(新高考)高考英语二轮复习讲义第3部分 书面表达 层级3+第1讲　添加合理的细节 (含答案)

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第1讲　添加合理的细节

根据括号内的提示完成下列句子。

1．However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication between people. For example, more and more people are not paying attention to face­to­face communication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．

2．At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and I was full of great pride and confidence(我充满了自豪和自信)．

3．I suggest that the teacher select proper English films for us, thus making English learning more interesting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)．

4．If possible(如果可能的话), I'll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about today's society(以便我能更多地了解当今社会)．

5．I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To my joy, they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．

6．Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to the protection of the environment(尽力为环境保护做出更多贡献)．

在高考试题的书面表达的“注意”中明确要求：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。适当添加细节的方法具体如下：

1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明

①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。

I'll spend some time staying with my parents.

→I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them besides doing some housework.

②我看到了一些不良行为。

I found some bad behaviour.

→I found some bad behaviour. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.

③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。

I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much.

→I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much. Whenever I have time, I'll go hiking with my classmates.

2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容

①过去我有时去村西的小河里游泳。

I went swimming in the river to the west of the village now and then.

→Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river to the west of the village now and then, in which the water was very clear.

②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。

After a week's trip, he returned home.

→After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but happy.

3．增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容

①我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。

I need a good rest. I'll do some reading.

→I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. I'll do some reading for fun, as well as for knowledge.

②慈善拍卖会募集的钱将送给急需的人。

The money collected at the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.

→The money collected at the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them out of difficulties, but also give them warmth and happiness.

③演讲时要面带微笑。要讲慢些，讲清楚。

You should wear a smile when you make a speech. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.

→You should wear a smile when you make a speech, which will make you relaxed. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges.

4．结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等

①Although I was very tired during this summer holidays, I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)

尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的感到高兴。

②I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)

我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义。

③I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. (愿望)

我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享受你在新学校的生活。

④As students, it's our duty to protect our school environment.(倡议)

作为学生，保护我们的校园环境是我们的职责。

根据汉语提示，给短文增添合理恰当的细节。

Dear Peter，

In your letter you asked how to win the favor of Chinese universities. I think there are three main aspects to be considered.

Firstly, mastering Chinese is a basic need to live in China. 1．With this ability, you can communicate with native speakers easily and have access to many resources(有了这种能力，你与当地人交流就会很容易，而且还可以获得很多资源). Besides, it is important to adapt to the new environment quickly. 2．The sooner you get used to it, the more beneficial it will become to you(你熟悉新环境越早，好处就越多). Finally, personal interests and hobbies are also highly valued. 3．You are supposed to choose a major that you like(你应该选择一个你喜欢的专业).

With all the strengths I mentioned above, 4．I believe you can overcome all the difficulties and make great progress in China(我相信在中国你能够克服所有困难，取得大的进步)．

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua