2023届高考英语二轮复习写作训练遣词造句课件

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习写作训练遣词造句课件，共25页。PPT课件主要包含了devotes，seated，covering，due to，of help，more than，Hearing ，which，The moment，Hardly 等内容，欢迎下载使用。

What’s a gd cmpsitin like?
1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面 2. 语篇的信息； -----完整的信息 3. 文章的语言； -----优美的语言 4. 文章的结构； -----流畅的结构 5. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解
Task 1. 使用较高级的词汇 完成句子。
1. He spends all his spare time in reading. He all his spare time reading.2. On his way t schl, he fund an ld lady sitting by the rad, lking wrried. On his way t schl, he fund an ld lady by the rad, lking wrried.3. Thank yu very much fr yur help. We yur help very much. 4. After walking 10 miles, we all felt tired. After 10 miles, we all felt tired.
appreciate\are grateful fr
5. He arrived late because f the strm. He arrived late the strm. 6. Suddenly I had an idea that smene had brken int my huse. （用ccur） An idea that smene had brken int my huse. It that smene had brken int my huse.7. Plenty f memry wrk is undubtedly helpful t English study. Plenty f memry wrk is undubtedly t English study. Plenty f memry wrk undubtedly English study.
ccurred t me
ccurred t me
cntributes t\ benefits
8. Jack is clever. He ften thinks f new ideas. Jack is clever. He ften new ideas. 9. I’m very glad t learn that yu are cming in September. I’m glad t learn that yu are cming in September. 10. Mst f the interviewees prefer watching TV at hme t ging t the cinema. f the interviewees prefer watching TV at hme t ging t the cinema.
cmes up with
The majrity
Task 2. 使用较丰富的句式 Part1. 句型转换 。
1. He gt excited when he heard the news. the news, he gt excited.（非谓语动词） 2. We shuld try ur best t frm gd diets. It will d gd t ur health. （定语从句） We shuld try ur best t frm gd diets, will d gd t ur health. 3. It is imprtant fr us t d smething t prtect ur eyes. （虚拟语气） It is imprtant that .
we shuld d smething t prtect ur eyes.
4. There is a ntice saying “Please Save Water” n the wall. （请使用倒装） On the wall . 5. Thugh he is a child, he knws a lt. （请使用倒装） he is, he knws a lt. 6. As sn as we arrived at the airprt, we were warmly welcmed. 1). we arrived at the airprt, we were warmly welcmed. 2). had we arrived at the airprt we were warmly welcmed. 3). at the airprt, we were warmly welcmed.
is a ntice saying “Please Save water”
Child as \ thugh
On arriving
7. We were glad t see crps and vegetables grwing well. （变为感叹句） ！8. He didn’t realize his flishness until he returned hme. （变为强调句和倒装句） 1） . 2） .
Hw glad we were t see crps and vegetables grwing well
It was nt until he returned hme that he realized his flishness.
Nt until he returned hme did he realize his flishness
Part2. 完成句子。
1. educatin is beneficial t us students. 不可否认，教育对我们学生是有益的。 2. educatin is very imprtant t us. 全世界都知道，教育对我们是非常重要的。3. educatin cncerning quality leaves smething t be desired. 毫无疑问，我们有关素质的教育是令人不满意。 4. ignre the value f reading. 我们绝对不能忽略读书的价值。 5. that the authrities cncerned prper steps t slve the envirnmental prblems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决环境问题的时候了。
There is n denying that
It is universally acknwledged that
There is n dubt that
On n accunt can we
6. We lay much emphasis n educatin. 我们再怎么强调教育也不为过。7. we are admitted t universities. 过不了多久我们就会被大学录取。8. is that M Yan has wn the Nbel Prize in literature. 使我印象最深的就是莫言获得了诺贝尔文学奖。9. we have t prtect frgs they are friends f man. 我们必须保护青蛙的原因是它们是人类的朋友。 10. effective actins we take, life we will live. 我们的措施越有效，我们的生活就会更好。
It wn’t be lng befre
What impresses me mst
The reasn why
提升1： 作文1（2011高考江苏卷）
要求：有效使用所复习过的语言知识(词汇，短语，句式) 和语法知识(时态，语态，从句，非谓语，情态动词和虚拟语气)，使表达通顺连贯。 The burden f students has been a ht tpic fr years, but the lad f parents has received little attentin, especially frm their wn children. The picture shws us a tuching mment when a little girl cmes t greet her wrking mm. 1） . 意识到她的妈妈一天的工作之后一定很累，女孩帮忙把妈妈肩上的包拿下来。(请使用非谓语动词。) In respnse, the mm kneels dwn t shw hw happy and thankful she feels. 2） . 这使我想起我的母亲，她一直在竭尽所能地让我能拥有最好的。(请使用定语从句和名词性从句。)But, 3） . 完全投入在自己学习中的我却很少注意到母亲的需求和感受。(请使用非谓语动词和名词性从句。)And 4） . 我总是认为学习好是我唯一能做的用来回报她的事。(请使用非谓语动词和定语从句。)Nw I knw I can d my bit t help with the everyday washing, bedrm cleaning, r at least prepare breakfast myself, s as t share my mther’s daily burden. The picture cnvinces me 5） . 重要的是应该做一个好女儿而不是一个“好” 学生。(请使用名词性从句及虚拟语气。)
Sample answers:
1）意识到她的妈妈一天的工作之后一定很累，女孩帮忙把妈妈肩上的包拿下来。(请使用非谓语动词。)
Realizing her mm must be very tired after a day’s wrk, the girl helps t remve the bag frm her shulder.
