In addition除外
Apart from...除······之外
last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
3 总结
In conclusion总之
In a word总之
To sum up总之
shortly总而言之
In the end最后
finally最后
work together 共同努力

必备句型
1 提出论点或现象
(1) Recently, traffic jam has become the focus of the society.近来,交通堵塞已经成为社会的焦点.
(2) Computer plays an increasingly important role in our daily lives.
电脑在我们的日常生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.
(3) Nowadays there is a growing concern for environmental protection.如今,人们越来越关心环境保护.
(4) Nowadays it is common to hear students cheat in the exam.现在,听到学生在考试中作弊是很普通的.
(5) Nowadays more and more people begin to be aware of the seriousness of protecting the environment.
现在,越来越多的人开始注意到保护环境的重要性.
(6) Nowadays,...has become a problem we have to face.现在,······是我们必须面对的问题.
(7) Special attention should be paid to the problem that...要特别关注······的问题.
(8) Something has to be done.一定要做一些事情.
2 提出解决问题的措施
(1) Many measures should be adopted to solve the problem.要采取多种措施解决这个问题.
(2) We can change the situation through the following ways. Firstly...Next...And then... Last...
我们可以通过以下方法改变这种情况.首先······然后······接着······最后··.·
(3) We have figured out ways to solve the problem. Firstly...Secondly...Thirdly...
我们已经找到了几个办法来解决这个问题.第一······第二·····第三······
(4)As we can see, there are several solutions to the problem. First of all...Furthermore...Last but not least...
正如我们可以看到的,这个问题有几个解决方案.首先······接着······最后但同样重要的是······
(5) In spite of the seriousness of the problem, there are still many ways to solve the problem. First of all...In addition...Thirdly...
尽管这个问题很严重,但仍有很多方法可以解决这个问题.首先······还有·····第三····.
(6) It is essential that proper actions should be taken to relieve the problem.
很有必要采取一些措施来缓解这个问题.
3 提出自己的观点或态度
(1) It is high time for us to work together.我们是时候要共同努力了.
(2)Therefore, we should...因此,我们应该··....(总结全文)
(3)In a word, we must take action to protect our environment.总而言之,我们必须采取行动来保护环境.
(4) To sum up, if we put the measures mentioned above into practice, we will change the situation.
总之,要是我们把以上提及的措施都付诸行动,我们就会改变这种状况的.

美文引路
题目:目前,随着社会的进步和发展,城市的交通问题越来越严重.请根据下列提示,用英语写一篇短文.不少于80词.
1.限制公路汽车数量；
2.更多的钱用于投资建设和拓宽马路；
3.教导司机遵守交通规则；
4.你的看法.
注意：可以适当增加细节,以使短文完整连贯.
思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
如果没有明确要求,议论文写作一般都是采用第一人称“I”.
主体时态
议论文写作一般都是介绍一般情况,故使用一般现在时,可酌情辅以其他时态.
写作贴士

题目要求中包含四个要点,但是我们可以看出一、二、三点都是属于对策,故把这三点整合在一段,在开头补充问题的引出,注意第四点中问“你的看法”即是文章的总结.
第2步：列提纲
(1)介绍背景,引出要解决的问题等；
(2)分点列出解决对策等；
(3)提出个人看法,总结全文.
第3步：参考词句
(1) obvious; traffic jams; public problem...
(2) solve; the number of; road; restrict; moreover; invest; construction; expansion; educate; follow the traffic rules...
(3) I am convinced...
第4步：连句成篇
It's obvious that traffic jams have become a serious public problem. Something has to be done.
To solve it, first of all, the number of cars running on the road should be restricted. Moreover, more money should be invested in the construction and expansion of roads so that the road can hold more cars. Lastly, drivers are supposed to be educated to follow the traffic rules to avoid accidents.
I am convinced that if all the above measures are put into practice, the situation will be changed.
参考译文
很显然,交通堵塞已经成为一个严重的公共问题.是该做一些事情(来解决这些问题)了.
要解决这个问题,首先,要限制在公路上行驶的汽车数量.另外,要投资更多的钱来建设和拓宽道路,这样道路就能容纳更多的车.最后,要教育司机遵守交通规则,避免交通事故.
我相信如果采取了上面所说到的措施,目前的情况就会有所改变.

