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(2020·全国Ⅰ卷)
话题:身边值得尊敬的人 词数:100 难度:★★★
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
A respectable teacher
Mr Liu,aged 58,is my English teacher.
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:人物介绍
(2)时态:一般现在时
(3)人称:第三人称
(4)要点:我尊敬的人是谁;
该人物的身份或职业;
该人物值得尊敬的原因;
再次对该人物表达敬意或感谢。
【参考范文】
A respectable teacher
Mr Liu, aged 58, is my English teacher.He is s humrus, respnsible and selfless that I respect and lve him very much.
T be hnest, his assistance has a great impact n me.It was Mr Liu wh made me aware f the imprtance f learning English well.Had it nt been fr his guidance and encuragement, I culdn’t have wn the first prize in the city English speech cntest.Withut his aid, my skills in English wuldn’t have been greatly imprved! I’ll keep his kindness and help in mind frever.
Mr Liu is a very respectable teacher indeed! I d thank him fr what he did fr me.
【范文赏析】
该习作范文以“A respectable teacher”为题,切合题目要求。整个习作共分三段内容,涵盖了题目中的全部要点且增加了细节。文章结构合理,内容布局清晰,逻辑性强,是一篇优秀习作。
语言上,“, it 强调句式和d的强调用法”等高级句式,以及“had it nt been..., I culdn’t have dne...和’t have dne...虚拟句”等复杂句式的使用使文章增色不少。
备用参考范文:
1.
The persn I respect
There are many respectable peple arund us.Take my neighbr Uncle Li fr example.He is a vlunteer wh wrks as a gate guard in ur cmmunity during the epidemic f COVID-19, and his main duty is t measure bdy temperature and check the passes fr exit and entry.Regardless f the risk f getting infected, Uncle Li is respnsible and devted t his jb.Even in terrible weather, he still sticks t his pst and leaves n ne unchecked.Thanks t his effrts in epidemic preventin and cntrl, ur neighbrhd has been in a gd state.Actually, there are many selfless peple like Uncle Li arund us, and they well deserve ur respect.
2.
The persn I respect
There are many respectable peple arund us.And the persn I respect mst is my physics teacher.She?s f medium height, with lng and blnde hair.She is s patient with each student that we all like her.
It’s her friendliness and the sense f respnsibility that make me admire her.When I failed the exam last mnth and was in lw spirits, she patted me gently n the shulder and gave me great encuragement.She teaches us nt nly hw t gain knwledge but als hw t be a gd persn.Having set a great example t us students, she fully deserves my respect.
(2020•全国Ⅱ卷)
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.农场情况;
2.采摘过程;
3.个人感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)时态:一般过去时为主
(3)人称:第一、三人称
(4)要点:1.农场的规模以及水果种类等;2.怎样采摘水果;3.体会到劳动的快乐。
【参考范文】
My Weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went t Xinxing Farm by bike t pick strawberries.
Upn entering the farm, we were attracted by its cleanness and rich varieties f fruit.A guide led us t the strawberry field, where we saw fresh inviting red strawberries.We were tld we culd enjy sme newly-picked nes because they were pisn-free.As requested, we began t pick strawberries with cautin fr fear that sme plants were destryed.Abut tw hurs later, with ur baskets full, we went ut, wearing tired but satisfied expressins.
This experience benefits me a lt.Nt nly d I feel the pains the farmers take but als the happiness that labr brings me.
【范文赏析】
本文要点齐全,段落布局合理,使用了一些高级词汇,如inviting,with cautin, fr fear that等。另外,使用了一些高级句式,如被动语态、倒装、with的复合结构、定语从句、非谓语动词作状语等。
(2020•全国Ⅲ卷)
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.结束语已为你写好。
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:电子邮件
(2)时态:一般现在时
(3)人称:第一人称
(4)要点:
①根据英语课文改编了一个短剧,请Miss Evans帮忙指导;
②简介剧情内容;
③商定指导时间地点,确定指导内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
Hw are things ging with yu? I’m writing t yu t ask fr yur cnstructive advice.
These days, I , tgether with my classmates, have adapted a shrt play based n the English text. But we find it difficult t make the plt adapted cmplete and attractive enugh. The herine brrwed a diamnd necklace frm her friend t attend a party, but unluckily she lst it, and then she brrwed a lt f mney t buy a new ne, fr which she wrked hard fr ten years t pay back all the mney. At last, she was tld that the necklace was nt valuable at all. As the stry unflded, the herine’s inner feeling was cmplicated, which makes us fail t catch her emtin well. Besides, the mst puzzling thing is that ur tne is t mntnus t present the character’s inner heart fully. Due t these prblems, we hpe t get yur help at yur cnvenience. I wuld truly appreciate it if yu are willing t give a hand t us.
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】从段落布局、高级词汇、复杂句式等方面分析范文
段落布局:本文是一篇电子邮件形式的应用文,属于求助信,文章布局清晰,全文共分为三段,第一段开门见山,直接表明自己写信的目的,让人对此篇文章的大致内容有了一个大概的了解。第二段开始重点讲述自己所遇见的问题,作者先简单介绍了自己和同学准备的课本短剧,并向老师说明剧中人物心理变化太复杂,表演的时候同学们的语气太平淡,无法表现人物内心的起伏,自己在这方面存在问题,希望得到老师的帮助,并表达对老师的感谢。最后一段表达对老师回信的期待,文章布局清晰,娓娓道来,非常吸引人。
高级词汇:adapted,based n,unflded,cmplicated,cnstructive advice等,本文使用了大量的高级词汇,使文章的等级上升了一个层次,凸显了文章作者具有扎实的语言功底,能灵活运用英文词汇。
复杂句式:“The herine brrwed a diamnd necklace frm her friend t attend a party, but unluckily she lst it, and then she brrwed a lt f mney t buy a new ne, fr which she wrked hard fr ten years t pay back all the mney.”句中“it”和“ne”替代的是前文的“diamnd necklace”,而fr which引导的是非限制性定语从句,表原因。“As the stry unflded, the herine’s inner feeling was cmplicated, which makes us fail t catch her emtin well.”此处也是which引导的一个非限制性定语从句,修饰前面一整句话。“I wuld truly appreciate it if yu are willing t give a hand t us.”经典句式,丰富文章内涵,有礼貌。
(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)
应用文 词数:80 难度:★★★
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Crss-Cuntry Running Race
【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:新闻报道 (2)时态:一般过去时(3)人称:第三人称
(4)要点:参与人员;跑步路线;活动反响。
【参考范文】
A Crss-Cuntry Running Race
The 5-kilmetre race was held by ur schl last Sunday.
200 students frm all grades were invlved in this running race.Amng the mst f the participants were students and teachers.The racing rute began at ur schl gate and ended at the ft f the Suth Hill.
The cmpetitin turned ut t be a great success.Nt nly has the racing imprved the enthusiasm f students t exercise, but als enriched ur campus life.Bth students and teachers hpe t hld such activities again.
【范文赏析】从段落布局、高级词汇、复杂句式等方面分析范文
第一段引出话题,第二、三段介绍具体参与人员、跑步路线以及活动的影响。
高级词组与复杂句式: be invlved in...; turn ut t be;倒装句的运用。
句子衔接:nt als...等的使用。
(2020•浙江高考• 应用文写作)
假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:电子邮件
(2)时态:一般现在时为主
(3)人称:第一、二人称
(4)要点:询问Peter的近况;告诉他班级发生的最新事情;祝愿他健康,早日康复。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
We have been cncerned abut yu since yu returned t yur cuntry fr a sick leave.Are yu getting much better nw?
There is n need fr yu t wrry abut us.What yu have t d is have a gd rest and fllw the dctr’s advice.During yur absence, ur class participated in an English ral cmpetitin, in which we came first.We all think it’s yu that we shuld we ur success t.