2）这使我想起我的母亲，她一直在竭尽所能地让我能拥有最好的。(请使用定语从句和名词性从句。)3）完全投入在自己学习中的我却很少注意到 母亲的需求和感受。(请使用非谓语动词和名词性从句。)
All this reminds me f my mther wh has been ding whatever she culd t let me have the best.
But, ttally engaged in my wn study, I seldm pay attentin t what mther needs and feels.
4）我总是认为学习好是我唯一能做的用来回报她的事。(请使用非谓语动词和定语从句。)5）重要的是应该做一个好女儿而不是一个“好”学生。(请使用名词性从句及虚拟语气。)
And I always think studying well is the nly thing I culd d in return.
The picture cnvinces me it is imprtant that I shuld be a gd daughter rather than a “gd” student.
假如你为学校英文报刊的“海外之声”栏目投稿，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文介绍澳大利亚。 【写作要求】 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 把5个句子组成连贯的短文。
Lcatin(位置):Area（面积）:Histry（历史）:Ppulatin（人口）:
be lcated/situated in/n/at/t; lie in/n/at/tin the center f; in/t/n the east f
Useful expressins
cver/have an area f…; with an area f … It is …lng/wide (frm east t west).
have/with a histry f…yearsdate frm/ date back t
have/with a (large) ppulatin (f…)The ppulatin f…is……percent f the ppulatin are…
5. Climate（气候）:6. Resurces（资源）:7. Turist attractins（旅游景点）:
The climate varies/is different frm place t place neither t ht nr t cld
be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resurcesbe famus/well-knwn fr/as…mainly prduce… The main agricultural prducts are…
places f interestscenic sptsresrts (旅游胜地)
Australia, the largest cuntry in Oceania, lies n the west cast f the Pacific, with an area f 7.6 millin square kilmeters.
Pssible versins fr Sentence①
As the largest cuntry in Oceania, Australia lies n the west cast f the Pacific, cvering an area f 7.6 millin square kilmeters.
Lcated n the west cast f the Pacific, Australia is the largest cuntry in Oceania, cvering/with an area f 7.6 millin square kilmeters.
It has a small ppulatin f ver 10 millin and mst f its ppulatin live in the east f the cuntry by the sea.
Pssible versins fr Sentence②
It has a small ppulatin f ver 10 millin, mst f which live in the east cast f the cuntry.
Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places f interest and the Opera Huse is well knwn all ver the wrld.
Pssible versins fr Sentence④
Sydney, the biggest city in Australia, has many places f interest including the wrld famus Opera Huse.
Sydney is the biggest city in Australia with many places f interest including the wrld famus Opera Huse.
Australia, the largest cuntry in Oceania, lies n the west cast f the Pacific, with an area f 7.6 millin square kilmeters. It has a a small ppulatin f ver 10 millin, mst f whm live in the east cast f the cuntry. The capital city Canberra, where yu can enjy beautiful scenery, attracts a gd many peple every year. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places f interest and the Opera Huse is well knwn all ver the wrld. It was in this place that the 2000 Olympics were held.
Rme was nt built in a day.Practice makes perfect.
Tw sentences fr yu: