备战2022高考英语读后续写满分作文万能模板（五）学案

这是一份备战2022高考英语读后续写满分作文万能模板（五）学案，共6页。学案主要包含了题型分析与写作方法，模板范文，万能模板之高分素材，高分素材之单词和短语，高分素材之句式等内容，欢迎下载使用。

【题型分析与写作方法】
题型解析：
读后续写是写作的一种新题型，顾名思义就是我们在阅读一篇还未写完的文章之后，按照语段所给的开头写出两个语段（约150词），从而把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。
读后续写不仅要求考生准确使用词汇和语言框架，会合理润色语言，更重要的是，它还要求考生能够明白应该如何整理续写内容，以使得其形成和前文统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。
应该说，这种题型是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，它不仅考查了考生在阅读文章的基础上分析文章逻辑的能力，又考查了考生的创造力、想象力，以及运用准确丰富的语言
下面是读后续写类作文的写作步骤：
读文
精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，比如，是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”完成续写。确定文章体裁和主要内容（话题）。注意文中的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件等信息。
审题
仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生才能做到“心中有数”。
谋段
在读文、审题的基础上，先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据原文情节确定好段落大意，找出每一段的写作要点，然后再补充相关细节和常识，这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数的要求。
初写
拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性及语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。写作时要注意，所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致。
定稿
完成初稿后，考生需先结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容，既要确保所写内容没有与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要保证内容上前后连贯，语句通顺；然后润色续写部分，可使用高分单词或短语，运用各种从句、介词短语结构、非谓语动词等高级表达，合理添加过渡词；最后誉写文字，这个过程考生务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
【万能模板之读后续写“八步走”】
情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。
细节-----进一步描述。
转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。
转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。
失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。
想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。
结局-----在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。
点题-----呼应前文
备注： 这八步不是固定的，考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序，也可以略写个别环节。此步骤，可让续写有话可说，让情节续写跌宕起伏，前提是要读懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脉络。
【模板范文】
前文提要：在我小的时候，我的家里有一个传统：在万圣节进行雕刻南瓜比赛。我很想赢得比赛，于是每年都选择一个很大的南瓜。有一年，我在雕刻南瓜的时候不小心把头卡在了南瓜里。
I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. My head span dizzily as if the wrld swirled. At my wit's end, I felt a stab f fear. (“我”的情绪：慌张、无奈）“Dn't panic! Papa, Papa, we need yur help," Jasn exclaimed. In time ver came my father.(借助外界帮助）He embraced my neck and pulled back with strength while Jasn pinned/pressed dwn the pumpkin.（一系列动作描写）It didn't wrk, thugh. (问题未解决）“Why nt tear the pumpkin directly?" suddenly rang ut mther's vice. ( 新 想 法 ) In a split secnd, a creak brke ut verhead, fllwed by a ray f light, which I seemingly hadn't seen fr ages. (问题得到解决）But what did I see? My mther was filming all the way. (衔接句）
That vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween. T my surprise, sn my vide was fllwed by a sea f likes, my mailbx flded with similar stries. (衔接句）My big red nse and my sre chin became netizens' favrite tpic. A little embarrassed as I was, a wave f warmth welled up inside. (细节描写之我的心情）Then a gd idea flashed acrss my mind. (想法）“Isn't it a gd idea t share stries nline t chse the funniest? " I tld Jasn, jumping with jy.（做法，为结局做铺垫）“Amazing! Let's call it Pumpkin's Cmpetitin. "Jasn giggled. (Jasn的反应，照应开头）
【万能模板之高分素材】
【高分素材之单词和短语】
情绪描写＆2.细节描写：
哭： hwling(嚎哭)， sb, weep, burst int tears, burst ut crying. (ne's eyes) brim with/be filled with tears
害怕： hrrr, frightened, scared, speechless, in(a)panic, in a cld sweat, be filled with terrr, rted t the spt, freeze, ne's knees feel weak, (hands)sweat
高兴、激动：（动词）dance, jump/leap with jy, feel a surge f jy/ excitement, whistle, vercme with happiness/ delight /jy / excitement, (ne's eyes) twinkle,(ne's heart) beat/ pund wildly;
(形容词）delighted, verjyed, excited, thrilled, wild with jy
伤心、痛苦: feel a surge f sadness, (sadness) surge within sb. , ne's heart ache, vercme with sadness
生气、愤怒：felt/ get angry/furius, feel a surge f anger/rage/fury, eyes blaze, strm ut f/int/ff, strm/say angrily, sth. makes sb. 's bld bil, sth. makes sb. extremely angry, clasp ne's fists/teeth, sb. 's bld is up
转折：个人努力或借助外界
鼓起勇气：pluck up/take/gather/summn up ne's curage
毫不犹豫：withut even thinking, withut delay, withut hesitatin, withut a secnd thught
转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
似乎：as if, seemingly, appear, seem
欣慰：breath a sigh f relief, sigh with relief, t ne's relief5.
