湖北省鄂州市2019-2021年三年中考英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达（word版附解析）

湖北省鄂州市

2019-2021年三年中考英语试卷分类汇编

书面表达

2021年湖北省鄂州市中考英语试题

七、书面表达(满分15分)

59. 在初中三年学习中, 我们做过许多学科作业。请你以“I like / dislike   _______  exercises” 为题, 根据所给的内容要点和写作要求, 用英语写一篇短文。

1. 内容要点：

(1)what kind of. . . (like / dislike)

(2)be good / bad for. . .

(3)advice. . .

2. 写作要求：

(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

(2)短文应包含以上三个内容要点。

(3)词数80词左右。

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【答案】One possible version:

I Like English Exercises

In the past few years, we have finished many kinds of English exercises. I like them a lot, especially listening exercises. They are good for developing my listening skills and speaking skills. On the one hand, I can improve pronunciation. On the other hand, I can get more knowledge of the foreign culture.

I think our English teacher should design exercises that are more suitable for us such as speaking and reading exercises. She / He should give us fewer copying exercises.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜欢英语练习”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。主要围绕喜欢哪种类型的练习，对自己带来的好处以及自己的建议这几个方面着手写作，要做到无语法和标点错误。

2020年湖北省鄂州市中考英语试题

Ⅶ.书面表达

58. 你的偶像是谁？你崇拜谁？下表是腾飞中学一些学生的回答，假如你是该校的一位学生，请根据下表的文字提示，谈谈你校同学的偶像观，并适当发表自己的观点。写一篇英语短文。

要求：词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则，不予评分。

参考词汇：idol 偶像   fashionable时尚的  wisdom 智慧   respect  尊重

Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers.

In the past, we thought singers and movie stars were our idols. They always have cool hairs and clothes. They are fashionable. Also, they are talented and can put on funny shows. Their performances are so relaxing that they make our life colorful. But now we think scientists and medical workers are our idols. Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard. Doctors and nurses save people’s lives and help them get out of pain and back to health. When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.

In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration. As students, we should learn from them and study hard to be a useful person to the country and society.

【解析】

【详解】题干解读：这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的表格，谈一谈学生们的偶像观，并发表自己的看法。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面：首先是同学们过去所崇拜的偶像；然后介绍现在同学们的偶像；最后发表自己的看法。表格中有非常详细的内容提示，这些也是学生们组织文章内容的依据和提纲，注意要将表格中所有内容都包括在内，可以适当拓展，补充一些细节，但不能遗漏要点。短文应以第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述。

例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容丰富、完整，结构清晰。短文采取三段式结构，每段的主题都非常明确。理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中用到了简单句、并列句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等多种句式和结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。

高分亮点：

短语：put on；get out of；in trouble；in need；in my opinion。

句型：Their performances are so relaxing that they make our life colorful.；Scientists invent high-tech products to protect national security and improve people’s living standard.；When our country and people are in trouble, they help people with wisdom, courage and hard work.；In my opinion, those who help us when we are in need deserve our respect and admiration.。

2019年湖北省鄂州市中考英语试题

VII . 书面表达

“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

要求：

1. 80－100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。

参考词汇：convenient  方便的，便利的    pretend to do… 假装做…

          think independently   独立思考

Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.

They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time.

I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad.

【解析】

【详解】这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。

【点睛】这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等等。