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2021届中考英语一轮复习---写作指导writing 教学课件 (共30张PPT)
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这是一份2021届中考英语一轮复习---写作指导writing 教学课件 (共30张PPT)，共30页。PPT课件主要包含了不要遗漏要点，第三步使用关联词 等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Learning aims:
学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。
2. 能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。
3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。
中考英语写作评分标准
一档文（17-20分）
写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少2-3个，基本无语法错误，只有1-2个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（100字左右）的句子数量都在10至12句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均10-12个单词计算，用10-12个句子便能完成一篇要求在100词左右的作文。其基本模式为：
（要视内容而决定扩 展句 的多少,并且加上关联词）
Hw can we write a gd cmpsitin(作文)?
第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点
Hw can we write a gd cmpsitin? (Have a discussin!)
假如你是李明，你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。
Hell Li Ming, I'm ging t China as an exchange student this September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. What is a Mid-Autumn Festival? Hw d yu celebrate it? What table manners shuld I pay attentin t when I have dinner with them? Write sn.
要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 须回复所有问题（问题1两点；问题2和问题3各三点），并适当发挥 3. 词数100词左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总数） 4. 不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名。
第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。
具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点
Write an Outline
Intrductin
September 15th, family members get tgether
have a big dinner, enjy the full mn, guess the riddles
keep quite while eating r drinkingwait fr the elder peple t eat firstgive gifts t imprtant peple
1)表层次: t begin with, then, finally; t start with, in additin, last but nt least; each/ne cin has tw sides. On ne hand the ther hand, 2)表转折；but, hwever, thugh, althugh, after all, in spite f， frtunately，unfrtunately，at the same time…3)因果 thanks t, due t,fr, since, wing t, as a result(f), hence, thus4)例证 fr example, fr instance, such as5)表示利弊的：be gd/bad fr sb.; be harmful t sb.; d harm t sb.; …have great/much influence n sb; affect; have an effect n sb.; 6)表示喜爱的：be fnd f…; be interested in…; shw great interest in…; lse neself in…; put ne’s heart int…; 7)总结 As I see, As fr me ,As we all knw, in general, generally speaking, in a wrd, in brief, in cnclusin, in shrt, in summary, t sum up, in my pinin
It ges withut saying that... It can be said with certainty that... As the prverb says It has t be nticed that... It`s generally recgnized that...
It's likely that What calls fr special attentin is that…There’s n denying the fact that…Nthing is mre imprtant than the fact that... What’s far mre imprtant is that...
in my pinin, Therefre, we have the reasn t believe that... It may be safely said that... As far as I am cncerned/I can see/I knw,It can be cncluded frm the discussin that… Frm my pint f view, it wuld be better if…
一，主题句原则mst students like surfing the internet and watching TV.
n ne hand, they can get a great deal f infrmatin and knwledge that bks can't prvide. n the ther hand, they can relax themselves well and cmmunicate with classmates and strangers withut ging ut.
1）first, secnd, third, last2）firstly, secndly, thirdly, finally3）the first, the secnd, the third, the last4）in the first place, in the secnd place, in the third place, lastly5）t begin with, then, furthermre, finally（强烈推荐）6）t start with, next, in additin, finally（强烈推荐）7）first and fremst, besides, last but nt least（强烈推荐）8）mst imprtant f all, mrever, finally9）n the ne hand, n the ther hand（适用于两点的情况）10）fr ne thing, fr anther thing（适用于两点的情况）
变形原则1：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型！！ 普通级句型 The envirnment is bad. 比较级句型The envirnment is getting much wrse than befre. The envirnment is getting wrse and wrse. 最高级句型 I have never seen the wrse envirnment .
变形原则2：表达作用多用动名词句式 …is a …way t… 阅读能帮助我放松自己。Reading is a gd way t relax myself. 看电影能帮助我们学习英语。Watching mvies is a wnderful way t learn English.
变化原则3：make 更有feel After ding sprts, I feel relaxed. It makes me feel relaxed t d sprts. I made a prgress in English. I feel prud. It makes me feel prud t make a prgress in English.
变化原则4：喜欢不再like 用be fnd f, be crazy abut, enjy等I am fnd f reading bks. Mst bys are crazy abut cmputer games.
变化原则5：凡是提出措施咱尽量不用shuld！！ 用“be suppsed t” 、“had better”，“have n chice but ”， “it's ur duty t ”e.g. 我们应该 养成良好的阅读习惯。
变化原则6：增强感情转感叹！阅读对我们很有益。e.g. Hw beneficial it is fr us t read.作运动对学生很重要。e.g. hw imprtant it is fr students t d sprts.
如何结尾1.各种号召--事不宜迟Dn’t put it ff. 2.各种越--多多益善the+比较级+主谓，the +比较级+主谓 越…就越…The better we take care f the envirnment, the mre beautiful the wrld will be.
英文常用谚语引用名人名言及谚语时，可使用如下句型：As a saying ges: There is an ld saying, “… …” 古语有云Once there is a great man said, “ ”
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。2.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。3.It’s never t ld t learn. 活到老，学到老。4. Think twice befre acting.三思而后行。5.N pains, n gains.一分耕耘，一分收获。 6.Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师。7.Knwledge is pwer. 知识就是力量。8.Failure is the mther f success.失败是成功之母。9.Nthing is impssible fr a willing heart.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
Let’s practice!
近期，你们班对中学生是否有必要阅读英语经典文学进行了讨论。请根据下表内容用英语写一篇作文。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。 要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右 4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Let’s enjy ur wn cmpsitins!