We hpe yu will recver sn.
Best wishes fr yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
段落布局合理,使用了一些高级词汇,如participate in, we等。同时,也使用了一些复杂句式,如状语从句、主语从句、定语从句、强调句型等。
(2020·江苏高考)
81.请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(dcumentary)的对话,并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。
Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did yu see the BBC dcumentary n CCTV 9 last week?
Li Jiang: Yu mean Du Fu: China’s Greatest Pet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!
Su Hua: Just think an English actr recites Chinese pems.
Li Jiang: I dn’t really understand every line he recites, but I believe he truly lves the pems himself.
Su Hua: Right. It is reprted that the film is well received utside China.
Li Jiang: Yeah.It’s my first time t hear Chinese stries tld by an English speaker.
Su Hua: In fact, dcumentaries abut ur cuntry are plentiful bth at hme and abrad. These films can help freign friends better understand this land—Chinese literature, gegraphy,histry, fd...
Li Jiang: I culdn’t agree mre.【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容;
2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【审题谋篇】1.体裁:议论文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:第三人称 4.要点:概括对话内容;中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)
【参考范文】
CCTV 9 bradcast Du Fu: China?s Greatest Pet,a dcumentary prduced by BBC.This well-made film prvides freign audiences with a fresh way f better knwing China’s past and present.
Dcumentaries abut China,prduced either in China r in ther cuntries,are becming increasingly ppular amng freigners.Fr ne thing,the verall develpment ver the past decades has been s striking that they feel eager t familiarize themselves with what is ging n in China.
Fr anther,China enjys a lng histry and rich culture.It has always been an attractin fr thse wh are keen n anything that is Chinese.These dcumentaries present a splendid picture f China in frnt f their audiences—its histry,landscape,art,fd,r even traditinal Chinese medicine.
Because f these films,sme freigners have begun t think f cming t China.In this way,they can frm a true picture f China themselves.
【范文赏析】从段落布局、高级词汇、复杂句式等方面分析范文
1.本文段落层次清晰:第一段,概括对话内容;第二段和第三段说明中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因;第四段总结因为这些优秀的纪录片吸引外国人来到中国。
2.运用了一些高级词汇:dcumentary,increasingly,striking,familiarize,be keen n,present,splendid,landscape等。
3.运用了一些复杂结构和复杂句式:非谓语动词a dcumentary prduced by BBC;过去分词作定语 prduced either in China r in ther cuntries;状语从句s striking that...;宾语从句what is ging n in China;定语从句wh are keen n anything that is Chinese。
4.适当运用了一些过渡衔接词:fr ne thing,fr anther。
(2020· 天津高考)
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
(2)对活动的感受;
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the cming-f-age ceremny
新冠肺炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.After reading yur letter, I knw that yu are willing t knw abut the cming-f-age ceremny.And it‘’s my pleasure t tell yu mre abut it.
As scheduled, this significant and prfund ceremny tk place n June 8th.And it is a rite that represents the independence f children wh are abve 18 years ld.Meanwhile, it is hped that children will be mre respnsible and brave in the future.And n that day, nt nly did all the teachers and students lk back n what we had gne thrugh during the past three years, but als watched the vide abut hw ur schlmates fught COVID-19.Excitement and admiratin welled up within me.It made me realize deeply that we are nt the yung children any mre, but adults wh have t shulder respnsibilities and face challenges bravely in the future life and study.
As is knwn t us, nthing can be achieved withut dedicatin and frustratin.I hpe that whatever will happen in the future, I still can remain ptimistic and strive fr my wn dream persistently thrugh thick and thin.And I will als try my best t make a cntributin t the sciety.I firmly believe that a bright future is waiting fr us.
（解析版）
(2020·全国Ⅰ卷)
话题:身边值得尊敬的人 词数:100 难度:★★★
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
A respectable teacher
Mr Liu,aged 58,is my English teacher.
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:人物介绍
(2)时态:一般现在时
(3)人称:第三人称
(4)要点:我尊敬的人是谁;
该人物的身份或职业;
该人物值得尊敬的原因;
再次对该人物表达敬意或感谢。
【参考范文】
A respectable teacher
Mr Liu, aged 58, is my English teacher.He is s humrus, respnsible and selfless that I respect and lve him very much.
T be hnest, his assistance has a great impact n me.It was Mr Liu wh made me aware f the imprtance f learning English well.Had it nt been fr his guidance and encuragement, I culdn’t have wn the first prize in the city English speech cntest.Withut his aid, my skills in English wuldn’t have been greatly imprved! I’ll keep his kindness and help in mind frever.
Mr Liu is a very respectable teacher indeed! I d thank him fr what he did fr me.
【范文赏析】
该习作范文以“A respectable teacher”为题,切合题目要求。整个习作共分三段内容,涵盖了题目中的全部要点且增加了细节。文章结构合理,内容布局清晰,逻辑性强,是一篇优秀习作。
语言上,“, it 强调句式和d的强调用法”等高级句式,以及“had it nt been..., I culdn’t have dne...和’t have dne...虚拟句”等复杂句式的使用使文章增色不少。
备用参考范文:
1.
The persn I respect
There are many respectable peple arund us.Take my neighbr Uncle Li fr example.He is a vlunteer wh wrks as a gate guard in ur cmmunity during the epidemic f COVID-19, and his main duty is t measure bdy temperature and check the passes fr exit and entry.Regardless f the risk f getting infected, Uncle Li is respnsible and devted t his jb.Even in terrible weather, he still sticks t his pst and leaves n ne unchecked.Thanks t his effrts in epidemic preventin and cntrl, ur neighbrhd has been in a gd state.Actually, there are many selfless peple like Uncle Li arund us, and they well deserve ur respect.
2.
The persn I respect
There are many respectable peple arund us.And the persn I respect mst is my physics teacher.She?s f medium height, with lng and blnde hair.She is s patient with each student that we all like her.
It’s her friendliness and the sense f respnsibility that make me admire her.When I failed the exam last mnth and was in lw spirits, she patted me gently n the shulder and gave me great encuragement.She teaches us nt nly hw t gain knwledge but als hw t be a gd persn.Having set a great example t us students, she fully deserves my respect.
(2020•全国Ⅱ卷)
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.农场情况;
2.采摘过程;
3.个人感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:记叙文
(2)时态:一般过去时为主
(3)人称:第一、三人称
(4)要点:1.农场的规模以及水果种类等;2.怎样采摘水果;3.体会到劳动的快乐。
【参考范文】
My Weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went t Xinxing Farm by bike t pick strawberries.
Upn entering the farm, we were attracted by its cleanness and rich varieties f fruit.A guide led us t the strawberry field, where we saw fresh inviting red strawberries.We were tld we culd enjy sme newly-picked nes because they were pisn-free.As requested, we began t pick strawberries with cautin fr fear that sme plants were destryed.Abut tw hurs later, with ur baskets full, we went ut, wearing tired but satisfied expressins.
This experience benefits me a lt.Nt nly d I feel the pains the farmers take but als the happiness that labr brings me.
【范文赏析】
本文要点齐全,段落布局合理,使用了一些高级词汇,如inviting,with cautin, fr fear that等。另外,使用了一些高级句式,如被动语态、倒装、with的复合结构、定语从句、非谓语动词作状语等。
(2020•全国Ⅲ卷)
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;
2.指导内容;
3.商定时间地点。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.结束语已为你写好。
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:电子邮件
(2)时态:一般现在时
(3)人称:第一人称
(4)要点:
①根据英语课文改编了一个短剧,请Miss Evans帮忙指导;
②简介剧情内容;
③商定指导时间地点,确定指导内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Evans,
Hw are things ging with yu? I’m writing t yu t ask fr yur cnstructive advice.