范文1
At present, rubbish has become a big headache in every city and a major serious environmental problem. It is necessary to deal with this issue.
Firstly, we should produce as less rubbish as we can, such as leftover food, waste paper, plastic bottles and batteries. Secondly, rubbish classification is a scientific and effective way to manage rubbish. Thirdly, we should use recycling rubbish so as to improve the quality of our living conditions and protect the environment.
In a word, we should work together to resolve the problem and to protect the environment.
参考译文
现在,垃圾已成为每个城市头疼的事以及主要的严重的环境问题.我们很有必要解决这个问题.
首先,我们要尽可能的少产生垃圾,例如剩饭、废纸、塑料瓶和电池等.第二,垃圾分类是管理垃圾的科学高效的办法.第三,我们要使用可回收垃圾来提高我们生活环境的质量和保护环境.
总之,我们要共同努力解决这个问题,保护环境.
亮点词汇
1 rubbish/n.垃圾；废物；废话
2 headache/n.头痛；麻烦；令人头痛之事
3 deal with 解决；应付
4 leftover food 剩饭
5 rubbish classification 垃圾分类
出彩句型
1 At present,...has become a big headache in every city and a major serious environmental problem.
现在,·是每个城市头疼的事以及主要的严重的环境问题.
2 It is necessary to deal with this issue.很有必要解决这个问题.
3 Rubbish classification is a scientific and effective way to manage rubbish.
垃圾分类是管理垃圾的科学高效的办法.
4 We should... so as to improve the quality of our living conditions and protect the environment.
我们要······来提高我们生活环境的质量和保护环境.
高分点评
文章采取三段式的写作方法,即提出问题－解决方案－总结,架构很清晰.同时,从文章中也可以看出作者有一定的词汇积累与语法功底,例如,作者运用了大量的高级词汇,如 headache, leftover food, batteries, rubbish classification等,为文章增色不少.

范文2
With the growth of population, water shortage has become a growing concern for China. So it is of great importance for us to solve this problem.
To solve the problem, we have figured out many ways. Firstly, we must forbid wasting water and advocate recycle water. Secondly, the government should make stricter law and legislation to protect the limited water resource we have. Finally, we should supply water to the dry area.
To sum up, if everyone takes action to save water, the situation will be better to some extent.
参考译文
随着人口的增多,缺水已经成为中国越来越担忧的问题.因此解决这个问题对我们来说很重要.
为了解决这个问题,我们想出了很多办法.第一,我们要禁止浪费水,提倡水循环.第二,政府要制定更严厉的法律法规来保护我们有限的水资源.最后,我们要向干旱的地区提供水.
总之,如果每个人都采取行动节约水,缺水这种情况会在某种程度上得到改善.
亮点词汇
1 shortage /n.缺乏；缺少；不足
2 figure out 想出；找出
3 advocate/v.提倡；主张；拥护
4 law and legislation 法律法规
5 take action 采取行动
出彩句型
1 With the growth of population,...has become a growing concern for China.
随着人口的增多,······已经成为中国越来越担忧的问题.
2 So it is of great importance for us to solve this problem.因此解决这个问题对我们来说很重要.
3 To solve the problem, we have figured out many ways.为了解决这个问题,我们想出了很多办法.
4 To sum up, if everyone takes action to save water, the situation will be better to some extent.
总之,如果每个人都采取行动节约水,缺水这种情况会在某种程度上得到改善.
高分点评
这是一篇比较简单的文章,但是结构很严谨,行文很流畅,很具有说服力.在写作中,作者使用“so, solve the problem ,sum up”等词把文章串联起来,环环相扣,这使上下文的联系更加紧密.总的来说,是一篇值得同学们学习的文章.