译林版2019选修四UNIT 3 表达 作文巧升格学案

写一篇关于职业规划的短文

本单元要求写一篇关于职业规划的短文，属于说明文的写作范畴。

[基本框架]

开头(the beginning)——引出职业

主体(the body)——列举原因

结尾(the ending)——提出展望

[常用词块]

1．share more dream careers with you 同你分享更多理想的职业

2．keep updating 不断更新

3．have great expectations for the future job对未来的工作有很大的期望

4．enriching their life experience丰富他们的生活经历

5．live a well­off life过上小康的生活

6．a highly qualified tour guide一位高素质的导游

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．Some want to be doctors，some want to be teachers，and some want to be engineers．

有人想当医生，有人想当老师，有人想当工程师。

2．My dream career is to be a tour guide．

我梦想的职业是当一名导游。

★正文佳句

1．I can enjoy myself during the summer and winter holidays．

我可以在暑假和寒假里玩得很开心。

2．I have been admiring tour guides who travel worldwide，enjoying the spectacular scenery，appreciating different cultures and enriching their life experience at the same time．

我一直很羡慕环游世界的导游，他们能欣赏壮观的风景，欣赏不同的文化，同时丰富他们自己的生活体验。

★余味结尾

1．In a word，I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job．

总之，我将比以往任何时候都更加努力地学习，为我未来的教学工作做准备。

2．Therefore，my dream cannot be fulfilled without industrious work to pave the way．

因此，没有辛勤的工作来铺路，我的梦想就无法实现。

请你以“My Ideal Job(我理想的职业)”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，要求包括以下要点：

1．人们有不同的理想职业；

2．我理想的职业是什么；

3．我怎样为我理想的职业做准备。

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[学生习作]　

My Ideal Job

I want to be a teacher in the future．Firstly，I like children and enjoy playing with them．Secondly，I can enjoy myself during the summer and winter vacations．Finally，I want to teach students knowledge to ensure them to work better in the future．

In order to be a good teacher，I will study hard all the time．I have to improve my handwriting and make myself more knowledgeable．

In a word，I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job．

点评：

1．本篇习作符合写作要求，能够对自己未来理想的职业进行合理描述，原因贴合实际，内容丰富充实。

2．该篇写作能够使用firstly，secondly，finally等过渡词，使得文章更加有条理。

3．文章简单句过多，同时词汇方面还应该斟酌。

[升格作文]　

My Ideal Job

My ideal job is going into teaching．Firstly，I like children very much．Secondly，a teacher has two vacations each year and I can enjoy myself during the vacations．Finally，I want to teach students all that I know so that they can work better for our country in the future．

In order to be a good teacher，I will study hard not only in class，but also in daily life．I will train my patience，improve my handwriting，and enrich my knowledge．In a word，I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job．

在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来的职业充满憧憬。请以“My Dream Career” 为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：

1．你的理想职业；

2．选择它的理由。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．可根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】　

My Dream Career

My dream career is to be a tour guide．Since my early age，I have been admiring tour guides who travel worldwide，enjoying the spectacular scenery，appreciating different cultures and enriching their life experience at the same time．Besides，this career is financially rewarding as well so that I can live a well­off life．Additionally，I will have more opportunities to meet people from all walks of life，which is both challenging and interesting．

To be a good guide is no easy job，for it requires years of arduous practice and continual learning．So I must spare no effort to achieve my dream．