These days, I , tgether with my classmates, have adapted a shrt play based n the English text. But we find it difficult t make the plt adapted cmplete and attractive enugh. The herine brrwed a diamnd necklace frm her friend t attend a party, but unluckily she lst it, and then she brrwed a lt f mney t buy a new ne, fr which she wrked hard fr ten years t pay back all the mney. At last, she was tld that the necklace was nt valuable at all. As the stry unflded, the herine’s inner feeling was cmplicated, which makes us fail t catch her emtin well. Besides, the mst puzzling thing is that ur tne is t mntnus t present the character’s inner heart fully. Due t these prblems, we hpe t get yur help at yur cnvenience. I wuld truly appreciate it if yu are willing t give a hand t us.
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】从段落布局、高级词汇、复杂句式等方面分析范文
段落布局:本文是一篇电子邮件形式的应用文,属于求助信,文章布局清晰,全文共分为三段,第一段开门见山,直接表明自己写信的目的,让人对此篇文章的大致内容有了一个大概的了解。第二段开始重点讲述自己所遇见的问题,作者先简单介绍了自己和同学准备的课本短剧,并向老师说明剧中人物心理变化太复杂,表演的时候同学们的语气太平淡,无法表现人物内心的起伏,自己在这方面存在问题,希望得到老师的帮助,并表达对老师的感谢。最后一段表达对老师回信的期待,文章布局清晰,娓娓道来,非常吸引人。
高级词汇:adapted,based n,unflded,cmplicated,cnstructive advice等,本文使用了大量的高级词汇,使文章的等级上升了一个层次,凸显了文章作者具有扎实的语言功底,能灵活运用英文词汇。
复杂句式:“The herine brrwed a diamnd necklace frm her friend t attend a party, but unluckily she lst it, and then she brrwed a lt f mney t buy a new ne, fr which she wrked hard fr ten years t pay back all the mney.”句中“it”和“ne”替代的是前文的“diamnd necklace”,而fr which引导的是非限制性定语从句,表原因。“As the stry unflded, the herine’s inner feeling was cmplicated, which makes us fail t catch her emtin well.”此处也是which引导的一个非限制性定语从句,修饰前面一整句话。“I wuld truly appreciate it if yu are willing t give a hand t us.”经典句式,丰富文章内涵,有礼貌。
(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)
应用文 词数:80 难度:★★★
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Crss-Cuntry Running Race
【审题谋篇】(1)体裁:新闻报道 (2)时态:一般过去时(3)人称:第三人称
(4)要点:参与人员;跑步路线;活动反响。
【参考范文】
A Crss-Cuntry Running Race
The 5-kilmetre race was held by ur schl last Sunday.
200 students frm all grades were invlved in this running race.Amng the mst f the participants were students and teachers.The racing rute began at ur schl gate and ended at the ft f the Suth Hill.
The cmpetitin turned ut t be a great success.Nt nly has the racing imprved the enthusiasm f students t exercise, but als enriched ur campus life.Bth students and teachers hpe t hld such activities again.
【范文赏析】从段落布局、高级词汇、复杂句式等方面分析范文
第一段引出话题,第二、三段介绍具体参与人员、跑步路线以及活动的影响。
高级词组与复杂句式: be invlved in...; turn ut t be;倒装句的运用。
句子衔接:nt als...等的使用。
(2020•浙江高考• 应用文写作)
假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】
(1)体裁:电子邮件
(2)时态:一般现在时为主
(3)人称:第一、二人称
(4)要点:询问Peter的近况;告诉他班级发生的最新事情;祝愿他健康,早日康复。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
We have been cncerned abut yu since yu returned t yur cuntry fr a sick leave.Are yu getting much better nw?
There is n need fr yu t wrry abut us.What yu have t d is have a gd rest and fllw the dctr’s advice.During yur absence, ur class participated in an English ral cmpetitin, in which we came first.We all think it’s yu that we shuld we ur success t.