失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题:
徒劳 : in vain, n use, withut success
茫然 : at a lss, at sea, blankly, be lst in a fg
想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
ccur t, hit, strike, flash int ne's mind, crwd in ne's mind, dawn n
结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折:
过了一段时间：nt lng, shrtly afterwards, befre lng, fr an instant/mment
令人惊讶的是 :t ne's surprise, strangely enugh
8.总结：点题，呼应前文
realize, ech, linger, whisper in ne's mind, dwn deep in ne's heart
【高分素材之句式】
★情绪描写＆细节描写
哭：
1. A lump came t his thrat.
2. Her eyes were red frm crying.
3. Her eyes brimmed with tears.
4. Tears cursed/trickled/streamed/ran dwn her cheeks.
害怕：
1. She was t frightened t tell her family what had happened.
2. His heart was punding, as if he were frightened.
3. Liza was s frightened that she culdn't make a sund.
4. I bwed my head timidly and dared nt lk at my father's cludy face.
5. My brain is blank. I just want t leave this hrrible place.
高兴、激动：
1. When she knew. . .she felt excited/thrilled.
2. When she knew. . .her eyes twinkled with excitement.
3. When she knew. . . her heart was punding with wild jy.
4. When she knew. . .a wild excitement tk hld f her.
5. felt a surge f excitement.
伤心、痛苦：
1. A sadness came ver her.
2. Her heart ached, tears streaming dwn her cheeks.
3. Numb with grief, she became speechless.
4. Feeling a surge f sadness, she culdn't help crying bitterly.
5. Sadness surging within her, she burst int tears.
生气、愤怒：
1. Sam std rted t the spt, his eyes blazing with anger.
2. He felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm, slamming the dr furiusly behind him.
3. Biling with rage, he shk his fist at me.
4. Filled with fury, she was unable t utter a single wrd.
★转折：个人努力或借助外界
鼓起勇气：
1. He summned up his curage and ldged a prtest with his father.
2. I finally plucked up the curage t ask her fr. .
毫不犹豫：
1. She culd hardly wait t. . .
2. Hardly thinking/Withut even thinking, he ran t. . .
★转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
1. It seemed as if/that smene was cming t save us.
2. Oftentimes ur tears f remrse reveal a glimmer f hpe.
3. A wave f relief flded thrugh me. . .
4. A wave f relief washed ver him. .
★失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题
1. But bad luck fr me, I failed in my attempt t persuade her.
2. She clsed her eyes tightly in a vain attempt t hld back the tears.
3. All ur effrts were in vain.
4. She kept pacing, wndering what t d next.
5. With tears streaming dwn her face, she didn't knw what t d next.
6. With tears streaming dwn her face, she was unsure f what t d next.
7. She was at a lss what t d.
8. He was in a dilemma abut whether t d r nt.
★想法：突然有了一个想法
1. It suddenly ccurred t him that...
2. It hit me that I had a chice.
3. A thught struck her that. . .
4. It dawned that. . .
5. An idea ccurred/came t me that
6. A ludicrus thught/idea flashed/came thrugh Harry's mind.
★结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折
1. It didn't take lng befre. . .
2. It tk sme time befre. . .
3. T my surprise enugh, it turned ut that...
★总结：点题，呼应前文
直到·······意识到
倒装句：Nt until+时间状语＋did sb. realize/ntice that+从句
强调句：It was nly+时间状语＋that sb. realized that+从句
还记得某人的话：
1. One's wrds eched/rang ut in ne's ears.
2. One's wrds/vice/lingered/whispered in ne's mind/head
3. One's head was still full f. . .
经历与教训
1. What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lessn she taught me/I learned frm her!
2. What a/an enjyable/pleasant/wnderful/unfrgettable/memrable/valuable experience I had!
3. Dwn deep in my heart, it was an interesting experience I had ever had.