Secrets f learning English:
Practice makes perfect.Hard wrk leads t success.
Learning aims:
学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。
2. 能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。
3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。
中考英语写作评分标准
一档文（17-20分）
写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构，至少2-3个，基本无语法错误，只有1-2个，或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（100字左右）的句子数量都在10至12句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均10-12个单词计算，用10-12个句子便能完成一篇要求在100词左右的作文。其基本模式为：
（要视内容而决定扩 展句 的多少,并且加上关联词）
Hw can we write a gd cmpsitin(作文)?
第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点
Hw can we write a gd cmpsitin? (Have a discussin!)
假如你是李明，你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。
Hell Li Ming, I'm ging t China as an exchange student this September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. What is a Mid-Autumn Festival? Hw d yu celebrate it? What table manners shuld I pay attentin t when I have dinner with them? Write sn.
要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 须回复所有问题（问题1两点；问题2和问题3各三点），并适当发挥 3. 词数100词左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总数） 4. 不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名。
第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。
具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点
Write an Outline
Intrductin
September 15th, family members get tgether
have a big dinner, enjy the full mn, guess the riddles
keep quite while eating r drinkingwait fr the elder peple t eat firstgive gifts t imprtant peple
1)表层次: t begin with, then, finally; t start with, in additin, last but nt least; each/ne cin has tw sides. On ne hand the ther hand, 2)表转折；but, hwever, thugh, althugh, after all, in spite f， frtunately，unfrtunately，at the same time…3)因果 thanks t, due t,fr, since, wing t, as a result(f), hence, thus4)例证 fr example, fr instance, such as5)表示利弊的：be gd/bad fr sb.; be harmful t sb.; d harm t sb.; …have great/much influence n sb; affect; have an effect n sb.; 6)表示喜爱的：be fnd f…; be interested in…; shw great interest in…; lse neself in…; put ne’s heart int…; 7)总结 As I see, As fr me ,As we all knw, in general, generally speaking, in a wrd, in brief, in cnclusin, in shrt, in summary, t sum up, in my pinin
It ges withut saying that... It can be said with certainty that... As the prverb says It has t be nticed that... It`s generally recgnized that...
It's likely that What calls fr special attentin is that…There’s n denying the fact that…Nthing is mre imprtant than the fact that... What’s far mre imprtant is that...
in my pinin, Therefre, we have the reasn t believe that... It may be safely said that... As far as I am cncerned/I can see/I knw,It can be cncluded frm the discussin that… Frm my pint f view, it wuld be better if…
一，主题句原则mst students like surfing the internet and watching TV.
n ne hand, they can get a great deal f infrmatin and knwledge that bks can't prvide. n the ther hand, they can relax themselves well and cmmunicate with classmates and strangers withut ging ut.
1）first, secnd, third, last2）firstly, secndly, thirdly, finally3）the first, the secnd, the third, the last4）in the first place, in the secnd place, in the third place, lastly5）t begin with, then, furthermre, finally（强烈推荐）6）t start with, next, in additin, finally（强烈推荐）7）first and fremst, besides, last but nt least（强烈推荐）8）mst imprtant f all, mrever, finally9）n the ne hand, n the ther hand（适用于两点的情况）10）fr ne thing, fr anther thing（适用于两点的情况）
变形原则1：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型！！ 普通级句型 The envirnment is bad. 比较级句型The envirnment is getting much wrse than befre. The envirnment is getting wrse and wrse. 最高级句型 I have never seen the wrse envirnment .
变形原则2：表达作用多用动名词句式 …is a …way t… 阅读能帮助我放松自己。Reading is a gd way t relax myself. 看电影能帮助我们学习英语。Watching mvies is a wnderful way t learn English.
变化原则3：make 更有feel After ding sprts, I feel relaxed. It makes me feel relaxed t d sprts. I made a prgress in English. I feel prud. It makes me feel prud t make a prgress in English.
变化原则4：喜欢不再like 用be fnd f, be crazy abut, enjy等I am fnd f reading bks. Mst bys are crazy abut cmputer games.
变化原则5：凡是提出措施咱尽量不用shuld！！ 用“be suppsed t” 、“had better”，“have n chice but ”， “it's ur duty t ”e.g. 我们应该 养成良好的阅读习惯。
变化原则6：增强感情转感叹！阅读对我们很有益。e.g. Hw beneficial it is fr us t read.作运动对学生很重要。e.g. hw imprtant it is fr students t d sprts.
如何结尾1.各种号召--事不宜迟Dn’t put it ff. 2.各种越--多多益善the+比较级+主谓，the +比较级+主谓 越…就越…The better we take care f the envirnment, the mre beautiful the wrld will be.
英文常用谚语引用名人名言及谚语时，可使用如下句型：As a saying ges: There is an ld saying, “… …” 古语有云Once there is a great man said, “ ”
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。2.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。3.It’s never t ld t learn. 活到老，学到老。4. Think twice befre acting.三思而后行。5.N pains, n gains.一分耕耘，一分收获。 6.Interest is the best teacher.兴趣是最好的老师。7.Knwledge is pwer. 知识就是力量。8.Failure is the mther f success.失败是成功之母。9.Nthing is impssible fr a willing heart.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
Let’s practice!
近期，你们班对中学生是否有必要阅读英语经典文学进行了讨论。请根据下表内容用英语写一篇作文。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下。 要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右 4）不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Let’s enjy ur wn cmpsitins!
Secrets f learning English:
Practice makes perfect.Hard wrk leads t success.
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