We hpe yu will recver sn.
Best wishes fr yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
段落布局合理,使用了一些高级词汇,如participate in, we等。同时,也使用了一些复杂句式,如状语从句、主语从句、定语从句、强调句型等。
(2020·江苏高考)
81.请阅读下面有关中国题材纪录片(dcumentary)的对话,并按照要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的文章。
Su Hua: Hi, Li Jiang! Did yu see the BBC dcumentary n CCTV 9 last week?
Li Jiang: Yu mean Du Fu: China’s Greatest Pet? Yes, I did. Fantastic!
Su Hua: Just think an English actr recites Chinese pems.
Li Jiang: I dn’t really understand every line he recites, but I believe he truly lves the pems himself.
Su Hua: Right. It is reprted that the film is well received utside China.
Li Jiang: Yeah.It’s my first time t hear Chinese stries tld by an English speaker.
Su Hua: In fact, dcumentaries abut ur cuntry are plentiful bth at hme and abrad. These films can help freign friends better understand this land—Chinese literature, gegraphy,histry, fd...
Li Jiang: I culdn’t agree mre.【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述对话的主要内容;
2.谈谈中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【审题谋篇】1.体裁:议论文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:第三人称 4.要点:概括对话内容;中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因(至少两点)
【参考范文】
CCTV 9 bradcast Du Fu: China?s Greatest Pet,a dcumentary prduced by BBC.This well-made film prvides freign audiences with a fresh way f better knwing China’s past and present.
Dcumentaries abut China,prduced either in China r in ther cuntries,are becming increasingly ppular amng freigners.Fr ne thing,the verall develpment ver the past decades has been s striking that they feel eager t familiarize themselves with what is ging n in China.
Fr anther,China enjys a lng histry and rich culture.It has always been an attractin fr thse wh are keen n anything that is Chinese.These dcumentaries present a splendid picture f China in frnt f their audiences—its histry,landscape,art,fd,r even traditinal Chinese medicine.
Because f these films,sme freigners have begun t think f cming t China.In this way,they can frm a true picture f China themselves.
【范文赏析】从段落布局、高级词汇、复杂句式等方面分析范文
1.本文段落层次清晰:第一段,概括对话内容;第二段和第三段说明中国题材纪录片受到外国朋友欢迎的原因;第四段总结因为这些优秀的纪录片吸引外国人来到中国。
2.运用了一些高级词汇:dcumentary,increasingly,striking,familiarize,be keen n,present,splendid,landscape等。
3.运用了一些复杂结构和复杂句式:非谓语动词a dcumentary prduced by BBC;过去分词作定语 prduced either in China r in ther cuntries;状语从句s striking that...;宾语从句what is ging n in China;定语从句wh are keen n anything that is Chinese。
4.适当运用了一些过渡衔接词:fr ne thing,fr anther。
(2020· 天津高考)
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
(2)对活动的感受;
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the cming-f-age ceremny
新冠肺炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.After reading yur letter, I knw that yu are willing t knw abut the cming-f-age ceremny.And it‘’s my pleasure t tell yu mre abut it.
As scheduled, this significant and prfund ceremny tk place n June 8th.And it is a rite that represents the independence f children wh are abve 18 years ld.Meanwhile, it is hped that children will be mre respnsible and brave in the future.And n that day, nt nly did all the teachers and students lk back n what we had gne thrugh during the past three years, but als watched the vide abut hw ur schlmates fught COVID-19.Excitement and admiratin welled up within me.It made me realize deeply that we are nt the yung children any mre, but adults wh have t shulder respnsibilities and face challenges bravely in the future life and study.
As is knwn t us, nthing can be achieved withut dedicatin and frustratin.I hpe that whatever will happen in the future, I still can remain ptimistic and strive fr my wn dream persistently thrugh thick and thin.And I will als try my best t make a cntributin t the sciety.I firmly believe that a bright future is waiting fr us.
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